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Get a general idea of the reading passage. Abstract the key points. Delete the details. Rewrite the key points in your own words.
Add some linking words to make it logical.
bill,etc.It's good to travel with someone who
has the same or similar pattern of payment
as you can support each other without
having any arguments.
At the beginning
http://www.ppthi-hoo.com
Task 2 Para2
It's good to have someone with you who can watch your backpack when you want to use the toilet,find the way back home when you get lost,carry some of your luggage when you're tired,take some photos of you when you want and help you in all kinds of situations.The feeling of having someone by your side makes you feel less stressful about many things.
At the end
http://www.ppthi-hoo.com
Task 1 Para 4
1.
A companion can share the costs with
you.You can stay in one room,buy a
dinner,have it together and share the
http://www.ppthi-hoo.com
Task 1 Para 1
I guess everyone like to set off for a journey with someone we can understand and have fun with .TRAVELLING WITH A COMPANION IS GREAT!.
journey with someone we can understand and have fun with .TRAVELLING WITH A COMPANION IS GREAT!
2.What is the best way to get the main idea of the passage?
To find out the key sentences/topic sentences.
How can we find the topic sentence?
/Where can we get the topic sentence?
Para3
With a companion,you can together share the beautiful moments during the travels,experience the same things in a different way and support each other.It's much more interesting and exciting when you have the chance to share something with someone while on your road.Meanwhile,there is always someone whom you can shout at when you are angry,or a shoulder on which you can cry when you miss your home.
Mary looked at Jerry disapprovingly and said, “You put too much salt on your food, Jerry. Stop it.”
Mary asked Jerry not to put too much salt on his food.
Children should ________ more praise
07 使用概括性的名词代替具体的词 She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vocation. She brought home a lot of books to read during the vocation.
Tips: Ways of Paraphrase 01 Use words of similar meanings.
He had a very good command of English. He knew English well.
02 Turn complex sentences into simple oHale Waihona Puke Baidues. He received a welcome that was as cold as ice.
share experience
share unforgettable moments good or bad
support
Para4
A companion can share the costs with you.You can stay in one room,buy a dinner,have it together and share the bill,etc.It's good to travel with someone who has the same or similar pattern of payment as you can support each other without having any arguments.
05 Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence. You will fail.
You will ____________
06 Change the structure of a sentence.
Parents should give children more praise.
Para6
In short,travelling with someone is the best choice for people who are short of travel experience or just social animals and easily miss their home. We might sometimes feel like being on our own and enjoy the sights with nobody behind our back but at the end of the day you have much more fun when being with someone,especially for a long run.
Para5
Having a companion by your side when travelling means less loneliness.You don't think about it unless you get left in the middle of nowhere, far away from your friends and family. Then you wish to have someone with you.
point+reasons+conlusion
Structure of the text
point(para1)
reason1 (para2) reason 2 (para3) reason 3 (para4) reason 4(para5)
Conclusion(para6)
1.Usually in summary--writing ,we should first grasp_t_h_e_m__a_in__id_e_a__.
His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion-like.
He was very brave in battle.
Let's put what we have learnt into practice
Para1 I guess everyone like to set off for a
convenience
Key words
http://www.ppthi-hoo.com
Type
Types Of Paragraph Structures
The position(位置) Function(作用)
of the topic
The topic sentence:
sentence
main idea
Do you find something Copy the sentences wrong with the passage? from the passage .
Travelling with a companion is great.It's good to have someone with you who help you in all situations.With a companion you can together share the beautiful moments during the travels.A companion can share the costs with you,and it is good to travel with someone who has the same of partner of payment as you so you can support each other.Having a companion by you side when travelling means less loneliness.In short,travelling with someone is the best choice.
He received a(n)_i_c_y__welcome.
03 Combine the sentences.
Hurry up. If you don’t, you’ll miss the train.
Hurry up __o_r___ you’ll miss the train.
04 Replace direct speech with indirect speech.
At the beginning Key words:
At the end
sum up the main idea
The other sentences
Key words
supporting details, examples,
explanations.
Let's put what we have learnt into practice
Get a general idea
Q1: What is the writing style of the passage? A.Narration(记叙文) B.Exposition(说明文) C.Argumentation(议论文)
Q2: How is the passage organized?
Add some linking words to make it logical.
bill,etc.It's good to travel with someone who
has the same or similar pattern of payment
as you can support each other without
having any arguments.
At the beginning
http://www.ppthi-hoo.com
Task 2 Para2
It's good to have someone with you who can watch your backpack when you want to use the toilet,find the way back home when you get lost,carry some of your luggage when you're tired,take some photos of you when you want and help you in all kinds of situations.The feeling of having someone by your side makes you feel less stressful about many things.
At the end
http://www.ppthi-hoo.com
Task 1 Para 4
1.
A companion can share the costs with
you.You can stay in one room,buy a
dinner,have it together and share the
http://www.ppthi-hoo.com
Task 1 Para 1
I guess everyone like to set off for a journey with someone we can understand and have fun with .TRAVELLING WITH A COMPANION IS GREAT!.
journey with someone we can understand and have fun with .TRAVELLING WITH A COMPANION IS GREAT!
2.What is the best way to get the main idea of the passage?
To find out the key sentences/topic sentences.
How can we find the topic sentence?
/Where can we get the topic sentence?
Para3
With a companion,you can together share the beautiful moments during the travels,experience the same things in a different way and support each other.It's much more interesting and exciting when you have the chance to share something with someone while on your road.Meanwhile,there is always someone whom you can shout at when you are angry,or a shoulder on which you can cry when you miss your home.
Mary looked at Jerry disapprovingly and said, “You put too much salt on your food, Jerry. Stop it.”
Mary asked Jerry not to put too much salt on his food.
Children should ________ more praise
07 使用概括性的名词代替具体的词 She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vocation. She brought home a lot of books to read during the vocation.
Tips: Ways of Paraphrase 01 Use words of similar meanings.
He had a very good command of English. He knew English well.
02 Turn complex sentences into simple oHale Waihona Puke Baidues. He received a welcome that was as cold as ice.
share experience
share unforgettable moments good or bad
support
Para4
A companion can share the costs with you.You can stay in one room,buy a dinner,have it together and share the bill,etc.It's good to travel with someone who has the same or similar pattern of payment as you can support each other without having any arguments.
05 Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence. You will fail.
You will ____________
06 Change the structure of a sentence.
Parents should give children more praise.
Para6
In short,travelling with someone is the best choice for people who are short of travel experience or just social animals and easily miss their home. We might sometimes feel like being on our own and enjoy the sights with nobody behind our back but at the end of the day you have much more fun when being with someone,especially for a long run.
Para5
Having a companion by your side when travelling means less loneliness.You don't think about it unless you get left in the middle of nowhere, far away from your friends and family. Then you wish to have someone with you.
point+reasons+conlusion
Structure of the text
point(para1)
reason1 (para2) reason 2 (para3) reason 3 (para4) reason 4(para5)
Conclusion(para6)
1.Usually in summary--writing ,we should first grasp_t_h_e_m__a_in__id_e_a__.
His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion-like.
He was very brave in battle.
Let's put what we have learnt into practice
Para1 I guess everyone like to set off for a
convenience
Key words
http://www.ppthi-hoo.com
Type
Types Of Paragraph Structures
The position(位置) Function(作用)
of the topic
The topic sentence:
sentence
main idea
Do you find something Copy the sentences wrong with the passage? from the passage .
Travelling with a companion is great.It's good to have someone with you who help you in all situations.With a companion you can together share the beautiful moments during the travels.A companion can share the costs with you,and it is good to travel with someone who has the same of partner of payment as you so you can support each other.Having a companion by you side when travelling means less loneliness.In short,travelling with someone is the best choice.
He received a(n)_i_c_y__welcome.
03 Combine the sentences.
Hurry up. If you don’t, you’ll miss the train.
Hurry up __o_r___ you’ll miss the train.
04 Replace direct speech with indirect speech.
At the beginning Key words:
At the end
sum up the main idea
The other sentences
Key words
supporting details, examples,
explanations.
Let's put what we have learnt into practice
Get a general idea
Q1: What is the writing style of the passage? A.Narration(记叙文) B.Exposition(说明文) C.Argumentation(议论文)
Q2: How is the passage organized?