初中英语说明文写作指导

初中英语说明文写作指导

英语写作能力不强是中学生普遍存在的问题，因此我们为大家全新打造“写作指导”专栏，旨在通过引导、启发、参与的写作训练来帮助同学们攻克英语写作难题。

本栏目以写作任务为依托，不仅关注写作结果，更关注写作过程。我们衷心希望通过定基调——列提纲、写句子——巧衔接——添佳句——成篇章这样科学的思路点拨、学法指导，让同学们在有序的练习中学会方法，在品味优秀范文中形成审美及用英语思维的能力。我们会为大家连载10期，同学们，和我们一起，满怀信心地开启写作之旅吧。

【写作任务】

假如你是一位导游，近日有来自美国的外宾团要来参观你们市，第一站参观的是鑫海动物园，请你根据以下提示提前准备要介绍的内容。

提示：

最好的地方——鑫海动物园

◆规模大(占地面积约210,000 m2)

◆动物数量多(约1000只)

◆种类丰富

注意：适当运用最高级和比较级

【思路点拨】

1. 定基调

体裁：介绍某地，属于说明文。

时态：一般现在时。

人称：介绍某地，可用第三人称。

2. 列提纲、写句子

列提纲 写句子

告知游览地点 Hello! Welcome to my town! It is (1)______________(最大最漂亮的市) in our province (省). There are many good places to visit but I think the best place is Xinhai Zoo.

介绍规模 The zoo is new and it is (2)______________(比其他两个动物

游览地点园大) in our province. It is about 210,000 m2.

动物数量The number of animals is the largest in our province. There are about 1,000 animals in total (总共).

动物种类◆The zoo has the most kinds of animals.

◆We have (3)______________(最可爱的熊猫), the funniest monkeys and the biggest elephants.

◆The tortoises (乌龟) are (4)______________(比其他动物慢) but they are the most interesting.

◆Do you want to see (5)______________(最危险的动物)?

◆Come and see the wildest (最野性的) lions and the scariest tigers.

祝福语At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.

3. 巧衔接

文中写动物种类丰富时，可以重复使用最高级，关键词的重复是一种很好的衔接手段。

4. 添佳句

It is our first stop and it will be an unforgettable stop.

它是我们参观的第一站，也将是难忘的一站。

5. 成篇章

Hello! Welcome to my town!

________________________________________________________________ ________________

________________________________________________________________ ________________

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At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.

参考答案

2. 列提纲、写句子

(1) the biggest and most beautiful town

(2) bigger than the other two zoos

(3) the loveliest pandas

(4) slower than other animals

(5) the most dangerous animals

5. 成篇章

Hello! Welcome to my town! It is the biggest and most beautiful town in our province. There are many good places to visit but I think the best place is Xinhai Zoo. It is our first stop and it will be an unforgettable stop.

The zoo is new and it is bigger than the other two zoos in our province. It is about 210,000 m2. The number of animals is the largest in our province. There are about 1,000 animals in total. Also the zoo has the most kinds of animals. We have the loveliest pandas, the funniest monkeys and the biggest elephants. The tortoises are slower than other animals but they are the most interesting. Do you want to see the most dangerous animals? Come and see the wildest lions and the scariest tigers.

At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.