短文改错十大思路(结合高考试题)

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高考英语短文改错技巧汇总(高考精品资料)

高考英语短文改错技巧汇总一、解题思路（三步解题法）：第一步、快速浏览全文，把握文章的主要时态、人称及文章的主旨大意，顺便标记自己一眼就能看出的错误。

第二步、细读文章的每一句话。

一般要结合文章的前后句以及出题规律来做题。

第三步、代入已经修改完成的答案通读全文，看其是否通顺。

必有的三处改错：时态、增加、删除二、出题规律以及破解关键：1.名词：（1）主要考察能力：单复数混用。

（2）名词形变规则：（3）常见的不可数名词（4）句式规则名词复数：（1）一般情况+s brothers ；schools（2）以s,x,ch,sh,结尾的词+es buses; watches; dishes（3）以辅音＋y结尾的词，去y加+ies ladies; countries，stories; families; babies（4）以o 结尾的词+es heroes; mosquitoes;tomatoes；negroes; potatoes;(kilos;pianos;photos) （5）部分以f或fe结尾的词, 把变f为v再加es：life; wife; knife; half; leaf; wolf; thief; shelf; self.(直接加s：roof, proof, belief, chief)注意：不规则名词单复数变化:（1）改变字母：man -men, woman -women, Policeman-policemen, chairman-chairmen, Englishman-Englishmen; businessman-businessmen；(German- Germans)（2）特殊：child --children, ox –oxen；foot --feet, tooth --teeth, goose --geese, mouse –mice, phenomenon--phenomena, analysis--analyses, basis-bases, medium-media, bacterium-bacteria （3）姓氏后加s并带冠词，夫妇俩:the Greens ；the Chengs（4）单复数同形:sheep, deer, fish, means, Chinese, Japanese, Swiss（瑞士人）；works(工厂) ,youth。

短文改错的设题思路和解题技巧

短文改错的设题思路和解题技巧（第5讲）一、短文改错的设题思路：多词：冠词、介词、连词、助动词、语义重复或行文逻辑缺词：冠词、介词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词错词：主要出现在名词、代词、冠词、介词、动词、连词、助动词、非谓语动词、主谓一致等方面。

二、解题技巧：1．通读全文，定位时态和人称，并留意简单错误。

2．细读每一行（以句子为单位）遵循以下口诀（limerick）：动词形，名词数；还要注意形和副；代词格细领悟；固定词组须记住；非谓语请关注；冠词连词常光顾。

1）多词：冠词、介词、连词、助动词、语义重复或行文逻辑Errors of meaning repetitionmore better return back repeat again improve betterflee away enter into blue colour glare angrilystop down raise up sink down unpack openserve for the people follow after him marry with him make him as our monitor多词错误1. (福建)so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun.__________2. (全国)They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the Morning. __________3. (山东) I‟m glad to learn that you‟ve been settled down in Boston.__________4. (四川) We hung a sign on the front door that was read: "We're having dinner. Come back later." __________5. (河南) For example, you can make with some new friends on the Internet.__________2）．缺词：冠词、介词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词1．(山东)I wonder if you‟ll free then so we could chat about the good old days. __________2.（浙江）I‟m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. __________3. (辽宁) Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face. ___________4. (全国)Each these lines stands for a trouble in my life.___________5. (重庆)The news spread all over the town the local football team had won the league . ___________常见的错词类型：１、名词[ 考点剖析]名词错误一般包括以下几方面可数名词与不可数名词的混用可数名词的单数复数误用用于固定词组中名词的误用同义词(synonym)或反义词(antonym)的混用名词1. (全国) She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success.___________２.(全国) We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters.___________３.(全国) We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV . ___________４.(全国)On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. ___________ 5. (浙江) Without enough knowledges, you can never learn well.___________常见的错词类型: ２、代词[考点剖析]代词错误一般包括以下几方面代词的单数、复数错误代词指代的人或物前后不一致的错误“it” 的不当使用(包括用于从句中或作形式主语或宾语)不定代词(indefinite pronoun)或反身代词(reflexive pronoun)的误用常见的错词类型: ３、介词[考点剖析]动词固定搭配、习惯用法中介词的误用介词短语、习惯用法中介词的误用介词1. (辽宁)When a young man starts to earn his own living ,he can no longer expect others to pay off his food . __________2. (陕西)In some libraries you may borrow as many books as you need, but in others you are limited in a certain number of books. __________3. (山东)It was very nice to hear from you for such a long time. __________4. (安徽) I… m going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joi ns the Navy. __________常见的错词类型: 4、动词[考点剖析]动词错误一般包括以下几个方面短文中时态的使用前后不一致第三人称单数形式错用主动语态和被动语态的混用动词1．(湖北) Growing Up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.__________2. (全国) We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel before. __________3. (福建) Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. __________ 常见的错词类型: ５、形容词/ 副词[考点剖析]形容词/ 副词错误一般包括以下几个方面形容词和副词相互混用as… as 间不用原级(positive degree)原级、比较级(comparative degree)和最高级(superlative degree)的误用比较级和最高级修饰语(modifier)的误用形容词和副词1. (全国)Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. ___________2. (福建)It is such a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. ___________3. (山东) And I wonder if you‟ll be free then so we could chat about the good older days. ___________4. (辽宁) They fell noisily to the floor seconds late, spreading its contents on the carpet. ___________5. (浙江) I was so encouraged that I ran more faster and faster till I caught up with all the other runners. ___________常见的错词类型: 6、连词及关系词(relatives)[考点剖析]连词及关系词的错误一般包括以下几个方面并列连词but ,and ,or, so 等词的混用并列连词（coordinate conjunction）和从属连词(subordinate conjunction)的混用平行结构(parallel strucure)方面的错误定语从句中关系代词和关系副词的误用连词及关系词1．(安徽) Keep the books for several weeks so as you can have enough time to finish it.___________2. (福建) Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. ___________3. (浙江) At first, I could not run very fast and fell behind. So I didn‟t lose heart and kept running.___________4. (全国) When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. ___________5. (安徽) Most public libraries also have a reading-room, that you can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers…___________常见的错词类型: 7、非谓语动词[考点剖析]非谓语动词的错误一般包括以下几个方面谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用主语、宾语不是非谓语动词并列结构中非谓语动词的误用.现在分词和过去分词的误用非谓语动词1. (全国)I was often a little tired after a day…s work and watch TV demands very little effort. ___________2. (辽宁) Three plates were already on the table when the man closest to me pointing to one plate and asked me the name of the fish on it. ___________3. (四川) suppertime was always being interrupted by neighborhood children ring the bell. ___________4. (天津) I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.___________5. (重庆) After autumn arrives，the city looks like an old man with leaves fallen from the trees. ___________常见的错词类型: 8、一致问题(agreement)[考点剖析]一致问题一般包括以下几个方面：主谓一致、并列一致、时态一致、代词的性和数一致、词性一致、逻辑一致、比较一致一致1. (全国)I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. ____________2. (安徽)And she is the only one of the experts that have been chosen to go abroad. ____________3. (四川)He looked up at us and said, “I just want to know what the sign say.”____________4. (湖北) I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. ____________小结：解题技巧1、通读短文掌握大意2、细读全文逐行找错3、复读全文验证答案4、正确使用批改符号, \ , , _____1My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people. For example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place where I couldn't find. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if something he did made people angrily .For instance，on one night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with housework，Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.2One day I told that Mr Wang，our math teacher，was ill. I was worried about him and went to see him after the school When I enter his room，he struggled up to welcome me .I helped him lay down again .Mr Wang looked pale. I asked about his troubles .He said he was having a bad cold. After take some medicine he was getting better .He asked me that we liked the teacher who took place. When he heard everything was all right，I could see he was pleasing. Finally，I told him don't to worry about the work and have a good rest.3When asking what I was going to be in the future，I said my dream was to be a doctor.Li Hong，one of my friend，asked me why.Then I told her my story.I was very weak or often fell ill when I was a little child.Once I was terrible ill and got a high fever.I was in critical condition and I could die off at any point.My parents sent me to the hospital immediately，there the doctors did all they could save me.From then on I decide to be a doctor when I grow up.It is known to all，it's not easy to be a doctor.But I'll study hard and try to make my dream into reality.4As we all known，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport，bring great convenience to our life.Besides，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.What can we solve these problems？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles are a good solution.For one thing，bicycles didn't need any petrol and they are energysaving.For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because of they won't give off waste gases.Therefore，riding bicycles is a good way for we to exercise and it is of great benefit to our health.So let's take the responsibility build up a low carbon city by riding bicycle.5Dear Tony，Thank you for your letter.To tell you the true，I've thought a lot about whether you should buy a laptop computer help you with your study.In my opinion，you'd better not.For one reason，it's very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it，such as playing computer games，see movies，which will be a waste of time.For other reason，buying a laptop computer don't mean you can study well.If you want to make a progress，you need to put your heart into your study but work hard.Whether you had a computer or not is not the most important.Do you agree to me？Looking forward to your reply!Yours，。

高考改错十大思路

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高三英语短文改错十大思路(20200724153807)

bbin 咱们的同胞，为什么用钱买不来尊重，这是个值得深思的问题。而且，如果花钱之后人家也不尊重你，还需不需要再用钱去砸人家，这也是个需要深思的问题。
在印度的中国劳工，十几个人住一间房子，生活条件很差；因为长期加班，每个人的脸色看上去都那么不健康；很多人出门也不换衣服，还是挂满油漆的工作服。当一些人以这种状态出现在印度人面前，就算他们的同事越是拼命打赏，人家就越怀疑。
印度人看上去很喜欢黑夜。午夜的街道，稀疏的灯光，不妨碍人们遛弯、嬉闹。守更的，看门的，也是精神抖擞。一排十几米高的脚手架，是用弊旧的店铺紧挨着它，看上去一点儿也不怕倒排，无所畏惧得像革命英雄；胖乎乎的老板坐在那里，等着客人来访。
出了机场，坐上去办事处的车之后，才知道为啥没人主动坐在前排了：如果你心脏不好，或者爱惜生命，还是不要坐在前排的好。公路是窄窄的双车道，道路只有一边有护栏，而且是竹批子做的，歪歪扭扭胡乱绑在一块，司机开车像玩杂耍，方向盘灵活得让人眼花缭乱。上坡、下坡、错车、超车，超正在超车的车，超追不上的车，反正感觉印度司机好像只会加油门，不会踩刹车。而且为了方便飙车，道路上的红绿灯隔得特别远。有时候就感觉对面的车直愣愣地冲过来，然后在心脏还没缓过劲来的时候就扬长而去了。而且所有人都在飙车，货车、客车、公交车、轿车、摩托车，只要前面有车，仿佛不超过去就对不起自己。

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这是一个有阳光的初秋的下午，他披件大衣，在县医院大楼东门台阶上开始讲——蝌蚪娱乐平台
同志们、朋友们、老乡们，我的名字是张贵踵，大家一般叫我老张。
什么？哪个“踵”？噢，是足字旁过来一个重量的“重”，简单地说，就是脚后跟的意思。你问我为什么用这个字当名字？嗨，谁知道！老父亲给起的，当然，起这个名字的时候他还不老，也就刚过二十岁。人们问得多了，我请教父亲。他说，“贵”，你还不理解？就是希望发财、有人抬举、不受穷；“踵”是从汉语成语“踵事增华”来的，意思是继承前人的事业，使它更美好完善，老父亲说是在南梁萧统《文选》所作的序里挑出来的：“盖踵其事而增华，变其本而加厉，物既有之，文亦宜然。”我父亲是教语文的，我父亲的父亲教过语文，我父亲的父亲的父亲也教过语文，大概我父亲也想让我教好语文，让我把他的事业继承好，干得更漂亮吧，你看我后来不也成了教语文的了吗？至于继承没继承好，干得漂亮不漂亮，我说了也不算，得靠大家评价。
1943年端午节我出生在南梁台西马庄子东圪堵，那年是抗战关键时期，日本人在这里烧杀抢掠，傅作义的队伍奋力抵抗，我。我是张家老二。上面有个哥哥，名叫张贵蹬，哪个“蹬”？就是蹬腿蹬脚的“蹬”，老爹说用的是古语“功蹬王府”，我也不知道是什么意思。我下面有个妹妹，名字叫张有莲。

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突然电梯停了下来，也暗了下来。何灵不由自主地拉住他的手，能感觉到她的手心湿湿的。也许是紧张，也许是害怕，也许还有期待。他听见她呢喃一样的声音：“我可能喜
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时间好像在那一刻静止。他依着她如兰的气息，用手轻抚了她的脸。何灵一下钻进他的怀里，把头深深地埋在他的胸前。看不清彼此的表情，只能感觉到彼此的心跳声。她嗅着他身上淡淡的烟草味，感觉好好。在漆黑的电梯里，借着对方眼睛里的火苗照亮彼此激动的脸。林丰最终还是没能忍住，低下头去寻她的唇——温软的、甜甜的、清香的。他近乎有点疯狂地索吻，她有点吃力，却又极其努力地迎合着。她哭了又笑了，林丰胸前的衣服湿了一片。
突然电梯亮了，何灵用手挡了下眼，一下适应不了这光亮，她的脸已是红彤彤的。许是流过泪了，眼睛愈发黑亮起来。林丰被这光亮楼，林丰给她开了电梯，示意她先下，他要再下一层，到地下停车场取车。
林丰急急地回家，异于往日的从容随意。一到家还没脱下鞋和外套，八岁的儿子，就奔过来，扑向他的怀抱。“爸爸，妈妈今天睡得好早哟，也不弄饭宝宝吃，我都快饿晕了。”林丰急忙走向卧室，发现妻子侧身躺着，头朝床内。他唤了声，没应。伸手摸了下妻的头，吓了他一跳，好烫。

高三英语短文改错十大思路(20200724153807)

一棵树，傲然挺立了几十年，突然间竟残废了。这是一棵老桐树，树干很粗壮，树冠伸展开来遮天蔽日，云一样罩在我们家属院的上空。多年来，这棵树一直立在我的卧室前，一年四季展示着它的美，给我带来心灵上的宁静。春风走过这座小城的时候，老桐树看见城外的草绿了、广场上的花开了，也迫不及待地跃跃欲试，拿出积蓄了一冬的力量，绽开了满树的花朵。一朵朵紫色的喇叭花吹响了春天的续曲，也吹响了老桐树一季的华丽。满树桐花在蓝蓝的天空下摇摇晃晃，散发出浓郁的香气。鸟雀来了，登这枝，瞅那枝，唧唧喳喳；蜜蜂来了，钻这朵，吮那朵，嘤嘤嗡嗡；风儿来了，吻着每一朵桐花；细雨来了，涂抹得每一朵花都娇艳欲滴。当夏天来临时，老桐树伸出绿叶，撑起一片蘑菇云似的绿阴，清凉了整个院子。邻居们在树下娱乐、纳凉，尽情享受老桐树的呵护。偶尔，风雨突至，来不及避雨的男女，躲在老桐树硕大的树冠下，任凉风侵袭，听雨水滴答，悠闲惬意。老桐树也因这个季节和这样的天气活出了价值，活出了风采。夏去秋来，老桐树的叶子渐渐变黄，但它生命的秋天同样华美壮观。一片片金黄的桐叶悠然脱离树枝，旋转着、飞舞着，以写意的姿态落入母亲的怀抱，化作春泥，滋养来年的一树丰茂。谁说生命的陨落是谢幕的悲剧，只要放眼未来，顺应规律，何尝不是一种壮美。
树的坚持成就一片片绿荫，丰富着大地与生命，我们坚持一生，应当为世界造就一片芳华与青青色彩，因为我们是不同的，坚持后会是一片不同的场景。若是不能想平原的树一样挺拔，那么就像峭壁上的傲松一样拥抱生命，拥抱命运吧！还有大自然赐予我们的一种坚持的姿态。优游 /

高三英语短文改错十大思路(20200724153807)

如今到了白发覆额，拄杖而行的年龄，出行次数越来越少，但一旦伏案，打开电脑，辽阔重又展现在脑海里，引得我再度游走于高山阔水之间。谁又能说，辽阔的等待，已与老夫无缘？（查干）澳门bbin平台在线
人生之路是一条漫长无际的征途，很远很远，无法到边。有时可能是花香鸟语，春光明媚的林荫小道。有时可能是荆棘密布，坎坷不平。无论怎样，你都只能向前，因为人生没有回头路，遇见荆棘，奋力拨开，路过坎坷，翻山越岭。不走过荆棘，怎么到达前面的坦途，不翻山越岭，怎么能享受平原的风光。走就对了，不停留，不畏惧，迎着风雨，披荆斩棘，风雨兼程去一览险峰的风光无限。有规划的人生叫蓝图，你可以沿着既定的路线，去实现心中的梦。没有规划的人生叫拼图，修修补补也无法拼凑出完美的梦。生活里哪有什么一帆风顺，我们都是一边砥励前行，一边饮泪装欢。真的，没有人喜欢你流泪的眼，他们只喜欢你明媚的脸。知道了生活的苦，尝尽了一路的艰辛，依旧不放弃，走着，走着，也就成了英雄。西北风，不好喝，每天都有人在喝。苦不好吃，每天都必须吃，成年人的世界里，那来什么岁月静好。只不过是埋头苦干，仰头吞咽，甩一袖艰辛的汗，再抹一把脸上的泪水，装着云淡风轻，笑看人间风云。

短文改错十大思路-资料

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高考英语短文改错做题思路与方法训练十附解析

短文改错做题思绪与方法训练十短文改错口诀：修正不过八，一删一添加。

触及各种词，得分人人夸。

一句一句查，次要查语法。

考点心中记，改正按方法。

Sunday FineToday is the Teachers' Day. In the morning, I attend the school celebration,at that several teachers were given medals for have completed 30 years of teaching.Mr. Li, my English teacher, was one of them. After supper my classmate and I went to see Mr. Li. He said that he would devote the rest of her life to the cause of education. He also encouraged us to work hard about our lessons. I was inspired by that he said and made my mind to be a teacher like Mr. Li when I grew up.命题思绪：此短文取材很合适于短文改错，这篇命题中考查的覆盖面比较全，考点分布比较均匀。

答案解析与解题点拨：1. 此处Teachers' Day是“教师节”，其前面不用冠词，所以把the去掉。

2. 本句状语In the morning阐明谓语是普经过去时，所以attend改为attended。

3. 此处是定语从句的引导词，关系代词前有介词时关系代词只能用which指事物，用whom指人。

先行词celebration是事情，所以把that改为which。

4. 此处for是介词，它后面的动词该当用ing方式，所以把have改为having。

短文改错解题思路和检查原则

短文改错解题思路和检查原则高考英语试题中短文改错对考生的要求很高，是对语言知识综合运用能力的考查，检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力，进而考查学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平。

考生在该项上往往失分较多，对该题感到束手无策。

那么怎样找错误就成了解题的关键。

现在分享一下短文改错题型的答题技巧。

短文改错解题思路和检查原则1. 句中各部分的结构是否完整，特别是每个句子要有动词;2. 谓语动词的时态、语态;3. 非谓语动词的用法;4. 名词的单、复数，格的使用是否正确;5. 定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;6. 代词的格和性的使用是否有误;7. 定语从句中关系代词、关系副词是否准确无误;8. 并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。

短文改错解题四原则改动以最少为原则;虚词以添加或删除为原则;实词以改变词形为原则;以保持句子原意为原则。

短文改错解题步骤：通读全文，掌握大意;整句分析，逐行推敲;反复通读，复查验证。

解题注意要点和能力培养1. 核对错项时，若的确有一时难以改出的地方，可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1：1：8”的比例。

即多一词1个，缺词1个，错词8个。

2. 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。

因为短文改错往往覆盖面广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。

3. 核对答题符号是否规范，位置是否准确，看看有无遗漏符号、忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。

短文改错常见错误类型1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致;④缺少动词，特别是be动词;⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。

They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies. (did改为do，错误类型属于①)As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. (visiting改为visited，错误类型属于②)One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. (was改为were，错误类型属于③)There will an important game next month. (will后加be，错误类型属于④)2. 名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。

高三英语短文改错十大思路(20200724153807)

人是复杂的多面性动物，言行心不一，可谓人心如潭不可说。社会上又有显规则与潜规则并存，主流价值观与世俗功利观并存。在这样的大缸里能游刃有余的人确实精明超群。
多数人一生都在基层小单位里熬着，圈子小舞台也不大，还内耗互欧几十年。有的憨干，有的闲转，有的捣乱。是非一堆，鸡毛一地。看不到人生的意义和价值。汇盈平台有些人有想法没办法，有些人有办法没想法。从底层挣脱出去了，视野豁然开朗，站的高自然看得远。人往高处走，也非易事。有人靠提升学历文凭自创机会，有人靠关系裙带提携，有人拿银子开路等。每条路都不简单，但往高处走是大方向。往上看都是屁股，往下看都是笑脸，左右看都是耳目。有志者还是越有艰险越向前。
有人清高，我喜乐当草民。草丛里存着，有你不多没你不少，谁也不把你当根葱。如还有能力和学向，別人会防你抢了风头，必会雪藏压制你。待遇也仅够温饱，用绩效考核你，让你知道狼是麻麻的。不同层次有不同的生活，同阶层的人沟通容男，资源共享，互帮互助。可笑的是有人嘴说甘当草民，与世无争，岁月静好。
人生不易，命运也不由自已拿捏。顺其自然，人在做天在看。但人往高处走，追求上进是正能量，奋斗的人生是多彩的。努力拼搏后的失败，也是尽了人事，无怨无悔的坦然释然。

高三英语短文改错十大思路(20200724153807)

夕阳无限好，人约黄昏后。
【日暮星湖水】
这些年。我走南闯北，跋山涉水，赏过南方的青山绿水，品过北方的文化瑰宝。每到一处都言不由衷地一番感慨，九州大地如此秀美，江山如此多娇。在一派豪情赞美之中，我却始终钟情于年少读书时，几载与自己相伴的星湖，那山水相映的幽谷，烟雨迷离的仙境，让我陶然如醉，令我依恋不舍。至今，仍然流连忘返。汇盈平台
星湖，这个挂在仙阁上富有浪漫的名字，让人读之有一种似仙似幻的湖中湖幽美之感。它包括由7座石灰岩山峰组成的七星岩和面积约6平方千米的星湖，有“五湖六岗七岩八洞”之说。神奇的山峰，幽雅的岩洞，澄碧的湖水，珠联璧台，浑然一体。石灰岩溶洞内有自唐以来的摩崖石刻数百方，有较高的历史价值和文化价值。故享有“西湖之水，桂林之山”的美誉。
水山相映林阶静，花吐清氛，柳拂波痕，愁看星湖春水情。
星湖山水，星湖千色，那醉美的仙境，令人赏心悦目。黄昏时分，漫步在幽静的星湖小道上，感受着那阵阵微风，和自己喜欢的人一起穿缀日暮落歌，看霞光丽彩，听一听蝉唱……
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