【英语】中考英语书面表达压轴题分类汇编经典1

【英语】中考英语书面表达压轴题分类汇编经典1
一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
1．假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。

你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。

请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。

注意：
（1）邮件应包含所有要点
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
注：社会实践 social practice activities
Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。

而非谓语动
词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，
写一份素质报告．
要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等
Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school,
he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.
I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. I t’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。

在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。

表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。

这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。

在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。

同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。

这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。

写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。

短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。

如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

3．书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：（1）What was the event?
（2）How did you make it?
（3）What’s your feeling?
要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found
when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。

题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。

写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。

其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。

应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。

句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。

为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。

文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。

短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。

文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

4．书面表达
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

一直以来，同学们对作业持有不同的观点。

在你班的主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的讨论，请你根据提示和要求，并结合自己的实际经验，发表你的观点。

Help us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...
Your opinion：
要求：
1．80词以上。

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日的作业到底是不是必要的。

首先需要陈述正反两方面的观点，其次结合自己的实际经验，发表自己的观点。

写作过程中要注意逻辑准确，注意正确使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自己的观点。

写作亮点：首先用一个自然段来阐明写作的主题，表达出自己的观点（认为作业是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样的句型。

其次，开始具体陈述观点，陈述的时候要适当使用实例，相关用到的短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…的时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little 一点一点地。

恰当的谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。

最后可以用说理的方式来介绍做作业的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills
提高我们的技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了
作者的深度思考，总体来说出色地完成了既定的写作任务。

5．书面表达
共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给《21世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。

作适当发挥。

3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.
【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.
But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.
I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们给《21世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。

题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。

前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。

通
过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。

写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。

语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。

短文分成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。

分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。

其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。

例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几个长句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如Al so, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。

正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。

6．书面表达
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。

假定你是李华，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。

要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。

3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。

【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

7．假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。

近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。

为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。

短诗如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事项：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。

3.词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：
4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】Dear Editorial Office,
I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.
She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．
I hope that you agree with me．
Yours sincerely，
Beth,【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

8．书面表达
假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。

俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。

请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。

写作要点：
1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。

2介绍活动的情况：
（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。

（2）本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。

（3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。

3说一说网上购书有什么好处。

写作要求：
1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4至少80词。

Dear Angel,
How are you doing?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy
【答案】Dear Angel,
How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。

Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy 【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动，并且告诉外教同学们现在喜欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room 中which引导非限制性定语从句。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。

请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？
2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？
3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？
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【答案】例文：The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.
So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。

文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼
写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

10．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。

最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信：
1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱的伟大
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.
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Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touc hed many people’s hearts.
If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】
根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。

时态是一般现在时。

人称是第一人称和第三人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。

我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱的伟大
第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。