读后续写设计07

读后续写教学设计

Teaching aims:

1. Practice students’ reading and writing ability.

2.Help students get the idea of how to write it well.

3. Let students master some useful words and expressions.

Teaching important points:

Practice students’ readi ng and writing ability. And help them get the idea of how to write it well. Teaching difficult points:

How to help students write the article well?

Teaching aids:

Multimedia computer，PPT

Teaching Procedures:

I. Greetings and lead in.

II. Reading.

Task 1. Read for information.

What is the style of the passage?Narration 记叙

Tense(时态): Past tense

Main idea:My dad took good care of his carnations.

Moral lesson/ theme:love

Characters:My dad/ my mom/ Maria/ I

Task2: Read for emotion:

Carnations are my dad’s most favorite flower---Dad’s love for FLOWER

Please find some supporting details to show my dad’s love for the flower.

Did we love our dad? Can you show some evidence？

Maria & I --- my dad’s best flower???

III. Writing.

T: Just now, we talk a lot about My Dad’s Best Flowers. Now, use at least five words and phrases to finish writing. After writing, I will ask some of you to share your writing with classmates.

One day, my elder sister, who loved dad very much, had a great idea._______

When my dad arrived, he went as usual, straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals._____________________________________________

WHAT TO WRITE:What’s the idea? What did we do to the carnations?

What’s my dad’s reaction?/response?/the result?

HOW TO WRITE:it is your work.Pay attention to coherence and contents.

IV. Show time.

Let them show their writing on the screen. And correct the grammar mistakes.

V. Homework:

Finish writing, polish it and hand in.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

One day, my elder sister, who loved dad very much, had a great idea.

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When my dad arrived, he went as usual, straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals.

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One possible version:

One day, my elder sister, who loved dad very much, had a great idea.

She made a sharp cut of the carnations from their stems one by one and arranged them on the floor. She believed that dad would be pleased to see them that way. When mom realized what my sister had done, she became completely speechless. However, my sister didn’t know why no one appreciated her efforts. The shock was too strong and we all waited for dad’s arrival with anxiety.

When my dad arrived, he went as usual, straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals. Naturally, He was shocked at first. He looked toward the street to see if any neighborhood children had done it. Then he entered the living room and looked left and right and mom in silence. Finally mom looked at dad and with a nice tone she said: “ No outsider did this great job, only your lovely daughter Maria.’’ Hearing this, my dad’s face changed from tense to a smile and then he said: “Do I have a better flower than my lovely daughter?” My elder sister smiled and hugged dad strongly.