浙江新高考概要写作
浙江新高考--概要写作-同义替换
Summary Writing常见的同义替换：1. 动词(词组)：absorb->assimilate 吸收agree partly->agree with reserve 有保留地赞同arouse->ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate 引起；鼓励change->alter 改变consider->take into account 考虑devote to->dedicate to 把……奉献于；专注于emphasize->accentuate 强调expect->anticipate 期望；预期explain->interpret/illustrate 解释；说明get into chaos->with chaos ensuing 陷入混乱join->participate 参加；参与lead to->contribute to/ conduce to/result in 导致；产生……结果limit->stress/hinder/hamper 限制阻止；阻碍operate->manipulate 操作；操纵provide->lend->offer 提供；给予publicize->propagandize 宣传；公布sway->vacillate 影响；摇摆，使摇摆think->contemplate/muse/meditate/retrospect 思考；考虑；想起thrive->palmy(a.)/flourishing(v./a.)/prosperity(n.)undermine->debilitate 破坏；使衰弱，衰竭use->employ/utilize 使用；利用want->intend to/tend to/be inclined to 希望；倾向于want to->desire 想要2. 形容词/副词：first->primarily 首先(ad.)hardly->merely->barely 几乎不(ad.)hurt->vulnerable 受伤；易受攻击inevitable-indispensable 必然；不可缺少in fact->actually/virtually 事实上；实际上(ad.)key->crucial/vital/consequential 关键；重要large->miraculous/marvelous 大；不可思议 (表程度)maybe->probably 也许；大概(ad.)more and more->increasing/growing 越来越多obvious->conspicuous 明显；显著old->ancient 老；古老proper->apposite 适当；合适persuasive->thorough/sound/specific/convincing 有说服力true->accurate 正确；准确vague->unwarranted/oversimplified 模糊well-known->outstanding 著名more often than not = oftenHe more often than not comes here.3. 名词(词组)：bias->prejudice/discriminate 偏见；歧视big city->metropolis 大都市chance->alternative 机会；选择character->trait/individuality/personality 品质；特性；个性child->juvenile 孩子；青少年clash->conflict/collision冲突custom->convention/tradition 传统；习俗delegate->representative 代表detail->specific 细节lawmaking->legislation 立法offspring->descendant 后代；子孙value->merit 价值附：1. purchasing power of incomesMaximize their incomes = increase the purchasing power of incomes2.property = real estate3.precision = accuracy4. Thinking ability = critical thinking =creative= innovation5. reasoning = logical thought =thought6. popular culture= common culture7. cultural power= assimilating power10. judge = Justice （必考含义）“法官”11. apprehension （必考含义） = worryapprehensiveability 理解能力12. mind = people= individual13. faith=confidence 信心14. drug= medicine15. dismiss 斥责= rebuke=criticize16. tap 开发 tap the market = explore the market = expand the market18. entail =make= cause19. nature；nurture/ born； made /inherited；acquired/（先天和后天）innate cognitive/intuitive made/born20. attribute= character=trait=merit=feature=virtue 特点；特质21. complementary=auxiliary22. suits = enable = entail（This job entails a lot of hard work.）24. mechanical = unchangedmechanical learningDynamic=changeable=variable；varyModify=change25.distinction= fame26. implication； connotation； suggestion； reference；carry important implications for（短语动词）27. accumulation = expansion = augmentation28.literally = actually=absolutely29. initiatives=measuresInitiatives =intentionInitiative =activeInitiative=primitive=beginning30.endeavors=efforts31.Doubt= deny= don‘t believe33. 经济下滑，衰退slowing economy/softening economy/stagnant economy/economic recession/economic decline/economic stagnation （stagnant）/depression/slowdown34.symptoms =negative example35.frames = body36.grasp = understanding37.reshape= remold38.entitle :we are entitled to some privileges./Some privileges are given to us ./Some privileges are conferred on us.4. 其他：although->albeit/notwithstanding 尽管(conj.)because->in that->since->seeing 因为(conj.)but->nonetheless/nevertheless 然而；但是(conj.)through->in term of/via 通过(prep.)to sum->to summarize/in conclusion 总之；最后表示“地位”：status, rank表示“偏见”：bias, prejudice, discrimination, inequality表示“组成”同义表达：constitute, be made from/of, include, consist of表示“导致”：result in, cause, lead to表示“发行”：issue, release, distribute, launch表示“授予”：grant, award表示“结果”：result, consequent, outcome, turn out to表示“交易”：deal, trade, exchange, transaction表示“能力”：ability, capability, potential, power表示“结束”：fulfill, finish, accomplish, carryout, achieve, complete表示“语言”：verbally, language, words, lingual表示“精确”：accuracy, precision表示“以前”：previous, former, latter, prior to表示“加强，促进”：promote, facilitate, enhance, reinforce表示“前景，未来”：prospect, future, expectation, outlook表示“顾客”：customer, client, consumer, guest表示“暂停、延期”：suspend, phase back, put off, stop, postpone, delayed表示“信息”：information, message, data, figure, statistics表示“公司”：enterprise, firm, company, corporation表示“故意”：deliberately, intentionally, purposely, on/in purpose表示“冷漠”：indifferent, neutral, carefree, detached(超然 )表示“抱怨”：complain, moan, groan表示“吸引”：appeal, attract, fascinate, tempt, absorb表示“赶上”：catch up with, keep up with表示“对手”：rival, equal, comparative, competitor, opponent, adversary, enemy 表示“谨慎”：prudent, cautious表示“有利”：be beneficial to, be useful toSkills:同义替换法/词性转换法/语态改变法/句式转换法/压缩长句法分析：Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China's Jiangsu Province, complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout.Chen's complaint immediately spread on China's social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.Similar cases of fraudulent pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.Your Answer:_______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin and faced aheavy fine.____________________________________________________________________________.2.Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were beaten and threatened bythe restaurant staff. Chen's complaint immediately spread on China's social media. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.3.The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government departments wouldalso be investigated and punished._______________________________________________________________________________4.Similar cases have also been reported elsewhere and authorities say that theseillegal actions will be severely punished._____________________________________________________________________________Summary Writing常见的同义替换：1. 动词(词组)：absorb->assimilate 吸收agree partly->agree with reserve 有保留地赞同arouse->ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate 引起；鼓励change->alter 改变consider->take into account 考虑devote to->dedicate to 把……奉献于；专注于emphasize->accentuate 强调expect->anticipate 期望；预期explain->interpret/illustrate 解释；说明get into chaos->with chaos ensuing 陷入混乱join->participate 参加；参与lead to->contribute to/ conduce to/result in 导致；产生……结果limit->stress/hinder/hamper 限制阻止；阻碍operate->manipulate 操作；操纵provide->lend->offer 提供；给予publicize->propagandize 宣传；公布sway->vacillate 影响；摇摆，使摇摆think->contemplate/muse/meditate/retrospect 思考；考虑；想起thrive->palmy(a.)/flourishing(v./a.)/prosperity(n.)undermine->sap/enervate/debilitate 破坏；使衰弱，衰竭use->employ/utilize 使用；利用want->intend to/tend to/be inclined to 希望；倾向于want to->desire 想要2. 形容词/副词：first->primarily 首先(ad.)hardly->merely->barely 几乎不(ad.)hurt->vulnerable 受伤；易受攻击inevitable-indispensable 必然；不可缺少in fact->actually/virtually 事实上；实际上(ad.)key->crucial/vital/consequential 关键；重要large->miraculous/marvelous 大；不可思议 (表程度)maybe->probably 也许；大概(ad.)more and more->increasing/growing 越来越多obvious->conspicuous 明显；显著old->ancient 老；古老proper->apposite 适当；合适persuasive->thorough/sound/specific/convincing 有说服力true->accurate 正确；准确vague->unwarranted/oversimplified 模糊well-known->outstanding 著名more often than not = oftenHe more often than not comes here.3. 名词(词组)：bias->prejudice/discriminate 偏见；歧视big city->metropolis 大都市chance->alternative 机会；选择character->trait/individuality/personality 品质；特性；个性child->juvenile 孩子；青少年clash->conflict/collision冲突custom->convention/tradition 传统；习俗delegate->representative 代表detail->specific 细节lawmaking->legislation 立法offspring->descendant 后代；子孙value->merit 价值附：1. purchasing power of incomesMaximize their incomes = increase the purchasing power of incomes4.property = real estate5.precision = accuracy4. Thinking ability = critical thinking =creative= innovation5. reasoning = logical thought =thought6. popular culture= common culture7. cultural power= assimilating power10. judge = Justice （必考含义）“法官”11. apprehension （必考含义） = worryapprehensiveability 理解能力12. mind = people= individual13. faith=confidence 信心14. drug= medicine15. dismiss 斥责= rebuke=criticize16. tap 开发 tap the market = explore the market = expand the market18. entail =make= cause19. nature；nurture/ born； made /inherited；acquired/（先天和后天）innate cognitive/intuitive made/born20. attribute= character=trait=merit=feature=virtue 特点；特质21. complementary=auxiliary22. suits = enable = entail（This job entails a lot of hard work.）24. mechanical = unchangedmechanical learningDynamic=changeable=variable；varyModify=change26.distinction= fame26. implication； connotation； suggestion； reference；carry important implications for（短语动词）27. accumulation = expansion = augmentation28.literally = actually=absolutely29. initiatives=measuresInitiatives =intentionInitiative =activeInitiative=primitive=beginning30.endeavors=efforts31.Doubt= deny= don‘t believe33. 经济下滑，衰退slowing economy/softening economy/stagnant economy/economic recession/economic decline/economic stagnation （stagnant）/depression/slowdown34.symptoms =negative example35.frames = body36.grasp = understanding37.reshape= remold38.entitle :we are entitled to some privileges./Some privileges are given to us ./Some privileges are conferred on us.4. 其他：although->albeit/notwithstanding 尽管(conj.)because->in that->since->seeing 因为(conj.)but->nonetheless/nevertheless 然而；但是(conj.)through->in term of/via 通过(prep.)to sum->to summarize/in conclusion 总之；最后表示“地位”：status, rank表示“偏见”：bias, prejudice, discrimination, inequality表示“组成”同义表达：constitute, be made from/of, include, consist of表示“导致”：result in, cause, lead to表示“发行”：issue, release, distribute, launch表示“授予”：grant, award表示“结果”：result, consequent, outcome, turn out to表示“交易”：deal, trade, exchange, transaction表示“能力”：ability, capability, potential, power表示“结束”：fulfill, finish, accomplish, carryout, achieve, complete表示“语言”：verbally, language, words, lingual表示“精确”：accuracy, precision表示“以前”：previous, former, latter, prior to表示“加强，促进”：promote, facilitate, enhance, reinforce表示“前景，未来”：prospect, future, expectation, outlook表示“顾客”：customer, client, consumer, guest表示“暂停、延期”：suspend, phase back, put off, stop, postpone, delayed表示“信息”：information, message, data, figure, statistics表示“公司”：enterprise, firm, company, corporation表示“故意”：deliberately, intentionally, purposely, on/in purpose表示“冷漠”：indifferent, neutral, carefree, detached(超然 )表示“抱怨”：complain, moan, groan表示“吸引”：appeal, attract, fascinate, tempt, absorb表示“赶上”：catch up with, keep up with表示“对手”：rival, equal, comparative, competitor, opponent, adversary, enemy 表示“谨慎”：prudent, cautious表示“有利”：be beneficial to, be useful toSkills:同义替换法/词性转换法/语态改变法/句式转换法/压缩长句法分析：Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China's Jiangsu Province, complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout.Chen's complaint immediately spread on China's social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.Similar cases of fraudulent pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.练习：1.Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin and faced a heavy fine.lately/not long ago, require/command close down3.Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were beaten and threatened bythe restaurant staff. Chen's complaint immediately spread on China's social media. violent treatment expose… to the public; Chen's complaint that …spread…Possible answer: A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and theviolent treatment of the restaurant to the public.3.The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government departments wouldalso be investigated and punished.receive as well as/ together with/along withThe restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment.4.Similar cases have also been reported elsewhere and authorities say that theseillegal actions will be severely punished.happened/ took place governmentwill be seriously punished/will receive serious/ severe punishmentSimilar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to fightthem.one possible version:Lately, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine,after a customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violenttreatment of the restaurant to the public. Ultimately, after investigation, the restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment. In fact, similar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to fight them.精品文档。
最新浙江新高考概要写作
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• Bad news sells. If it bleeds, it leads. No news is good news, and good news is no news. Those are the classic rules for the evening broadcasts and the morning papers. But now that information is being spread and monitored (监控) in different ways, researchers are discovering new rules. By tracking people's e-mails and online posts, scientists have found that good news can spread faster and farther than disasters and sob stories.
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浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作
浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作一、浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.One possible version：People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. (要点 4)1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have different attitudes towards dirt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on the skin. 范文中的要点1“People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.”概括非常精炼。
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浙江高考英语写作概要写作
最新浙江高考英语写作概要写作1.题型介绍◆选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。
◆评分参考（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；【（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。
注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，得分相应比较高。
相反，如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象，得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。
2.考查能力概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达二者的有机结合体。
简言之就是简要概括所给文章中心大意。
要求读者把文章的具体信息用具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而非抄袭文章原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。
这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。
3.写作步骤（1）通读全文。
明确文章类型，主题，结构。
记叙文：5W+1H&议论文：观点、论点、论据说明文：说明对象，说明方式（2）要点获取(4-5点)。
寻找主题句；关键词；提问题。
（3）要点转述。
同义替换；语态转换；词性改变；句子重构（4）要点衔接。
过渡型词句，逻辑连接词。
Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.~I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items，I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman，watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadn’t been inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience andkindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employee’s kindness and patience and how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her，we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________…【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1)谁做了什么？(2)结果如何？如果是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。
浙江新高考作文概要写作summarywriting
Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.
2. Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were
beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff. Chen’s complaint
immediately spread on China’s social media.
received 3. The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government
departments would also be investigated and punished.
tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.
Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.
浙江高考英语概要写作真题汇总及评分标准(附参考范文)
1.概要写作真题阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
(2019年6月浙江卷) Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they’re building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire a nd, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents’ praise has put them.Still, don’t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise ca n be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he’s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate (相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.参考答案One possible version:Prais ing can build up children’s confident, while too much praise may have opposite effects on children. (要点1) Besides, less praise also does harm to kids’ development. (要点2) To gain the best result, our praise should be sincere and focus on the process instead of the end product. (要点3) In a word, praise should be in line with facts and match the children’s efforts. (要点4)(2018年11月浙江卷) It’s a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus (校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one.There’s no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that won’t b e as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!If campus visits aren’t going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you’d like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don’t like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn’t know unless you actually visit.Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. It’s a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顾问), and it won’t cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at . While visiting an o nline college fair can’t take the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you’d like to attend.参考答案One possible version:It is a wise choice for you to pay a visit to your desired colleges personally before applying. (要点1) In order to avoid being regretful, you should at least visit the college you decided to attend in advance. (要点2) For students who are short of money and time, it will be helpful to search the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive where you can get the necessary information. (要点3)(考试说明样题) Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.参考答案One possible version1:People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点1) For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要点2) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. (要点4)参考答案One possible version2:浙江省英语教研员葛炳芳老师在关于新高考读后续写和概要写作的指导性讲座中，分享了自己写的样题的概要范文：Attitudes towards dirt have been changing over time. In the 16th century, people believed that dirt on the skin helped protect against disease. Since the 18th century, however, people have developed the belief that cleaning away dirt can prevent disease. Today, although attitudes to dirt still differ sharply, more and more people choose to believe that playing in the dirt can help build up a strong immune. (60 words)对照上述评分原则，可以发现此范文：（1）精确地表达了文本所有4个要点，并且对文本的内容进行了归纳、提炼和整合；（2）准确地使用了相应的语法结构和词汇，例如在表达“持有某种观点”这一意思的时候，选用了三个不同的表达方法“believe”，“develop the belief”，“choose to believe”，避免了重复；（3）上下文之间用了恰当的连接词“however”，“although”等，使行文紧凑浑然一体；（4）对文中的要点运用语义转换，完全使用自己的语言来表达；例如要点1用Attitudes towards dirt have been changing代替原文第一段的第二句话there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt；要点2用protect against disease 代替block out against；要点3中用prevent disease代替is good for health；要点4用today代替nowadays，用sharply 代替hugely，用more and more people choose to believe 代替gaining some ground；（5）全文60词，非常符合词数要求。
浙江新高考之概要写作summarywriting省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件
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What is a summary?
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Similar cases of fraudulent (欺骗的) pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp (虾) in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal
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Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.
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People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点1)
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In Britain and America people were feeling miserable because of the bad economic situation. Charlie understood their problems. His character “the little tramp” was poor and homeless, but everybody loved him for his kind heart and the way he dealt with his difficult situation. Charlie Chaplin made people laugh at some of these terrible situations like being without food or money. He wrote and directed his own films and received an Oscar for his outstanding work. (76 words)
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记叙文写作方法—串联要素法
记叙文的概要，一般包括记叙文的六个要素
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第二档 …… (6-10) 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第一档 ……
(1-5) 多个句子抄自原文
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1. (1) He was very brave in battle. (2) He was in financial difficulties. 2.Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, once visited by
第四档 (16-20)
理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文
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理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
事，结果如何是应当包括的。因此，要写好概要，