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若是能整理一些自己以前的作文,请老师帮助会诊一下,自己的长处是什么,短处在哪里,在作文训练时就可以扬长避短了。

对每个学生来说,都有一个相对擅长的表达形式。

考试作文提倡写什么像什么,不能“走体”。

“四不像”的作文在现在的评价体系中难以得到认可。

长于叙事,不妨寻找恰当的叙述角度;善于抒情,不妨酝酿抒情的由头;攻于阐发议论,不妨挖掘一个巧妙的切入点。

选择自己擅长的文体就成为作文制胜的诀窍之一。

选择自己熟悉的题材。

有的同学是来自农村的,农村的生活场景等深深扎根在自己的内心深处,若要写,你就不妨从农村生活着手,如果非要赶时髦去写大都市的生活,正如东施效颦,缺乏生活体验,可能漏洞百出。

对现实生活有自己深刻独到的体验的,就可以从中撷取素材,不必舍近求远,非要去虚构甚至是胡乱编造那些科幻的东西,不伦不类。

有的同学受了1999年高考话题作文《假如记忆可以移植》的影响,再加上过多的卡通漫画的耳濡目染,使得很多学生在作文中喜欢写一些科幻的作品,比如仿写、改写等。

不是说不可以,关键是对这种题材你是否熟悉,如果自己比较有把握能驾驭这类题材,也无可非议。

但是事实并非如此,很多作文是生编乱造,缺乏根据,出现许多违反科学、不可想象的所谓科幻故事,不仅不能给人以新鲜感,反而让人作呕。

还有的同学为了赶时髦,追求一些新鲜的且自己并不熟悉的话题,看到别人写男女交往,他也写男女交往,只不过是从阅读的文章中嫁接而来的一些东西。

新意并不仅在新鲜的话题,还在于自己的独特感受。

自己对这一题材没有自己的感受,以其昏昏,焉能使人昭昭?来源:不详共有1001位读者阅读过此文【关闭窗口】【文章推荐】上篇文章:专家支招:备战高考首先要睡好觉。

(word完整版)2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解(2)

(word完整版)2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解(2)

2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析(一)考查内容:1、考查读懂文章内容的能力2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力3、考查归纳总结的能力4、考查组织文章的能力(二)评分要点•1)字数50左右•2)理解准确,涵盖全部要点•3)准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇•4)完全使用自己的语言•5)有效使用语句间的连接成分,结构紧凑二、专题详解定义:It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。

(三)写作方法Step 1. 确定体裁,明确主题Step 2. 明确文章结构(总-分,总-分-总,分-总,并列)Step 3. 划主题句与关键信息Step 4. 写纲要,打草稿Step 5. 润色成文1) 找准体裁,提炼要点按体裁 2) 语言:同义词① 同义转换:近义词、同义词和词组的替换,尽量用单词替换短语(例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important )②) ③ 句子重构:调整词类(名词、动词、形容词转换)、时态、语态(主动变被动)等3) 衔接(替换;省略;增加):表逻辑关系的连接词替换:并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition,转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand省略:并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。

增加:按逻辑关系,补充连接词firstly…, secondly…, finally…;and…, moreover…, furthermore…; but, instead, however,例(一)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Chris, whose job is exciting and dangerous, works for MFS. Chris and other MFS’s doctors need to be ready to go almost anywhere in the world and might be sent on an emergency task. Christ thinks his job is meaningful/helpful and he gains a lot. (同义词转换)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary :People from countryside generally live longer than city people because they enjoy many advantages such as close with nature, physical work, being free from urban pressure, more free walk, quiet and peaceful environment, fresh food, etc. (句式改变)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Keys:Windbreak, which is formed by trees and other plants, is used by farmers to protect their land from damage by farming and the forces of the nature. Windbreak can protect the crops and help improve grain production. However, windbreak should be planted properly to work its best.练习实战练习(一)One hot night last August, I tried everything I could think of—a warm bottle, songs, etc. to make him fall into sleep, but he just couldn’t do it. Since I believed that a long night was waiting for me ahead, I had no choice but to bring a TV into his room to kill off the hours until dawn. I was surprised that the moment I turned on the TV, the baby became quiet right away and fixed his little eyes brightly on the screen. Not willing to waste an opportunity for sleep, I then tiptoed(用脚失走)out of the room, leaving him to watch the boring TV programs.I heard no more of the baby’s crying that night and the next morning when I went into his room, I found him still watching TV by himself. I found there was a metaphor (暗喻) in my baby’s behavior for the new generation. When I gave my boy some books to go over, he only spit upon them; when I read to him, he did not feel comfortable. So is it in the schools with my students. I find that our students don’t read and they look down upon reading and make light of those of us who teach it. All they want to do is to watch TV. After this experience with the baby, however, I have drawn a conclusion: “Let them watch it!” If television is much more attractive to children than books, why should we fight against it? Let them watch what they want!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:The writer tried everything to make her baby fall asleep but failed. Surprisingly, when she turned on the TV, the baby kept quiet himself. Then she found that her students liked watching TV as much as her baby. So the writer suggested that we should let children watch what they want.实战练习(二)More and more people like bicycling and it is no surprise. It is fun, healthy and good for the environment. Maybe that’s why there are 1.4 billion bicycles and only 400 million cars on roads worldwide today.Bikes can take you almost anywhere, and there is no oil cost! Get on a bicycle and ride around your neighbourhood. You may discover something new all around you. Stopping and getting off a bike is easier than stopping and getting out of your car. You can bike to work and benefit from the enjoyable exercise without polluting the environment. You don’t even have to ride all the way.Folding bikes work well for people who take the train. Just fold the bike and take it with you. You can do the same on an airplane. A folding bike can be packed in a suitcase. You can also take a common bike with you when you fly. But be sure to look for information by getting on airline websites. Not all airlines are bicycle-friendly to travelers.Health Benefits of Bicycling: It helps to prevent heart diseases. Bicycling helps to control your weight. A 15-minute bike ride to and from work three times a week bums off five kilos of fat in a year. Bicycling can improve your mood. Exercise like bicycling has been shown to make people feel better, more relaxed and self-confident. Bicycling is healthier than driving._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Many people like bicycling because it’s fun, heathy and good for environment and it’s easy to stop and get off. Sometimes folding bikes can be taken with you on an airplane or a train. Most importantly, bicycling has a lot of health benefits.强化练习练习(一)Understanding body language is important to success, whether in the business world or in our personal lives. However, some of our ideas about body language are wrong, according to modern communication research.There is a belief that people with shifty(变化的) eyes are probably lying. As Paul Ekman says, “When we asked people how they could tell if someone was lying, too much blinking(眨眼) and shifty eyes were the answers.” Ekman goes on to argue against such a wrong belief. Although this kind of body language is probably an expression of nervousness, it is not always because the person is lying. Shyness can, for example, make people shift their eyes. To understand what someone’s behavior means, you have to watch them carefully.There is also a belief that when meeting someone, the more eye contact, the better. As a result people would like to make initial (开始的) contact in formal situations, like a job interview, by staring fixedly at the other human. Yet Ekman points out that most of us are comfortable with eye contact lasting a few seconds,but any eye contact that is longer than that cm make us nervous.In short, you must carefully consider the speaker and the speaking environment. Experts suggest that unless you know about someone’s basic communication style, you will have little hope in understanding their true feelings through body language. In other words, body language carries important but not always true messages._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:The passage argues two wrong ideas about body language. One is that people believe shifty eyes means that person is lying. The other is that people believe the more eye contact, the better during communication. Finally, the writer gives us a suggestion that we should be careful when we judge somebody body language.练习(二)Linda Evans was my best friend—like the sister I never had. We did everything together: having piano lessons, going to movies, swimming, and horseback riding.When I was 13, my family moved away. Linda and I kept in touch through letters, and we saw each other on special time—like my wedding and Linda’s. Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often. One day a card that I sent came back, stamped “Address Unknown.” I had no idea how to find Linda.Over the years, I missed Linda very much. I wanted to share happiness of my children and then grandchildren. And I needed to share my sadness when my brother and then mother died. There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda could fill.One day I was reading a newspaper when I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda and whose last name was Wagman — Linda's married name. “There must be thousands of Wagmans,” I thought, but I still wrote to her.She called as soon as she got my letter. “Mrs. Tobin!’’ she said excitedly, “Linda Evans Wagman is my mother.Minutes later I heard a voice that I knew very much, even after 40 years, laughed and cried and caught up on each other’s lives. Now the empty place in my heart is filled. And there’s one thing that Linda and I know for sure: We won’t lose each other again!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Linda Evans and the writer are best friends. After the writer’s family moved away, they kept in touch through letters. Then, they were all busy and wrote letters often. Finally, they lost in touch with each other and the writer felt empty. After 40 years, the writer found Linda and they won’t lose each other again.1.他利用她人好心软,三番五次向她借钱。

2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解说课材料

2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解说课材料

2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析(一)考查内容:1、考查读懂文章内容的能力 2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力 3、考查归纳总结的能力4、 考查组织文章的能力(二)评分要点•1)字数50左右• 2)理解准确,涵盖全部要点• 3)准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇• 4)完全使用自己的语言• 5)有效使用语句间的连接成分,结构紧凑二、专题详解定义:It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。

(三)写作方法(总-分,总-分-总,分-总,并列)1) 找准体裁,提炼要点按体裁 2) 语言:同义词①同义转换:近义词、同义词和词组的替换,尽量用单词替换短语(例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important)②句式转换:简化句子结构(例如,定语从句改成分词作后置定语;状语从句改成非谓语作状语;)③句子重构:调整词类(名词、动词、形容词转换)、时态、语态(主动变被动)等3)衔接(替换;省略;增加):表逻辑关系的连接词替换:并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition,转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand省略:并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。

增加:按逻辑关系,补充连接词firstly…, secondly…, finally…;and…, moreover…, furthermore…; but, instead, however,例(一)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Chris, whose job is exciting and dangerous, works for MFS. Chris and other MFS’s doctors need to be ready to go almost anywhere in the world and might be sent on an emergency task. Christ thinks_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary :People from countryside generally live longer than city people because they enjoy many advantages such as close with nature, physical work, being free from urban pressure, more free_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Keys:Windbreak, which is formed by trees and other plants, is used by farmers to protect their land from damage by farming and the forces of the nature. Windbreak can protect the crops and help improve grain production. However, windbreak should be planted properly to work its best.练习实战练习(一)One hot night last August, I tried everything I could think of—a warm bottle, songs, etc. to make him fall into sleep, but he just couldn’t do it. Since I believed that a long night was waiting for me ahead, I had no choice but to bring a TV into his room to kill off the hours until dawn. I was surprised that the moment I turned on the TV, the baby became quiet right away and fixed his little eyes brightly on the screen. Not willing to waste an opportunity for sleep, I then tiptoed(用脚失走)out of the room, leaving him to watch the boring TV programs.I hea rd no more of the baby’s crying that night and the next morning when I went into his room, I found him still watching TV by himself. I found there was a metaphor (暗喻) in my baby’s behavior for the new generation. When I gave my boy some books to go over, he only spit upon them; when I read to him, he did not feel comfortable. So is it in the schools with my students. I find that our students don’t read and they look down upon reading and make light of those of us who teach it. All they want to do is to watch TV. After this experience with the baby, however, I have drawn a conclusion: “Let them watch it!” If television is much more attractive to children than books, why should we fight against it? Let them watch what they want!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:The writer tried everything to make her baby fall asleep but failed. Surprisingly, when she turned on the TV, the baby kept quiet himself. Then she found that her students liked watching TV as much as her baby. So the writer suggested that we should let children watch what they want.实战练习(二)More and more people like bicycling and it is no surprise. It is fun, healthy and good for the environment. Maybe that’s why there are 1.4 billion bicycles and only 400 million cars on roads worldwide today.Bikes can take you almost anywhere, and there is no oil cost! Get on a bicycle and ride around your neighbourhood. You may discover something new all around you. Stopping and getting off a bike is easier than stopping and getting out of your car. You can bike to work and benefit from the enjoyable exercise without polluting the environment. You don’t even have to ride all the way.Folding bikes work well for people who take the train. Just fold the bike and take it with you. You can do the same on an airplane. A folding bike can be packed in a suitcase. You can also take a common bike with you when you fly. But be sure to look for information by getting on airline websites. Not all airlines are bicycle-friendly to travelers.Health Benefits of Bicycling: It helps to prevent heart diseases. Bicycling helps to control your weight. A 15-minute bike ride to and from work three times a week bums off five kilos of fat in a year. Bicycling can improve your mood. Exercise like bicycling has been shown to make people feel better, more relaxed and self-confident. Bicycling is healthier than driving._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:Many people like bicycling because it’s fun, heathy and good for environment and it’s easy to stop and get off. Sometimes folding bikes can be taken with you on an airplane or a train. Most importantly, bicycling has a lot of health benefits.强化练习练习(一)Understanding body language is important to success, whether in the business world or in our personal lives. However, some of our ideas about body language are wrong, according to modern communication research.There is a belief that people with shifty(变化的) eyes are probably lying. As Paul Ekman says, “When we asked people how they could tell if someone was lying, too much blinking(眨眼) and shifty eyes were the answers.” Ekman goes on to argue against such a wrong belief. Although this kind of body language is probably an expression of nervousness, it is not always because the person is lying. Shyness can, for example, make people shift their eyes. To understand what someone’s behavior means, you have to watch them carefully.There is also a belief that when meeting someone, the more eye contact, the better. As a result people would like to make initial (开始的) contact in formal situations, like a job interview, by staring fixedly at the other human. Yet Ekman points out that most of us are comfortable with eye contact lasting a few seconds,but any eye contact that is longer than that cm make us nervous.In short, you must carefully consider the speaker and the speaking environment. Experts suggest that unless you know about someone’s basic communication style, you will have little hope in understanding their true feelings through body language. In other words, body language carries important but not always true messages._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:The passage argues two wrong ideas about body language. One is that people believe shifty eyes means that person is lying. The other is that people believe the more eye contact, the better during communication. Finally, the writer gives us a suggestion that we should be careful when we judge somebody body language.练习(二)Linda Evans was my best friend—like the sister I never had. We did everything together: having piano lessons, going to movies, swimming, and horseback riding.When I was 13, my family moved away. Linda and I kept in touch through letters, and we saw each other on special time—like my wedding and Linda’s. Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often. One day a card that I sent came back, stamped “Address Unknown.” I had no idea how to find Linda.Over the years, I missed Linda very much. I wanted to share happiness of my children and then grandchildren. And I needed to share my sadness when my brother and then mother died. There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda could fill.One day I was reading a newspaper when I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda and whose last name was Wagman —Linda's married name. “There must be thousands of Wagmans,” I t hought, but I still wrote to her.She called as soon as she got my letter. “Mrs. Tobin!’’ she said excitedly, “Linda Evans Wagman is my mother.Minutes later I heard a voice that I knew very much, even after 40 years, laughed and cried and caught up on eac h other’s lives. Now the empty place in my heart is filled. And there’s one thing that Linda and I know for sure: We won’t lose each other again!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:Linda Evans and the writer are best friends. After the writer’s family moved away, they kept in touch through letters. Then, they were all busy and wrote letters often. Finally, they lost in touch with each other and the writer felt empty. After 40 years, the writer found Linda and they won’t lose each other again.1.他利用她人好心软,三番五次向她借钱。

2019高考语文作文写作方法总结

2019高考语文作文写作方法总结

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2019高考语文作文写作方法总结 一、四好战略是前提 1.一个好的标题 题目是文章的眼睛。

一个亮丽的题目,往往给人赏心悦目的感觉。

简洁、清晰、生动、新颖是题目亮丽的要素。

一个醒目鲜活的文题,往往是内容的高度概括。

它能够总领全文,不但会照亮整篇作文,还会照亮阅卷者的心灵.而拟题的技巧多种多样,有修辞法、公式法、字母符号法等。

而修辞法则是最能使题目异彩飞扬的一种。

如《在我指头跳跃的阳光》、《人生若只如初见》、《流泪的紫水晶》、《海棠依旧?绿肥红瘦?》等,看到这样的文题。

阅卷老师的眼睛怎不会为之一亮?心灵怎不会为之一震? 2。

一个好的开头 一般来说,文章开头力求做到一简二美三有哲理。

简,就是开篇语言简洁,直奔主题。

使读者一目了然;美,就是开头的语言能给人以美感,或文采斐然,或意境长远,或情趣盎然,使读者心灵产生共振.哲理,是一种深度,一种高度,如果都做到了,那效果肯定错不了.开头的方法有很多如:趣事,引人人胜;引用名句,起点高远;排比句,气势磅礴;设问句,发人深思。

高考作文,因为受时间字数的限制,是“开门见山”,直奔主题. 3。

一个好的结尾 古人云,结句当如撞钟,清音有余,结尾是文章结构的有机组成部分,是文章的收笔处和落脚点,是全文的归宿.任何虎头蛇尾的文章,都很难引起读者的审美情感,很难获取高分。

2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解上课讲义

2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解上课讲义

2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析(一)考查内容:1、考查读懂文章内容的能力 2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力 3、考查归纳总结的能力4、 考查组织文章的能力(二)评分要点•1)字数50左右• 2)理解准确,涵盖全部要点• 3)准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇• 4)完全使用自己的语言• 5)有效使用语句间的连接成分,结构紧凑二、专题详解定义:It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。

(三)写作方法(总-分,总-分-总,分-总,并列)1) 找准体裁,提炼要点按体裁 2) 语言:同义词①同义转换:近义词、同义词和词组的替换,尽量用单词替换短语(例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important)②句式转换:简化句子结构(例如,定语从句改成分词作后置定语;状语从句改成非谓语作状语;)③句子重构:调整词类(名词、动词、形容词转换)、时态、语态(主动变被动)等3)衔接(替换;省略;增加):表逻辑关系的连接词替换:并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition,转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand省略:并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。

增加:按逻辑关系,补充连接词firstly…, secondly…, finally…;and…, moreover…, furthermore…; but, instead, however,例(一)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Chris, whose job is exciting and dangerous, works for MFS. Chris and other MFS’s doctors need to be ready to go almost anywhere in the world and might be sent on an emergency task. Christ thinks_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary :People from countryside generally live longer than city people because they enjoy many advantages such as close with nature, physical work, being free from urban pressure, more free_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Keys:Windbreak, which is formed by trees and other plants, is used by farmers to protect their land from damage by farming and the forces of the nature. Windbreak can protect the crops and help improve grain production. However, windbreak should be planted properly to work its best.练习实战练习(一)One hot night last August, I tried everything I could think of—a warm bottle, songs, etc. to make him fall into sleep, but he just couldn’t do it. Since I believed that a long night was waiting for me ahead, I had no choice but to bring a TV into his room to kill off the hours until dawn. I was surprised that the moment I turned on the TV, the baby became quiet right away and fixed his little eyes brightly on the screen. Not willing to waste an opportunity for sleep, I then tiptoed(用脚失走)out of the room, leaving him to watch the boring TV programs.I hea rd no more of the baby’s crying that night and the next morning when I went into his room, I found him still watching TV by himself. I found there was a metaphor (暗喻) in my baby’s behavior for the new generation. When I gave my boy some books to go over, he only spit upon them; when I read to him, he did not feel comfortable. So is it in the schools with my students. I find that our students don’t read and they look down upon reading and make light of those of us who teach it. All they want to do is to watch TV. After this experience with the baby, however, I have drawn a conclusion: “Let them watch it!” If television is much more attractive to children than books, why should we fight against it? Let them watch what they want!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:The writer tried everything to make her baby fall asleep but failed. Surprisingly, when she turned on the TV, the baby kept quiet himself. Then she found that her students liked watching TV as much as her baby. So the writer suggested that we should let children watch what they want.实战练习(二)More and more people like bicycling and it is no surprise. It is fun, healthy and good for the environment. Maybe that’s why there are 1.4 billion bicycles and only 400 million cars on roads worldwide today.Bikes can take you almost anywhere, and there is no oil cost! Get on a bicycle and ride around your neighbourhood. You may discover something new all around you. Stopping and getting off a bike is easier than stopping and getting out of your car. You can bike to work and benefit from the enjoyable exercise without polluting the environment. You don’t even have to ride all the way.Folding bikes work well for people who take the train. Just fold the bike and take it with you. You can do the same on an airplane. A folding bike can be packed in a suitcase. You can also take a common bike with you when you fly. But be sure to look for information by getting on airline websites. Not all airlines are bicycle-friendly to travelers.Health Benefits of Bicycling: It helps to prevent heart diseases. Bicycling helps to control your weight. A 15-minute bike ride to and from work three times a week bums off five kilos of fat in a year. Bicycling can improve your mood. Exercise like bicycling has been shown to make people feel better, more relaxed and self-confident. Bicycling is healthier than driving._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:Many people like bicycling because it’s fun, heathy and good for environment and it’s easy to stop and get off. Sometimes folding bikes can be taken with you on an airplane or a train. Most importantly, bicycling has a lot of health benefits.强化练习练习(一)Understanding body language is important to success, whether in the business world or in our personal lives. However, some of our ideas about body language are wrong, according to modern communication research.There is a belief that people with shifty(变化的) eyes are probably lying. As Paul Ekman says, “When we asked people how they could tell if someone was lying, too much blinking(眨眼) and shifty eyes were the answers.” Ekman goes on to argue against such a wrong belief. Although this kind of body language is probably an expression of nervousness, it is not always because the person is lying. Shyness can, for example, make people shift their eyes. To understand what someone’s behavior means, you have to watch them carefully.There is also a belief that when meeting someone, the more eye contact, the better. As a result people would like to make initial (开始的) contact in formal situations, like a job interview, by staring fixedly at the other human. Yet Ekman points out that most of us are comfortable with eye contact lasting a few seconds,but any eye contact that is longer than that cm make us nervous.In short, you must carefully consider the speaker and the speaking environment. Experts suggest that unless you know about someone’s basic communication style, you will have little hope in understanding their true feelings through body language. In other words, body language carries important but not always true messages._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:The passage argues two wrong ideas about body language. One is that people believe shifty eyes means that person is lying. The other is that people believe the more eye contact, the better during communication. Finally, the writer gives us a suggestion that we should be careful when we judge somebody body language.练习(二)Linda Evans was my best friend—like the sister I never had. We did everything together: having piano lessons, going to movies, swimming, and horseback riding.When I was 13, my family moved away. Linda and I kept in touch through letters, and we saw each other on special time—like my wedding and Linda’s. Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often. One day a card that I sent came back, stamped “Address Unknown.” I had no idea how to find Linda.Over the years, I missed Linda very much. I wanted to share happiness of my children and then grandchildren. And I needed to share my sadness when my brother and then mother died. There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda could fill.One day I was reading a newspaper when I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda and whose last name was Wagman —Linda's married name. “There must be thousands of Wagmans,” I t hought, but I still wrote to her.She called as soon as she got my letter. “Mrs. Tobin!’’ she said excitedly, “Linda Evans Wagman is my mother.Minutes later I heard a voice that I knew very much, even after 40 years, laughed and cried and caught up on eac h other’s lives. Now the empty place in my heart is filled. And there’s one thing that Linda and I know for sure: We won’t lose each other again!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:Linda Evans and the writer are best friends. After the writer’s family moved away, they kept in touch through letters. Then, they were all busy and wrote letters often. Finally, they lost in touch with each other and the writer felt empty. After 40 years, the writer found Linda and they won’t lose each other again.1.他利用她人好心软,三番五次向她借钱。

完整word版2019高考写作指导 概要写作方式及技巧

完整word版2019高考写作指导 概要写作方式及技巧

高中英语写作指导-《概要写作》该题型提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。

原文以说明文、议论文为主,概要,基本就是段落大意。

每段用一句话概括,或者两段一个大意,最多用两句话概括。

(一)高分要诀1.概要应包括原文中的主要事实,略去不必要的细节。

这就要求考生在写作时要找关键词和主题句,准确理解、分析原文要点,归纳段落大意。

2.各要点的表达既要相对独立,又要有适当的衔接,要用适当的关联词语贯通全文,切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子,但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语,以免显得生硬。

3.所用句型力求简单,安排好篇幅的比例,概要应同原文保持协调,即用较多的文字写重要内容,用较少的文字写次要内容。

4.不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的话语which,who等引导的定语从句,而采用动词-ing形式和过去分词做定语。

5.多使用概括性词语,少用具体描述性词语。

注意要点之间的衔接。

承接过渡让步过渡列举过渡目的过渡first of allfirst as soon as second with the aim althoughas a matter of thirdit is true...that offactin the first place even though for the sake so to speak initially of course of however to start with certainly with a view as it were furthermore admittedly today after day in addition indeed for the year in and year moreover true purpose of outs more 'what finally理由时间总结举例sinceaccording to by virtue of as an all in allbefore illustration so to summarize since for instance given in summary as one example as a result of in conclusion untilfor example because (of) as ameanwhile due to just as consequence at the moment in particular in view of lastlywhen on account of such as by and large whenever namely owing to finally as soon as to illustrate the reason why consequently just as in other words a case in point to sum up lead totake...for hencefor this reason表示时间表示强调比较总括过渡词at times as a rule similarly after above all as far as I am similar to afterwards after all concerned the same as in factfrom then on as for me accordingly immediately particularly economically both...aslaterthat is speaking at the same time anyway meanwhile generally in the same chiefly next speakingmannernow even worse in my opinion in a similar way until more often in my view in commonthan thatwhile in some then总括过渡词表示时间表示强调比较respectsobviouslymostin common on a large scaleequally important of on a personalimportant levelallfor one needless to practicallything...for sayspeakinganother simplistically no doubtlikewise to be surespeakingto take the ideafurther)(二高分三注意(三)成篇三步骤1.阅读(1)认真阅读给定的原文材料,如果一遍不能理解,就多读两遍;阅读次数越多,你对原文的理解就越深刻。

2019年关于高考满分作文的写作方法介绍-范文word版 (3页)

2019年关于高考满分作文的写作方法介绍-范文word版 (3页)

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除非特殊情况,建议考生在写高考作文的时候,开头结尾占两行半的格子,顶多不能超过三行半。

技巧2:动笔之前要拟题,漂亮标题如美女准备题目的办法有2个,你可以去网络上搜索作文题目,归纳作文老师讲述的类似技巧;二是翻阅最近一年的《读者》或《青年文摘》等杂志,根据题材选择一些比较精彩的标题,记下来,也许考试的时候灵光一现可以类比运用。

技巧3:作文首尾要打眼,丰富多彩出靓点考试作文的开头方法很多:六要素开头法、题记开头法、悬念开头法、引名句开头法、排比句开头法、拟人式开头法、设问式开头法、对偶式开头法、合用修辞开头法、巧述典故开头法、解题式开头法、诗文引用开头法……希望考生们准备好一些关于道德、学习、礼仪、爱国、美德等方面的典故、名人名言,用得上。

一般来说,结尾是总结全文。

如果是记叙文,要注意抒情;如果是议论文,要注意归纳。

无论如何,最好要扣准标题。

技巧4:适当克隆和借鉴,考前备料攒信息考试前,建议考生翻阅大量的范文,积累一些佳作的结构。

如果写记叙文,最好翻阅《读者》和《青年文摘》,其中一些散文的结构是很好的,适当对其归纳总结,到考试的时候,你采用别人的“筐”,把自己的东西向里面装就可以了。

另外要关注去年至今年的社会热点。

技巧5:篇幅争取要写满,多写一点是一点一般来说,如果作文要求600字左右,那就顶多写到700字。

如果是“不低于多少字”,建议考生合理安排卷面,把卷面写满到95%左右。

有人问:考试作文如果不限文体,那么写诗歌,写顺口溜,写三句半行不行?这个谁也不敢作主,你无法揣测阅卷老师的标准,冒险的收益也许只留给准备最充分的人。

技巧6:色彩对比也关键,建议用笔选择蓝作文卷子是用黑颜色印刷的方格。

(完整word)2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解

(完整word)2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解

2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析(一)考查内容:1、考查读懂文章内容的能力2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力3、考查归纳总结的能力4、考查组织文章的能力(二)评分要点•1)字数50左右•2)理解准确,涵盖全部要点•3)准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇•4)完全使用自己的语言•5)有效使用语句间的连接成分,结构紧凑二、专题详解定义:It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。

(三)写作方法Step 1. 确定体裁,明确主题Step 2. 明确文章结构(总-分,总-分-总,分-总,并列)Step 3. 划主题句与关键信息Step 4. 写纲要,打草稿Step 5. 润色成文1) 找准体裁,提炼要点按体裁 2) 语言:同义词① 同义转换:近义词、同义词和词组的替换,尽量用单词替换短语(例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important )②) ③ 句子重构:调整词类(名词、动词、形容词转换)、时态、语态(主动变被动)等3) 衔接(替换;省略;增加):表逻辑关系的连接词替换:并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition,转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand省略:并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。

增加:按逻辑关系,补充连接词firstly…, secondly…, finally…;and…, moreover…, furthermore…; but, instead, however,例(一)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Chris, whose job is exciting and dangerous, works for MFS. Chris and other MFS’s doctors need to be ready to go almost anywhere in the world and might be sent on an emergency task. Christ thinks his job is meaningful/helpful and he gains a lot. (同义词转换)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary :People from countryside generally live longer than city people because they enjoy many advantages such as close with nature, physical work, being free from urban pressure, more free walk, quiet and peaceful environment, fresh food, etc. (句式改变)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Keys:Windbreak, which is formed by trees and other plants, is used by farmers to protect their land from damage by farming and the forces of the nature. Windbreak can protect the crops and help improve grain production. However, windbreak should be planted properly to work its best.练习实战练习(一)One hot night last August, I tried everything I could think of—a warm bottle, songs, etc. to make him fall into sleep, but he just couldn’t do it. Since I believed that a long night was waiting for me ahead, I had no choice but to bring a TV into his room to kill off the hours until dawn. I was surprised that the moment I turned on the TV, the baby became quiet right away and fixed his little eyes brightly on the screen. Not willing to waste an opportunity for sleep, I then tiptoed(用脚失走)out of the room, leaving him to watch the boring TV programs.I heard no more of the baby’s crying that night and the next morning when I went into his room, I found him still watching TV by himself. I found there was a metaphor (暗喻) in my baby’s behavior for the new generation. When I gave my boy some books to go over, he only spit upon them; when I read to him, he did not feel comfortable. So is it in the schools with my students. I find that our students don’t read and they look down upon reading and make light of those of us who teach it. All they want to do is to watch TV. After this experience with the baby, however, I have drawn a conclusion: “Let them watch it!” If television is much more attractive to children than books, why should we fight against it? Let them watch what they want!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:The writer tried everything to make her baby fall asleep but failed. Surprisingly, when she turned on the TV, the baby kept quiet himself. Then she found that her students liked watching TV as much as her baby. So the writer suggested that we should let children watch what they want.实战练习(二)More and more people like bicycling and it is no surprise. It is fun, healthy and good for the environment. Maybe that’s why there are 1.4 billion bicycles and only 400 million cars on roads worldwide today.Bikes can take you almost anywhere, and there is no oil cost! Get on a bicycle and ride around your neighbourhood. You may discover something new all around you. Stopping and getting off a bike is easier than stopping and getting out of your car. You can bike to work and benefit from the enjoyable exercise without polluting the environment. You don’t even have to ride all the way.Folding bikes work well for people who take the train. Just fold the bike and take it with you. You can do the same on an airplane. A folding bike can be packed in a suitcase. You can also take a common bike with you when you fly. But be sure to look for information by getting on airline websites. Not all airlines are bicycle-friendly to travelers.Health Benefits of Bicycling: It helps to prevent heart diseases. Bicycling helps to control your weight. A 15-minute bike ride to and from work three times a week bums off five kilos of fat in a year. Bicycling can improve your mood. Exercise like bicycling has been shown to make people feel better, more relaxed and self-confident. Bicycling is healthier than driving._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Many people like bicycling because it’s fun, heathy and good for environment and it’s easy to stop and get off. Sometimes folding bikes can be taken with you on an airplane or a train. Most importantly, bicycling has a lot of health benefits.强化练习练习(一)Understanding body language is important to success, whether in the business world or in our personal lives. However, some of our ideas about body language are wrong, according to modern communication research.There is a belief that people with shifty(变化的) eyes are probably lying. As Paul Ekman says, “When we asked people how they could tell if someone was lying, too much blinking(眨眼) and shifty eyes were the answers.” Ekman goes on to argue against such a wrong belief. Although this kind of body language is probably an expression of nervousness, it is not always because the person is lying. Shyness can, for example, make people shift their eyes. To understand what someone’s behavior means, you have to watch them carefully.There is also a belief that when meeting someone, the more eye contact, the better. As a result people would like to make initial (开始的) contact in formal situations, like a job interview, by staring fixedly at the other human. Yet Ekman points out that most of us are comfortable with eye contact lasting a few seconds,but any eye contact that is longer than that cm make us nervous.In short, you must carefully consider the speaker and the speaking environment. Experts suggest that unless you know about someone’s basic communication style, you will have little hope in understanding their true feelings through body language. In other words, body language carries important but not always true messages._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:The passage argues two wrong ideas about body language. One is that people believe shifty eyes means that person is lying. The other is that people believe the more eye contact, the better during communication. Finally, the writer gives us a suggestion that we should be careful when we judge somebody body language.练习(二)Linda Evans was my best friend—like the sister I never had. We did everything together: having piano lessons, going to movies, swimming, and horseback riding.When I was 13, my family moved away. Linda and I kept in touch through letters, and we saw each other on special time—like my wedding and Linda’s. Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often. One day a card that I sent came back, stamped “Address Unknown.” I had no idea how to find Linda.Over the years, I missed Linda very much. I wanted to share happiness of my children and then grandchildren. And I needed to share my sadness when my brother and then mother died. There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda could fill.One day I was reading a newspaper when I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda and whose last name was Wagman — Linda's married name. “There must be thousands of Wagmans,” I thought, but I still wrote to her.She called as soon as she got my letter. “Mrs. Tobin!’’ she said excitedly, “Linda Evans Wagman is my mother.Minutes later I heard a voice that I knew very much, even after 40 years, laughed and cried and caught up on each other’s lives. Now the empty place in my heart is filled. And there’s one thing that Linda and I know for sure: We won’t lose each other again!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Linda Evans and the writer are best friends. After the writer’s family moved away, they kept in touch through letters. Then, they were all busy and wrote letters often. Finally, they lost in touch with each other and the writer felt empty. After 40 years, the writer found Linda and they won’t lose each other again.1.他利用她人好心软,三番五次向她借钱。

2019高考语文指导-写作的必备技巧有哪些

2019高考语文指导-写作的必备技巧有哪些

高考作文写作必备技巧1、充分发挥自己的优势。

认识水平高、擅长理性思维的同学可选择议论文,擅长形象思维、会刻画人物的同学可选择微型小说,擅长抒情的同学可选择散文。

2、精写前几段,给评卷老师留下一个好印象。

要精雕细刻,要出彩。

比如,可开门见山,直奔主题;可制造悬念,引人入胜;可提出问题,引人注意;或巧用排比、比喻、拟人等修辞手法,或巧述故事,引人入胜,或巧用题记,揭示主旨,或巧用诗文显诗意。

写好结尾和过渡段。

阅卷老师一般是S型的扫描全文。

结尾可画龙点睛,发人深思;或总结全文,照应开头;或虚笔拓展,扩大容量;或精辟议论,深化主旨。

3、要给自己充足的构思时间,不要急于动笔。

“宁停三分,不争一秒”,因为写作是“开弓没有回头箭”的,写到一半,突然发现,呀,把题目理解错了,或没领会好命题的要求。

最可怕的是文章写到一半,又想另起炉灶。

时间没了,心情也坏了,干着急。

建议打草稿,防止“三边工程”(边立项,边设计,边施工)。

考场作文不宜见异思迁,边写边改。

要贯彻一种构思。

一旦构思已定,就不要轻易改变。

4、要力避前松后紧、虎头蛇尾。

有些同学构思、提纲拟好后,开头反复推敲,精雕细琢,后来发现时间不够,于是草草收兵。

此外,要谨慎对待修改。

今年实行网上评卷,更应慎重。

修改一般只着眼于字词方面的,可用米尺比好之后划两横。

结构方面不能修改。

要保持卷面的整洁美观,要努力做到改动少而效果好。

5、如果偏题或者离题,作文的主要分数就失去了。

为防止跑题,可从如下几点做出努力:一是将材料、引语和话题联系起来思考,不可单看话题;二是看自己确立的观点能否用话题所给材料来证明;三是想一想这则材料当初发在媒体上登载是要达到一个什么效果的。

万一跑题了,要考虑逆挽,使文章形成一种欲扬先抑的结构形态。

6、一定要完篇。

熟话说,好文章是风头、猪肚、豹尾。

没有豹尾,老鼠尾巴也要有一个,绝不能写半头文。

用半篇文章给你评分,怎么会得高分?7、要重视拟题,特别要注意不能缺题。

2019届高考英语写作指导

2019届高考英语写作指导

写作要有得分亮点:能熟练应用非谓语、定语从句(高中重点),另外,倒装句、强调句等一些固定搭配,词组,连词和短语不可或缺。

第一篇:应用文写作应用文的类型:书信作文格式例文:[书信作文写作模版1]1.保持书信格式---地址,日期,称谓,落款2.根据内容确定文体----建议,劝说,说明,申请,投诉,介绍;商榷/讨论;描绘/叙述;致谢,致歉…3.牢记常用模版和句式重点句式:Give my best regards to sb ! I’m looking forward to hearing from you instantly. sincerely/ faithfully…A Letter of Application for a JobMay 25, 2017Dear Sirs,I am looking for a position in an engineering department in which I may use my training in computer science to solve engineering problems. I would be interested in exploring the possibility of obtaining such a position within your firm.I expect to receive a Bachelor of Science degree in mechanical engineering from Tangshan Institute of Technology in June. Since September 2013 I have been participating, through my institute, in the Professional Training Program as Programmer Trainee and have gained a great deal of experience in computer applications. Details of the academic courses I have taken are contained in the enclosed resume.May I have an appointment for an interview with you to discuss my qualifications in detail? Please write to me at my home or telephone me at 221701 any weekday.Sincerely,Zhang LinA Speech on Tele-educationLadies and Gentlemen,With the rapid development of science and technology, tele-education has sped up in our country. While many people speak highly of its advantages, others see more disadvantages deriving from it.The advocates of tele-education give their arguments as follows. For one thing, tele-education makes it possible for people in remote areas to learn the subjects they are interested in. For another, people have a wider range of choices as to teachers and lessons through tele-education, because they can listen to the best lessons by the best teachers in the country, or even in the world.Just as “Every advantage has its disadvantages”, the opponents believe that not all the people have access to tele-education because many are poor. In addition, the students cannot contact teachers, but interpersonal relations are important to their study.As far as I am concerned, we should develop tele-education more rapidly to benefit more students. Meanwhile, we can design some programs to help teachers and students to contact each other.Thank you for being with me. Good-bye.第二篇:读后续写写作一、评分原则:1. 本题总分为25 分,按5 个档次给分。

2019年高考作文写作技巧介绍-推荐word版 (3页)

2019年高考作文写作技巧介绍-推荐word版 (3页)

2019年高考作文写作技巧介绍-推荐word版本文部分内容来自网络,本司不为其真实性负责,如有异议或侵权请及时联系,本司将予以删除!== 本文为word格式,下载后可随意编辑修改! ==高考作文写作技巧介绍作文作文,可以称之为“文”的,首先应当是成篇的语句。

语句来自单个的字词,而单个的字词是从心的内里表达出来的。

所以作文本身的目的,就在于表达内心的一种看法,一种体会,一种情感。

在前几年的优秀高考作文中,出现了一股“向古人致思”的热潮,以古为镜,以此明得失,观成败,品人生。

写得好的文章,拿来众诗人文人,与全文融会,的确可以深化主题拔高思想内涵。

这是一种文法思路,然一味向过去的兴衰看,写的多了,观者也难免生厌,聪明的模仿也并不一定能成为聪明的选择。

那么,怎样才能写出“新意”呢?怎样才能从数十万份试卷中跳出来,“闪亮”阅卷老师的眼睛?聪明的答案刚好与一句宣传口号一致——从我做起,从小事做起。

“真善美”的作文境界“真善美”一直是一种人见人爱的状态。

而这三字中,又以“真”来牵引。

“真”可谓是“善”和“美”的前提。

那么作文中,“真”这个要素的引入自然是必不可少。

比起以说理论辩之严谨取胜的议论文,我更提倡高中生在高考中选择散文和记叙文这两种文体。

这就是我想说的“从我做起”。

在这两种文体中,真情实感可以有极大的发挥与流露,而感触人人不同,所以是新鲜而灵动的。

主题的真挚,很大程度上能给阅卷老师一个良好的印象分。

那么“真”要怎么表现呢?首先自然是要在文章中最大程度的使用自己风格的文字和语言。

下面让我们在看这样一段文字:。

2019版高考英语写作攻略(全解析)讲义:常考应用文 Word版含解析

2019版高考英语写作攻略(全解析)讲义:常考应用文 Word版含解析

常考应用文一书信/电子邮件1.技法点拨(1)题型特点及写作步骤邀请信是写信人对收信人的一种盛情邀约,一般分为正式和非正式两种。

正式邀请信属于事务信函,一般为邀请参加会议、学术活动等。

另一种属于个人信函,例如邀请某人观看展览、出席典礼、共进晚餐等。

①正式邀请信的写作步骤这类信函一般以会议或活动组委会名义来写,被邀请者通常为比较有威望的人士。

因此,措辞要正式,语气要热情有礼。

第一段:表明邀请对方参加的意图。

第二段:介绍活动的名称、时间、地点;表达对被邀请人水平和能力的推崇和赞赏,以及能为活动带来的良好影响;说明会议相关事宜,引起对方的兴趣。

第三段:表达希望对方能够参加的诚意,并请收信人对邀请作出反馈。

②普通邀请信的写作步骤这类信函的邀请对象一般是朋友、熟人,所以内容和格式都比较随意、轻松。

第一段:表明邀请意图。

第二段:说明活动的内容、时间、地点等。

在信中应强调非常希望对方能够参加或者出席的愿望。

第三段:期待回复。

(2)写作注意事项①分类、特点邀请信是人们日常生活、社会活动和外事活动中常用的应用文体,它分为正式和非正式两种。

正式邀请信的格式(包括信头、信内地址、客套语等)要齐全,正文内容应用书面语。

非正式邀请信通常只有日期,没有信内地址,语句也很随意,多为口头表达。

②主要内容邀请信的内容主要包括邀请原因、活动地点和时间等,其特点是简单、热情、给人一种真诚、亲切的感觉。

非正式邀请信一般是用来邀请亲戚、朋友等关系较为亲密的人出席某种社交活动,其格式与普通信件差不多。

③注意事项邀请信应使用第一人称,双方的名字都要写全名;内容包括邀请的原因、约定的地点和时间等,而且必须写清楚,切忌含糊不清;如果要求被邀请人给出答复,可在信的左下角或下面正中处写上R.S.V.P(意为“请回复”);如果有特殊要求,也应当在信中注明。

(3)句式积累①段首常用语I am writing to invite you to ...I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ...I wonder if you can come ...How would you like to join us in ...?②段尾常用语Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to ...?My family and I would feel much honoured if you could come.We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.I would like to meet you there and please let me know yourdecision soon.2.经典范文(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。

2019年全国卷Ⅰ高考满分作文范文及写作技巧【二十篇】

2019年全国卷Ⅰ高考满分作文范文及写作技巧【二十篇】

2019年全国卷Ⅰ高考满分作文范文及写作技巧【二十篇】想要写出一篇满分作文,需要注意以下五点。

一.考生字体端正,书写规范,卷面整洁。

阅卷老师工作量大,易产生疲劳,所以需要考生端正书写,力求卷面干净、整洁,避免阅卷老师看得吃力,影响情绪,以致影响分数。

高考阅卷采用电脑阅卷方式,考生的答题卷要被放大,表现在电脑上,那些凌乱的书写、潦草的字迹被电脑放大后会显得更加难看。

今年阅卷过程中,有位批阅语知部分的老师在高考阅卷简报上,写了这样一番话:字好的基本上答题也好,满分卷基本上都是字漂亮的,字迹潦草的基本上没有得满分的。

在这方面,作文体现得就更加明显了。

都说字如其人,埋头在众多“杂草堆”中,突然发现一朵璀璨的鲜花,那种清新之感扑面而来,老师会不自觉地认为,字写这么漂亮,这名考生的语文素养肯定也不会太差。

印象好了,分数当然不会低了。

二.不要试图抄袭或者套作,应积极准备,做好系统训练。

年年都会有一些考生整段整段地抄袭、套用优秀作文。

今年当然也有,《水仙自有妙人栽》一文作为雷同卷,就是教训。

阅卷老师、专家组都有丰富的阅读量和阅卷经验,知道哪些话考生能写出来,哪些话考生写不出来。

对于存疑的文章,会有专门的小组负责上网查找,一旦核实即判为不合格。

就算侥幸“漏网”,那些完全依赖考前背诵范文,在考场上仓促抄袭、套作的做法,也很容易造成原本抒发个性的作文“趋同于众”。

这些都要求我们在平时做好积极的准备,参照优秀范文掌握写作的技巧,结合自己的生活体验去写作,而不是照本宣科,直接抄袭。

三.个性化阅读,读写结合,深层思索社会、人生问题。

有很多考生伪造名人奋斗史,张冠李戴,伪例错例难有说服力;大量作文名人扎堆,撞车严重,例如,“三国”——王国维、汪国真、周国平等人物就很突出;部分考生“无米下锅”,内容单薄。

类似的现象每年都会大量出现,这与考生平日的阅读功利化、思考肤浅化有很大关系。

这就需要考生平日沉下心来,真正读透读懂一本书,读懂一个人,而不是仅仅为了摘抄优美的句子和作文素材,这样自身素养得到提升,写出来的文章自然也就充满文化底蕴。

2019高考语文作文写作指导_掌握叙事的方法

2019高考语文作文写作指导_掌握叙事的方法

2019高考语文作文写作指导:掌握叙事的方法学习目标1.对叙事旳方法有一个较全面系统旳了解;2.掌握一些基本旳叙事技巧;3.能根据叙事旳需要,灵活运用各种叙事方法,较清晰地体现文章主旨.写作指津要想把事情说清楚,就要注意叙事旳顺序.先写什么,后写什么,再写什么,只有安排得恰当,才能叙述得条理清楚.记叙旳顺序一般可分为顺叙、倒叙、插叙、补叙四种.一.顺叙什么是顺叙?按照事情发生、发展旳过程和时间旳先后从头讲到尾就叫顺叙.这种叙事方法最简单,也最常用,是写事旳主要方法.运用顺叙旳写法,文章旳层次段落和事情发展旳过程基本一致,所以写起来容易把文章写得条理清楚、脉络分明.例如:《林黛玉进贾府》就是以林黛玉旳见闻为线索,以时间先后为顺序交代故事旳情节旳.节选部分开头是黛玉初进贾府与贾母、两位舅母、纨以与众姐妹见面,接着黛玉初见王熙凤,然后写黛玉拜见两位舅舅,并从侧面介绍宝玉,最后写黛玉陪贾母吃饭,并与宝玉见面.故事情节达到高潮.顺叙有以时间为顺序旳,有以事物发展规律为顺序旳,也有以空间变换为顺序旳.在叙事性旳文章中,大多是以时间为顺序和以事物发展规律为顺序旳.注意:运用顺叙,要剪裁得当,重点突出.否则,容易出现罗列现象、平铺直叙旳毛病,叫人读起来索然寡味.二.倒叙.什么是倒叙?就是把事件旳结局或某个最突出旳片断提在前面叙述,然后再从事情旳开始进行叙述,这就叫倒叙.这种叙述,除了把事情旳结果提前外,其他跟顺叙没有区别.例如:鲁迅旳小说《祝福》就是采用倒叙旳写法,先写出故事旳结局“祥林嫂惨死于祝福声中”,然后再叙述祥林嫂悲惨旳一生,叙写她一到鲁镇,二到鲁镇旳情况;最后以“祝福声中感慨”为尾声,由回想回到现实.这样写更突出了封建宗法制度吃人旳残酷本质.使用这种倒叙,一般有这样两个目旳:一是先写出事情旳结果,后文紧紧围绕这个结果写,使文章紧凑不散;二是为了引起读者阅读旳注意,先把结果端在人们旳面前,以引发人们读下去旳兴趣.注意:运用倒叙旳写法,必须注意交代清楚倒叙旳起讫点,顺叙和倒叙旳转换处要有明显旳界限、必要旳文字过渡,如《祝福》中用了这样旳句子“然而先前旳所见所闻旳她旳半生事迹旳断片,至此也联成一片了”,使倒叙和顺叙接榫.这些地方处理不好,会使文章脉络不清,头绪不明,影响容旳表达.三.插叙.什么是插叙?就是在叙述事情旳过程中,中间插入另一段叙述,这另一段叙述就叫插叙.插叙有时是一件过去旳事,有时是另外一件事,它对情节旳发展、容旳丰富起补充作用,使中心思想更加明确.例如:鲁迅旳小说《故乡》中有两处插叙.一处是当“我”旳母亲谈到闰土时,作者用“这时候,我旳脑海里忽然闪出一幅神异旳图画来”引出对少年闰土形象旳插叙.另一处是对二嫂形象旳回忆.这两处插叙使闰土、二嫂过去与现在旳不同形象与不同生活境况形成鲜明对比,充实了文章容,深入开掘了主题思想.使用插叙时,要安排好与中心容旳衔接,使过渡自然,容贯通一气.例如作家洪汛涛写旳《蛇医传》中旳一段精彩插叙.(老汉把手指让蛇咬一口,手臂大肿.他立即用草药敷上,肿就退了.)看热闹旳人,都大声地叫好,土根更惊得呆住了,这使他想起三年前旳一件事来:那是一个灰云迷蒙旳早晨,四明山浸在白茫茫旳雾水里.看不见对面旳行人,也看不清脚下旳路.他跟隔壁旳周宝六去金鸡岭扒柴.他们昂着头,一边唱着小曲,一边走.走过一个山垄,冷不防“飕”旳一声,从斜里窜出一条秤杆那样粗旳大蛇,那也是一条绿绿旳五步蛇呀!它在宝六旳脚趾上咬了一口.宝六,她没走出三步,人就痛得晕在地上了.土根急得高声喊:“救命!”但等到人们赶到,把她抬回家里,伤势已经很重.请了医生看,也没办法,说:“晚了,要是在刚咬旳时候,把脚趾剁掉就有救了.”这样,十二岁旳周宝六,大叫大嚷,在地上翻来覆去地爬了一夜,死了.……土根想到这里,打了个寒噤.那老汉,把手上旳草药拿掉了,皮肤已恢复原来旳颜色,只留下米大旳一个小红点.他拍拍胸脯,向周围旳人介绍自己······插入旳这段叙述,是后边写土根决心拜老汉为师甘当蛇医旳根本原因,它对故事情节起了补充说明旳作用,从而更好地表现了中心思想.这段插叙前后都有交代语句.插叙前是这样写旳:“土根更惊得呆住了,这使他想起三年前旳一件事来”;插叙后是这样写旳:“土根想到这里,打了个寒噤”.这些前后交代旳语句,使读者一看,就会明白这部分是插叙.插叙完后,文章又接着开头老汉当众表演自己被蛇咬伤而治好旳场面写下去,显得很自然.注意:插叙应从实际出发,不能单纯追求形式上旳变化而乱用插叙,弄巧成拙.插叙旳容,只是和原来旳叙述相关但不能相连,相连就成了倒叙.插叙更不是叙述旳中心,只是为中心服务旳一个片断.不要脱离原来旳叙述线索而发展成另一条线索,更不能节外生枝,成为文章旳游离部分.也不要把它写成倒叙旳分叙.插叙和倒叙不同.插叙往往是一个片断,文字一般较简略,它不是文章旳主要部分;倒叙是把事情旳结果放在开头写,它是文章旳主要部分.四.补叙什么叫补叙?补叙也叫追叙,是行文中用三两句话或一小段话对前边说旳人或事作一些简单旳补充交代.补叙通常是中心事件旳有机组成部分,文章旳关键之处.没有补叙,故事情节上就会出现漏洞,令人不解.例如:《水浒传》第十六回《智取生辰纲》一节,叙述在黄泥岗松林七个贩枣旳客商劫走了生辰纲.看到这里,读者自然生疑:同一桶酒,贩枣客商喝得,为什么志等人就喝不得?这时,作者不慌不忙地交代了吴用、晁盖等七人旳,并介绍了使用障眼法、当面吃酒以瓢下药旳经过.这样,通过补叙使得事件真相大白.由此可见,补叙实际上是在叙述时,故意“藏”去若干片断,到后面适当旳地方再把这些片断“亮”出来,使读者恍然大悟.通过这一“藏”一“亮”,造成叙事旳波澜.文示例(一)同情书剑假若世界是一座大花园,那么同情就是那万紫千红中平凡旳一朵.它旳普通,没有让世界失色,却将滋养它旳花园装点得格外美丽.天太冷,有风,我坐在姨妈小店旳一藤椅上,靠着暖气,目光随着门外一只干枯旳树叶在地上跑.小店对面旳路阶上坐着一排人,他们是来城市打工旳农民,在等着做一些零星旳气力活.没有人经过他们旳时候,他们就坐着抑或蹲着,双手插在口袋或袖子里.有人旳时候,他们一下站起身,眼睛直直地盯着来者,大声招呼着.然后,一人或多人,骑上叮叮当当旳自行车,疾驰而去.但更多旳时候,路过旳不是雇主,他们只好重复地站起,蹲下.目光好似也在随着那片落叶在地上跑.我坐在椅子上,看着,心里想着些什么.那天,有一个农民工拧开自带旳塑料杯想喝水,一倒,空了.他跟身边旳人大声说了几句什么,我想很可能那人喝了他旳水.说完后,这个农民工四下望着,无意间隔着玻璃看到店有饮水机.他眼睛盯着饮水机,之后又看着我,我明白了他旳意思,点了点头.他还有些犹豫,我站起来,拉开店门,招呼道:叔叔,进来倒些水吧.他迟疑地走了进来,倒完水,又几乎倒着走了出去,目光里满是感激,满得像那杯将溢旳水.第二天,我在征得姨妈同意后将那台饮水机(不怎么用)搬到了店前旳檐下.我想:既然世间有那温暖感恩旳目光,那又何必吝惜那桶冰冷旳水.有位哲人说过:“授人玫瑰,历久犹有余香.”同情是一种真爱,它能化解心中旳阴暗,拉近人与人之间旳距离,让世界变得灿烂,春意盎然.北风吹起,耳边回响起这样一个声音-------我想牵着你旳手,让我们借助彼此寒冷旳身躯取暖吧.【老师点评】这篇作文,构思精巧,详略安排得当,主要情节记叙细致入微.在记叙中,恰当地运用了动作、神态等细节描写,如“他们就坐着抑或蹲着,双手插在口袋或袖子里”“眼睛直直地盯着来者”“他们只好重复地站起,蹲下”“几乎倒着走了出去”,把农民工旳无奈惶惶旳心态描写出来,特别具有感染力,容易激起人旳同情心,使得后文旳结果以与抒情顺理成章,水到渠成.语言娴熟老到,颇见功力.如“我”因无聊“目光随着门外一只干枯旳树叶在地上跑”,农民工因无奈“目光好似也在随着那片落叶在地上跑”,“目光里满是感激,满得像那杯将溢旳水”看似随意,实质为下文抒情作铺垫.本文旳立意也是深刻旳.农民工作为弱势群体旳代表,是目前中学生作文中旳“时髦”人物,小作者由“同情”而上升到“社会和谐”旳高度,就有别于一般性旳构思了.文章采用顺叙写法,安排比较合适,假如把后果先写出来,就减少了读者往下读旳兴趣,也没有这个必要,简单旳问题反而复杂化了.文示例(二)同情火家慧窗外,雨点在不停地敲打着屋顶.隔着雨声,我听见院子里有异样旳声响.倾耳细听,像是小孩在哭喊,但又尖锐刺耳得多.再仔细辨别,原来是几只小猫在哀鸣.天这么黑,又下着雨,它们在外面干什么呢?我带上手电筒和雨伞,轻轻打开门,蹑手蹑脚地走了出去,生怕惊动它们.我用手电筒把院子里照视了一遍,可丝毫没有小猫旳踪影.我大声呼唤着,然而没有声音回答我.大概它们听见响动吓跑了吧,我转身欲走.可没走几步,那叫声又从远处微弱而执着地传了过来.这回我循着声音,找到了它们.原来,小猫们正躲在空调架下避雨.在手电筒冷灯旳照射下,它们蜷缩在一起,紧贴在墙上,怯生生地望着我.雨水顺着架子流到它们身上,它们抖抖毛,又拥抱在一起,竖着旳毛仍在颤抖着.看着小猫们可怜旳样子,我顿生怜悯之心,想把它们解救出来.当我准备把想法实施时,一个竹节色旳瘦小身影浮现在了我旳眼前······那是个夏日炎热旳早晨,也是在这个空调架下.我听到了一只小猫细弱旳求救声.在同情心旳驱使下,我央求妈妈把小猫救出来.这是只出生时间不长旳小猫,见了我,它踉踉跄跄地爬起来,蓝色旳眼睛充满怯意.我们用牛奶喂它,给它做暖和旳窝,可是小猫总是吃得很少.身体也一直不好.终于有一天,它不见了,怎么喊都没有回应.等到我找到它时,它已奄奄一息地躺在洗衣机后面了……以后我才明白,没有妈妈旳保护,这么小旳猫很难活下来.而当时猫妈妈很可能只是为了觅食,才把小猫寄存在这里.归根结蒂是我不必要旳同情心害了小猫,我一心以为自己救了它,其实却是把它推向了死亡.我在施舍同情时,忘记了问猫旳意见.想到这儿,我快步走回了家.虽然,屋外一声弱似一声旳猫叫牵扯着我旳心,我仍努力把诸如“猫会不会感冒”“会不会冻死”之类旳问题,从脑子里驱散掉.期盼着猫妈妈旳到来.秒针一圈圈飞快地跑了过去,终于我听到了一声令所有人惊喜旳叫声,紧接着又是小猫一声声旳呜咽,似乎在向妈妈诉苦,又似乎在高兴妈妈旳到来.第二天,早晨起来,庭院里旳积水都已干了,一切就像从未发生过.但我却懂得了,同情是必要旳,但在我们因同情而伸手帮助别人时,应先分清情况,征求别人旳意见,不要好心办了坏事.我望了望空调架,在上面反射出柔和旳光,一切是那么美好,鸟语花香,春暖花开,我又听见远处快乐旳猫叫······【老师点评】本文作者借助于“小猫”来辐射社会表达深刻旳人生道理,构思精巧,立意深刻.文章在看到小猫们处境艰难想要施救时插入了一段回忆,可谓神来之笔.如果没有这段插叙,文章就仅仅是一篇简单解读“同情”旳作文,立意一般.可加入这段插叙,主题立意就显豁了.“我在施舍同情时,忘记了问猫旳意见”如此旳语言简直让人拍案叫绝.本文语言描写细腻生动,“蜷缩在一起”“紧贴在墙上”“怯生生地”“踉踉跄跄地爬”“竖着旳毛仍在颤抖着”没有细致旳观察和生活积累是很难准确生动地表达出来旳.专题训练【作文题目】请叙述一件发生在你身边旳事情.要求:立意自定,题目自拟,恰当地使用两种或两种以上旳叙述方式,篇幅在800字以上.【写作指导】一、选材要精.要选自己熟悉旳事来写.要尽量选择自己生活中熟悉旳、感受深切旳事情,这样,运用时才会得心应手,容易写出自己旳真情实感.因而也最能感动人、最能唤起读者旳共鸣.选材要"小中见大",生活中许多具体旳小事常常能反映事物旳本质,也有深刻旳意义.因此,我们在写作时,更要注意选取那些看来很小却能反映出深刻意义旳事情来写.二、构思要巧.构思,是指在作文前进行旳一系列旳思考过程,包括选择材料、确定中心、组织材料、运用语言等方面旳容.构思要巧,也就是在文章旳立意上要有新意,在选择材料、组织材料、表现方法等方面力求巧妙,尽量做到新颖别致,不与人雷同.三、详略要得当.作文旳时候,确定了题目,选择了材料,就要根据表达中心思想旳需要进行剪裁,仔细考虑详略.对表达中心显得重要旳材料要详写.详写就要放得开,细致地刻画,充分地发挥.而次要之处则要略写.一篇文章有详有略,重点才能突出.四、结构要完整.所谓完整,一是指事件从起因到结果旳完整,二是指文章结构上旳完整.这里,很重要旳一条是前后呼应.容和标题要呼应,结尾与开头要呼应.一篇文章所描述旳事情往往不止一件,事情发生和进行旳时间、地点未必一致,描述旳手段也有顺叙、倒叙、插叙等区别,因此叙写时就需要通过过渡性旳文字把它们联贯起来,使之浑然一体.这样,文章才能严谨、和谐、完整.【习作示例】下围棋伟我和扬是老同学,都是“围棋迷”.两人旳好胜心都比较强.今天下午,我俩又在活动室里下围棋.我全神贯注,盘算着每个子儿,步步为营,信心十足.而扬呢,他沉着应战,不甘示弱.渐渐地,我看出了对方旳弱点,就向黑子左右旳孤军猛攻.这一着不只是吃掉了对方数子,还大削弱了对方旳力量.号为“常胜将”旳扬感到意外,嘴里嘀咕着:小下得可厉害,最近旳棋艺进步得多快!【用“下围棋”展开情节】扬这个“常胜将”之所以感到意外,是有道理旳.【过渡句带起下面旳倒叙】这得从上初中时谈起.那时,我旳邻居中有两位老大爷常坐在一块儿下围棋.我回家做完作业就紧挨在棋盘旁边观战.我慢慢地对围棋产生了兴趣.两位老大爷看到我很专心,就不约而同地说:“我们也要培养接班人,小,行吗?”我听了打心底里高兴,就回答:“两位老爷爷愿意教我,我一定努力学习!”就这样,我慢慢地学会了一些基本旳走棋方法.于是,我就常找班里旳扬下棋.扬人小脑子真灵,棋艺很精,班里会下棋旳都是他手下败将,“常胜将”旳名字就这样喊了起来.同他几次对阵,我都被他杀得狼狈不堪,逗得围观旳同学笑个不停.可是,我有个倔强脾气,老是输了,怎么办呢?有了,我想起有象棋谱和棋书,围棋方面旳书也应该有吧!一天,我到书店一看,书架上正好摆着一叠《学围棋》.我喜出望外,选了一本就读了起来.扬几次邀我下棋,我挂免战牌,闭门死啃《学围棋》,书上一些定式和基本死活形状我背得滚瓜烂熟.一有空,我还到邻居老大爷家去学习他们旳一些“棋路”.我满以为这一下有了理论旳指导,就再也不怕扬了.于是我向扬挑战.摆好阵势,我心里想着:你扬别神气,这下非把你这个“常胜将”打败不可.双方交战了.围观旳同学也来了不少.开局没多久,情况就变了,扬搬移子儿,步步紧逼,我感到非常被动.棋盘上旳情况,书本上都没讲到,怎么办呢?我用尽脑筋,好不容易走成一盘要活旳棋,在赶忙按书上旳方法又在那里布下了几个子,终于“活尽”了.我高兴得几乎跳了起来.哪知道对方声东击西,转移目标,冷不防他趁机把我旳另一块棋给吃死了.我旳视线从棋盘移到扬旳脸部.看到他那喜悦旳表情,我才感到光看书是没有用旳.这盘棋结果我落得个惨败.什么道理呢?又输了!我苦思冥想着,脸涨得红红旳,额上不时冒汗.这时,不知是谁喊了一声:“快去游泳吧!”游泳,我很喜爱旳.那还是去年暑假,王老师带我们去游泳.那天,我们到了游泳池,看到池水清澈见底,顽皮旳小孩在池里戏水,浪花溅得我一脸.这边几个青年工人熟练地划动双臂,像海豚那样快游,又像青蛙那样有节奏地游着.那边有几个小朋友在那里踩水,叽叽喳喳,像小鸭子那样逗人喜爱.我们也顾不与再看这些了,大家都跳到池里去.我因为刚学,心又急,身子沉下去,头却抬不起来.游来游去,费了好大劲,还是原封不动.王老师看到了,就亲切地开导我:“不要着急,慢慢来,多学几次就会学会旳.你要记住‘在游泳中学会游泳’这个道理.”以后,我每次去游泳池,想起了王老师旳话,就大胆实践,泡到水中去学,同时还注意观察那些会游泳旳人旳动作,还向他们请教,就这样,我边学边游,慢慢地学会了.【恰当地运用了插叙,对所叙事件加以扩展.但是关于游泳池情景旳叙写,不是重点,只要略写就行.】学游泳这段经历,引起了我旳深思.王老师说旳“在游泳中学会游泳”这句话,使我旳心亮堂起来.“对了!”游泳是这样,下棋不也是这样吗?光看书,不实践或少实践,怎能掌握棋艺,下好围棋呢?从此,我同扬对阵,总虚心地、认真地学习他旳招法,遇到难解旳棋型就记下来,回家琢磨.这样,时间长了,眼界开阔了,棋路广了.我还不时练习“算步”.每次下棋到争夺激烈旳时候,我就细心计算,努力把棋算准,还经常独自摆棋练习计算,做到“知己知彼”,不断地提高下棋水平.【在王老师旳话语旳启发下,如何反复实践,要重墨详写.这里写得嫌简单,又少具体旳描写.】此刻,我摸熟了对方旳棋路,看准了他旳弱处,奇袭猛攻.扬心里一慌,阵脚乱了.我终于赢了他几个子,打败了“常胜将”,取得了第一次胜利.【少了过渡句段,同本文开头所写旳棋赛连接不起来.把过渡句补上,就可连成一气.】【老师点评】这是一篇中学生旳习作,说明了学围棋要像学游泳那样,也必须在实践中不断提高旳道理.为了强调事情旳结局,写作上用了倒叙旳手法,中间用了一段插叙,交代了作者思想得到启发和提高旳原因.作者记叙事件,脉络比较分明,不足旳地方是详略失调,该详旳地方,如对照“在游泳中学会游泳”这个道理进行琢磨旳具体过程,叙写不够;而应该略述旳地方,如写游泳池游泳一节,其中关于情景旳描写却用墨过多.顺叙和倒叙连接处缺少必要旳交代,使脉络不清,影响阅读.。

完整word版,2019高考语文作文辅导 高考高分作文的四种结构与范文

完整word版,2019高考语文作文辅导 高考高分作文的四种结构与范文

2019高考语文作文辅导高考高分作文的四种结构与范文结构是文章的骨架。

一篇议论文除了要有集中而鲜明的、统领全文而又贯穿始终的中心论点和典型确凿、充分有力的论据之外,还要有严谨、清晰、完整的篇章结构和段落结构。

结构是文章的整体轮廓和思想外化,是文章的核心和骨架,它统领并支配着文章的选材、语言以及言说的节奏,骨架立则文章立,骨架挺拔则文章高远。

所以刘勰说“文之思也,其神远矣,故寂然凝虑,思接千载;悄焉动容,视通万里。

吟咏之间,吐纳珠玉之声;眉睫之前,卷舒风云之色。

”(《文心雕龙•神思》)高考作文评价标准中有对结构清晰而明确的要求,一类文的要求是“结构严谨”,二类文的要求是“结构完整”。

议论文的基本结构是“三段论”结构:提出问题(引论)→分析问题(本论)→解决问题(结论)。

具体来说:1.总分总结构总分总的结构是高考议论文最常见常用的结构形式,即开头概引材料,提出论点,中间从若干个角度或层次展开论述,结尾总结论述,回扣观点或重申强调。

中间部分是文章的主体部分,要重点构思设计,分论点之间必须有紧密的内在联系,或并列,或递进,或对比,不能是包含关系或交叉关系。

分论点要围绕文章的总观点展开,要是总观点的具体化或细化,而总观点要是分论点的总纲或水到渠成的总结。

心中有德看惯了太多的勾心斗角,也看倦了太多的贪官污吏,内心迷惘而又不知所措你却笑着对我说,若心中有德,一切终将释然。

(提出中心论点)心中有德,是那淡泊名利的心境。

(分论点一)你静静地漫步于乡间丛林,身上穿着打着层层补丁的衣服,脚上穿着破了洞的草鞋,脸庞被晒得黝黑,唯有那眼睛依旧炯炯有神。

我望着你,陌生而又熟悉。

身于豪门,本该享受荣华富贵,平步青云,怎奈你那高昂的头颅,始终不愿垂下,宁可受苦受累也不为那“五斗米折腰”。

你心中始终以百姓为重,却放弃了自己的“大好前程”。

因为心中有德,那淡泊名利的心境,所以千百年来人们牢记你,那东晋著名诗人——陶渊明。

(点题,呼应分论点一)心中有德,是那舍生取义的精神。

2019高考写作指导-《概要写作》方式及技巧(汇编)

2019高考写作指导-《概要写作》方式及技巧(汇编)

高中英语写作指导-《概要写作》该题型提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。

原文以说明文、议论文为主,概要,基本就是段落大意。

每段用一句话概括,或者两段一个大意,最多用两句话概括。

(一)高分要诀1.概要应包括原文中的主要事实,略去不必要的细节。

这就要求考生在写作时要找关键词和主题句,准确理解、分析原文要点,归纳段落大意。

2.各要点的表达既要相对独立,又要有适当的衔接,要用适当的关联词语贯通全文,切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子,但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语,以免显得生硬。

3.所用句型力求简单,安排好篇幅的比例,概要应同原文保持协调,即用较多的文字写重要内容,用较少的文字写次要内容。

4.不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的话语表达,至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换,如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。

此外,在写作时,要尽量使用短句,慎用长难句。

例如,尽量少用关系代词which,who 等引导的定语从句,而采用动词-ing形式和过去分词做定语。

5.多使用概括性词语,少用具体描述性词语。

注意要点之间的衔接。

概要写作中的衔接过渡词汇:列举过渡目的过渡让步过渡承接过渡first of allfirstsecondthirdin the first place initiallyto start with furthermorein addition moreover what’s more finally with the aimoffor the sakeofwith a viewtofor thepurpose ofalthoughit is true...thateven thoughof coursecertainlyadmittedlyindeedtrueas soon asas a matter offactso to speakhoweveras it wereday after dayyear in and yearout举例理由时间总结as an illustration for instance one example for example just asin particular such as namelyto illustratea case in point take...for sinceby virtue ofsogivenas a result ofbecause (of)due toin view ofon account ofowing tothe reason whyin other wordslead tofor this reasonbeforesinceasuntilmeanwhileat the momentwhenwheneveras soon asjust asaccording toall in allto summarizein summaryin conclusionas aconsequencelastlyby and largefinallyconsequentlyto sum uphence总括过渡词 表示时间 表示强调 比较as a rule as far as I am concerned as for me economically speaking generally speakingin my opinion in my view in someat times afterafterwards from then on immediately latermeanwhile next now until while thenabove all after all in factparticularly that is anyway chiefly even worse more often than thatsimilarly similar to the same as accordingly both...asat the same time in the same mannerin a similar wayin common总括过渡词 表示时间 表示强调 比较respects obviouslyon a large scale on a personal levelpractically speaking simplistically speakingto take the idea furthermostimportant of allneedless to sayno doubt to be sure in common equally important for one thing...for another likewise(二)高分三注意(三)成篇三步骤 1.阅读(1)认真阅读给定的原文材料,如果一遍不能理解,就多读两遍;阅读次数越多,你对原文的理解就越深刻。

2019年高中生作文写作方法指导及例文-word范文 (4页)

2019年高中生作文写作方法指导及例文-word范文 (4页)

本文部分内容来自网络整理,本司不为其真实性负责,如有异议或侵权请及时联系,本司将立即删除!== 本文为word格式,下载后可方便编辑和修改! ==高中生作文写作方法指导及例文1998年高考题目是《坚韧--我追求的品格》/《战胜脆弱》,许多考生写父母不是双亡就是遭遇不幸(如得不治之症,出车祸等),分明是编造情节、无病呻吟!从201X年开始,高考作文的发展等级里增加了一条“感情真挚”的要求,这就告诉我们一个信息:高考中那些以真情动人的文章能获得高分。

“感人心者,莫先乎情”,“情”这个我们生活中无处不在的东西,千百年来,不知被多少文人墨客以不同的方式讴歌、赞美,成就了多少感天动地、荡气回肠的美文。

人类最复杂的东西是情感,最具有个性特色、最能打动人的也是情感,因而语言真正的力量是要挖掘内心深处的灵魂,抒写发自内心深处的真实感情,敞开心扉,“以自己的心灵之火点燃别人的心灵之火”,使读者“去以心发现”(何其芳语),才能取得感人的艺术效果。

时下的影视大片,尽管其耗资怎样巨大,其阵容怎样无比,其视觉怎样新丽,其音响怎样震撼,也只不过是一时耸人耳目、娱乐视听而已,终究没能震撼观众的心灵,也就终究难以动人。

记住:行文语言一旦真挚,出乎心灵,有无技巧都无关紧要,甚至让一切技巧黯然失色,如同出浴的美人,素面朝天,也还是魅力动人。

当然,做到语言真挚,情感动人,也有值得借鉴的方法:1.素材选写中见真情。

王国维在《人间词话》上说过:“能写真景物,真感情者,谓之有境界。

”要选择自己经历过的或者最熟悉的情感素材来写。

2.冲突描写中露真情。

如现实与理想的冲突、误会的冲突、情感的冲突……这些常是捕捉真挚情感的地方。

3.细节勾勒中绘真情。

真实细腻的细节描写,向来就是动人情思的。

细节描写的魅力是在细致入微的描绘中展现人物的内心世界、思想感情。

朱自清的《背影》最感人处,就在于父亲蹒跚地努力地穿过铁道爬上月台为我“买橘子”的细节描写。

4.烘托叙述中显真情。

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高中英语写作指导-《概要写作》
该题型提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。

原文以说明文、议论文为主,概要,基本就是段落大意。

每段用一句话概括,或者两段一个大意,最多用两句话概括。

(一)高分要诀
1•概要应包括原文中的主要事实,略去不必要的细节。

这就要求考生在写作时要找关键词和主题句,准确理解、分析原文要点,归纳段落人思o
2•各要点的表达既要相对独立,又要有适当的衔接,要用适当的关联词语贯通全文,切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子,但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语,以免显得生硬。

3•所用句型力求简单,安排好篇幅的比例,概要应同原文保持协调,即用较多的文字写重要内容,用较少的文字写次要内容。

4 •不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的话语表达,至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换,如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。

此外,在写作时,要尽量使用短句,慎用长难句。

例如,尽量少用关系代词whrh,who 等引导的定语从句,而采用动词-hg 形式和过去分词做定语。

5•多使用概括性词语,少用具体描述性词语。

注意要点之间的衔接。

概要写作中的衔接过渡词汇:
(二)高分三注意
期J除细节
提炼*刪除具体例子(引用一两个说明问题即可)4免重复
I整台
同义转换:近义词、同义词等替换
.句子璽构:调整词类、时态、语态等
逻辑:街接(照应、替代、谷路、连接和词汇衔谖)
G)成篇三步骤
1•阅读
(1)认真阅读给定的原文材料,如果一遍不能理解,就多读两遍;阅读次数越多,你对原文的理解就越深刻。

⑵画出那些能概括文章主题思想的单词、短语或短句子;决定原文中哪些部分重要,哪些部分次重要;对重要部分的主要观点进行概括。

(3)简要地记下主要观点一一主题、标题、细节等你认为对概括概要写作重要的东西。

2•写作
(1)尽量用自己的话完成,不要直接引用原文的句子。

⑵应该遵循原文的逻辑顺序,这样你就不必重新组织观点、事实。

(3)写概要写作时可以采用下列几种小技巧:
删除细节,只保留主要观点。

选择一至两个例子:原文中可能包括五个或更多的例
子,你只需从中筛选一至两个例子。

把长段的描述变成短小、简单的句子:如果材料中描述某人或某事用了十个句子,那么你只要把它们变成一两句即可。

避免重复:在原文中,为了强调某个主题,可能会重复论证说明,但是这在概要写作中是不能使用的;应该删除那些突出强调的重述句。

压缩长句。

附1:概要写作常用句式:
附2:
(1)表示文章的内容以及研究目的
①This paper is a in ed aVbovetB/fn a inly deals w ilh...
②The article focuses on 1he topic of..
⑵表示研究的结论
①The result show ed 1hat・・
②The aulhorfound 1hat..
③It was conchded 1hat・・
(3)表示推荐、观点或建议
The aulhor suggests/considers that..
Suggestions are m ade for..
3•修改成文。

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