高分高考英语作文(校公开课).ppt
高考英语高分写作指导(81张PPT)
Beautify your Composition
高考作文的华丽变身
遇遇 难易 心心 不更 慌细 ，。
1.所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活， 实际具有时代特点，紧扣与学生相关的 社会热点及学生的生活与学习。
2.词数要求100，既要求表 达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，对考 生思维和表达能力的要求提高了。
1) Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first
prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. (用同位语改写)
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, won the first prize in Men’s 110
Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级)
When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般)
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)
I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. (一般)
2、地道原则
［原文］Through traveling, I
learned a lot of knowledge. ［修正］Through traveling, I gained／obtained a lot of
knowledge.
3、避免重复原则
［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television. ［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
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使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
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• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
高考英语作文公开课完美课件
encouragement."You don't give up becuase failure is the mother of
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success." my grandma said . I kknnoowwththeekiknidndsmneilsescsamnimleaikseliuksefseethl e
I know the kind smile can make us feel warm like the sun.
修改前的作文
People often say,"A smile can make you ten years younger." Not only smile can help us forget the unhappy things, but also it help us keep good mood. Once I failed in my history exam. I are very sad. Later, I tell my grandma this thing say I hard-working history every day,but history still not good. I didn't know what I could do. Finally, I passed the exam becuase of her smile and encouragement."You don't give up becuase failure is the mother of success." my grandma said . I know the kindness smile is likes the sun, can warmed our heart.
高中英语高考英语作文之环保省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件
preserve our natural resources 保护自然资源
•It is highly important to preserve the environment. •维护自然环境至关主要。
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Greenhouse effect温室效应
•This adds to the power of the greenhouse effect, making the planet even warmer.
develop a habit of form a habit of keep a habit build a habit
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with the development of
•Certainly, with the development of science and technology, more and more plastics will come into use.
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•We must take steps to control air pollution.
•我们必须采取些办法来控制空气污染。
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climate change •Global warming refers to an average increase in the Earth's temperature that, in turn, leads to climate change.
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water
• 1. It’s our duty to save water
• 责任节约用水是我们责任。
• 2. As we know , water is very important to man, • 我们知道，水是非常主要人， • 3. We can’t live without water. • 我们生活离不开水。
高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for a college entrance English composition?
The ideal length is typically 200-300 words, depending on the specific requirements of the exam
Conclusion Writing
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Sample text analysis
An in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples
Through in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples, students will understand how to construct story plots, shape character images, and use language skills to express emotions and themes.
What are the common mistakes students make in English composition?
Common misses include poor grammar, weak vocabulary, unclear organization, and lake of origin or depth in analysis
Grammar Control
Correctly use tensions, sense structures, and punctation
Fluent Expression
Write in a smooth and coherent man with proper transitions
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
满分英语作文讲解课件
满分英语作文讲解课件Title: A Guide to Writing a Perfect English Composition。
Introduction:Writing a perfect English composition is a skill that many students strive to master. In this guide, we willbreak down the key components of a top-notch compositionand provide you with tips and strategies to help youachieve a high score.Body:1. Understanding the Prompt:The first step in writing a perfect English composition is to carefully read and understand the prompt. Make sure you know exactly what is being asked of you before youstart writing.Take note of any key words or phrases in the prompt that will help guide your writing.2. Brainstorming:Before you start writing, take some time to brainstorm ideas for your composition. Consider different angles or perspectives you could take on the topic.Create an outline to organize your thoughts and ensure that your composition has a clear structure.3. Introduction:The introduction of your composition should grab the reader's attention and provide a clear thesis statement that outlines the main point of your essay.Consider starting with a hook to draw the reader in, such as a quote, question, or interesting fact.4. Body Paragraphs:The body paragraphs of your composition should each focus on a specific point that supports your thesis statement.Make sure to provide evidence and examples to back up your points, and use transitions to connect your ideas smoothly.5. Conclusion:The conclusion of your composition should summarize your main points and restate your thesis statement in a new way.Consider ending with a thought-provoking statement or a call to action to leave a lasting impression on the reader.6. Editing and Revising:Once you have finished writing your composition, take the time to edit and revise it carefully.Check for spelling and grammar errors, as well as clarity and coherence in your writing.Consider asking a peer or teacher to review your composition and provide feedback for improvement.Conclusion:Writing a perfect English composition is a challenging task, but with practice and dedication, you can improve your skills and achieve a high score. By following the tips and strategies outlined in this guide, you will be well on your way to writing top-notch compositions that will impress your teachers and peers alike.。
高考英语书面表达写作开头与结尾共PPTPPT优质公开课
activity will continue in the future.(希 one of which is that it helps refresh yourself and improve your thinking ability.
亮点：使用了恰当的形容词和副词 表现情感，被动句和疑问句礼 貌结语
2. We can, therefore, come to the
conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world. 议论文 亮点：therefore灵活插入在中间 同位语从句
I am writing to inform you of my plan about ….告知情况
开头简洁明了 点明题目信息 写作目的
1.How delighted I am to tell you a piece of good news that ……告知情 况 （亮点：感叹句+同位语从句）
With a history of four to five thousand years, tea culture has been an important part of Chinese culture. Whenever guests visit, it is a custom to make and serve tea to them. More importantly, drinking tea has a number of advantages,
2.Learning that you are eager to