How I have changed

How I Have Changed?
姓名：陈同学学校：成都市大弯中学分数：71 Things in the world are changes.Not only do animals change,but people also change.We can not think we are good or bad by and large.Because everything has two sides.sometimes we should change,it will be good for us!
My life has changed a lot in the last few days.In the past,I used to have long black hair and I used to be a little heavy.But now I still have long black hair.To my surprise,my weight is different from before.I am thin,but it is a shame to be short I am.The biggest change in my life was I could solve difficult problems in person. Because I used to be afraid of making any decision by myself.I was a little shy in public.Because of these bad habits I have,I made a mistake.Our primary school had a great party to send us to a junior high school.I was invited to sing a song in front of people.While I was standing in front of them,I was so nervous that I can not sing any words.Then I got into my class in a rush.I was so afraid that I can not stop crying.At that time,my teacher walked up to me,she said failure is the mother of success with kindness.Because of those words,I decided to go there again.I sang a song perfectly. Everybody was proud of me.After that,I got over the difficulties to find out confidence.
This is the most important change because I can make decisions bravery and I am very outgoing.I could dare to speak in front of crowds.If you look carefully,you can see it changing in front of your eyes.
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