第二讲 用高级句式增分
外研版高考作文复习提升课件第2步-高级表达增分(用时9周)
understa put up with
nd
make sense of
promote
take into consider
account
enough adequate
rich
abundant
形容词
proper interesting
appropriate important vital/significant
4．用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇 为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避 免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学 到的词汇来代替。 ①So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are sure to achieve success. →So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are bound to achieve success.(2014·山东高考写作)
第四周 不落俗套的亮点词汇
写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原 则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基 本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高 考作文获得高分的亮点之一。
一、使用亮点词汇的 4 种方法 1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达， 会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
名词 动词
普通词汇 chance idea result have
bear
develop
高级词汇 普通词汇 高级词汇
opportunity choice alternative
高考英语层级写作 1写作技巧篇 第2讲用高级句式增分课件(共75张ppt)
内容索引
·层级三 言简意赅的“非谓语” ·层级四 光彩夺目的“定语从句” ·层级五 丰富多样的“名词性从句” ·层级六 画龙点睛的“状语从句” ·层级七 委婉动人的“虚拟语气” ·层级八 重点突出的“强调句” ·层级九 风格独具的“特殊句式”
层级三
言简意赅的“非谓语”
在写作中，如果出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之 间的关系显得松散；而过多地出现复合句会让人读起来费劲。恰当地运用非 谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样、句子活泼，而且 读起来结构紧凑、言简意赅。
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6.___H_a_v_i_n_g_a__tr_i_p__th_e_r_e__ will give you a good understanding of Chinese culture.(北京卷满分作文) 到那里旅行会使你对中国文化有一个很好的了解。
7.____I_n__o_r_d_e_r_t_o_m__a_k_e_o_u__r_s_c_h_o_o_l _li_fe__c_o_lo_r_f_u_l_a_n_d__m_e_a_n_i_n_g_f_u_l____________， our school has decided to organize a sports meeting. 为了使我们的校园生活既丰富多彩又有意义，学校决定组织一场运动会。
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4.不定式：作主语、表语、定语、宾语、宾语补足语和状语等。 i feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard. (2019·天津卷满分作文) 我很荣幸有机会让大家倾听我的声音。 i think it’s a good chance for you to participate in the english spea competition. 我认为参加英语演讲比赛对你来说是一个好机会。
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5.I’d like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude to you for your generou _w_i_t_h_o_u_t _w_h_i_ch__I_w__o_u_ld_n_’_t _m_a_k_e__su_c_h__ra_p_i_d_p_r_o_g_r_e_ss__. (2016·天津卷·书面表达) 我想借此机会表达你对我慷慨帮助的感激之情，没有你的帮助，我不会取得 的进步。
ter on，__w_e_w__e_re__in_v_i_t_ed__to__s_h_a_re__o_u_r _id_e_a_s_a_n_d__e_x_p_e_ri_e_n_c_e_w_i_th___all the studen school.(2016·北京卷·书面表达) 后来，我们被邀请与我们学校的所有学生分享我们的想法和经验。
2.非限制性定语从句 对所修饰的成分做进一步说明，有逗号隔开。其中as，which引导的定语从 范文中屡见不鲜。 I’ve decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wed which will last two hours.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达) 我决定在星期三早上8点于1号楼101室教你唐诗，这将持续两个小时。
英语作文提分高级句式
英语作文提分高级句式当你想要提高英语作文的分数时，使用一些高级句式可以帮助你的文章更加丰富和有深度。
下面是一些可以提高作文分数的高级句式：1. 倒装句 (Inversion):"Not only did she win the competition, but she also set a new record.""Under no circumstances should we ignore the importance of education."2. 强调句 (Emphatic Constructions):"It is democracy that allows for freedom of expression.""Only by working together can we achieve our goals."3. 条件句 (Conditional Sentences):"Were it not for his assistance, we would have failed.""Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact us."4. 虚拟语气 (Subjunctive Mood):"If I were you, I would reconsider my decision.""I suggest that he study harder if he wants to pass the exam."5. 定语从句 (Relative Clauses):"The book, which was written by a renowned author, has become a bestseller.""People who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones."6. 强调句 (Cleft Sentences):"It was the president who initiated the policy change.""It is in times of crisis that true leadership emerges."7. 插入语 (Parenthetical Expressions):"The weather, surprisingly, remained clear throughout the day.""He finished the project, surprisingly, ahead of schedule."8. 借用名言 (Quotations):"As Shakespeare famously said, 'All the world's a stage.'""To quote Einstein, 'Imagination is more important than knowledge.'"9. 比喻 (Metaphors):"Her laughter was music to his ears.""The city was a jungle, teeming with life and activity."10. 修辞问句 (Rhetorical Questions):"Do we really want to live in a world without compassion?""Isn't it time we took action to protect the environment?"以上这些句式可以使你的文章更加生动、流畅，展现出你对语言的熟练运用和深刻思考。
高考英语作文高级句型万能加分句子必背模板
高考英语作文高级句型万能加分句子必背模板高考英语作文中适当利用一些高级的句型会对作文分数有很大的加分效果。
下文中小编给大家整理了高考英语作文高级加分句子，供参考！高考英语作文高级加分句型一、分词作状语分词作状语的用法：当状语从句的主语与主句的主语一样时，可直接省略从句的主语，并把从句的谓语改成分词（主动语态改成现在分词，被动语态改成过去分词），从而构成分词作状语结构。
______________(被这些孩子所感动), I decided to donate（捐）all my money to them.______________(看到爸爸那么努力的工作), I could not help bursting into tears.点评：分词作状语可以用来替代时间、条件、原因等状语从句，让文章显得更加简洁，同时功底更深。
二、副词提前Oddly enough, my most precious memory lies in the days when I was ill in hospital.非常奇怪的是，我最珍贵的回忆发生在我生病住院的那些日子里。
注意事项：用来提前的必须是——副词！___________(显然), one of the best ways to keep healthy is to do sports.___________(最终), every child will leave home to lead his own life as a fully independent adult.点评：如果要选一种最让人心生感触的句型，副词提前的做法即使不是最好，也是之一了。
前置的副词让作者还没说出具体的事件，内心的想法已经呼之欲出。
这正是这种无比简单的语法现象所焕发出的魅力所在。
除了提升情感效果之外，副词提前也是让文章结构清晰的一个非常好的办法。
我们常用的firstly, furthermore, finally等等所谓的“逻辑词”都是属于这一种类型，同学们要时刻想着去用它。
第二讲 用高级句式增分 层级七 委婉动人的“虚拟语气” )
■ 佳句输出 补全句子/同义句转换 1.I suggest that you __p_a_y_a__v_is_i_t _to__th_e__G_r_e_a_t _W_a_l_l__when you’re in Beijing.(2019·北京卷
满分作文) 我建议你在北京时参观长城。 2.I believe that ____if__y_o_u_w__er_e_m__e_，__y_o_u_w__o_u_ld__ make the same chwish 1.__I_c_o_u_l_d_b_e_c_o_m__e_a_d_u_s_t_m_a_n__ (我能成为一名环卫工人) because I wish 2._I__c_o_u_ld__m_a_k_e_o_u_r__ci_t_y_a_m__o_r_e_b_e_a_u_ti_f_u_l _p_la_c_e_t_o_l_i_v_e_in_ (我能把我们的城市变成一个更 美的居住地).If I were a dustman，3.___I_w_o_u_l_d_m__a_k_e_o_u_r_c_i_ty__c_le_a_n_e_r__ (我会让我们的城 市更干净) with no rubbish lying on the street.I would tell others without us dustmen our city 4._w_o_u_l_d_b_e__d_if_fi_c_u_lt_t_o_l_i_v_e_i_n(很难居住). 5._I _w_o_u_l_d_r_a_th_e_r_y_o_u__w_e_r_e_i_n_f_a_v_o_r_o_f_m__y_i_d_e_a (我宁愿你们支持我的想法).
6.(should) do型虚拟语气；应该…… To win the match ， it is strongly suggested that we (should) make full preparation.(2019·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文) 为了赢得比赛，强烈建议我们应做好充分准备。
高考英语复习 写作通关篇 第二讲 用高级句式增分 层级八 重点突出的强调句省公开课一等奖百校联赛赛课
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一、美句输入
4 It is/was not until...that...
It was not until he went through real hardship that he realized the love we have for our families is important. 直到经历了真正苦难，他才意识到我们对家人爱是多么主要。
1．_______I_t_i_s__________ not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good
spirits ____th__a_t _im__p_r_e_ss__u_s____．(·天津卷·书面表示)
不不过你热情，而且团体合作和良好精神状态给我们留下了深刻印象。
3．__________I_s_it__th_e__te__ac_h_e_r_'_s_h_e_lp__t_h_a_t__________ contributes to your success?
是你老师帮助才促进你成功吗？
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4． _____I_t_w_a_s__n_o_t_u_n_t_il_l_a_s_t _te_r_m__t_h_a_t_______ I realized the importance of team work. 直到上个学期我才了解了团体合作主要性。 5． ______I_t_w_a_s__w_h_e_n__w_e__w_e_r_e_r_e_t_u_rn__in_g__h_o_m_e__th__a_t ________ I realized what a good feeling it was to have helped someone in trouble.(·湖南卷·书面表示) 正是在我们回家时候我才意识到帮助他人于危难之时感觉是多么令人愉悦。
2020高考英语新增分方案大一轮复习外研新课改省份专用讲义：写作 第二讲 句式营造亮点14法 含答案
第二讲句式营造亮点14法扮亮句式(一)作文若不劣——学会“越来越”在英语写作中，我们见证了太多的“越”。
你是否会因岁月的流逝，知识的沉淀而对这些迷人的“越”驾轻就熟了呢？先看以下例句：A growing number of students are faced with a bigger and bigger ly, with the College Entrance Examination approaching, they grow more and more nervous and anxious.To their despair, however,the more nervous and anxious they are, the less progress they make.上面语段可译为：越来越多的学生正面临着一个越来越大的问题。
随着高考临近，他们变得越来越紧张、焦躁。
然而，让他们绝望的是，他们越紧张、焦躁，他们取得的进步就越小。
句中出现了三处“越来越……”和一处“越……，就越……”，充分体现出了那些“越……”的无上妙用，让人读后回味无穷。
1．说到“越来越……”，大家的脑海里很快就会浮现出这样的模式：比较级＋比较级。
若修饰名词或是双音节和多音节的形容词或副词，我们常用more and more/less and less＋adj./ad v./n.。
It comes as no surprise that customers are more and more demanding towards products and service.不可否认，顾客对产品和服务质量的要求越来越高。
2．若使用growingly/increasingly来替代more and more，用decreasingly来替代less and less，则更显过人之处。
同样，“越来越多的……”可使用 a growing/an increasing number of ...，“越来越少的……”可使用 a declining/decreasing number of ...。
高考英语写作增分法精彩句子最增分第2讲实用“定语”,先声夺人定语从句在写作中的应用
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(一)利用定语从句句型，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵
1.限制性定语从句(与先行词关系密切，没有逗号与先行词隔开，应正确 使用关系代词和关系副词)
It carries articles which are written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.
它刊登由外国友人写的关于他们祖国的文化的文章。 I will learn from him and be a person who is always ready to help others. 我将向他学习，成为一个乐于帮助别人的人。
Yours， Li Hua
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(二)利用“with＋关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句升级加波浪线的 句子
with whom I exchange a lot about school life, cultures, science, and so on
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第三部分 写作增分法
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专题二 精彩句子 最增分
第2讲 实用“定语”，先声夺人——定语从句在写作中的应用
见学生用书P256
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作文中使用定语从句后，使得文章句式复杂，亮点增多，体现作者的深 厚功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，是作文的增分点，从而“加分”多多
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第二讲用高级句式增分层级三言简意赅的“非谓语”众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。
而恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。
美句输入1．动名词作主语、表语、定语和宾语等。
Therefore，please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)因此，请花些时间简单地看看唐朝的历史。
2．过去分词作表语、宾语、补语和状语等。
I am writing to tell you that I can’t go to the bookstore with you at our appointed time.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ·书面表达)我写信是想告诉你，我不能按我们约好的时间陪你逛书店了。
3．不定式作主语、表语、定语、宾语、宾语补足语和状语等。
All the students are welcome to watch the short film Gro w ing Together to learn more about the development of our school.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ·满分作文)欢迎所有的学生观看短剧Gro w ing Together来更多地了解我校发展史。
4．现在分词作表语、定语、补语和状语等。
Standing in Shandong Province，Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist attraction，with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it.(2017·北京卷·书面表达)泰山矗立在山东境内，长期以来一直是山东省的旅游胜地，有许多与之相关的中国传说。
佳句输出补全句子1．Having__a__trip__there will give you a good understanding of Chinese culture.(2017·北京卷·书面表达)到那里旅行会使你对中国文化有一个很好的了解。
2．A week before Earth Day，a big poster was put up on campus，calling__upon__us__students__to__take__action for a greener earth.(2016·北京卷·书面表达)在“地球日”前的一周，我们学校就贴出大海报，号召我们学生为建立一个更加环保的地球而行动起来。
3．Amazed__at how skilful they were，I was__determined__to be__just__as__good．对他们娴熟的技巧惊讶不已，我决定像他们一样棒。
4．Actually，I have__been__expecting__to__meet__you on Sunday to have a good time.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ·书面表达)实际上，我一直期望能在周日和你见面，一起度过一段美好的时光。
5．Later on，we__were__invited__to__share__our__ideas__and__experience__with all the students of our school.(2016·北京卷·书面表达)后来，我们被邀请与我们学校的所有学生分享我们的想法和经验。
6．With__birds__singing__in__the__tree and everything so green，I feel very delighted and relaxed.(2016·四川卷·书面表达)鸟儿在树上歌唱，满眼绿色，我感到既快乐又放松。
完美文章(建议信)利用非谓语动词，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵Dear Shirley，Glad to receive your e－mail.The problem you mentioned is common among middle school students.Don’t worry about it too much.1.Follow__the__following__advice (遵循以下建议) I give you，and you may 2.get/have__your__problem__settled (使你的问题得到解决)．First of all，believe in yourself.The first thing you must do is 3.to__smile__at__your__classmates (对你的同学微笑)．A smile speaks louder about your wish 4.to__make__friends (交朋友) than any words.Your smile will show that you are friendly to them.Next 5.try__talking__with__a__student (试着和学生交谈) who is as shy as you or who shares the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate，or you can also talk about your hobbies.If anyone is in trouble in life or study，you should be ready to help him or her.6.Having__regained__your__confidence (在恢复你的自信后)，you can make as many friends as possible.Yours，Li Hua层级四光彩夺目的“定语从句”定语从句的正确使用能够比较明显地反映出考生对于语言具有较高的掌握能力，所以建议考生一定要在写作中至少使用一个恰到好处的定语从句。
美句输入1．限制性定语从句与先行词关系密切，没有逗号与先行词隔开，应正确使用关系代词和关系副词。
When summer vacation for us students comes every year，we can do all that we can’t do during our school time.(2016·四川卷·书面表达)每年我们学生放暑假时，我们可以做我们在学校期间不能做的所有事情。
2．非限制性定语从句对所修饰的成分做进一步说明，有逗号隔开。
其中as，which引导的定语从句在高考范文中屡见不鲜。
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, which is one of the best universities in China.(2018·北京卷·满分作文)得知你对中国文化有兴趣，我建议你申请北京大学，它是中国最好的大学之一。
3．“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句关系代词指人用whom，指物用whichMaterial collecting took us a whole week，during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.(2017·北京卷·书面表达)搜集材料花了我们整整一周的时间，在此期间我们采访了老师并拍摄了学校生活的各个方面。
佳句输出补全句子1．I am writing to invite you to pay a visit to a paper－cutting exhibition，where__you__can__have__a__close__look__at__our__traditional__Chinese__cultur e．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)我写信是想请您参观一个剪纸展览，在这里您可以近距离了解我们的中国传统文化。
2．Among the four seasons in a year，summer is my favorite，which__makes__me__free，excited__and__energetic．(2016·四川卷·书面表达)一年四个季节中，夏天是我最喜欢的，它让我自由，兴奋和充满活力。
3．Any student who__is__interested__is__welcome__to__participate．(2016·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)欢迎任何有兴趣的学生参加。
4．How about the last Sunday of June，when__the__examination__is__over and we are free？(2016·全国卷Ⅲ·书面表达)等考试结束后，我们都有时间的话，六月的最后一个周日怎么样？5．I’d like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude to you for your generous help，without__which__I__wouldn’t__make__such__rapid__progress．(2016·天津卷·书面表达)我想借此机会表达你对我慷慨帮助的感激之情，没有你的帮助，我不会取得如此快的进步。
6．There are four seasons in a year，each__of__which has distinctive features.(2016·四川卷·书面表达)一年中有四季，每个季节都有显著的特点。
完美文章(推荐信)利用定语从句句型，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵Dear Mr.Pick，The website 1.that/which__you’ve__recommended__to__me (你向我推荐的) is very beneficial to my English study.It has abundant reading materials 2.that/which__I__need__most (我最需要的)，3.which__greatly__broadens my__horizons (这极大地拓宽了我的视野)．Now I have become more interested in English.Besides，I’ve made many new friends，and with them I exchange a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on.Now I can express myself much better than ever.The reason 4.why__I__have__made__rapid__progress (我取得进步的原因) in English study is because of your kindness and consideration.I owe all my achievements to you.I’m looking forward to more advice from you!Yours，Li Hua层级五丰富多样的“名词性从句”名词性从句是高中阶段重要的语法项目之一，也是写作中常用的高级表达。