写作中式英语(写作句子评析)

12. 现如今，由于出国深造的人越来越多， “海归派”也不像原来那样吃香了。 [误] Nowadays as more and more people study abroad, the overseas students are not so popular as before. [正] Nowadays as more and more people study abroad, the returnees/returned overseas Chinese are not so popular as before.
26. 习惯成自然。 [误] Habit forms nature. [正] Habit is second nature.
27. 她儿子终于平安无事地回来了。 [误] Her son has finally come back, safe and eventless. [正] Her son has finally come back, safe and sound.
28. 人才流失是我们面临的重大问题。 [误] Talents draining is a serious problem we are facing. [正] Brain-draining is a serious problem we are facing.
29. 在会上他做了一个总结，主要意思 如下...... [误] He made a final report at the meeting. The main idea is as follow... [正] He made a final report at the meeting. The main idea is as follows...
10. 最近的人口统计显示中国人口已 超过14亿。 [误] The latest census shows that China's population has surpassed 1.4 billion. [正] The latest census shows that China's population exceeds 1.4 billion.
20. 我不想听他那些空话。 [误]ຫໍສະໝຸດ BaiduI don't want to hear his empty words. [正] I don't want to hear his hollow words.
21. 听到这个消息，没有一个人不感 到兴奋。 [误] Having heard the news, nobody did not feel excited. [正] Having heard the news, everybody felt excited.
8. 我希望你不要拖我的后腿。 [误] I hope that you won't pull my leg. [正] I hope that you won't hold me back.
9. 学校里，那些长得人高马大的家伙 常来找我的麻烦。 [误] At school, those big and strong guys always come to find my trouble. [正] At school, those big and strong guys always come to pick on me.
22. 爸爸总爱发脾气。 [误] Dad always likes losing his temper. [正] Dad is apt to lose his temper.
23. 你们必须擦亮眼睛，弄清楚事情的真相。
[误] You should wipe your eye and find out the truth. [正] You should remove the scales from your eyes and find out the truth.
2. 人都是这山望着那山高，对自己的现状 没有满意的时候。 [误] Almost all people think that the other mountain is higher than the one he's standing on. They never feel satisfied with what they've already got. [正] Almost all people think that the grass is greener on the other hill. They never feel satisfied with what they've already got.
18. 我有一个舒适的家。 [误] I have a cozy family. [正] I have a cozy home.
19. 每节课老师都会点名。 [误] The teacher will call our names in every period of class. [正] The teacher will call the roll in every period of class.
6. 我唯一的资本就是勤奋。 [误] My only capital is diligence. [正] My only means to success is diligence.
7. 大家都怀疑汤姆是个间谍。 [误] Everyone doubts that Tom is a spy. [正] Everyone suspects that Tom is a spy.
3. 许多媒体拒绝对这件丑闻发表意见。 [误] Many media refuse to express their opinions on this scandal. [正] Many media refuse to comment on this scandal.
4. 别听他们胡说八道，根本就没那回事。 [误] Don't listen to their babbling. Nothing of the sort. [正] Don't be fooled by their babbling. Nothing of the sort.
16. 嘿，小伙子，千万别灰心。 [误] Hey, lad, don't lose your heart. [正] Hey, lad, don't lose heart.
17. IBM公司一直处在电脑行业的前沿。 [误] IBM is always in the front line of computer industry. [正] IBM is always at the cutting edge of computer industry.
11. 每次考试来临的时候，约翰就变成了一 只夜猫子，但这并不是一个好的学习方法。 [误] John becomes a night cat every time the examination is coming. However, this is not a good way to learn. [正] John becomes a night owl every time the examination is coming. However, this is not a good way to learn.
14. 哈罗得挥金如土，没有一点积蓄。 [误] Harold spends money like dirt, and has no savings. [正] Harold spends money like water, and has no savings.
15. 这个任务很危险，但总得有人去冒险。 [误] The task is really dangerous. But someone has to take the adventure. [正] The task is really dangerous. But someone has to bell the cat.
13. 比尔.盖茨平均每天工作15个小时，他简 直就是一个工作狂。 [误] Bill Gates works 15 hours a day on average, and he is crazy about his work. [正] Bill Gates works 15 hours a day on average, and he is a workaholic.
The English Writer’s Guide to Chinglish
中式英语之鉴
1. 老人很喜欢这个嘴甜的小姑娘。 [误] The old lady likes this sweetmouthed little girl very much. [正] The old lady likes this honeylipped little girl very much.
5. 别看别人不把她当回事，在家里她可是 父亲的掌上明珠。 [误] Although other people never take her seriously, she is the pearl on her father's hand at home. [正] Although other people never take her seriously, she is the apple of her father's eye at home.
24. 如果你也那样做可就有失身份了。 [误] You would lose your identity if you followed suit. [正] It would be beneath your dignity if you followed suit.
25. 要想学习英语，必须首先学会查字典。 [误] In order to learn English, one must learn to look up the dictionary first. [正] In order to learn English, one must learn to look up words in the dictionary first.