高考英语写作练习

写作训练一

句子润色——简单句的高级句式

简单句其实也可以不简单,若将简单句与非谓语动词短语、形容词短语、介词短语、同位语、独立主格结构等巧妙地合并在一起,不但可以表达更丰富的内容,而且也使句子变得更精彩,充分显示你在英语表达上的实力。以下各句选自近年各省市高考写作范文的高级简单句,请补充完整，欣赏、熟记、模仿：

1. 同位语

I want to have a pen friend, hopefully_______________________________________________. 我想有一个笔友, 希望是一个二十出头且兴趣相投的女孩子。(同位语中又有两个并列的介词短语修饰)

2. 形容词短语

___________________,Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. 出生于美国的托马斯·爱迪生是一个伟大的科学家和发明家。

3. 不定式短语

______________, we need to do sports. 为了学习好, 我们需要做体育运动。

4. 现在分词短语

In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, _____________________

在这幅图中, 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里, 观看她的鸟仔飞走。

5. 过去分词短语

__________________________________, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. 与信件和公用电话相比, 手机和网络更快也更方便。

6. 介词短语

______________________________, he encourages us to think by ourselves. 他鼓励我们独立思考, 而不是马上告诉我们答案。(instead of的使用)

[即时练习] 按括号中的提示翻译下列句子。

1. 我是李华, 四川的一个学生。(同位语)

I’m Li Hua,_______________.

2. 与其他老师相比, 摩尔先生更注意教学方法。(用过去分词短语)

__________________________, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.

3. 北京动物园, 建于1906年, 有100多年的历史了。(用过去分词短语)

The Beijing Zoo, _____________, has a history of more than 100 years.

4. 李华在公共汽车站等601公车上去学。(现在分词短语)

. Li Hua was at the bus stop, _______________________________.

5.我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。(介词短语)

We students should try to get good results by studying hard ____________________________.

6. 合并句子:

⑴The moon travels round the earth once every month.

⑵The moon is a natural satellite of the earth.(现在分词短语)

_______________________________________________________________________________

7. 合并句子：

⑴He was well known for his expert advice.

⑵He was able to help a great number of people with their personal affairs.(过去分词短语)

______________________________________________________________________________

写作训练二

句子润色---用高级结构让整个句子靓起来

利用以下各招可给句子润色, 让句子靓起来。

1. 使用强调句

用do, does, did强调一般时态的谓语动词; 用it is ...that ...强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。

_________________________that her father recognized her. 直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。

2. 使用倒装句。

________________________learn English well. 只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。

3. 使用with的复合结构。如：

___________________, I couldn’t go on studying. 由于那噪音的持续, 我无法继续学习。

4. 使用非谓语动词。

_________________at the southwest corner of our school, the botanical garden has an area of 1000 square metres. 校园西南角/面积1000平方米。

5. 恰当使用被动句。

Above all, something ________to stop polluting. 最重要的是, 必须釆取某些措施来阻止污染。

6. 使用各类从句, 如使用“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句。

There’re many kinds of tea in China,_________ _____Longjing Tea is famous all over the world. 中国的茶叶有很多种, 其中龙井茶是世界著名的。

7. “数词+名词”改用“as many as+数词+名词”。

A great number of buildings were destroyed, leaving ___________10, 000, 000 people homeless. 请多房屋被摧毁, 使多达千万的人失去家园。

介词短语与with结构强化训练

根据汉语提示完成英文句子, 或用所给词的适合形式填空。

1.We are sure that everything will be better _______________________(随着时间的推移).

2._________________________ (一到达), we began to work immediately.

3.___________________(做完那些工作之后), we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees, and _______________(在离开之前), we took some photos to record our green action.

4.___________________________(在比赛的过程中), you should finish your speech in five minutes and try your best to express yourself in English fluently.

5. ___________________(一听到铃声), students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could.

6.____________________________(随着科学和技术的发展), the world is changing every day.

7. ______________________________(所有的事都做完之后), they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. [用独立主格结构]

8.__________________ _________________ (由于那噪音的持续), I couldn’t go on studying. [with的复合结构]

9.____________________________ (随着社会的快速发展), it’s quite necessary that we (should) have a good knowledge of English and computer.

写作训练三

句子润色——非谓语动词短语和强调结构专练

根据汉语提示完成英文句子, 或用所给词的适合形式填空。

用非谓语动词短语

1. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,___________________________ (一路上有说有笑).

2. At about 1 o-clock this afternoon，Tracy called, ___________________________________[说他明天上午不能在咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)同你见面] as she has something important to attend to.

3. _________________________________(参加英语演讲比赛)is a helpful way to learn English.

4. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries ______________________________________(是为了确定我们没有卷入任何麻烦事).

5. ____________________(被他的话所感动), I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing