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校模情景作文
1
第一部分
整体概述
THE FIRST PART OF THE OVERALL OVERVIEW, PLEASE SUMMARIZE THE CONTENT
2
• 欢迎的横幅 • 摊位
• 社团
Word list
• welcome banner • house/room/shed/tent/table • stand • community/association/club/
2. Since I want to learn English in college, we spent most of the time in front of its stand, enquiring information and reading relevant papers.
5
佳句欣赏
After having visited the school, I was deeply absorbed in the atmosphere and was determined to spare no effort to be admitted into the university. My parents and I put our hands together to cheer me up for the bright future.
organization/group/team • society
3
应注意：
1. 时态：一定是过去时，一直是过去时 2. 衔接：图与图之间要自然连接（连接词，
非谓语，状语从句……） 3. 篇幅：每幅图的长短差不多（如何？为什
么？怎么样？心情？环境？）
4
佳句欣赏
1. Hardly had we arrived there when we were attracted by the beautiful sight and we noticed that there were banners hanging on the gate, reading “welcome students and parents to our school” .
Following the beautiful path leading to the main building, we got to the place where different stands were set up to help us get information about school condition and faculties we are interested in. There were lots of stands of each department, such as IT, foreign languages. We walked straight towards the apartment of foreign languages which I am willing to study in. The teacher gave us detailed introduction as well as a brochure. I got satisfaction beyond expression. 10
My parents accompanied me to the Peking University. As it is the university I longed for, I felt very nervous about going there. But my parents’ encouragement helped me overcome the sense of tense.
5. It strengthened my desire to spend my college life here, where I would both receive extraordinary education and lead a meaningful four-year life.
7
范文1
3. With my ambition burning in my heart, my parents and I held hands together and yelled out “Fighting” loudly together.
6
佳句欣赏– 漂亮ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ结尾
4. Having visited the school, not only did I find that the school was extremely good, but also I was inspired to work harder.
8
范文1
Attracted by the beautiful songs, we reached a corner where a girl was dressed in costume and was performing Peking Opera. In that place, we got to know the societies established in the university—bicycle society, English drama society, opera society and so on.
There were varieties of stands in which you could get the information of what you would learn in the university. I’d made up my mind that I would major in foreign languages, so I had a talk with the teacher who was in charge of foreign languages. She gave me a brief introduction so that I could have a deeper understanding of the university.
优点：准确使用动词词组,文章流畅生动 不足：细节可更充分,第二段和第三段衔接不紧密 9
范文2
Luckily, I could get the opportunity to pay a visit to my dream school with my parents.
No sooner had we arrived at the school than we caught sight of the banners which read”2011 school open day. Welcome students and parents to our school”, feeling excited.
1
第一部分
整体概述
THE FIRST PART OF THE OVERALL OVERVIEW, PLEASE SUMMARIZE THE CONTENT
2
• 欢迎的横幅 • 摊位
• 社团
Word list
• welcome banner • house/room/shed/tent/table • stand • community/association/club/
2. Since I want to learn English in college, we spent most of the time in front of its stand, enquiring information and reading relevant papers.
5
佳句欣赏
After having visited the school, I was deeply absorbed in the atmosphere and was determined to spare no effort to be admitted into the university. My parents and I put our hands together to cheer me up for the bright future.
organization/group/team • society
3
应注意：
1. 时态：一定是过去时，一直是过去时 2. 衔接：图与图之间要自然连接（连接词，
非谓语，状语从句……） 3. 篇幅：每幅图的长短差不多（如何？为什
么？怎么样？心情？环境？）
4
佳句欣赏
1. Hardly had we arrived there when we were attracted by the beautiful sight and we noticed that there were banners hanging on the gate, reading “welcome students and parents to our school” .
Following the beautiful path leading to the main building, we got to the place where different stands were set up to help us get information about school condition and faculties we are interested in. There were lots of stands of each department, such as IT, foreign languages. We walked straight towards the apartment of foreign languages which I am willing to study in. The teacher gave us detailed introduction as well as a brochure. I got satisfaction beyond expression. 10
My parents accompanied me to the Peking University. As it is the university I longed for, I felt very nervous about going there. But my parents’ encouragement helped me overcome the sense of tense.
5. It strengthened my desire to spend my college life here, where I would both receive extraordinary education and lead a meaningful four-year life.
7
范文1
3. With my ambition burning in my heart, my parents and I held hands together and yelled out “Fighting” loudly together.
6
佳句欣赏– 漂亮ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ结尾
4. Having visited the school, not only did I find that the school was extremely good, but also I was inspired to work harder.
8
范文1
Attracted by the beautiful songs, we reached a corner where a girl was dressed in costume and was performing Peking Opera. In that place, we got to know the societies established in the university—bicycle society, English drama society, opera society and so on.
There were varieties of stands in which you could get the information of what you would learn in the university. I’d made up my mind that I would major in foreign languages, so I had a talk with the teacher who was in charge of foreign languages. She gave me a brief introduction so that I could have a deeper understanding of the university.
优点：准确使用动词词组,文章流畅生动 不足：细节可更充分,第二段和第三段衔接不紧密 9
范文2
Luckily, I could get the opportunity to pay a visit to my dream school with my parents.
No sooner had we arrived at the school than we caught sight of the banners which read”2011 school open day. Welcome students and parents to our school”, feeling excited.