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2020年5月上海市虹口区普通高中2020届高三学生学习能力诊断测试(二模)语文试题及答案

2020年5月上海市虹口区普通高中2020届高三学生学习能力诊断测试(二模)语文试题及答案

绝密★启用前上海市虹口区普通高中2020届高三毕业班下学期学生学习能力诊断测试二模)语文试题2020年5月一积累应用10分1.按要求填空。

(5分)(1)一箪食,一瓢饮, __________。

人不堪其忧,回也不改其乐。

(《论语》)(2)______________,凤去台空江自流。

(李白《_________》)(3)王国维认为古今之成大事业、大学问者,必经过三种境界,其中第一境是“昨夜西风凋碧树,_________。

”2.按要求选择(5分)(1)小明克服病情,在考试中取得了比较好的成绩,同学想表示祝贺,以下内容合适的一项是()。

(2分)A.宣父犹能畏后生,丈夫未可轻年少。

B.百岁光阴一梦蝶,重回首往事堪嗟。

C.莫愁前路无知己,天下谁人不识君。

D.看似寻常最奇崛,成如容易却艰辛。

(2)将下列编号的语句依次填入语段空白处,语意连贯的一项是()。

(3分)各政府职能部门横向上相互砍立,______,_______,______,______,形成了一个封闭的金字塔式的结构。

①下一级对上一级层层负责②分别行使不同的管理职能③整个行政系统内部实行垂直领导④纵向上具有明显的权力行使的单向性A.④②①③B.①④②③C.③①②④D.②④③①二阅读70分(一)阅读下文,完成第3—7题。

(16分)①“元典精神”,是指一个民族的“文化元典”所集中体现的原创性精神。

这种典籍因其首创性及度盖面的广阔性、思考的深邃性,而在该民族的历史进程中成为生活的指针。

印度的《吠陀经》,波斯的《古圣经》,柏拉图、亚里斯多德等先哲的论著,犹太及基督教的"六经"《圣经》,伊斯兰教的《可兰经》,都被相关民族视为"元典"。

在中华文化系统中,堪称元典,与之相关的《论语》《孟子》《老子》等典籍也具有"元典"性质。

②文化元是特定时代、实地域的产物、当以历史文献视之,"六经皆史"即此之谓也。

2020年高考二模作文评讲

2020年高考二模作文评讲
集体的记忆(好坏) 苦难是一种财富,记忆也是一种财富。和平年代太久了,人类或许已经感觉 不到灾难与痛苦,它所带给这个民族的,是太多太多的伤痕。苦难的记忆也许只 在课本里,在银幕上出现,但我们民族的伟大复兴,就是从那些刻骨铭心的记忆 里走出来的,也正是有了这些苦难的记忆,才让我们的祖国奋发图强,直到今天 的繁荣和强大。
记忆有美好的,也有痛苦的。
观点提炼:
不必沉浸在过去的辉煌记忆中沾 沾自喜。须知山外有山,人外有 人。
不必沉溺于过去的痛苦记忆中不 能自拔,耿耿于怀,郁郁寡欢, 否则人生就失去了乐趣。
观点提炼:
不能只选择美好的记忆,不能逃 避苦难的记忆,因为苦难的记忆 可以给人警醒,避免重蹈覆辙。
人生苦短,要有乐观的心态,要 善于发现真善美,留住美好的记 忆,摈弃痛苦的记忆。
记忆在本真的意义上是人的精神资源、精神财宝,但它往往被某些政治和社会力量当成权力合 法性资源,因此,记忆必然有可能被利用、歪曲或垄断。每当出现改朝换代或异族统治,刷新臣民 记忆的工作就会大张旗鼓地进行。新的神话、新的创世纪、新的福音书和教义将居于民族记忆的核 心。如果出现了骇人听闻的暴行,集体记忆中将留下空白和断裂,某些事件被列入话语禁忌,一段 鲜血淋漓的记忆不翼而飞。有人会对此心安理得,他们懦弱的心灵无法承受记忆的重负,他们只愿 意享受当下。但毕竟有人要捍卫记忆,竭尽全力搜寻被偷窃和藏匿的东西,他们坚信,记忆的遗失 不仅是过去的缺损,而且是未来义记忆泛指大自然的记忆和生命体力活动的记忆,狭义记忆单指大 脑的记忆。根据人类的约定俗成,狭 义记忆简称为记忆。 记忆是在头脑中积累和保存 个体经验的心理过程。 2、记忆作为一种基本的心理过程,是和其他心理活动密切联系着的。在知觉中,人的 过去经验有重要的作用,没有 记忆的参与,人就不能分辨和确认周围的事物。在解决 复杂问题时,由记忆提供的知识经验,起着重大作用。记忆联结着人的心理活动的过去 和现在,是人们在工作、学习和生活的基本机能。学生凭借记忆,才能获得知识 和技 能,不断增长自己的才干;演员凭借记忆,才能准确的表达自己各种感情、语言和动作 ,完成艺术表演。离开了 记忆,个体就什么也学不会,他们的行为只能由本能来决定 。所以,记忆对人类社会的发展也有重要的意义,在一定 意义上也可以说,没有记忆 和学习,就没有我们现在的人类文明。

2020届上海市虹口区高三4月高考练习(二模)语文试卷_(有答案)(精品)

2020届上海市虹口区高三4月高考练习(二模)语文试卷_(有答案)(精品)

虹口区高三二模语文试题一阅读 80分(一)阅读下文,完成第1-6题。

(18分)开放的恐惧①如果说有一种恐惧来自开放,那么我们很容易把它看作是保守分子的反应。

对开放的恐惧显然是极端无自信的虚弱表现,但是,我在这里竭力要表达的恐惧是另外一层含义:即力主开放者在开放来临之后的恐惧,就像一个自由斗士所争取来的自由,反而使他陷于新的困惑与痛苦中。

人是常常为自己招来魔鬼的,关于这点我们从儿童故事里就已知道了。

一个整天关在屋子里的孩子老是想到森林里去采蘑菇,到河里去游泳,后来他偷偷地来到森林与河边,却遭遇了狼和水妖。

结果,这个孩子就回到家,在写着狼的故事和水妖的故事的童话里安全地幻想,他再不愿真的碰见它们了。

②开放的恐惧是一种没有托辞的恐惧。

在封闭的文化环境中,人们可以为自己的无能进行辩解,他可以把一切归咎于外在的禁锢,个人就不承担什么责任了。

但是开放却让这种推托显得滑稽,因为,你的无能只是你的无能所致,除此你没别的理由,你的一切弱点不是暴露无遗了吗?③开放的恐惧是一种参照系太多的恐惧。

在单一的社会中,人们会很方便地找到现成的原则、方式和楷模,在某种强制和规定之下,他们的个人能动几乎不起什么作用。

他们生活得太一致太统一,可是这不是他们的愿望,这绝对不是他们的事。

但是开放却把人们赶到一个丰富多样的世界中间,让他们面对五花八门的事物无所适从。

人们开始有了很高的欲望,不过这欲望并非是容易满足的,于是他们反而有了受挫感,这受挫感又是不能归咎于外部的。

④开放的恐惧又是一种无人响应的恐惧。

在取向统一的社会里,见解是有普遍性的,对普遍见解的不满也是普遍的——专断和反专断,一种声音和反对一种声音,都构成了这个社会思想冲突的两极,这两极都会有相当的响应者。

开放社会却完全不同,它是一个多极的世界,多极的世界就是一个分层世界,一个社团世界,一个圈子世界,一个俱乐部世界,一个个人世界。

在这样的世界里,除了极少数重大问题,绝大多数的事物和见解只和一部分人发生关系,甚至,只和自己发生关系。

2020年上海市虹口区高三语文二模作文

2020年上海市虹口区高三语文二模作文

2020年上海市虹口区高三语文二模作文作文题:25. 有人说,要想让蜡烛散射出平稳明亮的光来,必须把它放到避风的地方;同样,要想让人的灵魂散发出智慧的光芒,也要避免那些五花八门的思想的干扰。

对此你有怎样的思考?请写一篇文章,谈谈你的想法。

要求:(1)自拟题目;(2)不少于800字。

审题:1.正面立意:睫在眼前长不见,道非身外更何求坚守自己的思想,排除杂念的干扰,才能发出智慧的光芒。

2.反弹琵琶:始知五岳外,别有他山尊避风→蜡烛终其一生只能“平衡”发光→必然导致→灯下黑(认知的局限)→因此需要迎风→打破平衡,驱除灯下黑→方能发出真正的智慧之光3.辩证分析(两种方式并存):博学笃志切问近思灵魂发出智慧光芒:要有深度(独立思考不受外界思想的干扰以实现自我的提升),也要有广度(博采众长批判地吸收外界思想以实现自我的超越)。

深度:避风独立思考、深耕细作、垂直思考广度:迎风集思广益、博采众长、平面思考既要有深度,又要有广度,需要在平面思考的基础之上,垂直思考。

兼容并包,融会贯通。

没有博采众长,深耕是无本之源;没有独立深耕,采长为必是走马观花。

美团网首席执行官王兴:当其它团购网在大打广告战的时候,美团的王兴坚持不加入广告大战,而是坚信决定团购事业的关键是:高效率、低成本;高科技,低毛利。

他把别人用于广告的钱,投入系统开发和效率提升。

因此美团在千团大战中脱颖胜出,可以说是知识深度的胜利。

因此王兴在总结成功经验是说:多数人为了逃避真正的思考愿意做任何事情。

特斯拉老总马斯克:表面看是一个斜杠青年,他创立了特斯拉、支付巨头PayPal(贝宝)、太空探索公司SpaceX,还有研发家用光伏发电产品的SolarCity四家不同类型的企业。

但在一次访谈中,埃隆马斯克说,他一直在做的事情,只是用第一性原理思考问题罢了。

即用最基础的原因来改变一个行业,看似风马牛不相及的特斯拉和SpaceX,在马斯克看来,它们都是一回事。

王坚:民企院士第一人,用“飞天”实现计算梦2019年11月22日,2019年中国工程院院士增选结果揭晓。

★2020上海市各区初三二模记叙文阅读难点题型分析

★2020上海市各区初三二模记叙文阅读难点题型分析

2020上海市16区初三二模记叙文阅读题型分析一、各区文章闵行区那年,我们去看大石桥金山区 2.05米的绳子宝山区找到一点光崇明区中等生静安区卖馄饨的夫妻黄浦区补天之手徐汇区老爸种花老妈种菜长宁区夜访陈寅恪先生墓松江区走遍故宫9371间房屋的人青浦区写作与语文嘉定区忍冬虹口区看水杨浦区落满尘埃的感动普陀区美妙的看见浦东新区奉贤区二、基本题型1、拼音(12)2、情节情感梳理(11)3、词语含义(7)4、段落归位、删减(2)5、划线句作用赏析(8)6、文意理解选项(13)7、人物形象归纳(4)三、难点题型8、补充造句、选句(3)9、标题填空、选择及赏析(6)10、结尾赏析(9)四、难点实例闵行区那年,我们去看大石桥①奶奶哼唱《小放牛》,邀我去看大石桥。

②桥是鲁班赶着一群大绵羊修的,桥上还有有各路神仙留下的“仙迹”,这些神奇的传说,一直鼓荡在脑海里,催着我赶快去看大石桥。

③父母亲要挣工分,几年里也不可能进一次县城.其实,也没必要进县城,想让父母亲带着去看大石桥,实在是痴心妄想。

④于是、就赶紧学骑自行车――到县城有30里路,打个来回,步行肯定会累个够呛。

⑤先是在冬天的打谷场上学转圈,让人在后边扶着,进而开始学上路.也不知摔倒了多少次,终于学会了。

车座子高,坐上去脚尖够不着脚踏板,父亲就卸下了车座,绑上一块棉垫。

.⑥“我要去看大石桥。

”我跟母亲说,这样的行动得绕开父亲.⑦母亲没有阻拦,也没有什么叮咛,但嘱我一定要找个伴,那时候还没有柏油马路,没有汽车,不必担心出车祸。

母亲烙了一张白面饼,卷了一箬子老咸菜丝,灌了一葡萄糖瓶开水,全都放进搭在车横梁上的布兜里。

⑧同伴是发小,两人一辆车.那天是个春末夏初,记得麦穗还不能搓着吃呢。

⑨现在要我说当时沿途有什么风光,路上遇见了什么人,是否有鸟雀从头顶飞过,都没有了印象.只记得远远地看见了“锥锥”(大寺砖塔),就紧张起来,激动起来,躬身蹬车更有劲。

⑩北门两边是城墙,或者说北门是城墙的一个缺口,城墙宽厚高大,上边长着杂七杂八的树。

2020届上海虹口区教育学院实验中学高三语文第二次联考试题及答案解析

2020届上海虹口区教育学院实验中学高三语文第二次联考试题及答案解析

2020届上海虹口区教育学院实验中学高三语文第二次联考试题及答案解析一、现代文阅读(36分)(一)现代文阅读I(9分)阅读下面的文字,完成下面小题。

材料一:“智慧城市”理念问世以来,对其研究的理论归纳起来,主要有三点。

第一,智慧城市建设必然以信息技术应用为主线,智慧城市可以被认为是城市信息化的高级阶段,必然涉及到信息技术的创新应用,而信息技术是以物联网、云计算、移动互联和大数据等新兴热点技术为核心和代表。

第二,智慧城市是一个复杂的、相互作用的系统,信息技术与其它资源要素优化配置并共同发生作用,促使城市更加智慧地运行。

第三,智慧城市是城市发展的新兴模式。

智慧城市的服务对象是城市主体一一政府、企业和个人,它的结果是城市生产生活方式的变革、提升和完善,终极表现为人类拥有更美好的城市生活。

目前,我国正处于城镇化加速发展的时期,部分地区“城市病”问题日益严峻。

为解决城市发展难题,实现城市可持续发展,建设智慧城市已成为当今世界城市发展不可逆转的历史潮流。

(摘编自秦志光等《智慧城市中的大数据分析技术》)材料二:试点城市地理位置分布城市GDP技术资源5G城市试点北京、上海、深圳、成都、武汉、贵阳、兰州等18个城市胡焕庸线以西只有兰州省会城市在相应地区占比高当地存在大量通信高科技企业且形成产业链国家智慧城市试点试点城市已经达到290个胡焕庸线以西仅有兰州、拉萨、鸟鲁木齐等少数城市省会城市在相应地区占比高物联网发达、高科技数据中心服务企业众多(摘编自曾凌霄《从5G试点城市看我国智慧城市布局》)[注]胡焕庸线,即中国地理学家胡焕庸在1935年提出的划分我国人口密度的对比线,从黑龙江省黑河市到云南省腾冲市,线东南方36%国土居住着96%人口。

“胡焕庸线”也成为目前城镇化水平的分割线,这条线的东南各省区市,绝大多数城镇化水平高于全国平均水平。

材料三:智慧城市建设的理想预期在实践中面临一些亟须解决的问题。

一是“有产无智”。

《二模作文讲评》课件

《二模作文讲评》课件
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构思技巧
列出写作提纲
在动笔前,先列出文章的结构和 要点,明确文章的主线。
构建逻辑关系
合理安排段落和句子之间的逻辑 关系,使文章层次分明,条理清
晰。
选择合适的素材
根据文章主题和要点,选择恰当 、有说服力的素材来支持观点。
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题目陷阱
指出题目中的陷阱和易错 点,提醒考生注意审题, 避免失分。
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内容要求
详细阐述题目对文章内容 的具体要求,如论点、论 据、论证方法等。
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评价范文的优缺点
详细描述
结合学生的实际情况,对范文的优点进行肯定和借鉴,同时指出可能存在的不足之处,引导学生正确 看待和学习范文。
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学生互评与反思
Chapter
学生互评
互评目的
通过学生之间的相互评价,让学生了解自己的作文在同学眼中的优 点和不足,从而更好地提高写作水平。
互评方法
学生之间相互交换作文,按照老师给出的评价标准进行打分和写评 语,同时也可以提出自己的建议和意见。
互评效果
通过互评,学生可以更加客观地认识自己的作文水平,发现自己的不 足之处,同时也可以借鉴其他同学的优点,提高自己的写作能力。

2020高三二模虹口作文题解析及指导(蜡烛 与 灵魂 )

2020高三二模虹口作文题解析及指导(蜡烛 与 灵魂 )

2020高三二模虹口作文题解析及范文(6篇范文从62-63分)原题回放:有人说,要想让蜡烛散射出平稳明亮的光来,必须把它放到避风的地方;同样,要想让人的灵魂散发出智慧的光芒,也要避免那些五花八门的思想的干扰。

对此你有怎样的思考?请写一篇文章,谈谈你的想法。

要求:①自拟题目;②不少于800字。

材料类型:名言警句类隐含观点型关键句:让人的灵魂散发出智慧的光芒材料侧重:题目将灵魂与蜡烛作类比,要我们对灵魂与蜡烛相似性作思考,来辨析灵魂是否需要避免五花八门思想的干扰。

审题难度不大,但我们要理解“灵魂”“智慧”“五花八门的思想”等概念,还有明确灵魂与蜡烛两者间的相同点与不同点。

界定概念:灵魂:材料中主要指精神、思想、感情及人格,良心……智慧:聪明才智;分析、判断、创造、思考的能力……五花八门的思想:纷繁复杂,变化莫测的想法或信息,或指过度、不合理、不正确的想法或信息……为什么让蜡烛散射出平稳明亮的光,须放到避风的地方?1.风是蜡烛的助燃剂,也是蜡烛的灭火剂,更是蜡烛散射出平稳明亮的光的干扰剂。

2.平稳明亮的光是我们追求的目标,而避风是条件,所以说蜡烛避风才能散射出平稳明亮的光。

为什么让人的灵魂散发光芒,要避免五花八门的思想的干扰?1.五花八门的思想具有主观性和目的性,对他人的思想灵魂有着一定的干扰作用,不利于灵魂散发出智慧的光芒。

2.五花八门的思想,如全盘吸收,会造成认知上的紊乱或偏离,从而影响我们的分析判断和创造思考的能力---影响人们灵魂散发出智慧的光芒。

3.人的灵魂具有独立性,五花八门的思想具有多样性,所以不能一味地认定五花八门的思想都是起干扰作用。

4.在生活中,接触各类思想本身就不可避兔,在个人的成长过程中,兼收并蓄、博采众长也是非常重要,关键在于我们是否能够具备独立的思考、判断和取舍的能力漂亮的标题:③排除干扰,放出光芒②思想交融,智慧发光③莫放修芦碍月生④恪守理性,坚守自我⑤静守本心,安于己道⑥深思慎取,灵魂生辉素材积累:1.板凳要坐十年冷,文章不写半句空。

上海市虹口区2019-2020学年第二次中考模拟考试语文试卷含解析

上海市虹口区2019-2020学年第二次中考模拟考试语文试卷含解析

上海市虹口区2019-2020学年第二次中考模拟考试语文试卷一、选择题1.下列句子加点词语使用不正确的一项是( )A.文艺创作者应该创作出更多令人喜闻乐见....的文艺节目,弘扬真善美,鞭挞假恶丑,不能依靠低俗段子哗众取宠。

B.虽然网络媒体是新兴阅读方式,但在浮光掠影....式的阅读下,我们更倾向于将其作为一种文化快餐。

C.从1958年参加工作开始,黄旭华一直战斗在核潜艇研制领域,孜孜不倦....、呕心沥血,为我国核潜艇事业奉献了毕生心血,被誉为“中国核潜艇之父”。

D.有了这些在假日中坚守岗位的劳动者的无悔付出,我们才能够外出饱览美景,和家人、朋友共享天伦之...乐.。

【答案】D【解析】【详解】D错误,天伦之乐:天伦:旧指父子、兄弟等亲属关系。

泛指家庭的乐趣。

不合语境。

2.下列加点字注音和词语书写全部正确的一项是( )A.阻遏.(è) 愧赧.(nǎn) 不屑置辨世外桃源B.莅.临(lì) 埋.怨(mán) 气冲斗牛颠沛流离C.羁绊.(bàn) 蛮横.(hèng) 弹精竭虑咄咄逼人D.拜谒.(è) 斡.旋(wò) 怪诞不经郑重其事【答案】B【解析】【详解】B项正确。

ACD三项修改为:A.不屑置辩.;C.殚.精竭虑;D.拜谒.(yè)。

二、名句名篇默写3.默写晴空一鹤排云上,____________。

(刘禹锡《秋词》)_______________,寒光照铁衣。

(《木兰诗》)先天下之忧而忧,_______________________。

(范仲淹《岳阳楼记》)土地平旷,屋舍俨然,__________________。

(陶渊明《桃花源记》)问渠那得清如许?_______________________。

(朱熹《观书有感》)__________________,波撼岳阳城。

(孟浩然《望洞庭湖赠张丞相》)而现在_________________我在这头大陆在那头(余光中《乡愁》)子曰:_________________,思而不学则殆。

2020届上海市虹口区教育学院附属中学高三语文二模试卷及答案

2020届上海市虹口区教育学院附属中学高三语文二模试卷及答案

2020届上海市虹口区教育学院附属中学高三语文二模试卷及答案一、现代文阅读(36分)(一)现代文阅读I(9分)阅读下面的文字,完成各题。

在全球化的大趋势下,知识和信息不断汇聚交融,中西方话语交流日益频繁。

互动交往已经不能局限于简单的表达,语言修辞渗透程度逐渐增强,表现出强大的话语力量,对中西修辞进行比较研究显得尤为重要。

通过对中西修辞进行比较,可以早日实现中西修辞学的相接交融,以进一步提高中国的文化软实力。

古希腊的“雄辩”与春秋战国时期的“游说”异曲同工。

传说西方的修辞最早出现在古希腊。

当时的先贤们奔走于各个城邦社会,通过说服他人、弭平歧见而追求平等、自由。

西方古典修辞的精华是演说、论辩,核心功能就是说服。

而在群雄并起的春秋战国,也涌现了一批流浪圣人、游说者。

冯友兰在《中国哲学简史》中将这些人分为“儒”“侠”“辩者”“方士”“法术之士”和“隐者”。

刘勰在《文心雕龙》中说道:“说者,悦也;兑为口舌,故言资悦怿。

”游说者为了使他的建议被接受,必须用言语打动他人。

“游说”本质上和西方的“说服”相同。

在轴心时代,中国与古希腊的论辩风气同样盛行。

孟子“言仲尼之教,必广为论辩,以折百家”,正是儒墨之辩,揭开了春秋战国时期各流派百家争鸣、争芳斗艳的序幕。

墨辩理论不输同时期的西方思想,中国古代名家学派的逻辑和西方思辩形而上学方面的思想一样具有价值。

古希腊和春秋战国时期的许多先贤都是“辞而优则仕”。

无论是古希腊依靠演说而成为那个时代的文化英雄的哲辩师,还是春秋战国时期以合纵之术说动六国,联合抗秦而挂上六国相印的苏秦,或是劝说秦王、离间六国而被“封仪五邑”的张仪,他们凭借“三寸不烂之舌”在各种社会互动中获得成功、求取功名。

中西古典修辞在修辞的作用方面高度契合。

鬼谷子和古希腊高尔吉亚都认为修辞的作用是影响灵魂。

“术者,心气之道所由舍者,神乃为之使。

”(《鬼谷子》)鬼谷子认为那些懂得修辞术的人,可以控制心气的活动规律,成为精神的主人。

2020年上海虹口高级中学高三英语二模试卷及答案解析

2020年上海虹口高级中学高三英语二模试卷及答案解析

2020年上海虹口高级中学高三英语二模试卷及答案解析第一部分阅读(共两节,满分40分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项AOn Friday morning when 53-year-old Thong Pham broke into the house through the unlocked back door, he took a steak knife from the kitchen.It was dark, and the family didn't know what Marley was barking (吠) at. Taylor, Amber and their girls Finley, 6,and Sadie, 4, soon woke up and came downstairs, too. “Well, it was dark so we couldn't see anything, only could hear Marley,” Amber recalled, saying her husband then went for the lights. “And once he turned the hall light on, we realized that the guy was holed up in the corner trying to hide.”“So I think he got to the front door and realized he couldn't get out, and by that point in time, Marley's got him cornered,”Taylorsaid. Pham slashed (砍) both Marley and Taylor, and blood went everywhere. Taylor shared a video summary to his Facebook page, where he said Marley was stabbed (刺) up to six times, mostly around the head and neck area. “And as I pulled back, blood shot out of my arm,”Taylorcontinued. “She got him pretty good and I got him pretty good in the face.”“But it was really hard because I was trying to make sure that my husband wasn't going to die,” Amber explained, adding that she was trying to protect their two girls. “When he realized that the two girls were in the house, that's when he kind of backed up and started running. "Taylorexpressed gratitude to everyone for their thoughts and prayers. And the family is thankful for their dog Marley.“She's our hero,” Amber said. “If it hadn't been for her, that guy could have gone in the...he could have gone to their rooms or something.”Tayloradded, “Yeah, I mean, the story plays out very differently if Marley's not there.”1. Why did the family come downstairs before daybreak?A. To stop a break-in.B. To lock the back door.C. To check on Marley.D. To turn the hall light on.2. What happened during the fight?A. Pham dug a hole in the corner.B. Marley was injured but bit back.C. Taylor had a backup from neighbors.D. Amber fought back to protect her girls.3. What doesTaylormainly express on his Facebook?A. Forgiveness.B. Concern.C. Anger.D. Appreciation.BBecoming famous is the dream of many, and Tian is getting closer to that dream.Tian, 30, is a white-collar worker inBeijing. On short video application Douyin, Tian has more than 2,000 fans. So far, she has received more than 50,000 likes on the Dubsmash-like app. On her page on Douyin, Tian shares everything, from her son’s daily activities, to her pet dogs, to little skits (段子) made up by her and her husband. “Making funny videos, and combining them with music is really interesting,” Tian said. “Of course, I make the videos for fun because it is quite relaxing.”China’s short video market has seen great growth, according to areport. The report said thatChina’s short video market was valued at 5.73 billion yuan ($900 million) in 2017, an increase of 184 percent. The industry value is expected to go up to the 30 billion mark in 2020. Companies like Tencent, Sohu and Iqiyi have all started providing short video content.“Short videos are popular because they are an addition to traditional audio and video content on the internet,” said Sun Jiashan with the Chinese National Academy of Arts.Fans say that the short videos help them “chill out” from a stressed-out lifestyle. “My favorite videos are all about pets,” said Zhou Na, a nurse inHefei, capital of East China’sAnhuiprovince. “After a whole day’s work, watching the 15-second videos makes me laugh, which reduces my pressure.”4. Why does Tian make short videos in Douyin?A. To get fun.B. To become a well-known person.C. To attract fans.D. To record her family’s routine.5. What’s Sun Jiashan’s opinion about short videos?A. They have huge value.B. They greatly reduce people’s pressure.C. They make people’s star dreams come true.D. They enrich internet audio and video content.6. What does the underlined words “chill out” probably mean?A. Catch a cold.B. Feel cold.C. Calm down.D. Become concerned.7. What does the passage mainly tell us?A. Every Chinese is using Douyin.B. China’s short video market is open.C. Douyin brings the Chinese great happiness.D.China’s short video market has developed rapidly.CBertha von Suttner received the Nobel Peace Prize in 1905—she was the first woman to receive it, and also the inspiration for the creation of the Nobel Prize.She met Alfred Nobel, a rich millionaire, by answering hisnewspaper ad for a secretary. Although she only worked for him for a few weeks, she remained good friends with Alfred Nobel for the next 20 years. When she became involved in the peace movement inEurope, she promised to keep Nobel informed of its progress. When Alfred Nobel died in 1896, his will included the establishment of a peace prize, thanks to Bertha von Suttner’s influence.Bertha von Suttner was born in an aristocratic (贵族) military family, but she spent the second half of her life working for peace. She wrote books, attended peace conferences, gave lectures and helped organize peace societies inAustria,GermanyandHungary, as well as the International Peace Bureau inSwitzerland. Her novel Lay Down your Arms, was one of the most influential anti-war books of all time, and helped to make her a leader of the peace movement in Europe. Its end to war theme was both the ambition (抱负) and the most important goal in the life of this great woman.Bertha von Suttner worked so hard for peace because she believed that a terrible war would break out inEuropeif nations didn’t work hard to establish lasting peace institutions. She made many major achievements for a more peaceful world, but two months after she died, World War I broke out. A hundred years after she won the Nobel Peace Prize, nations still seem to view war as a choice to work out their problems. But like Bertha von Suttner did, many today are working hard around the world to help strengthen peace institutions and spread the idea that it’s time to put an end to war.8. Which of the following is true about Bertha von Suttner?A. She worked for Alfred Nobel for 20 years.B. She helped Alfred Nobel draw up his will.C. She persuaded Alfred Nobel to join the peace movement.D. She inspired Alfred Nobel to establish the Nobel Peace Prize.9. Paragraph 3 is mainly about Bertha von Suttner’s _____________.A. efforts and contributions to the peace movement.B. family background and work experiences.C. writing career and life experiences.D. ambition and goals in life.10. What do we know aboutLay Doun Your Arms?A. It was based on a true story.B. It recorded Bertha von Suttner’s daily life.C. It was about an aristocratic military family.D. It showed Bertha von Suttner’s wish for peace.11. What can we infer about Bertha von Suttner from the last paragraph?A. Her fight for peace is still shared by many.B. She failed to found peace institutions.C. She successfully predicted awar.D. She lost her life in World War I.DDragon boating is a team sport that has its root in ancient China. The boats are decorated with a dragon head and tail. In recent years cancer survivor groups have got involved in the sport to help make friends and help rebuild their lives.On a recent Saturday morning, a group of 20 women were on a boat in the Anacostia River in Washington DC. They moved their paddles(船桨)in rhythm to the call of a coach. The women belong to the dragon boat team GoPink! DC, which trains weekly. It also races against other breast cancer survivor teams in dragon boat festivals. As a result, GoPink! DC won medals in this Washington dragon boat festival.Lydia Collins joined five years ago after finding out she had breast cancer. “I was diagnosed with breast cancer.I was demoralized because of my illness - I lost all interest in life and wouldn't even get out of bed to eat. But now I love the team spirit. I just love everything about it. It is like a floating support group on the water.”The paddles are breast cancer survivors and their supporters. Annette Rothemel helped establish(建立)the group in 2006. She is a researcher with the National Institutes of Health as well as a breast cancer survivor. “It is sort of an easy entry sport because on the same boat people at different levels can be doing the same sport.” ButMs Rothemel saysdragon boating can be physically demanding, especially for someone who is sick and getting treatment for cancer.“It’s hard but I think you have to challenge yourself in life. This is something I look forward to. I get to be out here with my sisters and supporters that understand what I’m going through and help motivate me. So it makes me stronger and it makes me feel better,” another cancer survivor Rhonda Hartzel said.Annette Rothemel says the cancer survivors feel a sense of sisterhood and share good times when they paddle together. She says both feelings are treasured by the team.12. What do the underline wordsdemoralizedIn para.3 probably mean?A. depressedB. anxiousC. astonishedD. awkward13. What can we know about Lydia Collims from the text?A. she helps establish Go Pink !DCB. she tries to find a cure for the cancerC. she benefits from the dragon boat raceD. she gives up hope because of her illness14. How can the dragon boat race help the cancer survivorsA. forget their tough experiencesB. recover physically and mentallyC. get rid of the pains of their cancerD. enjoy their rest life without sufferings15. What does the text tell us about Annette Rothemel?A. she is an expert in studying the cause of the cancerB. she helps the cancer survivors in financial difficultiesC. she believes there is a healthful result from the dragon boat raceD. she thinks it unwise for the patient to join in the dragon boat race第二节(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)阅读下面短文,从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

2020届上海市虹口区教育学院实验中学高三英语二模试题及答案解析

2020届上海市虹口区教育学院实验中学高三英语二模试题及答案解析

2020届上海市虹口区教育学院实验中学高三英语二模试题及答案解析第一部分阅读(共两节,满分40分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项AOver the years, I’ve been guilty of hastily shutting the front door to many strangers when they came knocking with the intention of selling things. But earlier this year, around Easter time, a dear friend of mine had an experience that changed my mind and perception towards these “intruders”.Linda, who recently moved to a new neighbour hood, had been housebound all week suffering from a severe case of flu when, early one morning, there was the terrible knock on her front door. Peering out the window, she saw two young ladies demurely (端庄地) holding leaflets and a TV set model. She knew of a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was about to be gently delivered. “This is the last thing I need today,” she muttered to herself and hesitantly opened the door.Coughing, she poked her head out and impatiently informed them she wasn’t the slightest bit interested in any TV whatsoever. Furthermore, she added, she was feeling quite unwell and abruptly shut the door. The ladies politely turned and left in silence.A few hours later, another knock. Linda glanced out the window and to her surprise, there were the same two ladies, back again. Really annoyed this time, she opened the door ready togive them a piece of her mind. Before she could speak, with concerned looks on their faces, these women handed Linda what looked to be a dish, saying, “We’re so sorry we disturbed you earlier. We thought you may like this homemade chicken soup. Hopefully it might make you feel a little better.”Linda was taken aback by this lovely gesture. Being new to the area, she didn’t know many neighbours or people who could assist her with shopping or errands (跑腿) so the gesture was all the more appreciated. She could only smile sheepishly and sincerely thanked them. With that, the ladies left.After she related this story to me, I thought about how touching this deed really was. Especially in today’s world where sadly, kindness and thoughtfulness seem so rare. I also realized that thinking about others and showing kindness is the real essence of love.1. What does the expression “give them a piece of her mind”in Paragraph 4 mean?A. Scold them severely.B. Drive them away.C. Refuse them directly.D. Speak out her idea.2. What can be learned about Linda from the passage?A. Linda always hastily shut the front door to many people.B. Linda was not a little interested in any TV whatsoever.C. Linda was very grateful to the ladies for their chicken soup.D. Linda would buy their TV set in reward for the ladies’ chicken soup.3. What’s the best title for the passage?A. A Chicken SoupB. Soup for the soulC. The Real Essence of LoveD. A Friend’s experienceBBy mid-century there will likely be 9 billion people on the planet, using ever more resources and leading ever more technologically complex lives. What will our cities be like? How much will artificialintelligence (AI) advance? Will global warming cause disastrous changes, or will we be able to engineer our way out of the climate change issues? Recently, the magazineBig Thinkasked top minds from a variety of fields to weigh in on what the future holds 40 years from now. The result is as follows.It's likely that by 2050 the majority of the people in the world will live in urban areas and will have a much higher average age than people today. Cities theorist Richard thinks urbanization will transform the education system of, making our economy less houses driven and removing the divisions between home and work.And rapidly advancing technology will continue ever more rapidly. Cities of the future won't look like “some sort of science-fiction fantasy”, but it's likely that technological advances and information overlays (VR and AR) will greatly change how we live. Self-driving cars will make the roads safer and provide faster transports. A larger version of driverless cars-driverless trucks — may make long-distance drivers out of date.Some long view predictions are completelydire. Environmentalist Bill says that if we don't make great progress in fighting global warming, it's likely we could see out-of- control rises in sea levels, huge crop shortfalls and wars over limited freshwater resources.In terms of how we will eat, green markets founder and “real food" supporter Nina believes that there will be more small milk processing plants and more regional food operations and we'll be healthier as a result.New York Timeswriter Mark thinks that people will eat fewer processed foods and eat foods grown closer to where they live. And more people will be aware of the ethical responsibility" to grow foods.4. What may happen by 2050 based on the magazineBig Think ?A. Education will be driven by economy.B. The majority of people will be taller.C. AI will cause disastrous changes.D. Most people will live in big cities.5. What do we know about technology in the future according to Paragraph 3?A. It will make people live in science-fiction fantasy.B. It will ensure safer transports due to faster cars.C. It will greatly change the way in which people live.D. It will increase the number of long-distance drivers.6. What does the underlined word "dire" in Paragraph 4 mean?A. Magical.B. Terrible.C. Ridiculous.D. Meaningful.7. What does Nina think of foods in the future?A. People will eat healthier and fresher foods.B. Land-raised farm systems will be improved.C. There will be smaller regional food operations,D. Food supplies will become much more limited.CI was so worried about handing my little boy over during his first week of school, but you made it easier. You smiled at him like a mother would at her own child.You showed warmth and your hugs were always on offer.After a day in class with you, Charlie would come home singing. Whenever I hear Do Your Ears Hang Low or see him stretching to the sky when singing about the days of the week, I will think of you.I didn't tell you at the time, but I loved your morning song so much that Iimplementedit in my own class (I'm a teacher, too).When you saw I was troubled, you hugged me with your smile and I knew everything would be OK. You made parents feel as cared for as our children.In the short time I knew you; you taught me about the type of teacher I desire to be. You never seemed disturbed by the mountain of paperwork or impossible work-life balance that comes with the role. Instead, you appeared to embrace every minute.I can't understand why you've been taken from us. Telling Charlie was one of the hardest things I've had to do.I'm not sure he fully understands, but he told me he loved you and has been asking whether your"robot powers"will work in heaven.A friend once told me white feathers are angels telling us that loved ones in heaven are well. On the first day collecting the children without you,a white feather floated through the sleet (雨夹雪). Watching the younger ones bounce and gigle as they tried to catch it was beautiful.I wish I had told you all of this when you were with us.I hope that you knew how you brought happiness toeveryone you met and how loved you were. Goodbye, Dear Friend.8. What does the underlined word "implemented" in Paragraph l probably mean?A. Looked back on.B. Looked forward to.C. Thought highly of.D. Made use of.9. What can we learn from the passage about parents?A. They need to sing songs before children.B. They need to feel the affection as well.C. They find it hard to handle their kids.D. They find it necessary to hug the teachers.10. The writer mentioned "white feather" in Paragraph 4 mainly to ______.rm us of the loved one's deathB. remind us it's time for a snowball fightC. tell us the teacher stays in our mind after deathD. warn us of the falling snow when collecting children11. What's the writer's main purpose in writing this article?A. To make a remark on Charlie's teacher.B.To say goodbye to her fellow teacher.C. To take pity on her fellow teacher.D. To recall and show respect for Charlie's teacher.DDengue is a very painful illness spread by mosquitoes. In severe cases, dengue can even be deadly. Dengue is a serious disease affecting people in around 120 countries. It can cause high fevers, headaches, and severe pain. It’s caused by a virus spread by bites from mosquitoes. Therefore, dengue is more common in warm areas. Every year, roughly 390 million people get dengue, and as many as 25,000 die from it.Now scientists seem to have found a way to protect humans from dengue by first protecting mosquitoes. Dengue fever is caused by a virus. Though it may seem strange to think of it this way, the mosquitoes that spread the dengue virus are also infected with it. But the virus doesn’t seem to hurt the mosquitoes.Wolbachia is a kind of bacteria commonly found in many insects. In some insects, Wolbachia can keep some viruses fromduplicatingthemselves, which is how viruses grow inside a body. Wolbachia isn’t naturally found in mosquitoes. But by infecting these mosquitoes with Wolbachia, scientists can keep the mosquitoes from catchingthe dengue virus. Even better, the young mosquitoes coming from the eggs of the infected mosquitoes also carry Wolbachia.Researchers working with the World Mosquito Program (WMP) ran a 27-month study in Yogyakarta, Indonesia. They split a 10-square-mile area up into 24 smaller areas. In half of the areas, the scientists did nothing. In the other half, they set out containers of eggs from mosquitoes that had Wolbachia. They did this every two weeks for just 4 to 6 months.Ten months later, 80% of the mosquitoes in the treated areas carried Wolbachia. The researchers report the number of dengue cases in the treated areas was reduced by 77% and that the number of people needing hospital care for dengue dropped by 86%.Because the results of the experiment were so good, the WHO has placed Wolbachia-infected mosquito eggs in all parts of Yogyakarta and surrounding areas. The WHO says that within a year, their efforts will protect 2.5 million people against dengue and that their efforts will be turned into a program that can be repeated worldwide.12. What kind of disease is dengue?A. It is likely to cause death.B. It causes no pain but fevers.C. It happens less often in hot areas.D. It hurts both people and mosquitoes.13. The underlined word “duplicating” in paragraph 3 most probably means “________”.A. worsening the harm ofB. expanding the size ofC. increasing forces ofD. making copies of14. What can be inferred about the method from the figures listed in paragraph 5?A. Its wide use.B. Its effectiveness.C. Its complexity.D.Its easy operation.15. What’s the WHO’s attitude towards the method?A. Ambiguous.B. Positive.C. Tolerant.D. Skeptical.第二节(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)阅读下面短文,从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

上海市虹口区2020年中考语文二模试题卷附答案解析

上海市虹口区2020年中考语文二模试题卷附答案解析

上海市虹口区2020年中考语文二模试题卷、答案:1、浅草才能没马蹄2、衣带渐宽终不悔3、铁马冰河入梦来4、芳草鲜美落英缤纷5、惟吾德馨6、晴天空中仿佛有烟雾笼罩7、爱杀江南8、A9、这才是尽了本职一类的事,可以(凭借这个条件)打一仗。

如果作战,请允许我跟随您一同去。

”10、十年春,齐师伐我,公将战。

何以战11、(1)及,达到。

(2)诣,到12、C13、公正严明正直无私14、D15、对青少年进行思想教育的过程中,要正确认识并理性处理大众文化。

16、C17、罗列现实中的具体现象,引出论题:在大力加强青少年思想教育的今天,我们应该如何认识和处理大众文化与青少年思想教育的关系;引发关注于思考。

18、事例写了一名初中生玩游戏导致智力受损,从反面论证了第⑤段的分论点:在处理大众文化与青少年思想教育的关系中提高青少年自制力的重要性。

19、犹豫20、(1)艾清源下班后还为李有福看病。

(2)艾清源照顾李有福的身体为他看包。

(3)艾清源叮嘱李有福忙完记得看病。

21、运用连续反复、两个感叹句,突出李有福心情急切、态度坚决的程度,体现他为打工人员不顾个人病痛的善良品质。

22、他带了十几个人做工程。

年底终于结清账,有一百多万。

路上心脏病发作,到医院开点药就急着赶回工地,为了让工人拿钱回家过年。

23、形成强烈反差,吸引读者;推动情节向前发展;集中表现李有福善良负责有担当无私的内在美的精神品质。

24、幼虫于地下穴居翅膀薄而透明鸣叫能力强以树汁为生成熟后居高处羽化后名为知了立身高洁追求高贵(必须包含两则材料中的部分内容)25、诗歌是根据蝉的习性特点,运用象征的手法表达作者多生活的高尚追求。

(材料一诗歌的感觉来源于材料一蝉的基本特性,仔细观察后表达出符合蝉特点的象征性品质。

)26、诗歌语言精练,形式优美,具有象征意义,表达立身高洁的感情。

辞海词条,语言平实,表达简练,内容清晰。

2020届上海市虹口区高三二模语文试卷及答案

2020届上海市虹口区高三二模语文试卷及答案

2020届上海市虹口区高三二模语文试卷及答案奋战百日,让七彩的梦在六月放飞。

让我们拼搏,用行动实现青春的诺言;让我们努力,用汗水浇灌理想的花蕾。

下面给大家带来一些关于2020届上海市虹口区高三二模语文试卷及答案,希望对大家有所帮助。

2020届上海市虹口区高三二模语文试卷1.按要求填空。

(5分)(1)一箪食,一瓢饮, __________。

人不堪其忧,回也不改其乐。

(《论语》)(2)______________,凤去台空江自流。

(李白《_________》)(3)王国维认为古今之成大事业、大学问者,必经过三种境界,其中第一境是“昨夜西风凋碧树,_________。

”2.按要求选择(5分)(1)小明克服病情,在考试中取得了比较好的成绩,同学想表示祝贺,以下内容合适的一项是( )。

(2分)A.宣父犹能畏后生,丈夫未可轻年少。

B.百岁光阴一梦蝶,重回首往事堪嗟。

C.莫愁前路无知己,天下谁人不识君。

D.看似寻常最奇崛,成如容易却艰辛。

(2)将下列编号的语句依次填入语段空白处,语意连贯的一项是( )。

(3分)各政府职能部门横向上相互砍立,______,_______,______,______,形成了一个封闭的金字塔式的结构。

①下一级对上一级层层负责②分别行使不同的管理职能③整个行政系统内部实行垂直领导④纵向上具有明显的权力行使的单向性A.④②①③B.①④②③C.③①②④D.②④③①二阅读 70分(一)阅读下文,完成第3—7题。

(16分)①“元典精神”,是指一个民族的“文化元典”所集中体现的原创性精神。

这种典籍因其首创性及度盖面的广阔性、思考的深邃性,而在该民族的历史进程中成为生活的指针。

印度的《吠陀经》,波斯的《古圣经》,柏拉图、亚里斯多德等先哲的论著,犹太及-的"六经"《圣经》,伊斯兰教的《可兰经》,都被相关民族视为"元典"。

在中华文化系统中,堪称元典,与之相关的《论语》《孟子》《老子》等典籍也具有"元典"性质。

2020年上海市虹口区中考语文二模试卷

2020年上海市虹口区中考语文二模试卷

2020年上海市虹口区中考语文二模试卷一、古诗文(40分)1.(16分)(1)知否,知否?。

(李清照《如梦令》)(2),往来无白丁。

(刘禹锡《陋室铭》)(3)露从今夜白,。

(杜甫《月夜忆舍弟》)(4),留取丹心照汗青。

(文天祥《过零丁洋》)(5)孟子在《鱼我所欲也》一文中,认为在“生”和“义”无法兼顾的情况下,就应该“舍生取义”的句子是“,”。

2.(12分)阅读下面的诗文,完成各题【甲】左迁至蓝关示侄孙湘一封朝奏九重天,夕贬潮州路八千。

欲为圣明除弊事,肯将衰朽惜残年!云横秦岭家何在?雪拥蓝关马不前。

知汝远来应有意,好收吾骨瘴江边。

【乙】臣本布衣,躬耕于南阳,苟全性命于乱世,不求闻达于诸侯。

先帝不以臣卑鄙,猥自枉屈,三顾臣于草庐之中,咨臣以当世之事,由是感激,遂许先帝以驱驰。

后值倾覆,受任于败军之际,奉命于危难之间,尔来二十有一年矣。

(1)甲诗的作者是,乙文选自课文《》。

(2)“忠君报国”思想在甲诗中的具体表现是,在乙文中的具体表现是。

(3)有一个成语来自【乙】文这段历史,这个成语是。

(4)下列理解正确的一项是A.甲诗和乙文都是作者向皇帝陈情言事的奏章,言辞非常恭敬、恳切。

B.甲诗的风格沉郁顿挫,苍凉悲壮;乙文的风格情辞恳切,感人肺腑。

C.甲诗中“九重天”“圣明”与乙文中“先帝”都是指当时在位的皇帝。

D.甲诗和乙文都抒发了作者因为皇帝对自己的信任而怀有的感激之情。

3.(12分)阅读下文,完成各题杜黄裳李师古跋扈,惮杜黄裳为相,未敢失礼。

乃命一干吏,寄钱数千绳,并车子一乘,亦近直千缗。

使者未敢入,乃于宅门伺候累日。

有舆自宅出,从婢二人,皆青衣褴褛。

问何人,曰:“相公夫人。

“使者遽归,以白师古。

师古乃止,终身不敢失节。

(1)解释下列句中加点词。

①惮杜黄裳为.相②使者未敢入.(2)翻译下列句子。

使者遽归,以白师古。

(3)李师古“未敢失礼”的原因是,后来“终身不敢失节”的原因是。

(用自己的话回答)二、现代文(38分)4.(18分)阅读下文,完成各题蝙蝠携带大量致命病毒,为什么自己却安然无恙?①在很多故事里,蝙蝠是邪恶的象征,而在现实里,蝙蝠只是一种很渺小的生物。

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然而,深入推究,所谓“避免”未免有些朦胧不清之意,显现出一 种面对繁多的思想而心生畏惧,对自己的智慧不自信而退缩之意。若 一直让自己处于“避风处”,灵魂不免显得怯懦且刻板。(转入对避 免五花八门思想干扰的弊端的分析)
由此,我们想到人的灵魂与蜡烛不同之处。蜡烛会轻易被风吹灭, 而人的灵魂似乎并不会因多种思想的冲击而失去智慧的光芒。(对比 分析,突出五花八门思想不会让“智慧之光”暗淡)
对材料推理的判断
要想让蜡烛散射出平稳明亮的光来,必须把它放到避风 的地方 蜡烛:条件:放到避风的地方
结论:散射出平稳明亮的光
要想让人的灵魂散发出智慧的光芒,也要避免那些五花 八门的思想的干扰。 灵魂:条件:避免那些五花八门的思想的干扰
结论:发出智慧的光芒
核心概念界定
Hale Waihona Puke 不同流派的思想、不同文化的思想、不同领域的思想……
想,视野会更大,思想会更新,认识也能更深。 宽容不同的思想,“异类”思想可能推动人类的文
明进步。 面对“五花八门”的思想学会分析判断,吸收
精华,剔除糟粕。 ……
名言名句
君子和而不同。——《论语》 兼收并蓄。——韩愈 博观而约取,厚积而薄发。——苏轼 出乎其外,入乎其内。——王国维 各美其美,美人之美,美美与共,天下大同。—
我想,对个人灵魂之智慧是不存在“避风港”的。我们所能做的不过是在多元 思想面前,以多种思想和自己深切的思考,对智慧进行打磨而非保护。藉此获 得纯粹的、坚实的独立思想,以个人的智慧为灵魂“避风”。(总结观点)
避免五花八门思想的干扰? ——2020届虹口区二模作文讲评
作文题
有人说,要想让蜡烛散射出平稳明亮的光 来,必须把它放到避风的地方;同样,要 想让人的灵魂散发出智慧的光芒,也要避 免那些五花八门的思想的干扰。对此你有 怎样的思考?请写一篇文章,谈谈你的想 法。
要求:(1)自拟题目;(2)不少于800 字。
不等于错误的思想
准确、深刻、独特的思想。
重点问题1
避免五花八门的思想的干扰有何意义? 对于辨别是非的能力较弱的人来说,避免那
些错误的、不健康的思想对他们的干扰和伤 害,有利于思想的纯洁,有利于健康人格的 养成。 力排众议,坚守己见,排除干扰,有利于独 立思想与人格的形成。
重点问题2
对五花八门的思想还能有怎样的态度?为什么? 接触不同的思想文化,在比较中审视自己的思
当然,我们会提出疑问。“五花八门”也带来了判断思想之有益、无益的判 断,即提出了对人们审视其价值的要求。
若说上文提及的是对思想有所见识,那么审视思想便是有所判断。(方法论: 对待五花八门思想应学会审视,做出判断)
这种判断应该是有所思考的,瓦尔登湖里是梭罗面对工业社会的自我思考与 判断。他的行为看似是退避,实则却是以自我的智慧为基础,对当时社会浮躁 之思想有所甄别后的以退为进,故而判断的前提是直面所谓干扰,有所领略与 识别后,达到对看似玄妙或有理的思想祛魅存真的效果并作出自我思考。而后 对自己的智慧有所反思和肯定,如此便算解决了五花八门的窘境。(举例论证 对待五花八门思想应学会审视,做出判断)
保护与打磨
必须承认的是我们面临着多元价值、思想盛放的时代。有人说,正 如蜡烛在避风之处,才能散射平稳明亮的光芒,人的灵魂也应避免五 花八门思想的干扰,才能散发智慧的光芒。(引述材料)
这一说法的本意是期望人们脱离被种种思想吸引、摇摆不定或盲目 听从的状态,处于一个今日整理术大火,明日《断舍离》脱销的境况。 人们确实应避免其干扰以拥有平静思考的智慧。(肯定避免五花八门 思想干扰的价值)
过程。青少年时候学习儒家济世报国,而 后与佛印等多名佛家中人有来往,自己本 身又对老庄有所研究。从《水调歌头》、 《念奴娇·赤壁怀古》、《定风波》、《前 赤壁赋》可以看出,苏轼完美地将三家思 想融合在一起,达到大成境界。
深入思考
“智慧之光”一开始就是平稳明亮的吗? 示例:“智慧之光”也可微弱闪烁,与“五花八门” 的思想交流碰撞,有时光芒会摇摆不定,甚至暂时 熄灭。因为智慧之光的闪耀必须接受各种思想的补 充、质疑甚至挑战和颠覆的。唯有如此,“智慧之 光”才会变得更平稳明亮,影响力才会更深远。
春秋战国时期,诸子百家争鸣,这一争鸣之势即是来自不同学说主张的碰撞、 交融,其盛大与炫目正是因为各学说直面思想的干扰,并在碰撞中完善自己的 体系与理论,其中少不了与自己认同或不认同的“五花八门”的思想交锋。
故而,“五花八门”现出其正面意义,即在见识种种多元思想后,对自己有 所启发和批判,使自身之智慧呈现更宽容、更完善的姿态,而非于“避风港” 中趋向窄化、刻板。(举例论证,分析五花八门思想的碰撞价值)
—费孝通
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王阳明排除“格物致知”思想的干扰 朱熹“格物致知”:通过格物致知的工夫,才
可以因道事物之理,即至善之所在。 王阳明“心学”:求理于物外,是不能明理,
若要明理,便须从心上作工夫,使内心无 丝毫私欲,使心恢复其本体;心能恢复其 本体,理便能呈现。此正是至善之所在。
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苏轼与儒道释 苏轼的诗词中,可见其被多种思想影响的
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