【二轮专题练】读后续写专项(选自最新时材) (1)
【2021英语二轮复习】读后续写专练(全国新高考)(1)
【2021英语二轮复习】读后续写专练全国新高考(1)【题型概述】读后续写是随着我国高考改革由教育部考试中心研制的英语高考新题型,2016年10月在浙江省首次使用。
该题型通过读写结合,检测学生的英语书面语言理解与表达能力。
要求学生能够梳理故事文体的结构、分析故事发展的线索、想像故事发展的情节以及续写故事的发展和结局。
从试题结构看,读后续写评价的是书面理解能力和书面表达能力。
因此,在写作之前,首先读懂文本,理清故事情节,然后构思故事的发展和结局。
下面介绍一下读后续写的答题技巧:【答题策略】1.通读文本,提取线索词和信息句,写出每段段落大意。
2. 根据文本每段内容,结合所给续写部分的首句,构思完整的故事情节。
3. 根据续写部分所提供的首句,写出续写部分每段的段落大意,围绕续写部分的段落大意进行合理的细节描写。
4. 润色成篇。
【实战练习】一阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As Amy Hagadorn rounded the corner across the hall from her classroom, she crashed with a tall boy from the fifth grade running in the opposite direction.“Watch it, Squirt,” the boy yelled, as he dodged around the little third grader. Then, wit h an unfriendly smile on his face, the boy mimicked the way Amy limped (跛行) when she walked. Amy tried to ignore his mean teasing. She felt deeply lonely, because there were full of other students teasing about her speech or her limping.Back home at the d inner table that evening Amy was quiet. That’s why Patti Hagadorn was happy to have some exciting news to share with her daughter.“There’s a Christmas Wish Contest on the radio station,” she announced. “Write a letter to Santa and you might win a prize. I think someone at this table with blond curly hair should enter.”Amy giggled. The contest sounded like fun. She started thinking about what she wanted most for Christmas. While Amy worked away at her best printing, the rest of the family tried to guess wh at gifts she might ask from Santa. But Amy wasn’t ready to reveal her secret Christmas wish just then.Here is Amy’s letter to Santa, just as she wrote it that night:Dear Santa Clause,My name is Amy. I’m 9 years old. I have a problem at school. Can you help me, Santa? Kids laugh at me because of the way I walk and run and talk. I have cerebral palsy (大脑性瘫痪). I just want one day when no one laughs at me or makes fun of me.Love,Amy At radio station WJLT in Fort Wayne, Indiana, letters poured in for the Christmas Wish Contest. When Amy’s letter arrived, manager Lee Tobin read it carefully. He knew cerebral palsy was a muscle disorder that might confuse the schoolmates of Amy who didn’t understand her disability. He thought it would be good for the people in Fort Wayne to hear about this special third grader and her unusual wish. Mr. Tobin called up the local newspaper.注意:1. 续写的词数应为150左右。
高考英语读后续写专项训练
1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was about five years old. I saw a beautiful rainbow that seemed to be losing itself in a thick wood about half a mile away.“Do you know, Grace.” said my little brother, who was just recovering from a severe illness. “that if we go to the end of the rainbow. we will find precious treasures there?”“Really?” I asked.“Yes.” answered my brother. with a bright smile on his pale face.As simple-minded children, we believed everything that we were told. Without a second thought, we set off toward the wood. I ran so fast that my brother called after me as loudly as he could. Being sure where the rainbow ended. I pushed ahead without waiting for him.But when I reached the edge wood, the end of the rainbow was not there! Instead. I saw it shining down among the trees a little farther off. So on and on I struggled through the thick bushes till I came within the sound of a stream. I reached the bank of the stream, and I could see it a little way off on the other side. I crossed the stream on a fallen tree, and still ran on, though my feet were aching and my knees were shaking.On the way, I met a huge snake, I tried to run away from it as fast as my tired feet could carry me. And in my fright and hurry, I forgot to keep my eyes on the rainbow, and when, at last, I looked for it, it was gone! Even worse, I couldn’t see my brother anywhere in sight. l sat down and burst into tears, for I felt that I had lost all my treasures. I had nothing but muddy feet and a wet and torn dress. So I decided to go back home.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(新高考适用)高考英语二轮总复习专题模拟训练读后续写
专题模拟训练(读后续写)读后续写(一)A(2022·广东省茂名市高三二模)A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family.My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food.In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts (常去的地方).This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning.It took us six hours to reach our destination.We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi.The beach was just a short walk from the hotele was to be no TV and no Internet.The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite hawker stalls (小贩摊位).As we were having tea at a coffee shop, we overheard people talking about an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia.We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach.We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way.Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before.I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sunʼs rays.It never occurred to us that something awful would take place.Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing.The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore.I called my father to look at the curious occurrence.My father took one look and went pale.We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore.It seemed to grow taller by the second.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
2022年高考英语二轮复习:读后续写10篇练习题与范文汇编(实用!)
2022年高考英语二轮复习:读后续写10篇练习题与范文汇编读后续写1When a tornado(龙卷风) touched down in a small town nearby, many families were left completely ruined.One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me.A young woman stood in front of an entirely ruined home.A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood at her side, eyes downcast.Clutching(紧握) at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, eyes wide with confusion and fear.The article that went with the picture gave the_clothing sizes of each family member.With growing interest, I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours.This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate(幸运的) than themselves.I taped the picture of the young family to our refrigerator, explaining their difficulty to my sevenyearold twins, Brad and Brett, and to threeyearold Meghan.“These_poor_people now have nothing,” I said.“We'll share what we have with them.”I brought three large boxes and placed them on the_living_room floor, encouraging the boys to go through their toys and donate(捐赠) some of their less favorite things.Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods that they no longer needed.Meghan walked up with Lucy, her muchloved doll, hugged tightly to her chest.She stopped in front of the box, gave her doll a final kiss, then laid her gently on top of the other toys.“Oh, Honey,” I said.“You don't have to give Lucy.You love her so much.”Meghan nodded seriously, “Lucy makes me happy,_Mommy.Maybe she'll make that other little girl happy, too.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高中英语读后续写题库练习题20篇(含范文解析)
读后续写题库20篇Writing 1【★★☆】It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. V ery early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.(2018年浙江卷)注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _______________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. ________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文赏析】I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on!” All of a sudden the horse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night! 【点评】 读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息, 不仅能读懂字面含义, 还要理清文章的脉络。
2022届新高考二轮复习新题型专项练习1——读后续写(故事类)
2022届新高考二轮复习新题型专项练习——读后续写(故事类)1. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Long ago, there was a big apple tree. A little boy loved to come and play around it every day. He climbed to the top of the tree, ate the apples, and took a nap under the shadow... He loved the tree and the tree also enjoyed playing with him.As time went by, the little boy grew up and he no longer played around the tree.One day, the boy came back to the tree, appearing sad. "Come and play with me," the tree asked the boy gently."I am no longer a kid; I won't play around trees anymore," the boy replied. "I want toys. I need money to buy them.""Sorry, but I don't have money. However, you can pick all my apples and sell them. Then, you will have money." The boy was so excited that he picked all the apples on the tree and left happily. The boy didn't come back after that.The tree was upset.One day, the boy returned and the tree was so joyful. "Come and play with me," the tree said."I don't have time to play. I have to work for my family. We need a house for shelter. Can you help me?" "Sorry, I don't have a house. But you can cut off my branches to build your house." So the boy cut all the branches of the tree and left with delight.The tree was glad to see him happy but the boy didn't appear since then. The tree was again lonely and sad.One hot summer day, the boy returned and the tree was delighted. "Come and play with me!" the tree requested."I am sad and becoming old. I want to go sailing to relax myself. Can you give me a boat?" "Use my trunk to build the boat. You can sail and be happy." So the boy cut the tree trunk to make a boat. He went sailing and did not show up for a long time.注意:续写词数应为150左右。
读后续写素材与练专题(2)阅读练习与积累(1)
优质资源——读后续写素材与练专题(2)阅读与积累(一)Once in Arabia, there lived a Sheik. He and his wife lived in a village. As she had no child, the Sheik married another woman for a second time. By his second wife, he had a son. He loved his son very much and he grew up happily as a handsome young man.However, the man's first wife hated the second wife and her son, so she began to plot against(密谋杀害) them. For years, she kept waiting for a chance to murder them with her magical power.One day the Sheik had to go out on a journey. He said to his son that he would return home before Bakrid and celebrated the festival. Now came the perfect chance long waited by the first wife. When the man was away, she used her magical power and changed the second wife and son as goats.When Bakrid was approaching, the man returned home, only to find his first wife in the house. He asked her where his son and his second wife were. The first wife lied that his second wife died in some unknown disease and that her son ran away from home and didn't come again. On hearing this, the man became sad but comforted himself that it was God's will.On the day of Bakrid, the Sheik asked his first wife to bring a goat for sacrifice. His first wife brought the second wife who had been changed into a goat. When it came near the man, it started to brush his hand with its tongue. He took pity on the goat and asked his first wife to bring another. So she brought the son goat. It also come near the Sheik and started to rub his leg with its head. Again, the man took pity on the goat. He said, "The two goats do like men. So I can't kill these two. " Then the first wife got angry and said, "If you refuse to kill all goats like this, we will not be able to sacrifice anything."Possible Version 1 Paragraph 1: Just then the butcher's wife, another woman with magical power, passed by. Glancing at these two goats, she instantly realized the woman's evil trick. She came up to the Sheik, explaining, "Actually, these two goats are your second wife and your son." Hearing the words, the man was startled and asked her if she could bring them back to him. The butcher's wife nodded, taking some water from her bottle and spraying it on the two goats. The next moment, they turned into his second wife and his son.Paragraph 2: So astonished was the man that he couldn't believe his eyes. "Dad! Dad!" the boy cried in a thrilled voice, throwing himself at his father's hug. Three of them embraced each other tightly, tears streaming down. In the corner stood the first wife in a mixture of fright and annoyance. When she was about to run away, she was caught by the butcher's wife. Never had she predicted one day she would be changed into a silent fish. From then on, the man, his second wife and his lovable son lived a happy life in the village.Possible Version 2Paragraph 1: Just then the butcher's wife, another woman with magical power, passed by.The sight of the goats pacing around Sheik with care and love confused the butcher's wife, wondering why two goats acted likehumans.With doubt in mind, she approached the two goats, hands gently on their heads to know what had happened.It dawned on her that the two goats were actually changed from humans through magical power. Having learnt the truth, the woman changed the two back to humans, making everyone present shocked, including Sheik.Paragraph 2: So astonished was the man that he couldn't believe his eyes. Never in his wildest dream had he thought they would reunite in this way. Tears of relief welling up in eyes, he hugged them tightly,asking what they had experienced. Eyes glued to the three, the first wife, with her hands clenched into tight fists, dashed to them in a flash, scolding and cursing. Sheik glared at her, realizing the truth and revealed her evil deeds on the spot. Furious but frightened by the roaring people around, the first wife fled away, leaving the family in the joyful celebration.例句学习1. the next moment 紧接着(尤指突然发生很大变化)The next moment there was an almighty crash接着发生了剧烈的撞击。
高考英语二轮专题读后续写真题训练以及模拟小测
大家好今天跟大家分享高考英语真题训练读后续写部分的带练技巧①粗读短文阅读材料,圈画关键词(实词—名词、动词、形容词),确定每个段落的行文逻辑(总分、分总),主要留意段落是否存在逻辑关键词(并列、因果、转折....)②确定逻辑关系之后,心里就要匹配一下需要续写的这两个段落的逻辑究竟是三大逻辑的哪一种(人物描写的conflictsolution\人物行为的actionresponse\情绪导向的positivenegative)③匹配逻辑关系之后,就要开始写作,初步留意题干需要续写的两个段落主旨句,然后根据两个句子以及上述第二步确定的逻辑确定第一步的写法(一般情况下,请添加与阅读材料关键词同义替换以及文章的逻辑关键词(并列、因果、转折....);需要续写的第二段以happy ending的方式写作(更加多添加人物描写关键词同义替换)第一部分真题带练(2021年浙江省高考卷)第二节读后续写(满分25分)47. 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I pete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantageI carried an 85pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14yearold brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was shortlived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2024届高考英语二轮专题复习与测试专题六读后续写
专题六读后续写一、题型解读读后续写是一种将阅读和写作紧密结合起来进行考查的新题型,文章多是记叙文。
读是输入,要求学生能提取有效的文本信息;写是输出,要求学生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上,根据要求和提示预测缺失部分的内容走势,将文章补充完整,使之浑然一体。
本题型主要考查学生的阅读、写作、思维及学习能力。
阅读能力能理解原文内容能准确理解原文的篇章结构和关键信息能深入理解原文的情境(包含内容要素、情节发展、逻辑关系等)写作能力内容产出能在原文基础上创造新的内容能与原文内容保持高度融洽、形成有效协同语言运用能使用准确、恰当、丰富的词汇和句子结构能与原文的词汇和句子结构(甚至语言风格)协同篇章结构能与原文合理衔接能使用恰当的连接手段使续写完整、连贯思维能力能在根据原文进行续写时体现出想象力、创造性学习能力能通过读后续写学习原文作者的语言特点和写作风格二、命题透视卷名主题语境素养话题新课标Ⅰ卷2023人与自我写作比赛——一名以英语为第二语言的中学生,在老师的帮助下,参加英语写作比赛的故事新高考Ⅰ卷2022人与自我战胜自我——一名残疾学生坚持参加跑步比赛2021人与自我母亲节的惊喜礼物——两个孩子在母亲节当天为母亲制作早餐浙江卷2023人与自然救助动物——蛛网救蜂鸟脱困,蜂鸟留恋作者2022人与社会团队合作——作者与队友从最开始的无法配合到最后圆满完成任务2021人与自我理解父母,贡献家庭——孩子在假期打工,把赚来的钱交给父母2021人与自我南瓜卡头趣事——少女及家人沉着应对而脱险模拟卷2021八省联考人与社会友好互助——路遇好心人帮助修车,演绎人间真情命题预测1.读后续写话题的命题热点方向。
(1)人与自然:natural disasters...(2)人与人:quarrels、envy...(3)人与动物:wolf、tiger、bear、snake...2.落实五育并举、深化体美劳教育引导。
例如,2021·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写文本选取在母亲节当天为母亲做早饭的语篇,引导学生形成热爱劳动的观念,在实际生活中宣扬劳动精神,积极参与劳动。
读后续写写作练习 高三英语二轮复习写作专项
读后续写-停车场中的双领鸻(héng)读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The day of the balloon festival, I felt as light as a hot-air balloon. This year I wouldn't just be watching. I'd be riding in Mr. J's truck, following the flight of the balloon and meeting it when it came down.It was a perfect day. Dad and I drove down the road, looped(环状绕行) the lake, and turned into the field that was being used as a parking area. Dad pointed to the lake. "That's where you are to find the crew," he said.We came to a stop and I got out of the car.And then I saw it, a white bird with black stripes, brown head, and skinny legs. It screeched(尖叫) and thrashed(拍打) in the dirt in front of the cars that were driving downhills. Its wings looked broken. Suddenly it shrieked (悲鸣)and flew off.“Dad,” I called, but my father was watching the balloons.“It's a killdeer(北美喧鹆).” I turned to see a silver- haired old woman. “It has a nest here somewhere,” she said. “In the parking area?” I asked. She nodded firmly. “It was a nesting place before it became a parking area. No one told the killdeer about the balloon festival!”“Jack!” Dad called “Isn’t it time you went down to meet Mr. J?”“I have got to go.” I said. But the woman pointed with her walking stick. There, on the ground was a perfect clutch(窝) of speckled eggs, looking like pebbles. They were almost in the path of cars, trucks, motorbikes and stomping feet.Screech! The parent bird was back, its wing all twisted again. “Jack!” Dad called again. “The balloons are ready to launch.”“Dad! I am…” A truck roared over the hill. Brakes screamed dust flew. “What’s the matter?” asked Dad angrily from the truck.注意:续写词数应为150 左右;请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
2023届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写 专项练习题(Word版,含答案范文)
2023届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写专项练习题读后续写练习写作:Tryouts for the City Choir读后续写:阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Alexander sang all the time. He sang in the shower, he sang while he did his homework, and he sang while he walked to school. He simply loved singing. One day during a break, he heard Kevin talking about the tryouts (选拔)for the City Choir(合唱团).“Yeah, I'm attending the tryouts this weekend/' Kevin announced. "With my voice, I'm pretty much guaranteed a spot. I don't even need any practice as I am SO talented. Imagine they'll want me to perform lots of solos(独唱),too.”Everyone knew that Kevin had a fantastic singing voice. Normally, Alexander just ignored him, but he couldn't help imagining himself as a member of the choir. Wouldn't it be fun, he thought, to sing with other kids every day and have someone actually teach him about singing?On the tryout day, Alexander took a deep breath, walked into the building, registered at a large table, and then waited nervously in the hallway. The only one who第i页共10页on pins and needles. Eventually, he gradully held back anxiety and uneasiness, encouraging and cheering his campanions greatly. No sooner had Mr. Robeson signaled the four boys, who were well prepared, to begin when all of them let out thrilling and inspirational viberation, with arms swinging rhythm. In Mr. Robeson/s eyes, it was their firm and joint voice that made them unique and extraordinary. Several minutes later, everyone had a break and it was time for Mr. Robesonto evaluate and choose.Finally Mr. Robeson told Alexander that he made it, not Kevin. As it happened, everyone on the stage was in shock, with doubtful looks on their faces. It was then that Mr. Robeson cleared his throa and made a suitable explanation, disrupting discussion about unfairness. He announced in a powerful voice that Kevin was truly an excellent singer but the true meaning of a choir was team spirit, instead of individualism. Immediately, people came to be aware of what genuinely counted - team and joint efforts. It dawned on both Alexander and kelvin that power came from everyone in the team.第10页共10页didn't look nervous was Kevin. And why should he be? He has performed as a soloist many times. Alexander, on the other hand, had never taken a musical lesson in his life, much less had performed for an audience.Afer a while, the choir director, Mr. Robeson, walked in and told the kids that they were to sing a song individually, sing as a group and answer some questions. Soon the individual test began. When Alexander stood on the stage, he tried to calm down and pretended he was singing in the shower. He felt satisfied when he was done, at least until Kevin's turn came. As Kevin/s confident voice filled the room, Alexander realized that he would never sound that good.Next, Mr.Robeson put the kids into groups of four or five and askedthem to sing together. Kevin's group sang right before Alexander's, and even with four other boys singing, Kevin's voice clear and distinct; it seemed to reach the farthest corners of the room.注意:L写作词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
高考英语二轮专题复习专题强化练十八读后续写(原卷板答案版4份打包)
专题强化练(十八) 读后续写(Ⅰ)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
A(2020·浙江名校协作体二模改编)It was a Saturday afternoon.The color of the sky was changing,first light gray,then dark gray,and finally dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and dogs.Soon,the road was filled with puddles from the rain.On such a stormy afternoon,my mother took my fiveyearold brother,Christopher,and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper.“So many toys,”the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited.We ran across the parking lot,through the cold rain,as fast as our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella,which never worked when she wanted it to.“Christine!Take care of your young brother!” Mother shouted at the top of her voice.“Christine!I'm going to find the Lego section (乐高积木区)!There's a new pirate ship I want,and I have four dollars!Maybe I can buy it!” Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and,to my wideeyed delight,found myself in the midst of the Barbie (芭比) World.I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside.I jumped at the noise,dropping the doll to the floor.The lights flickered (闪烁) once and went out,covering everything in a blanket of blackness.Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,casting frightening shadows on my mind.Paragraph 1:“Oh no.” I thought.“Where's Christopher?”_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Christine,I'm here.”__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B(2020·聊城二模)I looked out at the smiling faces packed into the school hall.Flashes from cameras lit up in all directions.The applause filled my ears.I had done it.I had really done it.Just a few months earlier,I would never have pictured myself acting in a play in front of two hundred people.“Not for a million dollars,” I would have said.But when the time came,I got up on stage and faced one of my greatest fears—and discoveredI could do more than I ever gave myself credit for.I found a new person inside me,a much more daring,outgoing person who had been hidden all along,just waiting for the opportunity to appear.If not for my teacher,Mrs Sather,I might never have found that opportunity.In the first and second grade,I was extremely shy.I had friends,but it just wasn't in my personality to be very outgoing,even when I knew someone well.I was afraid I would do or say something wrong,so usually I just smiled and listened to other people's conversations.I did well in school and I loved to write.However,I would escape into my writing,where I could be myself and never had to worry about what other people thought of me.In my stories,I was never shy.My teacher,Mrs Sather,always encouraged me to write more.She told our class to go after our dreams and dig in with both hands.I think she was one of the first people to see my inner strength.One day,she announced that our class was going to perform a play she had written.“I'll begin to cast everyone tomorrow,” she said.“I need someone who is not afraid to be on stage in front of a lot of people to play the lead part of Dorothy.Anybody want to try?” A few excited hands shot up—mine,of course,was not one of them—and Mrs Sather smiled.“We'll talk more about it tomorrow,” she said.Then the bell rang and my classmates slowly left the classroom.When I was loading up my backpack,Mrs Sather asked me to go to her.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Hearing Mrs Sather's words,I realized it was time to make a change. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________C(2020·滨州高三第二次模拟)Through our lives,we can gain a lot and lose so much.But being honest should always be with us,as honesty is always regarded as a virtue.Every time I talk about the topic,something crowds in my mind as if it had just happened.I was 16 when one morning,Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car in a nearby garage to get it serviced.At that time,I had just passed the driving test,and I hardly had a chance to use the car,so I said yes without hesitation.I drove my father to Mijas,promising to pick him up again at 4 pm,then I went to a nearby garage,and put the car in there.Since I had several hours to spare,I decided to go to a movie theater near the garage to see the movie.However,I wasso absorbed in the plot of the movie that I forgot the time.When the last movie finished,I looked at my watch: 6 pm.I was two hours late!I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing.And he would never let me drive again.So I decided to make up an excuse.Then,I drove to the appointed place,my father was sitting in a corner,waiting patiently.I first apologized for being late,then told him that I wanted to get there as soon as possible,but that something was wrong with some of the main parts of the car.I would never forget the way he looked at me.“I'm very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me,Jason.” My father looked at me again and said,“When you didn't show up on time,I called the gas station and asked if there was anything wrong.They told me you never picked up the car.So,you see,I know there's nothing wrong with the car at all.”Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:“But father,it's exactly eighteen miles home from here,and it's dark.You can't walk back.” I begged. 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高考英语二轮复习专题1读后续写讲练word版本
专题一读后续写读后续写作为浙江英语高考新题型,是一种常有的“给资料作文”,它要修业生在阅读完一篇还未写完的文章以后,依据所给出的开头语和重点词语把这篇未写完的文章增补完整。
读后续写重要扣文章前文所述,去推想以后可能出现的状况,要睁开合理、充足的想象,构想适合的情节,写成一篇完好的文章。
读后续写有助于培育学生的想象能力、创新思想能力和语言表达能力。
[ 选材特色 ]1.所需阅读的短文词数在350 之内;2.多以记述文故事类文章或许夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有波折、有起伏,可是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
[ 评分参照 ]阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:1.与所给短文及段落开头语的连接程度;2.内容的丰富性和对所给重点词语的覆盖状况;3.应用语法构造和词汇的丰富性和正确性;4.上下文的连接性。
注意:1 .所续写短文的词数应为150 左右 ( 词数少于130 的,从总分中减去2 分 ) ;2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的重点词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写达成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。
[ 写作步骤 ] 1.精读文章,确立文章线索,如是以时间为线索仍是以空间为线索等,这有益于“顺藤摸瓜”。
2.认真审题,明确续写要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线重点词语、续写段落的首句提示等,做到“成竹在胸”。
3.回扣原文,想象续写内容。
迅速回读短文,推测文章的思路,联合段首的提示语和划线词语提示,确立续写段落的内容。
4.拟写底稿,改正错词病句。
联合提示语和文中划线的重点词拟写出底稿,注意句子构造的多样性,语言的丰富性,上下文的连接。
5.标出所使用的原资猜中标有下划线的重点词语,最后抄写文字时,务必做到“笔迹工整、清楚”。
[ 方法技巧 ] 1.在读懂原文的基础上,紧扣原文中心,以原文的结局为起点,写出故事情节的发展和变化。
2.对原文故事没有写出的情节睁开合理的推想,翻开思路。
多角度地想象出几种状况或结局,并从中加以最精选择。
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【二轮专题练】(八)读后续写专项A阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I always prided myself on being a wise shopper and having a good nose for bargains. So when I came across a sporting goods store with a sign “Going Out of Business Sale”, I marched into the crowded store. Up and down the aisles (通道), I wandered, humming to myself and enjoying the energy and excitement of a sale.All of a sudden, there, at the back of the store sat a canoe (轻舟) exactly like my husband’s dream Supremo Numero-Uno,whose picture had been stuck on the bathroom mirror for years. My heart beat wildly. I pushed my way through the crowds, and nearly fell into the canoe looking for the price tag. There it was, with the manufacturer’s suggested price at $6,750 plus tax crossed out and a handwritten TO CLEAR $750 AS IS. Must be a mistake. $6000 off? Salesman. I had to talk to a salesman. I spotted a young fellow with a “Hi. I’m Mathew”. “Mathew. Tell me about this El Supremo canoe. What’s wrong with it? Why is it only $750?”“Oh. There’s nothing wrong with it. It’s brand new. We’re closing the store. It’s on clearance like everything else. I’ll go check.” A few minutes later he came back and said, “I’m sorry ma’am. Someone made a mistake on the sale tag. It should be $4,750 fo r the whole package.”I felt tears well up in my eyes. “Oh well”, I said sadly. “Of course, it was too good to be true. This is exactly like my husband’s dreamboat. I guess I started to dream myself when I saw that price tag. He’s going to be 62 years old on Friday. Had to retire early for his health. It’s been hard on just the pension but the stubborn old fool has been saving $10 every week for years to buy one just like this. I promise I won’t buy anything, but it’s just an old man’s silly dream, you kno w. Always said he wanted to fish in a canoe after he retired,” my voice lowered and I turned and walked away.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:I was already at the mall door w hen Mathew caught up with me. “Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery, ma’am?”_________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:“Ma’am. There’s something you should know. This store was my g randpa’s and the canoe had been ordered by him.__________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Some people are just bound to be failures. That’s the way some adults look at troublesome kids. Maybe you’ve heard the saying. “A bird with a broken wing will never fly as high.” I am sure that T. J. Ware was made to feel this way almost every day at school.At high school, Ware was the most celebrated troublemaker in his town. Teachers would feel uneasy when they saw his name posted on the lists for the next term. Ware was moving on, but certainly not moving up. I met Ware for the first time at a leadership training, a program designed to have students become more involved in their communities. When I showed up to lead their first training, the community leaders gave me this overview of the attending students, “We have a total range of students, from the student body president to T. J. Ware, the boy with the longest arrest record in the history of town.”At the beginning of the training, Ware was standing outside of the circle of students, against the back wall, with that “go ahead, impress me”look on his face. But slowly, the interactive games drew him in. The ice really melted when the groups started building a list of positive and negative things that had occurred at school that year. Ware had some definite thoughts on those situations. The other students in his group welcomed his comments, which made a lot of sense.The next day, Ware was very active in all the activities. By the end of the training, he had joined the Homeless Project team. The other students in the team were impressed with his passionate concern and ideas. They elected him chairman of the team. Most teachers strongly opposed to his being elected chairman, warning the principal that Ware would probably steal half the food. But the principal reminded them that the purpose of the program was to uncover any positive passion that a student had and strengthen its practice until true change could take place. The teachers left the meeting shaking their heads, convinced that failure was approaching.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。