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2013 浦东新区英语一模作文：

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范文1：

As is depicted in the picture, a cat is trying to catch a mouse to eat while the other three cats are puzzled and choose to eat the fish given, which turns out to be thought-provoking and enlightening.

From my point of view, the concern can be attributed to the importance of independence. Nowadays, children are increasingly dependent on parents, which is a controversial issue. Whenever they meet with difficulties, they just give way to them without any efforts and comfort themselves, thinking their parents will lend them a hand. In that case , their abilities to face trouble will be worn out in the long run,posing a threat to their future life in society.

That is to say, we are supposed to rely on our own strengths rather than others’ help. Only in this way can our potential be tapped / exploited fully and the value of our lives be enhanced , thus giving our confidence and abilities a boost.

Last but not least, bear in mind that only when we attach significance to independence instead of taking given help for granted can we make glittering achievements!

范文2：

As depicted in the picture, three cats prefer eating fish to catching mice, while a cat prefers to catch mice. It reveals a social phenomenon that most people are pleased with the result without hard work, however, only a few people want to get things by working hard. Obviously, the few people are more successful than the other people. I maintain that success only comes from hard work.

Firstly, working hard makes us active. An active ambition in life is the most important factor during your whole life. As long as we own an active ambition, we will have much more motivation to go ahead and stick to the end. Thus, motivation and hard work are necessary to achieve our goals.

Last but not least, diligence can make up for our disadvantages. As the saying goes, no one is perfect. Many shortages could be corrected through diligence. And I always keep the faith that where there is a will, there is a way. I believe that everyone can become almost prefect as long as he is diligent.

I’d love to become that cat preferring to catch mice when others are eating then given fish.

Success comes from hard work.