2012年高考英语作文满分技巧-图表作文
高考英语图表类作文写作技巧讲解
高考英语图表类作文写作技巧讲解一、考点分析图表作文以说明文和议论文为主。
考查时要求学生根据所给的图表、数据等进行分析,阅读文字和说明,然后组织语言进行写作,得出令人信服的结论,必要时还要加入个人观点。
二、专题详解1)文体一:说明文文体特点:(重事实)说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,用简洁明了的语言来解释说明事物,阐明事理。
它要求语言要简明扼要,客观准确。
框架:第一段:概括说明内容常用的词有:1.table, a pie chart饼图, a bar chart柱状图, graph, survey, picture2.describe, show, represent, illustrate, reveal,3. figure, statistic, number, percentage, proportion常用的开篇句型(即概述图表内容时常用的表达法):1.The graph/chart/table above shows / describes / illustrates that...2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that…3. As shown in the graph / survey, …4.The chart/table shows the differences between…5. I launched an inquiry into… / I conducted a survey on… / to…第二段:描述变化情况并分析引起变化的因素A. 写作关键:1.对比分析,寻找数据的变化规律;2.筛选数据这些数据是否具有典型代表性、是否需要一一列出?一般而言首尾数字以及增减值是必需的;3.强调数据间的关系,突出变化。
B. 常用词汇和套语:a.描写数据变化常用套语:增加:1.There was a great / stable / slight increase /rise in…倍数:2.The number /rate has nearly doubled, compared with that of last year.3.The number is …times as much as that of….保持不变:4.In 1985, the number remained the same.减少:5. There was a gradual/sharp decline in 1989.分别列举:6. The numbers / percentages are… and…respectively.b.说明因果关系表示原因:as / since / due to / owning to / thanks to / because (of)进一步解释:that is to say / to put it another way表示结果:therefore / thus / as a result ( consequence), so that提示例证:(take…)for example / instance, …such as (一般不用于句首),常用套语:提出第一个原因:The first reason can be seen by every person.The first and most impo rtant reason / One of the premier causes is that…解释某一种现象:…is the cause of ……mainly / partially contribute(s) to the tendency of……account(s) for the fact / phenomenon…总括性解释原因:There exist… reasons, which may account for this difference.The reasons for the phenomenon may be as follows:There are several causes for this significant growth in….例证:This point can be confirmed by the fact / example of + nn + is a case in point.第三段:总结归纳/提议/提出解决办法结尾常用套语1.In my opinion / Perso nally / As far as I’m concerned2.In short/ In brief/ In a word/ In conclusion /In summary/ To sum up,3. From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that…4. Obviously, if we want to…, it is necessary…/ There is no doubt that atten tion must be paid…2)文体二:议论文文体特点:(重说理)议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体。
2012高考英语作文拿高分技巧
2012高考英语作文拿高分技巧祝大家学习愉快,高考顺利!(一)掌握技巧:(1)注意篇章结构,合理布局开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。
前后呼应,祛除与主题无关的内容.(2)确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。
它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。
通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点:①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点②提炼出一句具有概括性的话③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。
(二)巧用连接词要想使文章有整体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词表示罗列增加First, second, third,First, then / next, after that / next, finallyFor one thing … for another…,On (the) one hand…on the other hand,Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,Especially / In particular,表示时间顺序now, at present, recently,after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in the beginning, to begin with,later, next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the momentform now on, from then on,at the same time, meanwhile,till, not…until, before, after, when, whil e, as during,表示解释说明now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreoverfurthermore, in fact, actually表示转折关系but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the otherhand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,表示并列关系or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither …nor表示因果关系because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that表示条件关系as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless表示让步关系though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom)表示举例for ex ample, for instance, such as…, take… for example表示比较be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as,表示目的for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,表示强调in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all,表示概括归纳in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion,(三)掌握常用句型:台湾英语资源网http://www.esl.tw 里面有很多,下面只列举比较常用的。
2012届高考英语书面表达课件讲评图表式作文专题指导
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3.听音乐36分钟 ①They spend 36 minutes listening to music. ②Listening to music takes up 36 minutes . 4.用电脑24分钟 ①24 minutes is spent working on the computer . ②They spend 24 minutes working on the computer . 5.体育锻炼12分钟 ①It takes them only 12 minutes to take part in sports activities. • ②They spend only 12 minutes on sports activities.
图表类作文的写作步骤
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图表类作文的审题与其他类型的作文相比 难度较大,主要表现在考生不易准确、全 面地把握图表显示的信息。因此要通过审 题抓住主要数据反映的主要问题即所要表 达的要点;通过审题确立表达时所要用的 时态:特定时间用过去时;经常出现的情 况或自己的评述用一般现在时。
本系列资料简介
• 专题一 2012届高考英语书面表达(图画式作 文)专题指导与练习讲评 • 专题二 2012届高考英语书面表达(文字提纲 式作文)专题指导与练习讲评 • 专题三 2012届高考英语书面表达(图表式作 文)专题指导与练习讲评 • 专题四 2012届高考英语书面表达(开放式作 文)专题指导与练习讲评
• 实例一(2012届江苏省石庄高级中学学情调研测试) • 假如你是李华,最近你们学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查,结果如下。 请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动,并针对图表2中的某两 个数据中反映的情况写出你的个人看法。标题和开头部分已给出(不计入 总字数内),字数150左右。 After-school activities in our school Recently, I have done a survey about the daily average amount of time the students in my school spend on different after-school activities.
高考英语图表作文高分技巧
高考英语图表作文高分技巧一、热点诠释书面表达题旨在测试考生的英语表达能力,看其是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。
而图表作文是近年来高考常考的题型之一。
图表作文的体裁多为议论文、应用文和说明文,内容大多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。
要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析,系统准确地表达出突变含义,并的出另人信服的结论。
必须做到行文切题,紧扣中心思想,不漏要点,并且意思连贯,文理通顺,语言准确、得当。
图表作文的命题形式可分为表格式和图象式。
二、应试技巧点拨1.首先要认真审题。
读懂题目所给信息,初步确定要点内容,并可用序号标出以免遗忘。
2.列题纲使内容要点条理化,有序化,统筹安排布局。
3.勿要直译,需意译。
尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构,不可逐句罗列了事。
4.要刻意把好语言关。
要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语,力求文理通顺,语言准确。
没有把握的词句不要写,确有把握的的可以锦上添花。
注意句式的变化,力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换,确保语言表达的高级性。
5.遇到一时想不起的词语,需变通。
可以用同义近义词代替,也可以用否定词加反义词来表达,亦可变换句式。
不可钻牛角尖,更不能生造词语,汉化表达。
6.注意文章的长度。
看具体内容而定,如果内容多应多用复杂句式,如果内容不多,为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式,并适当增补合理内容。
7.注意保持卷面整洁,书写工整清楚,书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。
8.最后应注意复查全文。
看内容要点有无遗漏,标点、格式、大小写是否规范,是否有语病等。
三、经典范例假设你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担,来信询问有关情况。
请你根据下表提供的信息,写一封回信,谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。
周末活动(减负前)周末活动(减负后)白天:上课、做作业白天:参观博物馆,学习电脑、绘画等晚上:做作业晚上:看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间:11:30 就寝时间:10:30注意:1.词数100左右。
高考英语作文满分技巧图表作文
一、图表作文框架As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), 作文题目的议题has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. On the one hand, ______. On the other hand,______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, _______ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.举例:图表作文是近年来高考常考的题型之一。
高考英语图画型作文写作技巧及范文
高考英语图画型作文写作技巧及范文导语:图画型作文更能考察学生的分析问题的才能,因此深受命题者的青睐。
考生应注意认真审题,一旦审题有所偏颇,不容易得到高分。
此类作文首先要描绘图画,然后对图画进展适当的阐释(解释、说明和分析),介绍图画背后所反映的问题,最后联络实际发表自己的观点,给出自己的建议、原因等等,一般写三段。
以下是为大家精心的英语图画型作文写作技巧及范文,欢迎大家参考!1、As can be seen from the chart, …;From thechart/picture /table we can see(The chart shows) that ..;As is vividly shown in the picture( 假设两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的假设两个的话用drawings,假设是图表那么用table ,两个图表那么用 table s) above, 图画的内容。
The picture( 假设两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的假设两个的话用drawings,假设是图表那么用table ,两个图表那么用 table s) tells ( 注意,假设是前面的图画是复数,那么用tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。
2、 Recent years people in 地名(比方中国、北京、美国等等) have witnessed the fact that 描绘图片里的现象,And it is very mon/usual to see that in recent years.1、The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进展单复数的处理) should be taken into aount seriously. First/To begin with, 提醒涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What’s more, 提醒涵义/原因/结果2。
英语图表类作文(万能套用模式)
Observe the chart carefully and describe the main trend.
An example
The No. of Students Learning Chinese
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0 Jun-94 Jan-95 Jun-95 Jan-96 Jun-96 Jan-97
A similar pattern is also recorded / discovered for…
A similar pattern is also recorded in Japan for the first half of 1995.
Large difference
There is a significant difference between…
An example
The No. of Students Learning Chinese
12000 10000
8000 6000 4000 2000
0 Jun-94 Jan-95 Jun-95 Jan-96 Jun-96 Jan-97
Japan France
Many reasons may account for the new trend. Firstly,…. secondly,….. Thirdly…
_g_r_a_d_u_a_l_/_s_t_e_a_d_y_ decrease reach the __b_o_t_t_o_m__/ _fl_o_o_r___ of…
Fluctuation (波动)
vary / range between 数字A and 数字B vary / range from 数字A to 数字B
2012年高考英语作文经典高分万能无敌模板
2012年高考英语作文经典高分万能无敌模板一、英语书信的常见写作模板开头部分:How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writi ng to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分:With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口头通知常见写作模板呼语及开场白部分:Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.正文部分:All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分:Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all. Thank you.三、议论文模板1.正反观点式议论文模板导入:第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题)Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)正文:第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)Their reasons are as follows. In the fi rst place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)结论:第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)オ2.“A或者B”类议论文模板:导入:第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文:第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)结论:第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ3.观点论述类议论文模板:导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)正文:第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)结论:第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构)4."How to"类议论文模板:导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题正文:第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法) 结论:第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)四、图表作文写作模板The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点. This means that as (进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一. After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化,the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二. In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论).The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).五、图画类写作模板:1.开头Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...2.衔接句As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that (I)my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3.结尾句In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...。
高考英语作文万能模板:图表类作文
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高考英语作文全能模板:图表类作文图表作文写作模板:The chart gives us an overall picture of the图表主题. The first thing we notice is that图表最大特色. This means that as (进一步说明 ).We can see from the statistics given that图表细节一. After动词-ing细节一中的第一个变化,the 动词 -ed+ 幅度 + 时间 (紧随着的变化 ) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二. Inthe column, we can see that accounts for( Judging from these figures, we can draw 进一步描绘 ). the conclusionthat ( 结论 ). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that(给出原由 ). / It is high time that we (发出提议).图画类写作模板:1.开头Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From thispicture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen inthe picture...2.连接句As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that (I)my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3.结尾句In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...。
2012年高考英语作文高分技巧
2012年高考英语作文高分技巧和历年要求一样,2012年高考英语作文要求考生不但要有扎实的语言基本功,而且要有较强的逻辑思维能力和语言表达能力。
我们知道,书面表达一直是高考英语试卷中的压轴题,英语作文旨在考查考生根据所给提纲、图表、图画等信息,综合运用所学知识完成写作任务的能力。
根据高考最新《考试大纲》、书面表达的评分标准以及每年高考后的阅卷情况,整理了以下两大点高考英语作文写作高分技巧,为考生们突破英语书面表达提供参考。
★应对3大文体的写作技巧1、提示议论文写作技巧文章开头,能依据提示确立主题句(topic)阐明观点或看法;使用连接词分层次说明理由、缘由(supportingsentences);归纳总结,首尾呼应。
做到论点正确无误;论据可靠充分。
论据可以是人们公认的真理,也可以是经过实践考证的经典著作;论证合理严密。
常用论证法有归纳法、推理法、对比法。
2、记叙文写作技巧一般说来记叙文有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素,写作时要明白清楚地给予表达。
记人时,要注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等。
叙事时要描写事情发生与发展的过程。
3、应用文写作技巧主要以写信为主。
英文书信由6个部分组成。
它们是信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结束语、签字。
格式一定要正确。
信的正文和写文章一样,要分段写,每一段有一个中心思想。
★高考英语作文整体布局5大技巧1.外在美一篇优秀的书面表达首先就是一件艺术品,书写清楚,字母大小匀称,单词间距适当,没有明显修改痕迹。
请欣赏下面范文干净、整齐的卷面效果:2.结构美一篇好的书面表达不能一段到底,应有合理的段落层次,让人感觉条理清晰。
每一段落要有一个主题句和几个支撑句。
考生写作时,可将文章分为三段:主题段提出问题或论点,发展段围绕主题讨论、列出论据,结尾段得出结论。
3.词汇美从书面表达的评分标准看,运用高级词汇对提高书面表达的"档次"和得分至关重要。
我们常常提到"亮点词汇",这不等于使用一些偏词、怪词,而是要使用一些生动、具体、形象的词语,并且要运用得准确得体。
高考英语作文复习--图表类作文专题讲解
高考英语作文复习--图表类作文专题讲解第一类:图表类作文写作步骤:1.点明图表所反映的主题。
常用词汇:table, chart, figure, graph, describe, tell,show, represent等2.分析数据差异及趋势或者描写数据代表内容。
注意层次。
常用词汇:rise,increase, drop, reduce, decrease, fall. but, on the contrary, however, the same as, be similar to, be different from 等3.归纳总结或发表自己看法。
常用词汇:in a word, in short, to sum up, We candraw the conclusion that……等。
重点句子:一.引入话题1.It can be seen from the table that….2.As is indicated in the chart,….3.From the sharp rise (上升n.) / decline (下降n.) in the chart, it goes withoutsaying that….(不用说…)4.It has gone up(上升) / fallen / dropped(下降) considerably in recent years.二.描述变化或原因1.表示递进what’s more, besides, in addition, furthermore, to makematters worse, what’s worse (更糟糕的是)2.表示解释account for , that is to say, mean, in other words3.表示变化---快速上升rise (increase / go up ) sharply (quickly, rapidly)Eg: The number sharply went up.---缓慢下降decrease (reduce/ come down/ decline/ drop/ fall) slowly---表示对比compare with , contrary to, on the contrary4.描述多重原因---There are several reasons behind the situation reflected in the above table. First of all, ……; More importantly,…….; Most importantly,……..;---There are at least two good reasons accounting for this phenomenon. On one hand,…….; On the other hand,………; In addition,…. is responsible for….三.总结或评论1.Personally speaking, in a word, in conclusion,2.It can be concluded that….(可以得出结论,)3.From the above discussion, we have enough reasons to predict what will happenin the near future.4.The trend described in the table will continue for quite a long time if necessarymeasures are not taken.5.As far as I’m concerned, I hold the view that……6.I’m sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. (既合理又理由充分)写作模版:1.分析图表数字代表内容Ascan be seen from the chart, _____________________(话题).Different people hold different opinions on this matter.Obviously, the majority of the people believe that ______________. However, others (20%) consider that_______________. Besides, another 5% hold the view that_______________.As far as I am concerned, we should pay more attention to __________. On one hand, ________________. On the other hand, __________________.2.分析数字反映的原因As can be seen from the chart, ____________________(话题). Different people hold different opinions. About 60% of the people ____________, while 25% of the people ______________.The least people, accounting for 15%, _______________.Various reasons are responsible for their different choices. To begin with, ___________. What’s more, ______________.Besides, _____________.As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the view that_____________. I believe that ___________________.或As far as I am concerned, despite such problems, I hold the view that we should ________________. Only in this way can we _______________.图表类作文实战1:下面的图表显示了你们学校高三学生周末放假的学习生活情况。
高三英语图表作文的方法与技巧
很多人只看到了我的地位低,却没看到我地位那么低,为什么却还愿意过下去,且过得也还算开心吧。憋屈总归也是有一点的,但属于大家都有的那种不如意,并没有多多少。付出和忍让,多数时 候其实还真就是心甘情愿的,主要是为了孩子,当然也有爱情。叶子回娘家前,给我准备了甘蔗、香蕉、苹果和橙子等各色水果,还给我留好了酸菜和肉,外加一大块肉皮,让我可以自己炖着吃。“你 真不吃肉粽子?”她问我了好几遍,因为我让她把给我留的肉粽子都带走。老夫妻了,她了解我,怀疑我是自己不舍得吃,让给她和天天。我只好笑着解释:“不是不吃,也不是不爱吃,只是对我而言, 吃肉粽子和吃米饭配一块煮熟的肉没啥区别。问题是这样一来,你包粽子不就白费劲了?”她这才相信,把肉粽子拿走,又多给我留下几个枣泥的。总得来说,叶子对我其实不错,她是刀子嘴豆腐心那 种,说的少做的多,跟我你在家里的地位挺低的。怎么说呢,确实也不高,当然,关键的一些大事儿上,叶子还是会尊重我的意见。当然了,如果我的意见跟她的不一致,她虽然会听我的,但也总会 拿我撒气。另一方面就如段子所说了,过日子,家里能有多少大事儿?所以,我拿主意的事儿确实不多。平时的那些小事儿,叶子其实也是非常希望我来拿主意的,但是我都很明智的装聋作哑。因为我 知道,叶子希望我拿的主意,必须说到她心坎里,而我自知没那个水平,也不想费那个心思。叶子为此是有怨言的,觉得我对她不够用心,不够关注。多少也是事实,我是个懒人,工作回来,除了挖空 心思跟天天玩,对叶子,确实不想多用心思。“你怎么说我怎么做,指哪打哪,绝无怨言,这还不够吗?”我这么跟她说。这话也很有道理不是?可事实上,她安排的不少活,我其实做不好的,比如烧 饭,比如开车。土豪炸翻天所有版本
英语图表类作文点题技巧
英语图表类作文点题技巧英文回答:I've often found it difficult to stay on topic when writing essays, especially when the prompt asks for a specific point to be made. It can be easy to get sidetracked by interesting tidbits of information or to ramble on about things that are only tangentially related to the main argument. However, I've learned a few tricks that have helped me to stay focused and to write more concise and effective essays.One of the most important things is to start with a strong thesis statement. This statement should clearly and concisely state the main argument of your essay. Once you have a strong thesis statement, you can use it as a guide to help you stay on track throughout the rest of your essay.Another helpful technique is to outline your essay before you start writing. This will help you to organizeyour thoughts and to make sure that your essay flows logically. When you're outlining, be sure to include topic sentences for each paragraph. These topic sentences should support your thesis statement and help to guide the reader through your essay.As you're writing, be sure to use transitions to connect your paragraphs and to help the reader follow your train of thought. Transitions can be as simple as a few words or phrases, such as "however," "therefore," or "in addition."Finally, be sure to proofread your essay carefully before submitting it. This will help you to catch any errors in grammar or spelling, and it will also give you a chance to make sure that your essay is well-organized and easy to read.By following these tips, you can improve your ability to stay on topic and to write more concise and effective essays.中文回答:在写作图表类作文时,我经常发现自己难以保持主题,尤其是在提示要求做出特定观点的时候。
高考英语写作中的图表作文攻略
高考英语写作中的图表作文攻略作为经历过高考“洗礼”的人,对于高考英语写作中的图表作文,那可真是有一肚子话要说。
先来说说我当年第一次接触图表作文时的“惨状”。
那是一次模拟考,当试卷发到手中,看到作文题目居然是个图表,当时我就懵了。
那图表里密密麻麻的数据和线条,感觉就像一道道神秘的密码,等着我去破解。
我瞪着那图表,足足看了有好几分钟,脑子还是一片空白。
心里那个急呀,“这可咋办?时间一分一秒过去,我还毫无头绪。
”没办法,硬着头皮开始写。
结果可想而知,写得那叫一个乱七八糟。
一会儿说这个数据上升,一会儿又跳到另一个数据下降,完全没有条理。
等考试结束,看着自己写的那篇“惨不忍睹”的作文,真是欲哭无泪。
后来,为了搞定这图表作文,我可是下了一番苦功夫。
首先,我学会了仔细观察图表。
这可不是随便瞟两眼就行的,得像侦探一样,不放过任何一个细节。
比如说,图表的标题是什么,这往往能给你指明方向,告诉你这图表主要是关于啥的。
还有坐标轴上的标注,单位是啥,数据的范围是多少,这些都得搞清楚。
就拿一个折线图来说吧,不仅要注意折线的走向,是上升、下降还是平稳,还得看看折点在哪里,变化幅度有多大。
再比如柱状图,要比较柱子的高低,差距有多少。
这些细节就像是拼图的小块,只有都看清楚了,才能拼出完整的画面。
然后就是构思文章的结构。
开头得有个简洁明了的引入,让阅卷老师一下子知道你要写啥。
中间部分是重点,得把图表里的关键信息有条理地呈现出来。
这时候,千万别一股脑儿把所有数据都写上,得挑重点的、有代表性的数据来说。
比如说,如果是关于某个城市几年内人口变化的图表,你不能把每年的具体数字都罗列出来,而是要找出人口增长最快或者最慢的那几年,详细说一说。
而且,在描述数据的时候,别干巴巴地只说数字,得学会用一些比较、对比的方法。
比如说,“2010 年的人口是 200 万,比 2005 年增加了 50 万,增长幅度达到了 333%。
”这样一写,是不是就生动多了?还有很重要的一点,就是语言表达。
2012届高考英语书面表达课件讲评4图表式作文
1.1978年至2007年的情况 :
• 1978到2007年之间大约有7,000人学成回归,占了全国回归人 员的25%。 • ①Between 1978 and 2007, about 7,000 overseas Chinese returned to Shanghai after completing their studies abroad. They accounted for about 25% of all returnees nationwide. • ②From 1978 to 2007,there were totally about 7,000 overseas Chinese returning to Shanghai after finishing their studies abroad. They made up approximately 25% of all returnees all over the country. • ③Since 1978,more and more overseas Chinese have been returning to Shanghai after completing their studies abroad. Up till 2007 returnees added up to 7,000,who accounted for about 25% of all returnees all over the country.
• 连句成篇
• 连句成篇的关键是将Para 2(叙 述述曲线图内容,并对 2012 年 低做个预测)和 Para 3 (回归 原因)的相关要点的叙述进行 合并,还要注意加过渡词句和 句,使文章更加流畅。
高考英语图表说明文的写作技巧
The reason may be that more and more students come to realize that computer has become a must in their future work and everyday life.
However, every coin has two sides, if the students spend too much time playing computer games, it will do great harm to their studies.
下图所示为几年来某校学生使用电 脑的情况,请根据图示,写一篇 80—120词的短文。
Hours a week
• 很多学生看到这文章可能觉得无从下手, 仅仅靠这一点信息要写出120词的文章,谈 何容易,他们根本不知道该写些什么。下 面是一篇学生习作。
Look at the picture, the students in the school spent about 3 hours a week on computer in 2000, in 2002 they spent about 10 hours a week on computer, and in 2004the number is 20 hours.
图表说明文 的
写作技巧
• 高考的书面表达,应该加强对学生实际能 力的考查,不要局限于语言运用。图表说 明文要求学生要具备一定的语言功底,还 要具备分析问题、解决问题的能力和概括 能力,它要求学生通过图表里的一些简单 的数据,对图表所反映的一些社会现象进 行分析。它对学生的分析、解决问题的能 力提出了较高的要求。不是每个英语成绩 好的学生都能写好这类文章。现在就结合 下面这篇作文,谈谈图表说明文的写作技 巧。
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图表作文必修3
写作指导(4)
图表作文
图表作文是近年来高考常考的题型之一。
图表作文的体裁多为议论文、应用文和说明文,内容多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。
要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析,系统准确地表达出图表含义,并得出令人信服的结论。
一、图表作文的命题形式
1.表格式
将统计的数据或被说明的对象直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。
这类题型一般以说明文和议论文居多,往往是介绍、说明某种情况或辩论某种观点、看法,但有时也可能是记叙文。
2.图像式
可分为以曲线形式表示数据变化的线形图、以条形形式表示数据大小或数量之间差异的条形图,以圆内扇形面积的大小表示总体中部分结构变化的圆形图等。
这类题型一般以说明文居多,是一些关于生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。
二、图表作文的应试策略
1.审读图表前的文字说明,弄清图表的性质,做到“四确定”。
首先,确定文章的体裁;其次,确定文章的结构;再次,确定文章的时态;最后,确定文章的人称。
2.审读图表后的要求,寻找做题规律,要注意以下几个方面:
(1)词数:100左右。
(2)开头或结尾已给出,这就要求考生首先不能另行开头或结尾;其次,要细读所给语句的人称、时态和语言的表达风格,力求前后一致。
(3)内容完整,即要点齐全,写作时要注意详略得当和准确全面。
(4)行文连贯。
行文必须做到形连和意连。
形连要力求自我特色词汇的使用,以增加得分“亮点”。
意连要求能涵盖高考书面表达中各种文体常用的一些特色词汇,如however;besides;instead;in the meanwhile;for instance;on the contrary;worse still;in conclusion;all of a sudden;as a matter of fact等,这样才能写出好文章。
(5)注意句式的变化,力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换,确保语言表达的高级性。
常见写作技巧主要包括:简单句与复合句的交替使用;主动语态为主,适度穿插被动语态;大胆使用平行结构;适当调整句中定语、状语的位置,使句子表达多样化;三大从句与三种非谓语动词灵活使用;特殊句式(如强调句、感叹句、疑问句、省略句)点缀其间等。
假设你是李华,正在英国牛津参加短期的语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。
互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。
请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。
注意:1.词数100左右,信的格式已为你写好;
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.参考词汇:牛津Oxford;费用fee。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
案例分析⊙
这是一篇典型的图表式作文,要求写一封电子邮件,询问旅行社有关一则广告的情况。
细读图表和文字提示可知本文是一篇应用文,时态以一般现在时为主,人称为第一人称。
本文内容要点包括:开头语;学生票价;费用是否包含景点门票、午餐;牛津的时间;是否有购物时间等,并稍加评论。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University,I’d like to know if you have any special price for students.As for the money you charge,does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed?What about lunch?Is it included?Or do I need to bring along my own food?How long will the tour last?Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day,I’d like to know the time to return.Besides,is there any time for shopping?
I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
请根据图表所示,就某城市空气污染的状况写一篇英文报道,并提出一两条改进建议。
注意:1.词数100左右。
首句已给出,不计入总词数;
2.参考词汇:车辆vehicle。
With the development of industry,air pollution is getting more and more serious.___________________
【参考答案】
With the development of industry,air pollution is getting more and more serious.In this city,many people suffer from different kinds of illness because of air pollution.
Air pollution is caused by the following reasons.About half of the problem is caused by vehicles.There are more and more cars and buses on the road,which give off poisonous gases.35% of air pollution is caused by factories.Another factor is smoking.Smoking does harm to others’health as well as to that of the smokers.Besides,about 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.
We should take some measures to fight against pollution.New fuel can be used to take the place of gas.We can plant more trees,grass and flowers.All in all,if everybody realizes the importance of
environment and does something to stop pollution,the problem will be solved.。