最新江苏高考英语读写类作文讲评-课件(ppt讲稿)教学讲义ppt

Transitional sentences connecting your experience
▪ Actually, in real life, everyone can have an experience of …
▪ Having read the passage, I think of …
The food looks _________, but it tasted OK.
▪ great He is an ________ player to watch. Her dance was an ________________ performance. Their last concert was really _________. The film was absolutely ________________. What a ______________ idea. This travel was a/an ____________ experience. ▪ very She looks ___________ beautiful this tonight. Conditions have improved ____________over the
2016江苏高考英语读写类作文 讲评-课件(PPT讲稿)
Learning aims:
▪ To learn how to sum up the main idea of a short passage;
▪ To learn how to polish up your own writings; ▪ To correct some mistakes from your own
Sandy will be d_____ to see you.
I’m absolutely ______ that you are coming.
▪ bad
Smoking in public is a/an __________ habit.
The weather is ___________.
I found this manner is extremely ________.
important be of vital/great importance
▪ sad
Exercise1
She felt lonely and d________.
She was really u_____ about the way her father treated her.
▪ happy
She was feeling more c______ than before.
▪ 参考3
▪ What the passage shows us is a stampede which happened in Shanghai’s Bund area several days ago, including the reasons why it happened and the measures authorities should take. (29字) (suggested answer)
past few years. Raising money for the homeless has been ________
difficult. Self-confidence is ____________ vital to success.
General
Advanced
sad
depressed/upset/in low spirits
Advanced
get
acquire/attain/obtain
finish
accomplish/complete
like
appreciate/be fond of/prefer
care
concern
consider take…into consideration/account
use
make use of /take advantage of
writings.
写作要求分析
读写任务型写作分为两部分： 第一部分要求用约30个词概括所给短文的要点， 文体主要以议论文，记叙文或说明文为主。
第二部分以约120个词就短文某一主题谈论自己的 经历并发表看法。 此项旨在着重考查学生学习英语的综合能力，特别 是阅读写作以及思维的能力。第一部分要求学生能 读懂文章，在读懂的基础上概括文章要点，所以阅 读能力和概括能力要求较高。
▪ After reading the passage, I am lost in thought, which reminds me of …
▪ What a touching story, which reminds me of …
How to polish up your writing
General
control at the scene. (35)（马苏云）
▪ 参考2 ▪ A tragedy in which at least 36 people died
during New Year celebrations in Shanghai raised people’s awareness of the security of public places. And the author analyzed the causes of the tragedy. （33字）(杨天一)
▪ 参考1
▪ At least 36 people died in a fatal stampede [stæ m'piːd] during New Year celebrations in Shanghai on January 1st, 2015, caused by lack of awareness over safety risk and loose
happy cheerful/delighted/thrilled/pleased
bad g来自百度文库eat
awful/unpleasant/horrible