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Movember is an annual event when men stop shaving to raise money for cancer charities. Some Australia men first started it to encourage men to do cancer checks regardless of discrimination. Thanks to social media, Movember spreads globally, resulting in advancement in cancer
blokey: behaving in a way that is supposed to be typical of men , especially men enjoying themselves in
a group.
Since then it has gone global and raised lots of money. （要点4）
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C目录 ONTENTS
01 概要写作评分标准及得分要点 02 概要写作得分技巧
C目录 ONTENTS
01 概要写作评分标准及得分要点 02 概要写作得分技巧
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Its success is due to its way to have men visit their doctors with blokey jokiness. （要点5）
评分范例
内容部分 B. 能准确概括文章主旨大意，但遗漏个别主要信息。（4分) C. 能概括文章主旨大意，但遗漏部分主要信息。 （3分)
涵盖主要信息。 语言部分 A. 能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。
Men grow moustache for money used for cancer charities in Movember.（要点1）
Moustache（胡子） for Cash
“ “Movember”, as the annual event is known, sees men in countries including the UK, US and Australia grow out their facial hair while collecting sponsorship money from friends, family and colleagues, with the
money going wk.baidu.como cancer charities.
In 2003, two men started Movember. （要点2）
The month of no shaving began unofficially in 2003, when a pair of men from Australia persuaded their
in a culture of “tough it out”, has led some males to neglect their health, which may mean it could be too
late if something potentially deadly did develop. However, Movember is helping to break down the shame
Foundation, asking friends and colleagues to offer donations of money to support their efforts, and raised a
massive A$54,000 which was shared between a number of health projects. With thanks most likely to
social media, Movember soon went global and the foundation now operates worldwide, having raised over
￡440 million since 2004. The effects of the fundraising are wide-reaching, which had made a significant
of male health by making it more accessible, meaning that men are more likely to visit their doctors. They
found a way to appeal to men in a way that other campaigns just don’t – with a sort of blokey① jokiness.
评分标准
档次 A B C D E F
内容 5 4 3 2 1 0
语言 5 4 3 2 1 0
评分标准
1. 本题总分为10分, 其中内容5分, 语言5分。 2. 评分时应注意的主要方面: 内容要点、信息
呈现的连贯性和准确性。 3. 词数超过60，酌情扣分。
评分标准
内容部分 A. 能准确、全面地概括文章主旨大意, 并
family to join them in growing a moustache in order to encourage men to get themselves checked for
cancer, which is seen as distasteful by some males. A year later, the group decided to set up the Movember
discovery in the treatment of cancer.
In 2004, the foundation was set up. （要点3）
The issue of some men being too self-willed to visit their doctor for a checkup, or perhaps being raised