高中作文写作公开课

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英语作文在高考英语中的分值是多少？ A. 30 B.15 D.20
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英语作文在高考英语中的分值是多少？ A. 30 C.25 B.15 D.20
Do you think English Composition
Writing is important ?
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Yours, Li Hua
III. post-writing
Presentation
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Dear Peter, How are you doing? I'm writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I've asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you've asked for before. Also, I'd like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the fisrt visit to the U.S.? His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My unlce is tall and he is wearing glassses. And he will be in blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, 第一章 公司简介 Li Hua
Looking forward to your reply.
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Yours, Li Hua
II.Pre-writing(team work).
Task 1: Decide the person and tense
Task 2: Decide the structure
Task 3: Write down the key words and sentence patterns
丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。 感叹句 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !
强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that
helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.
proper linking words 使用恰当的连接词 various sentence patterns 用较丰富的句式
简单句型
作文中常用简单句型结构。
1，主语+ 谓语 eg: She dances. 2，主语+ 谓语+ 宾语 eg:I wrote a letter last night. 3，主语+ 系动词+ 表语 eg:The boy is handsome.
with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.
定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes
should be a place where we can find much useful information. Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
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looking forward to your reply.
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Yours, Li Hua
Task 2:Decide the structure
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假定你是李华。请你给你笔友Peter写 封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城 市开会，带去他想要的那副中国画，同 时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30
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Task 3: Write down the key words
假定你是李华。请你给你笔友Peter写 封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城 市开会，带去他想要的那副中国画，同 时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30
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Task 1: person(人称) tense（时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
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Task 2:Decide the structure
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
各种名词性从句
e.g. That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.
篇章层面
Beginning
结构合理 well organized 卷面整洁 字迹工整 neat and clean 内容完整 complete content
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Task 3: Sentence patterns
·I'm writing to tell you that... ·I'd like you to... ·would you please...? ·I wonder if you can... ·...
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必要的连接词 表示递进：besides, as well, in addition 表示比较：just like, in the same way, on the contrary 表示因果：so that, since, in order to/that 表示强调：above all, without any doubt 表示总结：in a word, in shout, in conclusion
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词汇层面
exactly used and advanced words 准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇
adj.聪明的、脑经好的 adj.令人惊奇的
clever smart wise intelligent
surpirsing
amazing
astonishing
段落层面
I think，for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy.our socitey should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. we can bulid a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged. As far as I am concerned, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents however busy we are. What's more, society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live a happy life. Only when all of us care the aged can we bulid a harmonious society.
丰富的句式
The boy who is called ChenHong is handsome.（+定语从句）
ChenHong is very handsome, always wearing glasses.（+分词短语） The boy is handsome and he is in class 7.（+连词）
We should pay more attention to the English Composition Writing.
English Composition Writing
Senior 2 Class 7
Ｉ:Discussion
What makes a good English Writing?
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II. while-writing
pease write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
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Dear Peter, How are you doing? I'm writing to tell you that________________,and _______________________________. Also, I'd like you to do me a favor. Would you please___________________________________? Thank you in advance!___________is CA985, and _________________________________________ 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is _____________. Looking forward to your reply.
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Task 3: the key words a. to have a meeting/conference b. bring sb sth d. do me a favor f. flight number h. wear glasses ....
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c. Chinese painting e. pick him up g. arrive at
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II.Pre-writing.
假定你是李华。请你给你笔友Peter写 封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城 市开会，带去他想要的那副中国画，同 时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30
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注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语和介绍语已为你写好
倒装句
省略句
e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.
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Conclusion:what makes a good Writing?
1.exactly used and advanced words 准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇 2.proper linking words 使用恰当的连接词 3.various sentence patterns 用较丰富的句式 4.well organized 结构合理 5.complete content 内容完整 6.neat and clean 卷面整洁 字迹工整
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
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英语作文在高考英语中的分值是多少？ A.30 C.25 B.15 D.20
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