定语从句在人物描写中的运用 2

写作训练
3他个子不高留着短直发。4他父母都是医
1李明是我们班的同学。2今年17岁。
生，在当地医院工作。5他家住九溪，离学 校不远。6他学习很努力所以老师和学生们 都很喜欢他。7他经常帮助家里困难的学生。 8大家都很尊敬他。
写作训练
Ming is my classmate2 who is seventeen years old. 3He is of medium height with short straight hair. 4Both of his parents are doctors who work in the local hispital. 5He lives in Jiuxi where is not far from school. 6He studies so hard that all the teachers and students like him very much.7He always helps those who are in poor family condition.8We all respect him so much.
4、特长爱好
常用表达式：
be good at/do well in 擅长于 make up one’s mind to do…/be determined to do决心做 have a gift for 有……的天赋
非常喜欢 对„„感兴趣 对„„失去兴趣 对„„极度喜欢 I like … very much He is interested in… He loses interest in… He is crazy about…
Harry Porter is a boy __________________________ who has a scar on his forehead.
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Hermione is a girl. She always gets good grades.
who always gets good Hermione is a girl _____ grades.
定语从句
What is the Attributive clause? 在复合句中修饰名词或代词的从句叫定语从句。
关 系 词
关系代词：who whom that which whose
关系副词：when where why 关系词的主要作用：替代先行词和在从句中充当成分
定语从句
先行词
She is the girl_______lives next door. who 关系词 Attributive clause
热心的
淘气的 聪明的
勤奋的
幽默的 有信心的 有耐心的
1>她是一个圆脸,大眼睛,皓齿长发的可爱的女孩. She is a lovely girl who has a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long hair.
2>他是一个很好看的男人,留着浓密的小胡子但是却没有头发.
话题词汇/词组/句型
• 外貌：
相貌英俊的
good-looking
外貌平平的 白头发的 近/远视的 有魅力的 苗条的
ordinary-looking
white-haired near/far-sighted
charming, attractive slim
性格特征
好心的 kind-hearted warm-hearted naughty smart/bright/clever hardworking humorous confident patient
• 1. （1991年高考）：上海出版一份“学生英文报”， 请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍，介绍少年体育明星 孙淑伟。 • 2. （1996年高考）：你是李华，申请到一家外资企业 工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基 本情况。 • 3. （2002某省高考）：介绍韩国明星安在旭。 • 4. （2006北京卷）：国际文化交流中心将组织一次夏 令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是 王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介 • 5. （2007年全国卷I）：假定你是李华，希望找一个英 语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条 件。具体条件包括： • 1.年龄； 2.性别； 3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
可使用以下句型结构, 丰富人物形象。 (1)“so + adj. /adv. + that”, 例：Mary is so famous that everyone kowns her and respects her .
Sentence patterns
1. 概况：age, sex, birth, family background was/ were born in be/come from… grow up in live a happy/hard life 出生于 来自 成长于 过着幸福/艰苦的生活
钟南山１９４１年生于广州，是中国最伟大的医生之一。
6. She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country. 她为科研献出了一切, 对国家作出了巨大贡献。
6、评价
常用表达式： one of the best/most important…最好的/重要的…之一
The headmaster who wears a pair of glasses is Dumbledore.
1. The man பைடு நூலகம்s tall and strong. 1. The Frederick William I man is Hagrid.
The man who is tall and strong is Hagrid
Writing
定语从句在人物描写中的运用
Aims
Today, we are going to … Make sentences with the attributive clause.
Combine sentences into paragraphs.
写作六步
审→列→扩→美→连→抄
高考真题
Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
2、外貌性格
我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她有两只大 眼睛，留着长发. My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair.
1. Ron is one of Harry's friends. 2. His hair is red. Ron is one of Harry's friends whose hair is red.
1. The headmaster is Dumbledore. 2. He wears a pair of glasses.
1Li
改一改
my classmate Li Ming is me classmates who is
seventeen years old. He is of medium height with short straight hair. Both of his are her parents is doctors who work in the lives where local hispital. He lived in Jiuxi when is not far from school.He studies so hard and students like him that all the teachers with he very much. He always helps those which who are in poor family condition.We all him respect his so much.
He is a good-looking man who has a thick moustache but no hair .
3、教育经历
常用表达式：
graduate from …从…毕业 major in 以…为专业 get good grades 获得好成绩 win the first/second …prize 得一等/二等…奖
对„„厌倦
憎恨
He is tired of…
hate
喜欢
enjoy/love/be fond of
5、事业及成就
常用表达式：
1. devote oneself /one’s effort to be devoted to 致力于 2. make great contribution to 为……作出巨大贡献
注意事项: 1.从句的位置: 先行词 之后 2.翻译方法:“….的”
用定语从句描述以下人物
Harry Porter is a boy.
He has a scar on his forehead.
Harry Porter is a boy, he has a scar on his forehead.