2020新高考英语读后续写写作方法技巧指导教师版(25页)

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读后续写

写作过程中，不断进行词汇的高级替代和句式的升级是提高写作水平的一个重要途径。

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考试说明》对读后续写题型的表述如下：提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。因此，考生需要在达成限制性要求的前提下，展开合理的想象进行续写，创造性地完成一个故事。

高中英语高考《考试说明》给出的读后续写评分标准主要涵盖以下四个方面：（1）

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One possible version：

Paragraph 1：

But the helicopter didn’t come back again, and the day became darker. Jane was so tired, hungry, and extremely frightened. She thought to herself，“If only I had not quarreled with Tom. Where is Tom? He must have made the emergency call. What indeed is enough courage. If I continue my spirits tomorrow, I will be likely to guide the helicopter．”Lying beside the stream,__she fell asleep very soon. Suddenly, she heard the shouts of tigers, which made her scared to death. After she held her breath for a few minutes, everything was quiet again. In the terrible darkness, she slept again.

Paragraph 2：

Jane woke up at the daybreak. She caught sight of a fisherman at__a__distance,__with whose help she climbed to an open area.__To__her__great__joy,__ a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. The fisherman helped flag her yellow__blouse wildly. This did catch the rescuers’ attention! Jane was rescued. Seeing Tom, she told him how much she missed him. Never would they be away from each other. Tom gave her the warmest and longest hug she had ever received. People around smiled with satisfaction.

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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

From the first day he entered my classroom, Willard P. Frank existed in his own world, shutting out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him

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参考范文

April arrives a few minutes after Cody.She looks angry at first，because Cody cheated her to get a head start.Cody apologises for cheating her，and explains that he really likes the Bulldog.April accepts his apology and congratulates him on his being the winner and hence gets to choose the dog.They return to the pet_store to purchase Buster the Bulldog.However，when they arrive at the pet store，they only see Teacup the Chihuahua.They ask the owner where Buster is.

Mr.Smith tells them the details.He explains that a few minutes after April and Cody left，two boys walked in and decided to buy the Bulldog.Cody looks at April，and she holds back a smile.Both of them did not expect that would happen within a short time.Cody sighs.He turns back to Mr.Smith.“Sometimes you win the race，but not the prize！” Cody says sadly，and points at the only dog left.“We will take the Chihuahua，please.”

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Once upon a time there lived a king in southern India named Sri Rana Charya.He was very curious to know about his country.

One day he called out a group of officers and said，“Go，and find how the people of my country_are and bring the person who knows about ‘the_secret_of_work’．But one condition，any person you meet，he should not know that I sent you.”

The officers didn’t understand the king and they walked away.The officers thought about what to do the whole night，each of them got a plan and they said to each other.But all the members liked the plan of Raghu (a clever person among the other officers) and they all agreed to it.