英语作文指导

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had better do / not do… Don’t do… can/ could do… What don’t you do…
HBaidu Nhomakorabealp Save Our Planet Society
• As the improvement of the modern Industry, more and more energy is being consumed. How to save energy and how to protect the planet we live in? • First of all, We should turn the lights when we leave a room. And also it is necessary to turn off the shower while we are washing our hair. If we do that we can use as little water as possible. Recycling paper and books is a good way to say the trees. If we learn to recycle them, our natural resources will last longer. What’s more we’d better not use paper towels or napkins. Another thing which is worth paying attention to is taking our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags. Stopping riding in cars is a good way which can not only save energy but also protect our environment. • All in all, saving energy is the duty to us all, let’s help save our plenty society together.
• B. 随着现代化经济的发展，越来越多的能源被消耗掉，如何树立节 能意识，从身边的小事着眼，从自己做起… • How to save the energy sources • 参考句型 • Stop riding in cars • Recycle books and paper • Turn off the lights when you leave a room. • Turn off the shower while you are washing your hair. • Don’t use paper towels or napkins. • Take your own bags when shopping. • Ride a bike. 建议句型 should / shouldn’t do… be supposed to do… Do… Why not do… Why consider doing…
• B. 随着现代化经济的发展，越来越多的能源被消耗掉，如何树立节 能意识，从身边的小事着眼，从自己做起…
• C. 随着现代化工业的发展，污染越来越严重，我们生存的环境受到 破坏，作为一名学生，为了改善我们的生存条件，我们能做些什么呢？
• A. 随着现代化工业的发展，污染越来越严重自然环境受到破坏，影 响了生态平 衡。许多动物已濒临灭绝。人类应保护动物，作为一名 青少年，我们应为保护动物做些什么呢？请参照以上形容词，和以下 词组句型，谈谈你的想法。 • 参考词组 • disagree with, try one’s best, take care of, care for, be against doing, in my spare time, agree with, to us all, not ( hardly)…at all , try to do • 参考句型 • provide sth for sb provide sb with sth • …enough to do urge sb to do sth • used to do be surprised to find • I couldn’t believe what I saw so…that • too…to be supposed to do • stop… from doing had better do • as….as possible It’s important to do • be opposed to doing / sth be against doing • There used to be… Many animals are endangered.
• 北京在2008年举办奥运会之后，已成为举 世瞩目的国际化大都市，保护和改善北京 的环境，是每一个北京人义不容辞的责任， 我们应以哪些实际行动支持绿色北京的建 设呢？
• After holding Olympic Games, Beijing has changed a famous international city in the world. In order to protect and improve our environment. As Beijing people, what should we do? • First of all, we shouldn’t throw the trash and spit here and there. And also we should tell others not to do that. What’s more, we’d better stop riding cars, because it’s good for our air. Besides, taking our own bags when shopping can reduce the white pollution. By the way, it’s necessary to plant as many trees, flowers and grass as possible. Not only can it make the air fresher but also the city can be more beautiful. • We believe as long as we try our best, Beijing will be more beautiful and greener.
• The energy is less and less, what can we do to help save the planet? • First of all, we’d better stop riding in cars. And also I find it important to recycle books and paper to save the trees. Of course, We should turn off the lights when we leave a room and turn off the shower while washing our hair, too. Besides , we can plant trees to help. By the way, taking our own bags when shopping is a good idea. • In a word , saving energy is the duty to us all, let’s help save our planet society together.
C. 随着现代化工业的发展，污染越来越严重，我们 生存的环境受到破坏，作为一名学生，为了改善 我们的生存条件，我们能做些什么呢？
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plant trees… clean up… not throw trash save water as…as possible tell people not to do… It’s important(necessary) to do
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Don’t Let Our Friends Cry
• These days ,because of pollution more and more animals are getting to be endangered. It becomes one of the most terrible problems in the world. How to stop polluting? What should we do? • At first, we must make sure that the earth belongs to not only humans but also all living things. So we have to provide animals with somewhere suitable to live. I couldn’t believe what I saw on TV --- Many people still cut down forests and some waste water is still discharged（排出） from factories. This makes animals no place to live. It’s time for authorities to stop people from destroying environment. • However, we are supposed to share this whole wonderful world with animals, right?
英语作文指导
环境保护
作文必分段，分段分三段
审题把握要点 分别将其归于所属段落 （体裁 人称 时态）
一段开门见山（立场观点 零碎信息) 二段娓娓道来（分层抓主要问题） 三段总结发愿（感受 看法 愿望）
环境保护
• A. 随着现代化工业的发展，污染越来越严重自然环境受到破坏，影 响了生态平 衡。许多动物已濒临灭绝。人类应保护动物，作为一名 青少年，我们应为保护动物做些什么呢？请参照以上形容词，和以下 词组句型，谈谈你的想法。