2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案(八十一)
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2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（一）基础词汇强化练习1. Can you ____________________ (推荐) a good dictionary?2. He is not s____________________ enough to wear these tight trousers.3. It suddenly s____________________ me that we ought to make a new plan.4. Fenwick, ______________(陪伴) by two bodyguards, refused to comment as he left the court.5. Trevor apologized for his son's bad m____________________ (礼仪).6. The police tried to break up the protest crowds, but in ____________________.7. Traffic is a major u___________________ (城市) problem.8. There was a long ____________________ (延误)at the airport.9. They had r____________________ the bank of thousands of dollars and were finally arrestedby the police.10. Next Monday is the d____________________ for handin g in your report.1.recommend2.slim3.struck4.accompanied5.manners6.vain7.urban8.delay9.robbed 10.deadline书面表达经典句式强化记忆1. How long will it take you to... ……要用多长时间?How long will it take you to recite such a passage?你背诵这么一段文章要多长时间?2. How should I... 我该如何……?How should I tell him the bad news?我该如何告诉他这个坏消息?3. I absolutely agree with... …我完全同意…….Sure, I absolutely agree with your point. 当然,我绝对同意你的观点.书面表达经典朗读素材I like to study in the library第一篇：Every Sunday morning, I get up at five in order to find a seat in the library. I like the quiet atmosphere in the library, which makes me deeply absorbed in my study. Besides, there are reference books in the library which provide ready guidance to help me solve my problems. At home people come and go - some talking , others working. Inevitably（不可避免地；必然地）, there are often noises around the house which make me nervous and unable to concentrate on my study. For the reasons mentioned above, I like to study in the library.第二篇：It seems that most students like to study in the library,especially when there are examinations. I also like to study in the library. Because of the quiet atmosphere, I can better concentrate on my study. The diligence（勤奋）of other people in the library also inspires me to work even harder. I usually get more by studying in the library. The library is a good place to study only if we observe its rules, such as not talking loudly. Otherwise the value of the library will be greatly reduced.第三篇：Generally speaking, a library is a very quiet place. In a library, I can better concentrate and study more effectively. Besides, there are all kinds of books, magazines and newspapers in a library which provide you with a great deal of useful knowledge. The library is a place where your desire for knowledge can be satisfied. Nor can one do research without the help of alibrary. When I was in college, every semester I had to write several papers.It was the indispensable l ibrary that enabled me t o do the necessary research a nd finish my papers in time. It is difficult to imagine what life would be like without library. We should try to keep our library such a good place that it is by obeying the library rules. We should try to make our library not only a source of knowledge but also a source of inspiration.经典谚语积累Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. 自信是走向成功的第一步。
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案(一百零一)
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（一百零一）每日一句Is it convenient for you to exchange your newspaper for this newly published magazine with me so that we can share the information?你现在方便把你的报纸和这本新出的杂志交换下，以便我们共享一下信息吗？基础词汇强化练习1．Except for a few s____________ , the watch is well preserved and its accuracy is amazing．2．In a courtroom it is sometimes difficult to recognise who is i____________ and who is guilty．3．I love Ashrita’s story; it f__________________me．4．This is really a messy bookshelf and I think you should organise it well and put the books in c____________ ．5．I don’t think of my hometown very much , only o_________________．6．I have developed good professional _______________（能力） in my subjects．7．You should have your pencil ____________（锋利）or you can’t use it ．8．Rubbish was piled everywhere ---- it was _______________（令人厌恶的）．9．He had promised to go with us , but he changed his plan___________．（突然地）10．Some people have the ability to _____________ （激发,成为…的动机）others to try to achieve their goals．答案1.scraches2.innocent3.fascinates4.categories5.occasionallypetence7.sharpened8.disgusting9. abruptly 10.motivate书面表达经典句式强化记忆28. Never+ 一般疑问句Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.我以前从来没有看过这么奇妙的电影。
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案(八十二)
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（八十二）每日一句The football team got there ahead of schedule so as to get familiar with the awful weather and food as soon as possible.足球队提前到达那里以便尽快熟悉那里糟糕的天气和食物。
基础词汇强化练习1. We saw pictures of e________ birds from the jungle of Brazil.2. This map is drawn to a s________ of 1 inch to 50 miles.3. In dealing with public relations, we should make every effort to prevent the c________ inpersonality.4. Whenever in trouble, he would a________ to me for help.5. The man l________ a bucket into the well to get some water.6. I________ is needed to make crops grow in dry areas.7. The sports meet was p________ because of rain.8. Scientists think that birds probably e________ from reptiles.9. He’ll a________ the label to your luggage.10. Take care with these wine glasses—they’re very d________.exotic scale conflict appeal lowered Irrigation postponed evolved attach delicate书面表达经典句式强化记忆244. The point is... 重点/关键是…….The point is that you have to keep your promise to help her with her English.关键是你得遵守诺言,帮她学习英语.245. The problem / question is that / whether... 问题是…….1) The problem now is that we're locked out of the house. 现在的问题是我们被锁在门外了.2) The question is whether they will be able to help us. 问题是他们能否帮助我们.246. The reason why... is...…的原因就是…….The reason why he made such a great achievement is his perseverance.他之所以取得如此伟大的成就,原因是他坚持不懈.书面表达经典朗读素材True Beauty(真正的美)Everyone is attracted by beauty and beauty is powerful. But what is true beauty? Perhaps you can get the answer from the following story.This morning I went to the market to buy some vegetables with my parents. On the way we all highly praised a young man in western-style clothes and leather shoes who was riding by. But he rode so fast that he knocked an old lady down carelessly.Instead of stopping, he pretended not to see this and rode away quickly. We were all very angry with the young man. To our happiness, a girl in plain dress ran forward at once, helped the lady up and took her home. We all praised the girl.From this we know we cannot judge a person by his appearance. A person who is dressedbeautifully may not have a beautiful soul. Only a person who has a beautiful soul is really beautiful.经典谚语积累Cannot see the wood for the trees. 一叶障目，不见泰山。
2012届高考英语二轮复习精品学案(课标版)第1部分 单项填空 模块导读
第一部分单项填空考纲解读单项填空也就是高考英语试卷中的“语法和词汇知识”项目。
单从这个概念上讲，它包括语法和词汇两方面的内容，但是近几年来，情景交际也在考查范围内。
分析最近几年的词汇考查，我们发现，试题在考查范围比较广的前提下侧重考查了动词以及动词短语。
对于词汇的考查也不是从规则的角度，而是本着“突出语境、重在运用、符合表达、体现能力”的原则。
所考查的名词、动词、形容词、副词等意义区别较大,考生不仅要从使用范畴上进行区别,而且要在掌握语言情境的前提下,分析四个选项的意思，然后选出符合语境的答案。
在这一点上，我们可以说，单项填空的词汇考查部分实际上是微型的完形填空。
语法部分考查最多的是动词时态及语态、非谓语动词、情态动词、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、情景交际。
最近几年虚拟语气、强调句型、倒装、省略句等在高考中也偶尔出现，这充分体现了试题的“稳中求变”的思想。
无论是词汇考查，还是语法考查，最近几年的单项填空都充分体现了具体情境下的语言运用，因此掌握一定的文化背景并揣摩说话人的意图成了解决单项填空题的关键。
命题分析分析最近几年，尤其是2010、2011两年的高考试题，我们发现其命题特色是：1．考点覆盖全面全国卷及各省（市）自主命题试卷中的15个小题基本上覆盖了交际用语、冠词、动词时态和语态、动词（短语）辨析、非谓语动词、情态动词、代词、形容词和副词、介词以及复合句等主要项目。
2．测试重点突出在基本覆盖主要语法知识要点的前提下，多数试题突出了对动词、形容词、副词等实词以及从句的考查。
把动词作为词汇和语法知识的测试重点是高考英语命题的一贯原则。
这一点今后还将坚持下去，因此我们在复习的过程中要重视和加强对动词的复习。
3．课标色彩鲜明新课标最突出的特色是词汇量由原来的2200个词增加到3500个，在单项填空的15个小题中，新课标八级词汇出现得比较多。
这些词汇有的是选择的答案，有的是干扰项。
因此，考生必须熟记3500个词汇。
高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案(一百零二)
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（一百零二）每日一句While the class teacher put emphasis on the importance of doing homework independently his students still spent most of the time copying others’ homework.班主任强调了独立完成作业的重要性，但学生们仍然抄作业。
基础词汇强化练习1.The wedding party was delayed because of the late ______ (到达) of the minister who would marry the new couple.2.There being 100 students singing at the concert, you’d better have a ____ (指挥) to keep them in time.3.So ______ (决心) was the disabled young man to study that a mixed university offered him an entrance prize.4.The _________ (交换) of goods had a symbolic meaning far more important than the value of the goods themselves.5.Mary is _______ （乐观的）about her chances of winning a gold medal.6.He has ________(总共) collected 1020 stamps.7.She looks ________(面熟) to me, but I don’t remember her name.8.Our party has now a correct ________ (政治)line.9.A national conference will be held next ____________ (周三) to discuss the economic problems.10.Children are taught to believe in the _______________ (原则) of equal opportunity for everyone.【答案】1. arrival2. conductor3. determined4. exchange5. optimistic6. altogether/totally/entirely7. familiar8. political9. Wednesday 10 principle书面表达经典句式强化记忆5.It (so) happened that……/ sth / sb happen to do 碰巧….It so happened that I met that famous scientist you had mentioned last time at the evening party yesterday.I so happened to have met that famous scientist you had mentioned last time atthe evening party yesterday.那么巧昨天在晚会上我碰到了你上次提到的那位知名科学家。
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习 阅读理解(八)
2012届高考英语二轮专题精品复习资料阅读理解（八）1We have met the enemy, and he is ours. We bought him at a pet shop. When monkey pox, a disease usually found in the African rain forest, suddenly turns up in children in the American Midwest, it’ s hard not to wonder if the dis ease that comes from foreign animals is homing in on human beings. “Most of the infections (感染) we think of as human infections started in other animals，” says Stephen Morse, director of the Center for Public Health Preparedness at Columbia University.It’s not just that we’ re going to where the animals are；we’ re also bringing them closer to us. Popular foreign pets have brought a whole new disease to this country.A strange illness killed Isaksen’ s pets, and she now thinks that keeping foreign pets is a bad idea. “I don’ t think it’ s fair to have them as pets when we have such a limited knowledge of them，” says Isaksen.“Laws allowing these animals to be brought in from deep forest areas without stricter control need changing，” says Peter Schantz. Monk ey pox may be the_wake up_call. Researchers believe infected animals may infect their owners. We know very little about these new diseases. A new bug (病毒) may be kind at first. But it may develop into something harmful (有害的). Monkey pox doesn’ t look a maj or infectious disease. But it is not impossible to pass the disease from person to person.【文章大意概括】饲养宠物可能被传染疾病。
高考英语二轮专题复习 经典复习导学案资料(十)
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（十）每日一句The atmosphere in my family is fantastic. 我的家庭气氛温馨和睦.基础词汇强化练习1. Although she was frightened, she answered with a c________________voice2. The school c________________ of 5000 students is holding a sports meeting. (由…组成)3. It is said that the boss is kind to his e________________.4. The price of petrol has r______________ sharply recently. （上升）5. We all should take a correct _______________ towards the criticism from others.（态度）6. The m__________ of doctors agree that smoking is extremely harmful to health.7. D______________ with what the students had done, the teacher praised them highly. (高兴)8. He endured three years in prison for his religious _______________. (信念)9. It was ________________ to trade money on the black market. (非法的)10. O_________________ to a lack of funds, the project will not continue next year.1.calm2. consisting3. employees4. risen5. attitude6. majority7. Delighted8. belief9. illegal 10. Owing书面表达经典句式强化记忆28. Don't be afraid of... 不要害怕…….Don't be afraid of losing face. 不要害怕丢脸. [李阳疯狂英语经典口语]29. Don't take it for granted that... 别认为……理所当然.Don't take it for granted that your parents should support you all your life.别以为你父母养你一辈子是天经地义的事.30. Don't waste time doing... 不要浪费时间做…….Don't waste time learning a lot of useless words in isolation. The best way of learning English words is to blurt out as many authentic sentences as you can.不要浪费时间孤立地学习没有用的单词.学习英语单词最好的方法就是脱口而出尽量多的地道句子. [ authentic adj. 真正的;可信的]书面表达经典朗读素材Eating at the Food Stand-小吃摊经验I usually eat at the food stand. I also like to try different stands to satisfy my taste , for there's a great variety of the food they offer. Besides, for a student like me, the food there doesn't cost me a lot so that I usually eat to my heart's content.I think the sanitary（清洁的） condition at the food stand leaves much to be desired. From my own experience, the food at the food stand is mostly unclean you are likely to get sick due to the poor sanitary condition. In hot weather, food easily goes foul if it is not kept properly. I once got a serious loose bowel after eating a bowl of beef noodles at a food stand. This miserable experience has kept me from eating there for quite a long time.经典谚语积累A little body often harbors a great soul. 浓缩的都是精品高频语法点拾贝备考策略1.掌握反意疑问句的构成规则，还应注意一些特殊情况下反意疑问句的构成。
高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案(八十)
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（八十）每日一句Everybody in the class except Li Ming thinks that the composition can get a high mark except for some spelling and grammatical mistakes.班里除了李明都认为这篇作文除了一些拼写和语法错误之外，可以获得高分。
基础词汇强化练习1. It’s a long way to go to f________ smok ing all over the world.2. Premier Zhou returned to work s________ after his operation.3. His theory is just a________ resting on no scientific basis.4. Before rules and r________ were introduced, the sport was very dangerous.5. Dinosaurs have been e________ for millions of years.6. The city r________ the enemy attack for two weeks.7. Building work and d________ are due to finish next year.8. Be r_______—you can’t expect her to do all the work on her own.9. She has to o________ her parents’ permissio n before she does anything important.10. He gradually a________ an impressive collection of paintings.forbid shortly assumptionregulations extinct resisited decoration reasonable obtain accumulat ed书面表达经典句式强化记忆238. Sb. can do nothing but do... 除了做……,某人什么也做不了.Their neighbors tan do nothing but envy their new pool. 他们的邻居只能羡慕他们的新泳池.239. Sb. have / has / had no choice but to do... 某人除了做……别无选择.We had no choice but to take a taxi for we'd missed the last bus.由于错过了最后一班公共汽车,除了乘坐的士,我们别无选择.240. Sb. look(s) as if... 某人看上去好像…….She looks as if she is unfriendly at first. 她起初看上去好像一点都不友好.书面表达经典朗读素材Too Big and Too Small-太大与太小Barbie was the middle one.She was not the biggest one like Janey, who could go to school,and cross the street to play with the children there, and read stories to herself－and stay up last of all.Barbie was not the littlest,either.Linda was. And Linda could cry for what she wanted, and get it.She could cry for what she and everyone just laughed with her.Linda sat on Mother's lap an awful lot, too.And Daddy tossed her up in the air,and let her ride up and down on his leg.But Barbie was the middle one,too big to do the things Linda did －too little to do the things Janey could do.经典谚语积累Blood will have blood. 血债血偿。
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案(一百一十)
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（一百一十）每日一句Child as he is, he has known that the more exposed he is to financial issues, andthe younger he becomes aware of them, the more likely he is to become a responsible,forward-planning adult who can manage his finances confidently and effectively.尽管他还是个孩子，却已经知道越早接触到财务问题，越早意识到它们的存在，他就越有可能成为一个有责任心、有前瞻性的成年人，能自信有效地处理财务问题。
基础词汇强化练习1.They _______（催促）him to take an action.2.He lived under the __________(保护)of a strong and brave chief.3.He was _________(严厉地) punished.4.He ________(低语) a word in my ear.5.Some fat people try to _________(减) their weight.6.It is __________（令人恐惧的）to see a dead man in the darkness.7.He wanted to see his mother ____________(一。
就) he got there.8.On his _________(到达) , he told me some interesting stories.9.This work calls for great patience and _________（勇气）10．He was lying there,_________（醒）,saying nothing.1.urged2.protection 3,serevely 4.whispered 5.reduced 6.frightening7.immediately 8.arrival 9.courage 10.awake书面表达经典句式强化记忆31.Under no circumstances / At no time /By no means + 一般疑问句The Chinese government declared that under no circumstances would China never use nuclear weapons.中国政府宣布在任何情况下决不首先使用核武器。
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习 经典复习导学案资料(十一).doc
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（十一）每日一句China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.由于实施了改革开放政策，中国变得更加繁荣了。
基础词汇强化练习1. The shop assistant was dismissed because she was a__________ of cheating customers. (控告)The shop assistant was dismissed because she was c_________ with cheating customers. (控告)2. My brother has never been ___________ before, so he is very excited. （在国外）We travelled a______ the same flight.（登上甲板）3. We all think good work d________ good pay.（应得到）4. When I was informed that my book had been found, I sighed with r__________.（宽慰、安心)5. A s___________ person always thinks about himself。
6. There are four e________ exits in the department store.（紧急）7. D_________ to his research work, the professor cared little about any other things. (致力于).8. He can speak English fluently and ________ (准确地).9. China is no longer ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ thirty years ago.中国不再是三十年前的样子了。
高考英语二轮专题复习 经典复习导学案资料(八) 学案
2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（八）每日一句The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful. 人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。
基础词汇强化练习1. They are working hard in _____________ for the competition.2. The UN is an international o_____________, settling all kinds of problems between nations.3. We bought some new _____________ (设备) last week.4. The two brothers _____________（有分歧）in their attitudes towards study.5. Her parents were a__________ about her poor health.6. Healthy eating can help reduce the r_____________ of heart disease.7. Many people enjoy the pleasures and c_____________ of living in a modern city.8. She read plenty of books on history before going to university and she b_______a lot from it.9. How proud she is! She has been a___________ to Beijing University.10. He could have finished it on s_____________, but somehow he fell behind.11. preparation 12. organization 13. equipment 14. differ 15. anxious 16. risk 17. comfort 18.benefited 19. admitted 20. schedule书面表达经典句式强化记忆22. Do/ Would you mind doing... 你介意做……吗?Do you mind giving me a glass of water and some aspirin ?给我一杯水和一些阿斯匹林,好吗?23. Do/ Would you mind if... 如果……你是否介意Do you mind if I ask you a few questions ? 你介意我问你几个问题吗?24. Do you realize (that)... 你有没有意识到……Do you realize (that) your parents really care about you ?你有没有意识到你的父母很关心你?书面表达经典朗读素材Competition with myself 挑战自我When my teacher told me to prepare for this competition I hesitated. Everybody in my class knows that. I never learned English in my primary school. I couldn’t speak English one year ago, but now, could I take part in this competition? No, I can’t. Is aid to myself? I’m afraid of making mistakesbefore so many learned professors and before my classmates and teachers. Suddenly ! A voice cameto my ears. “Everybody will make mistakes. Even the very famous American president George Bush”My English teacher said in my class. When I heard that, I think I can. I run into my teacher’s officehappily. “I will do it.” I said. So I stand here today. In front of you.经典谚语积累A good medicine tastes bitter. 良药苦口高频语法点拾贝it 句型高考常考高频考点汇总高考高频考点归纳1：it 指代时间时，有如下一些句型：(1)It is (about/ high) time for sth. / (for sb. ) to do sth./ that从句(should do/did ，必须用虚拟语气)(2)It is /has been ＋ some time ＋ since从句(从句用一般过去时)(注意从句中延续性动词意义为否定。
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2012届高考英语二轮专题复习经典导学案资料（八十一）每日一句The obvious reason why these two companies bargained with each other over the imported products is just that they both intended to benefit from these products after estimating their real value.这两家公司为了这些进口产品讨价还价的理由显而易见，即在评估了这些产品的实际价值之后，他们都想从中获益。
基础词汇强化练习1. She is a British c_______ but lives in India.2. In our country most of the population are employed in a________.3. Distrusting women, he remained a b________ all his life.4. There was a brook which w________ through the woods.5. She flavoured the fish with sugar and v________.6. The famous film star is closely a________ in the public mind with gangster movies.7. The United States has a f________ government.8. Our teacher won't t________ any cheating on exams.9. We must take care to preserve our national h________, which is significant to our country.10. It took a long time for Richard to r________ from a bad cold.citizen agriculture bachelor wound/winded vinegar associated federal tolerate heritage recover书面表达经典句式强化记忆241. Something must be done to...…必须采取措施…….Something must be done to change our current examination system.必须采取措施来改革我们现行的考试制度.242. Sorry to bother you, but... …很抱歉打扰你,可是…….Sorry to bother you, but I have a question to ask you.很抱歉打扰你,可是我有个问题要问你.243. Thanks to... 由于…/多亏….Thanks to his parents' encouragement and support, he finally realized his dream.多亏了他父母的鼓励与支持,他终于实现了他的梦想.书面表达经典朗读素材工作和娱乐(Work and Play)Work and play do not contradict each other; in fact, they complement each other. As the saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." A life burdened with work leads you nowhere, for you would get tired and bored with your daily routine work.On the other hand, proper recreation will relieve the tension and discomfort of our monotonous life because it offers you various ways to let out your pent-up emotions.What I usually do to relax after school is jogging and seeing movies. Usually I don't spare time for exercise, but I value the physical education class at school. Jogging several rounds in the field certainly relieves the day's pressure. On weekends,I'll catch the morning movie for my visual enjoyment. I feel revived and energetic for another week's work-load.经典谚语积累Don't trouble trouble until trouble troubles you. 不要自找麻烦。
高频考点拾贝书面表达系列去年寒假我同父亲去乡下看望奶奶，我多年未回家乡，看到那儿发生了很大的变化。
这次故乡之行使我学到了不少东西。
我打算今后每两年回去一次。
学生习作·外教批改During my last winter holiday，I went to the1countryside with my father to visit my grandma with my father.2 I found a large change great changes there. The first time I came_back3 returned，theyare_live4 were all living in dirty homes with dogs and ducks and any5 other animals. Now，6 But last winter when I returned, they had a big house to birth chickens.7 They also have8 had some poles in which it has 9 some fish fishponds. Every year，they sell it and have the fish for a lot of money.A lot of villagers in my grandma’s village have10 had twostoreyed houses，evidencing that their life11 lives becoming better_and_better12 had improved. I felt very happy. During my trip，I found they_are13 all the villagers friendly and hardworking.I think these characteristics are worth of learning.At the end of my trip，I told my father that I had_planned14 that I would come back planned to return every two years. He admitted15 agreed that it was a good idea. 旁批1．country或countryside前要加定冠词the。
2．注意词序。
要保证你的句子不会产生歧义。
原句的意思是你拜访与你父亲住在一起的祖母。
3．如果用come，就表示作者写此文时仍在家乡。
4．原句中的they are live是一个常见的错误，不符合英语的语法。
这里应该用过去进行时态。
5．你不是在说明数量，所以不必用any。
6．不是现在(now)，是去年冬天(last winter)。
7．这句的意思很不清楚，所以无法进行修改。
“他们有一幢大的房子养鸡”还是“他们造了一间很大的鸡舍让鸡住”？8．注意保持时态一致！9．这不是英语，是按中文字面翻译的。
参见改写后的句子。
10．虽然这个情况可能现在仍是真实的，但故事发生在去年冬天，所以要用过去时态。
11．你谈到的是村民们，而不只是一个人，所以life需要用复数形式。
12．使用更直接的语言。
improve比better and better更好。
高中水平还使用better and better这个词组不合适。
13．改写后使宾语更清楚。
动词find的结构是：find someone＋形容词。
14．如果用过去完成时态(had planned)就意味着作者不再打算这样做了。
这里的打算发生在告诉父亲的同时，所以只要用一般过去时态即可。
15．在这里用admit不正确。
它的意思是不情愿地同意某事是真实的。
参见改写后的句子。
虽然文章组织得当，题目要求也都在内容中体现出来，但词汇量不足以及时态的混淆降低了作文的等级。
为避免这些错误，写你知道的东西。
如果你不知道表达某种观点的词汇，就不要提到它。
想想其他可写的东西。
例如在这篇作文中，作者不应该提到池塘和鸡舍，因为他/她不清楚这些词的英文表达。
他应该挑自己熟悉的东西写，或者写一些更平常的东西。
高分作文秘诀之九：使用恰当的过渡语。
例如：表示转折关系的过渡语：however，nevertheless，on the other hand，on the contrary，conversely表示递进关系的过渡语：in addition，besides，moreover，furthermore，what’s more，what’s worse，to make matters worse，the most important of all，worst of all，especially，in particular，on top of that表示结果关系的过渡语：therefore，thus，consequently，as a result，that’s why...表示顺序关系的过渡语：firstly，secondly，thirdly，lastly/finally/eventually，last but not least，to begin with，after that，meanwhile表示总结的过渡语：in conclusion，in brief，in short，in a word，on the whole，to sum up表示个人观点的过渡语：in my opinion，as far as I’m concerned，personally，as for me，to be frank表示他人观点的过渡语：It is widely accepted that...；A commonly held idea is that...；It is taken for granted that...强化练习：最近，你和父母回到家乡。