高中英语_写作-人物篇

literature. He wrote many fantastic novels
审题的步骤
１、 ２、 ３、 ４、 ５、
文体 主体时态 人称 信息点整合 不要打草稿，但应有提纲
人物介绍
1.主题段 ---开头段
Birthday , birthplace and family background 2.拓展段---中间段
Appearance, qualities, interest /hobbies, education ,big events in one’s life/achievements 3.总结段---结尾段 evaluation
B.外貌,性格:
巧用with做定语
译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着 两只大眼睛，留着长发. My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair. My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
５)评估evaluation ( １)概况age, sex, birth-place, background
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语法，句法高分tips
A. 概况 : 可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺 译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州Βιβλιοθήκη Baidu他是中国最伟大的 医生之一.
1. Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and he is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2. Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. 3. Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
可以用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句 D．生平： 等，润色文章
1.他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋.
Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.
2. 他创了一个新的游泳记录,为中国队赢得了一
块金牌.
He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.
• 成就： 1. one of the best/most important… 最好的/重要的……之一 2. set a …example to为……树立榜样 3. be honoured as…被授予……； win the …prize 获得……荣誉 4. make great contribution to 为……作出巨大贡献
E．评估： 注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
1. 雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都 很敬重他.
Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people speak highly of him and all respect him .
2. 李时珍为医学做出了巨大的贡献.
• 教育背景： • be admitted to …university考取……大学 • graduate from …department of … university 从某大学某系毕业 • receive/get a doctor’s degree 获取博士学位 • 主要事迹： • serve as…做某种工作 • devote oneself /one’s effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力于 • concentrate /apply oneself to 专注于 • make up one’s mind to do…/be determined to do决心做 • have a gift for / be gifted in 有……的天赋
Lishizhen made great contributions to Medical literature.
话题词汇，词组，句型：
• 外貌： good-looking相貌英俊的，funning-looking外表可笑的， ugly-looking丑陋的， ordinary-looking外貌平平的， gray-haired白头发的，near/far-sighted 近/远视的， charming有魅力的, fashionable时尚的, slim苗条的 • 性格气质： kind-hearted好心的， warm-hearted 热心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的，bad-tempered 坏脾气的， A strong will很强的意志力，naughty 淘气的， smart/bright 聪明的， wise睿智的，diligent 勤奋的， humorous 幽默的， attractive 有魅力的， talkative能说会道的，confident 有信心的， independent 独立的，patient 有耐心的
At first, he wanted to be a doctor to save people’s lives. So he learned medicine, but later he found the Chinese were in sensitive when they faced the oppression from the enemies. So he began to write articles to wake the people up. Besides, some of his works were selected into the text books in high school and university. We can gain a lot from reading his works. 23分
Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. ______________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________ _____. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li Ming
• 生日、出生地、年龄 • …, (who was) born in …, is a… • …, a …, is a … with a height of … and a weight of… • 家庭背景： • … was born in/ into a poor/rich family 出生在贫穷的/富裕的家庭 • as a child of … years old, he… 还是个……岁的孩子时 • spend his childhood in … 在……度过了他的童年 • live a happy/hard life 生活很幸福/艰苦
语法，句法高分tips
1.A. 概况 : 可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺
译：费孝通，我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家， １９１０年１１月２日生于一富裕家庭．２００ ５年４月２４日因病逝于北京．
Born in a well-off family on November 2,1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese Sociologist and active social worker, passed away for illness in Beijing on April 24, 2005 .
范文1
Lu Xun, formerly known as Zhou
桂永美
Shuren, born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang. He is not only a writer, a thinker, but also the
founder of Chinese literature. He wrote
根据下面信息写一篇120词左右的英语短 文介绍作家，文学家－－鲁迅。 提示：
1.文体
2.分段
3.时态 4.人称 5.信息点整合
假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中 国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍 鲁迅，内容如下: （1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人 （2）为了国家，弃医从文。 （3）著名的作家,思想家,而且还是中国现代文学 的开创者. （4）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如 《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片。 （5）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。 参考词汇:《阿Q正传》:The True Story of AH Q 《祝福》：The New Year’s Sacrifice 注意:介绍必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成 英语. [写作要求]文章首尾已给出，不算字数。 [评分标准]句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性.
三段论
对人物做出综合性的评价。
人物简介的一般步骤：概况,外貌,教育,生平, Give the right order 评估
３)教育：education ( ２)外貌／性格appearance ,character ( ４)生平big events in his or her life ( in
( order of time )
many classical novels and stories, which are translated into many languages, and made
into films, such as The True Story of AH Q
and The New Year’s Sacrifice.
writer than be a doctor in order that he
would make contributions to our nation. He was a famous writer and thinker.
He was also the founder of modern Chinese
C. 教育经历： 可以用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼 1.在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习, 获得了博士学位. After she had graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree. Having graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.
桂永美
范文2
于操
As we know, Lu Xun is one of the best writers in China and his real name is Zhou Shuren. He was born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province. He would rather be a