2017届高考英语二轮复习大题冲关秘籍短文改错：创新押题

题组一
Passage1
In modern time, the pace of our life is getting faster and faster. We have to work under pressure, which makes that hard for us to live a healthy life. However, developing a healthy lifestyle is very important unless we want to enjoy a good health.
First of all, work long hours in front of a computer is bad for our eyes and backs. Drinking and smoking also do harmful to our health. However, taking physical exercise can builds up our body. In addition to, we should have a balanced diet contains a lot of grain, fruits and vegetables. Last but not least, having enough sleep is also necessary for us to stay health. Personally, having a healthy lifestyle is just your choice.
Passage2
As we know, Charlie Chaplin brightened the lives of Americans and British during the period of silent films. Up to now nobody had been able to do this well than Charlie Chaplin .He made people laugh at a time when they felt depressed, so they could feel more content in their lives. His charming character, the little tramp, was well-known all over the world. It was a poor and homeless person wearing large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat, and carried a walking stick. This character was social failure and he was loved for his optimism and determination to overcome all difficulties. In the famous film The Gold Rush, Chaplin managed to make the situation entertained. Charlie Chaplin wrote, directed and produced the films he starred in them. He is loved and remembered as a great actor which could inspire people with great confident.
Passage3
Last summer I did some fruit-picking. It is pretty hard work. I had to start in 7 am and pick for a good eight hour. But it was such cheerful that we had great fun. Some of we had guitars, so in the evenings we had barbecues and played a bit music together. I only got about $80 a week, but at the least they gave me all my meals, and the food was not that awfully. Basic accommodation was also
supplying. Still, I’m afraid I won’t be going fruit-picking this summer, because I’ve got a temporary job in town what pays better.
Passage4
Last Sunday, I wanted very much to see a film together with my brother after supper. On my way to the cinema, we happen to meet an American named Peter. He lost his way, looked worried. When he told us that he wasn’t able to find the hotel, we decided take him there. Along the way we told of Peter the great changes that had been taken place in our country in the last few years. Peter also told us a lot of things about America.
Although we missed a interesting film, but we felt very happy. We not only helped Peter out of trouble and also learnt something by him.
题组二
Paasage1
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before a big audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!
Passage2
Last weekend’s concert, organized and performing by the students of the Welsh Community College, was great success. The student had been practicing for months for the concert. They were excited that when they heard Gareth Jones was coming to present the prizes. Over 100 young performers play a mixture of jazz, classical or folk music. One of the highlights were 14-year-old Megan Evans, playing traditional Welsh folk songs. The concert ended with a very loud pop tune and anyone in the hall stood up and danced with the music. It was a magically atmosphere and a wonderful evening.
Passage3
Dear Sophia,
I’m Li Hua from Beijing ABC Senior School. I’m happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chair and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close from our home, because we could go to school by bike. In noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m surely you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoying talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join in other students in playing ball games or swimming. There will be a lot of funs.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make my stay here in Beijing pleasant experience.
Best wishes
Li Hua
Passage4
On Friday, our teacher told us that there would an English corner in front of our teaching building. I set about soon after the last class in the afternoon.
To my joy, the English corner had just been on for a few minute. I joined them on their talk. At first, I was afraid that my English was so poor and limit that I couldn’t follow them or make myself understand. I was also afraid that anyone might laugh at me. But a smiling face here or an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. Though I speak to them only in simple English that day, I believe in future I will make a greater progress.
题组一
Passage1
In modern
time times
, the pace of our life is getting faster and faster. We have to work under pressure, which makes that it
hard for us to live a healthy life. However, developing a healthy lifestyle is very important unless if we want to enjoy a good health. First of all, work working
long hours in front of a computer is bad for our eyes and backs. Drinking and smoking also do
harmful harm to our health. However, taking physical exercise can builds build
up our body. In addition to , we should have a balanced diet that /which / contains containing a lot of grain, fruits and vegetables. Last but not least, having enough sleep is also necessary for us to stay health healthy . Personally, having a healthy lifestyle is just your choice.
【语篇解读】本文就如何保持健康提出了一些建议。

第一处：time →times in modern times 意为＂在现代＂，为固定短语，因此把 time 改为times 。

第二处：that →it 用it 作形式宾语，替代后面的不定式，而that 无此用法，因此把that 改为 it 。

第三处：unless →if 根据句意＂如果我们想享受健康，我们需要培养良好的生活方式＂可知，应
把unless 改为if 。

第四处：去掉a health 为不可数名词，故要去掉a 。

第五处：work →working 根据句意及句子结构可知，此处应用动名词作主语，把work 改为 working 。

第六处：harmful →harm do harm to 意为＂对……造成伤害＂，为固定用法，把 harmful 改为harm 。

第七处：builds →build 情态动词后跟动词原形，把builds 改为 build 。

第八处：去掉to in addition to 是介词短语，in addition 可单独作状语，意为＂此外＂。

因此去掉to 。

第九处： contains 前加that/which 或contains →containing 先行词为a balanced diet ，应用关系
代词that 或which 引导定语从句，或者把contains 改为containing ， 用现在分词短语作后置定语。

第十处：health →healthy stay 为系动词，后跟形容词作表语，应把health 改为healthy 。

Passage2
As we know, Charlie Chaplin brightened the lives of Americans and British during the period
of silent films. Up to now nobody had
has
been able to do this
well
better
than Charlie Chaplin. He made
people laugh at a time when they felt depressed, so they could feel more content
in
with
their lives.
His charming character, the little tramp, was well-known all over the world. It was a poor and homeless person wearing large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat,
and
carried
carrrying
a walking stick. This character was
a
social failure
and
but
he was loved for his
optimism and determination to overcome all difficulties. In the famous film The Gold Rush, Chaplin
managed to make the situation entertained
entertaining
. Charlie Chaplin wrote, directed and produced the
films he starred in them. He is loved and remembered as a great actor
which
who/that
could inspire
people with great
confident confidence
.
【语篇解读】喜剧演员查理卓别林风趣幽默，他的表演给人们带来了许多快乐。

他扮演的流浪者的角色因其乐观及有客服困难的决心深受大家喜欢。

他自导自演的电影《淘金热》十分出名。

卓别林是一位伟大的演员，他用极大的自信鼓舞着我们。

第一处：had改为has。

考查时态。

时间状语up to now（到目前为止）应与现在完成时连用，故将had改为has。

第二处：well改为better。

考查比较级。

由该词后面的than可知应使用比较级，故将well改为better。

第三处：in改为with。

考查形容词短语。

be conte nt with…是固定搭配，表＂对……满意＂。

第四处：第五句中的carried改为carrying。

考查非谓语动词。

动词carry与wearing由and并列连接作person的后置定语，该动词与person之间是逻辑上的主动关系，故用
carrying。

第五处：第六句中was和social中间加a。

考查冠词。

该句中抽象名词failure具体指代this character，故抽象名词具体化，应加a。

第六处：第六句中的and改为but。

考查连词。

该连词前后的内容是转折关系，故将and改为but。

第七处：entertained 改为entertaining 。

考查形容词。

entertaining 表＂令人愉快的；有趣的＂，
常用来修饰指物的名词或代词；entertained 表＂感到快乐的＂，常用来修饰指人的名词或代词。

该句中作宾语的名词situation 后缺少宾补，故用entertaining 。

第八处：第八句中的them 去掉。

考查定语从句。

he starred in 是省略关系代词的定语从句，被
省略的关系代词已经是in 后面的宾语，故将重复的宾语them 去掉。

第九处：最后一句中which 改为that 。

考查定语从句引导词。

先行词是指人的名词actor ，且关
系代词在从句中作主语，故用who 或that 。

第十处：confident 改为confidence 。

考查名词。

介词with 后应用名词，故将confident 改为confidence 。

Passage3
Last summer I did some fruit-picking. It
pretty hard work. I had to start 7 a.m. and
pick for a good eight . But it was cheerful that we had great fun. Some of
had guitars, so in the evenings we had barbecues and played a bit of
music together. I only got about
$80 a week, but at the least they gave me all my meals, and the food was not that
. Basic accommodation was also supplying supplied
. Still, I’m afraid I won’t be going fruit -picking this summer,
because I’ve got a temporary job in town pays better.
第一处：is 改为was 考查时态。

句意：去年暑假，我挑选水果，那时相当难的工作，所以用一般过去时。

第二处：in 改为at 考查介词。

具体的时间点前用介词at 。

第三处：hour 改为hours 考查名词单复数。

句意：整8个小时，此处表示复数。

第四处：such 改为so 考查固定搭配。

so+形容词+that...＂如此……以致与……＂。

第五处：we 改为us 考查代词。

介词后跟代词的宾格。

句意：我们中的一些人有吉他。

第六处：a bit 和 music 之间增加of 考查介词短语。

a bit of.... ＂一点……＂。

第七处：the 去掉考查冠词。

at least ＂至少……＂ 固定搭配。

第八处：awfully 改为awful 考查副词。

句意：食物不是那么的糟糕。

此处做表语故用形容词。

第九处：supplying 改为supplied 考查动词的被动。

句意：剧本的食宿被提供。

此处主语和动
词之间是被动关系。

第十处：what 改为that/which 考查定语从句。

句意：在城镇里我已经得到了一个薪酬不错的
临时工作。

此处that/which 引导定语从句。

Passage4
Last Sunday, I wanted very much to see a film together with my brother after supper. On
way to the cinema, we to meet an American named Peter. He lost his way,
worried. When he told us that he wasn ’t able to find the hotel, we decided to
take him there. Along the way we told of Peter the great changes that had been taken place in our country in the last few years. Peter also told us a lot of things about America.
Although we missed interesting film, we felt very happy. We not only helped Peter out of
trouble also learnt something him.
第一处：on my way 改为 on our/the way 考查代词。

句意：在我们到电影院的路上，我们遇见
了一位叫Peter 的美国人。

第二处：happen 改为happened 考查动词时态。

文章是发生在过去，所以此处用一般过去时。

第三处：looked 改为looking 考查非谓语动词。

句意：他迷路了，看起来很担心。

此处现在分词做状语。

第四处：decided take 改为 decided to take 考查动词搭配。

句意：我们决定带他到哪，decide to
do sth ＂决定做某事＂。

第五处：删除told 后的 of 考查动词短语。

句意：一路上我告诉他，在过去的很多年里我们的
国家发生了很大的变化。

第六处：删除 taken place 前的been 考查动词语态。

take place ＂发生＂不能用于被动语态。

第七处：a interesting film 改为 an interesting film 考查冠词。

interesting 为元音因素开头，故用an 。

第八处：but 去掉或改为yet 考查连词。

although 与but ＂虽然,但是＂不能连用，但although
可以与yet/still 连用。

第九处：and also 改为but also 考查连词短语。

Not only...but also... ＂不但……而且……＂固定搭配。

第十处：by him 改为 from him 考查介词。

句意：我们不仅帮助他拜托掉麻烦而且从他身上学
到很多东西。

learn...from... ＂从……学到＂。

题组二
Passage1
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9.
You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my
memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t
allowing allowed . The real moment began I stood on
the platform with my legs trembling
my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting .
Gradually, I found back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I
heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of
before a big audience
disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!
第一处：make 后加a 。

make a speech 意为＂做一个演讲＂，是固定结构，故加a 。

第二处：to→on 。

fix on 意为＂集中于＂，故将介词to 改为on 。

第三处：去掉more 。

have no choice but 别无选择，故去掉more 。

第四处：allowing→allowed 。

这里是被允许，应用被动语态，故allowing 改为allowed 。

第五处：before→when 。

此处表示＂当我站在讲台上＂，应该用when 引导时间状语从句，故before 改为when 。

第六处：or→and 。

前后为并列关系，此处表示＂而且，和＂，故or 改为and 。

第七处：patien t→patiently 。

修饰谓语动词were waiting 应该用副词，故patient 改为patiently 。

第八处：me→myself 。

find oneself back 意为＂恢复意识＂，故me 改为myself 。

第九处：speak→speaking 。

of 是介词，介词后面动词用-ing 的形式，故speak 改为speaking 。

第十处：had→has 。

根据时间状语Ever since then 可知本句应该用现在完成时，故had 改为has 。

Passage2
Last weekend’s concert, organized and by the students of the Welsh Community
College, was great success. The had been practicing for months for the concert. They were excited that when they heard Gareth Jones was coming to present the prizes. Over 100
young performers a mixture of jazz, classical folk music. One of the highlights
14-year-old Megan Evans, playing traditional Welsh folk songs. The concert ended with a very loud
pop tune and in the hall stood up and danced the music. It was a atmosphere and a wonderful evening.
第一处：performing→performed。

and连接的并列成分作定语修饰前面的concert，perform与concert之间为被动关系，故用过去分词performed。

第二处：was后加a。

本句中的名词success由抽象名词具体化为可数名词＂成功的事＂，此处表示泛指，需要加冠词a。

第三处：student→students。

根据常识可知一场音乐会应该由很多同学一起表演，所以使用可数名词复数形式。

第四处：删除that。

本句中when引导时间状语从句，主句是They were excited，that是多余。

第五处：play→played。

本文讲述的是上周发生的事情，所以使用过去式played。

第六处：or→and。

此处表示并列关系，而且表示所列所有内容，因此用and＂和，又＂。

第七处：were→was。

主语是One of the highlights，为单数名词，谓语动词应用单数形式。

第八处：anyone→everyone。

所有人都站起来随着音乐跳舞，everyone表示＂所有人＂。

第九处：with→to。

dance to the music伴随着音乐跳舞，为常见用法。

第十处：magically→magical。

修饰名词atmosphere应该用形容词magical。

Passage3
Dear Sophia,
I’m Li Hua from Beijing ABC Senior School. I’m happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of
and a TV. You’ll also have yo ur own bathroom. Our school is quite close our home,
we could go to school by bike. noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m you’ll
like the delicious Chinese food there, and talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join in other students in playing ball games
or swimming. There’ll be a lot of .
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make stay
here in Beijing pleasant experience.
Best wishes
Li Hua
第一处：chair是可数名词，和a couple of搭配用复数。

故chair改成chairs。

第二处：be close to为固定搭配，意为＂离……很近＂。

故from改成to。

第三处：我们学校离我们家很近，所以我们可以骑自行车回家。

表示结果用so。

故because改成so。

第四处：表示＂在中午＂用at noon。

故In改成At。

第五处：作be动词的表语用形容词。

故surely改成sure。

第六处：和like并列用原形。

故enjoying改成enjoy。

第七处：join可以直接搭配sb。

故去掉in。

第八处：fun是不可数名词，不能用复数。

故funs改成fun。

第九处：句意：我们会尽我们所能让你在北京逗留期间成为愉快的经历。

故my改成your。

第十处：experience作为＂经历＂的时候是可数名词，表示＂一次愉快的经历＂用不定冠词，pleasant是辅音音素开头的单词。

故pleasant前面加a
Passage4
On Friday, our teacher told us that there would an English corner in front of our
teaching building. I set soon after the last class in the afternoon.
To my joy, the English corner had just been on for a few. I joined them their
talk. At first, I was afraid that my English was so poor and that I couldn’t follow them or
make myself . I was also afraid that might laugh at me. But a smiling
face here an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. Though I to them only in simple English that day, I believe in future I will make a greater progress.
【语篇解读】本文是记叙文，讲述了作者参加英语角活动的过程和感受。

第一处：there would be···将要有……。

故此题应加be。

第二处：set out/off是固定短语，意为＂出发＂。

第三处：a few应修饰可数名词复数。

故此题应用minutes。

第四处：join sb. in sth.固定短语，意为＂参加＂。

第五处：此处应用形容词。

limited有限的。

第六处：make myself understood是固定搭配，意为＂使别人听懂我的话＂。

第七处：肯定句应用someone，否定句及疑问句中用anyone。

第八处：肯定句表示并列中用and，否定句及疑问句中用or。

第九处：时间状语是＂that day＂，应用一般过去时。

第十处：progress是不可数名词，前面不能用a。