如何进行概要写作

Para 2: Argument (论据) 1
1. Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers.
Drivers
using a
not using a
on the road careful It's safe. (Support)
1. Cell phones used on the road dangerously distract the drivers and should be banned. 2. Using cell phones while driving dangerously draw away drivers' attention and should not be allowed. 3. We should forbid using cell phones on the road for their harmful distraction to drivers. 简单句 4. Drivers should be prevented from using cellphones while driving because they can be dangerously distracted. 复合句 Skills: 1. 词性转换法 2. 近义替换法 3. 正话反说法 4. 语态互换法 5. 句式变化法 6. 主语变身法
Para 3: Argument (论据)2
2. Cell phones used on the road should be forbidden.
An example：
at least 1,000 deaths per year
① phones used by drivers （Support) Similarly
Para 2: Argument (论点) 1
2. It should be forbidden.
Para 3: Argument (论点) 2
Para 4: Suggestion
Para 5: Conclusion
Para 1: Viewpoint
Para1 Cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
Learn to use the checklist: 4C+1O
Factors
complete
Checking points 1. Cover the main points using your own words
concise coherent correct objective
2. No details in 40~80 words
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden. Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.
a quote (引语)
Tip3: A quote is usually used to support an idea and should be not included in a summary.
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden. Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars. Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.
Traffic accidents are dangerous.
crash run offinto the house road crash into tree rear-ending turn over 追尾
Reasons:
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Speeding Tired driving Drunk driving Careless driving Using cell phones while driving ......
Drivers need to be more responsible when using cell phones.
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden. Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars. Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones.
Attention on the phone Driving Result
unpredictable It's dangerous.
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Drivers using a phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using.
Skills of restatement(重述): “Point1” as an example
Point1：①Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and ②should be forbidden. 并列句
② drunk driving
laws are need to forbid the use of cell phones in cars
against the law and strictly enforced
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden. Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.
Para 5: Conclusion
Para5 Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. As professional racer John Andretti says, “Driving safely is your first responsibility.” The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.
3. Use transitional words if possible 4. No grammatical mistakes
a fact
a viewpoint
Tip2: The viewpoint of an argumentative writing （议论文） should be included in a summary.
Main points of the summary Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
Tip1: Structure iscell a guide to find the main points Topic: Using phones while driving
Para 1: Viewpoint (观点)
1. It's a dangerous distraction to drivers.
Have a try: work in groups of 4 to create a good summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden. Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars. Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.
Para 4: Suggestion
Q1：Before using a cell phone, what question should drivers ask themselves? Is this call really that important? Yes. No. Use a phone wisely Suggestion1： Suggestion2：Not use a phone （Support)