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高三英语一轮复习《读写任务型作文》写作指导

高三英语一轮复习《读写任务型作文》写作指导

What is a summary?
A summary is a shortened passage which keeps the important information of the original in your own words but without your opinion.
Brainstorming
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that way—it was so much easier to make friends when you had a mon ground.
(analysis & opinion)
What is a summary?
Common problems
• 1. off the point • 2. too many details • 3. copying original sentences • 4. involving one’s own opinion •…
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I love it—good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The student’s Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.

高三英语读写任务

高三英语读写任务

议论性或论说文,概括时则要尽可能客观简 要地转述阅读材料的观点。 概括对方观点首 先是要转换视角,即以“第三人称”或“无 人称”来概括。
eg:
1。The author tells us the importance of selflearning for children. Not only should the teacher help the students to correct their mistakes, but also they should depend themselves to correct their own mistakes. (33)
4)Some people think students’ mistakes should be corrected by themselves and it is wrong for the teachers to do it for them too often in school. It will make the children dependent on the teachers. (35 words)
如果给定的阅读材料是一则故事,应该用最简练 的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,不能拖泥带水讲细 节,而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道 理。比如说,This story tells how a teacher’s word saved a shy and unconfident child and helped him find himself and hold on to his dreams. It tells us that teachers’ words can make difference to a child’s life.

英语高三一轮复习系列江苏专用文档第三部分写作层级训练第二步第二讲word版含答案2

英语高三一轮复习系列江苏专用文档第三部分写作层级训练第二步第二讲word版含答案2

第二讲如何写记叙文的主体一、题型特点读写任务型作文的主体部分一般要求写120词左右,通常包括两部分:一是衔接过渡语;二是论证自己的观点或描述类似的事例。

1.衔接过渡语:写完摘要后要用一句过渡性的语句引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或类似的事例。

2.论证观点或描述事例:对文中的观点进行对比论证,并提出自己的观点;描述事例时要紧扣文章主题,所描述的事例能够与文章观点契合。

二、写作技巧出现在读写任务中的记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件,并说出自己从事件中得到的教训或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。

1.写作步骤衔接过渡描述事件发表看法2.常用过渡语句(1)This reminds me of the similar experience.(2)This story brings me back to an event many years ago.(3)I had a similar experience.【典例示范】请阅读下面的短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

(2018·盐城高三二模)Mountains.Thevillage.Cursingtos Mountains.The sun was setting when my car broke down near a remote and poor village.Cursing my misfortune,I was wondering where I was going to spend the night when I realized that the villagers who had gathered around me were arguing as to who should have the hohouse.Finallyhouse.While guest in their house.Finally, I accepted the offer of an old woman who lived alone in a little house.While she was getting me settled into a tiny but clean room, the head of the village was tying up his horse to my car to pull it to a small town some 20 kilometres away where there was a garage.table.Somehoney.Wee hens running free in my hostess’s courtyard and that night one of them ended up in a dish on my table.Some villagers brought me goat’s cheese and honey.We drank together a nd talked merrily till far into the night.When the time came for me to say goodbye to my friends in the village, I wanted to reward the old woman for the trouble I had caused her.[写作内容]1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个词谈谈你的感受;可以是自己亲身的经历,也可以用他人的事例。

高三英语读写任务作文专题突破---如何写概括汇编

高三英语读写任务作文专题突破---如何写概括汇编

广东高考英语基础写作训练一、写作的基本要求1、信息完整(所写的文章中一定要包含所有的写作内容)2、不超过5句话(句子的复杂性,多使用从句,非谓语动词和连词及一些复杂的句型)3、内容清楚连贯,逻辑性强(使用恰当的连词,使文章连贯)4、尽量减免语法错误二、写作技巧以及顺序A. 通篇浏览,把握整体。

浏览文章信息,并对其进行处理,将其分割成五句话,做到哪句话包含哪些信息心中有数。

B. 集中兵力,逐个击破。

在第一步的基础上,把五个句子逐一写清楚,包含所需信息。

在组织句子时注意以下几点:1. 一个句子首先要找清楚主谓宾,然后想办法拓展这句话,把其它的信息加进去。

2. 一个句子有且仅有一个谓语(并列谓语)。

3. 将多个句子并到一起,并且要做到只有一个谓语的话,有3种方法:1)使用各种连词。

More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted and it ranks the first in the world. 句中用到and连接2个并列简单句,前后都可保留谓语,顺利将2句变成一句。

连词包括具有递进关系的并列句,如由and,then,besides,in addition, furthermore,moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句,具有转折关系的并列句,如由but,however,on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句,具有平行选择关系的并列句,如由both…and…,as well as,as well,neither…nor…or,either…or…,not only…but also…等连接的并列句。

2)使用从句。

包括含有名词性从句的复合句,含有定语从句的复合句,含有状语从句的复合句。

More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world.3)使用非谓语动词,及一些特殊句型。

高三英语读写任务型写作

高三英语读写任务型写作

一、文章总结 1.议论文
A、广州一模参考范文:
Topic sentence
The article compares the benefits of studying alone to those of studying in groups. Studying alone allows students to remain focuses and avoid interruption, while group study creates a more enjoyable learning environment (33字) Two opinions of the text
B、how to summarize:
1. Frame work A.The topic sentence B.The supporting sentence1 (argument 1) C.The supporting sentence2 (argument 2) 2. Form the summary in your own words: A.Paraphrase the frame work ing some phrases ing simple\paratactic\complex sentences
Another method of transport was the tram or trolleybus. These looked like trains but ran on the road. They were electrically powered by overhead lines, and carried many people around cities and towns. Nowadays we feel fallen into the sea of cars. In the developed countries and developed areas of some countries, nearly every family has a car; some have two or even more, though the government has offered many more buses.

2022高考英语广东省普宁二中读写任务练习6篇及解析

2022高考英语广东省普宁二中读写任务练习6篇及解析

2022高考英语广东省普宁二中读写任务练习6篇及解析练习1阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.One morning, a friend of mine set the breakfast table beside a huge window, which overlooked the Tred Avon River. Suddenly she leaned forward and cried out, “There i s a goose out there!”We saw the figure of a large Canada goose, very still, its wings folded tight to its sides and its feet frozen to the ice.Then in the sky, she saw a line of swans. They flew from the top of the sky downward and at last landed on the ice. My friend was on her feet, with one unbelieving hand against her mouth. As the swans surrounded the frozen goose, she feared that the poor goose might be pecked out by those great swan bills.Unexpectedly, those bills began to work on the ice. The long necks were lifted and curved down (弯下) again and again. They went on for a long time. At last, the goose was free and standing on the ice. And the swans stood nearby watching. Then, as if the goose was crying, “I cannot fly”, four of the swans came down around it. Their powerful bills chipped off the ice stuck in its feathers. Slowly, the goose spread its wings as far as they would go. Seeing the goose could freely move its wings, the swans flew slowly into the sky.This is a true story. Every time I thin k of it, I can’t help asking, “If so for birds, why not for man?”【写作内容】以约30个词概括短文的含义;以约120个词写一篇关于关心别人或同意别人关心的一次经历并包含以下要点:⑴叙述你在学习或生活上关心别人或同意别人关心的一次经历;⑵阐述你对这件事的感受与体会;【写作要求】作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或者虚构的故事,也可参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直截了当引用原文中的句子;文中不能显现真实的姓名和学校名称。

高三英语非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板

高三英语非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板

非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板编者:罗妍【对比观点题型】(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

(写作步骤:1.有一些人认为……;2.另一些人认为……;3.我的看法……。

) The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一). What is more, ③-------------(理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (Finally), ⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点。

非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板 2

非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板 2

“读写任务”议论文写作导练(一)阅读下面这篇短文,按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

No one can believe that the over 6,300-kilometer Great Wall might disappear some day. Believe it or not, the Great Wall is being destroyed by people. Less than 20 percent of the Great Wall built in the Ming Dynasty is still perfect, but about 80 percent is in danger. The Great Wall can be called ―great‖ mostly because of its amazing length. But we should realize that t he length was made up of one brick at a time. If we do nothing to save the Great Wall, it will become a series of separate wasteland rather than a historic site.The Great Wall is actually a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2,000 years. It began in the rule of China’s first emperor, Qin Shihuang of the Qin Dyna sty (221 BC—206 BC), and lasted into the Ming Dynasty. The parts built before the Ming Dynasty have nearly disappeared. The bricks on the Great Wall are carried off by countryside people to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties. Some were taken aw ay to build roads. Bricks carved with people’s names are put away as remembrances. Rubbish is spread over the battlements. The bricks can be sold for 15 yuan per tractor load. Those who destroyed and are destroying the Wall know its name, but are not clear about its cultural meaning. It will take a long time to let them know this. The local farmers not only carried off the body of the Wall but also dug out the entire base. [写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;2)然后以约120个词就“如何保护我国的文化遗产”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:a)你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的?b)保护文化遗产有何意义;c)保护我国的文化遗产的建议。

浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导(含范文)

浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导(含范文)

浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导(含范文)2022届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导一、概写原文阅读下面短文,按照其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Have you ever intended to be fully absorbed in your work but found yourself distracted(被分心)by e-mail, the Internet and other things throughout the day? "People often lose their concentration when they are bored or when they are engaged in several challenging tasks at the same time." says Peter Bregman. "They sometimes feel the need to escape from what's difficult or boring, so they jump out," he says.The part of the brain devoted to attention is connected to the brain's emotional center. Any strong emotion--quarrels with colleagues, problems at home –can interrupt our attention. Studies over the last decade have shown that too much work to do at a time can easily lead to distraction.Refocusing is hard for many people. Robert Epstein suggests the following, "Stop and listen to music for a few minutes. Go for a short walk or take a deep breath. While you breathe in deeply, count to five slowly, hold it and breathe out very slowly." This can blow out all the tension and the unwanted in your mind to restore your focus.Take more control of what you are doing. "Setting the phone alarm to go off(响起来) every hour is my way of creating awareness of my behavior," Mr. Bregman says. "You have to inform yourself that you'velost focus inorder to do something about it." Starting the day with a to-do list is important, such as when to eat, when to go to the gym or take a walk. But if it's overly ambitious(雄心勃勃的) you will put yourself in a state of anxiety, which makes it hard for the brain to concentrate. "Choosing three or four things as your priority(优先事项) for the day allows your brain to settle down and focus," he says.二、词汇讲解1. intend to do sth 决定…,想要做…It is still far from clear what they intend to do.现在还彻低不清晰他们毕竟想做什么。

广东高考英语读写任务型作文复习独家资料

广东高考英语读写任务型作文复习独家资料

读写任务型作文复习资料模板一[写作内容]以约30词概括短文的要点。

然后,以约120词就“感恩”主题发表你的看法,并包括以下的内容:1. 根据你的学习、生活经历,简述你的感受,表达你对朋友或父母的感恩和祝福。

2. 你认为中学生应学会感恩。

3. 你的同学对这观点有何看法和建议。

Be Grateful For Our ParentsThe writer tells us a story that (上文作者告诉我们)he had an experience of recalling his old friends Michael suddenly(他突然回忆起他的朋友迈克的经历), and later they met each other at such moment that made him feel grateful to life anddidn’t feel lonely.This story reminds me of an similar experience of (这个故事让我想起了自己的一个类似经历)forgetting my mother’s birthday.On the evening of April 9th , I was watching TV while my mother was busy preparing for dinner in the kitchen. How attentive I was watching TV program when the telephone rang(当电话铃响起的时候我正聚精会神地看电视). It was from a friend of my mother’s, who wanted say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to my mother . “Today is my mother’s birthday?”I was a little puzzled(疑惑). “How come that I have forgotten all about it”I thought to myself, feeling ashamed.At the story, I got deeply shocked and ashamed.(在这件事上,我感到很震惊和羞愧)It is not easy for parents to bring us up.(养育我们)They give us lots of love and care, while/however we don’t care for them enough. Now it’s never too lateto realize this and show our love and care for them. In fact, every one of us wishesour parents to be healthy and happy, so it is with me. So , we really should expressour endless thanks (无尽的感谢)to our parents. And my classmates share my opinion. To sum up, we should be grateful for our parents because of their greatest love and unselfish care.(总之,我们应该对我们父母伟大的爱和无私的关怀表示感恩。

高三英语读写任务作文专题突破如何写概括

高三英语读写任务作文专题突破如何写概括

广东高考英语基础写作训练一、写作的基本要求1、信息完整(所写的文章中一定要包含所有的写作内容)2、不超过5句话(句子的复杂性,多使用从句,非谓语动词和连词及一些复杂的句型)3、内容清楚连贯,逻辑性强(使用恰当的连词,使文章连贯)4、尽量减免语法错误二、写作技巧以及顺序A. 通篇浏览,把握整体。

浏览文章信息,并对其进行处理,将其分割成五句话,做到哪句话包含哪些信息心中有数。

B. 集中兵力,逐个击破。

在第一步的基础上,把五个句子逐一写清楚,包含所需信息。

在组织句子时注意以下几点:1. 一个句子首先要找清楚主谓宾,然后想办法拓展这句话,把其它的信息加进去。

2. 一个句子有且仅有一个谓语(并列谓语)。

3. 将多个句子并到一起,并且要做到只有一个谓语的话,有3种方法:1)使用各种连词。

More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted and it ranks the first in the world. 句中用到and连接2个并列简单句,前后都可保留谓语,顺利将2句变成一句。

连词包括具有递进关系的并列句,如由and,then,besides,in addition, furthermore,moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句,具有转折关系的并列句,如由but,however,on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句,具有平行选择关系的并列句,如由both…and…,as well as,as well,neither…nor…or,either…or…,not only…but also…等连接的并列句。

2)使用从句。

包括含有名词性从句的复合句,含有定语从句的复合句,含有状语从句的复合句。

More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world.3)使用非谓语动词,及一些特殊句型。

高考英语任务型阅读信息提炼与概括能力练习题30题含答案解析

高考英语任务型阅读信息提炼与概括能力练习题30题含答案解析

高考英语任务型阅读信息提炼与概括能力练习题30题含答案解析1. What is the main topic of the news report?A. Sports eventsB. Political issuesC. Environmental problemsD. Cultural activities答案:新闻报道的具体内容而定。

解析:需要仔细阅读新闻报道,确定其主要讨论的话题。

选项 A 体育事件、选项B 政治问题、选项C 环境问题、选项D 文化活动,根据新闻内容判断哪个是主要话题。

错误选项可能是新闻中提及但并非主要话题的内容。

2. Who is mentioned in the news report?A. Famous athletesB. PoliticiansC. ScientistsD. Artists答案:新闻报道的具体内容而定。

解析:阅读新闻报道,找出其中提到的人物。

选项A 著名运动员、选项B 政治家、选项C 科学家、选项D 艺术家,根据新闻内容判断是谁被提及。

错误选项可能是新闻中未提及的人物类型。

3. When did the event in the news report take place?A. YesterdayB. Last weekC. This monthD. Last year答案:新闻报道的具体内容而定。

解析:在新闻中寻找表示时间的关键词,确定事件发生的时间。

选项 A 昨天、选项B 上周、选项C 这个月、选项D 去年,根据新闻内容判断正确时间。

错误选项可能是新闻中未提及的时间。

4. Where did the incident in the news report occur?A. In a cityB. In a countryC. On an islandD. In a rural area答案:新闻报道的具体内容而定。

解析:从新闻中找出事件发生的地点描述,判断是在城市、国家、岛屿还是农村地区。

高考英语精选作文专习题训练:任务型写作训练(3)

高考英语精选作文专习题训练:任务型写作训练(3)

高考英语精选作文专习题训练:任务型写作训练(3)高考英语任务型写作训练(三)阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

写作内容:1、以约30个词概括短文的要点;2、发表你的看法,提出几条遏制电脑游戏的建议并解释理由。

1)通过教育手段让学生意识到电脑游戏的危害;2)通过检查手段督促网吧经营商合法经营;3)通过法律手段管制游戏开发商开发对青少年有危害的游戏。

阅读材料:According to a report from the Entertainment Software Association (ESA), the sale of video games in the United States has more than doubled in the past 10 years, from $2.6 billion in sales in 1996 to $7 billion in 2005. Analysts say that these numbers are very alarming, and many people are asking, Can gaming become an addiction? Elizabeth Woolley said, Computer games, like any other activity, can be hard to stop once an addiction has been formed.Many students are addicted to computer games and they even neglect eating and bathing. They don't go to school,playing games for hours or days. It is said that last year,seven peoplein South Korea died as a result of too much gaming.We have kids who don't know how to communicate with people face to face because they've spent three years playing games and talking to others through a computer, said a father.参考范文It can be seen that some students are addicted to computer games, and the number of them is keeping rising. They always spare their learning time to play computer games,which leads them to ignoring their studies. They just surf the Internet and play computer games, so they even don't know how to communicate with others in reality. It is such a big pity that it is time to take some measures to limit computer games.First, the teacher should be responsible for educating students to leave away from computer games. Teachers should try to make students realize the original dangers of computer games. Second,the government should check the Internet cafes at times in order to let the runners run their business legally. Third,it is necessary to make some laws to forbid the game developers to create some harmful games for students.In a word,if the three ways above are put into practice effectively, it is certain that fewer and fewer students have interest in computer games.12---来源网络整理,仅供参考。

高考英语任务型阅读信息归纳与概括练习题30题

高考英语任务型阅读信息归纳与概括练习题30题

高考英语任务型阅读信息归纳与概括练习题30题1<背景文章>In today's digital age, technology has had a profound impact on education. The integration of technology in classrooms has transformed the way students learn and teachers teach. Online learning platforms, educational apps, and virtual reality tools are just some of the ways in which technology is enhancing the educational experience.One of the major benefits of technology in education is its ability to provide personalized learning. With the help of adaptive learning software, students can receive customized instruction based on their individual needs and learning styles. This not only helps students learn more effectively but also increases their motivation and engagement.Another advantage of technology in education is its accessibility. Students can access educational resources from anywhere in the world, at any time. This has made education more inclusive, allowing students from remote areas and those with disabilities to access quality education.Technology has also made it easier for teachers to assess student learning. Through online quizzes, assignments, and feedback tools, teachers can quickly and easily gauge student understanding and provide targeted support.However, the use of technology in education also presents some challenges. One of the main concerns is the digital divide. Not all students have access to the same technology resources, which can lead to disparities in educational opportunities. Another challenge is the potential for distraction. With so many digital distractions available, students may find it difficult to focus on their studies.Despite these challenges, it is clear that technology will continue to play an important role in education. As technology continues to evolve, it is essential that educators and policymakers work together to ensure that all students have access to the benefits of technology-enhanced learning.1. What is one of the major benefits of technology in education?A. It makes learning more difficult.B. It provides personalized learning.C. It reduces teacher workload.D. It limits access to educational resources.答案:B。

高三英语复习的三个重要环节

高三英语复习的三个重要环节
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广东高三英语读写任务填空式写作模板

广东高三英语读写任务填空式写作模板

高三英语读写任务填空式写作模板本学期最大的体会就是,完善了以前的作文模版,并且进行了分类,加入了更多让学生有话可说的模版,当然其中有些是要平时加强的,如谚语的积累等。

这个模版的有效性在佛山联考中得到了验证。

这个模版的的确确能在短时间内大幅度极高学生的作文的得分。

以下是本人本学期的完善后的作文模版。

高考英语读写任务填空式写作模版一第一行:题目第一段:The text is mainly about……(原文的关键人物或话题等)。

In the writer’s (或文章的主要人物) opinion,……(原文要说明的道理或论点,即原文的关键词或短语)。

第二段:I do agree with the writer(或文章的主要人物). In my opinion,I also think……(原文的道理或论点). For one thing,…… (第一个理由). For another thing,……(第二个理由).第三段:1、Looking back, there are so many similar stories in my life and I choose one of them to show it to you. There was a time when I ……(一篇能说明该道理或论点的记叙文,注意要写具体时间、地点、人物,事件的经过等。

中间要使用谚语,万能句型等。

)第四段:1、From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that ……(原文要说明的道理或论点).高考英语读写任务填空式写作模版二第一行:题目第一段:The text is mainly about……(原文的关键人物或话题等)。

In the writer’s (或文章的主要人物) opinion,……(原文要说明的道理或论点,即原文的关键词或短语)。

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“读写任务式作文”写作训练Focus: 30词的摘要怎么写?(限时训练十五作文)阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pres sure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

【忌照抄原句!忌添加自己观点!30词左右!】1. 以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写,内容包括:(1)自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况;【第一人称,过去时】(2)“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因;【乘客主体是农民工,不懂购票;系统本身不够先进。

其实这两点可以从阅读材料中找到,但是必须用不同方式来表达】(3)给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。

【针对上一段提出的两方面问题来写】[写作要求]1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语句连贯。

【请你练习】划出每段关键词;替换成不同表达方式;关键词:transport during the Spring Festival period”,solutions,selling tickets on-line,However, passengers,blame范文:Although it is as crowded as usual during the “transport during the Spring Festival period”, many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many passengers are dissatisfied.Last year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear.Reasons for the problems of buying tickets on-line are divided. For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to cope with difficult situations.To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available.一、读写任务所提供的短文体裁多样包括:议论文、记叙文(如用一个故事引出一个话题或道理)、新闻报道/说明文(说明一种现象)等。

题材多为当今社会热点问题,难度不会太高。

用大约30词来概括这篇短文的意思,不能抄袭原文中的句子。

要求概括精炼、到位。

二、概括部分包含几种能力1、看清文章的体裁和结构,反映出原文中作者的观点。

2、具有意义筛选的能力,学会区分事实和观点、重要和次要、普遍与特殊、相关与不相关、原因和结果等复杂的逻辑关系。

3、有用英文解释英文的能力,用自己简单的语言解释比较复杂的语言文字,不能抄袭原文。

三、不同文体的概括方式1、议论文----找出论点、结论,再补充论据议论文的要点:①论点②论据③结论有的议论文是对两种不同观点或相反观点的论说,我们在作文时要把两种观点的内容都概括进去。

解题指导:步骤1.认真阅读全文,确定议论文的基本结构,划出短文的论点和结论。

More and more students are doing part-time jobs in holidays. There are many advantages in students’ doing part-time jobs. For example, earning some money can support them. They can also learn a lot which can’t be learned from textbooks. They will learn to get along with different kinds of people, get useful work experience and learn to value money. Thus they will apply themselves to society more easily.However, some people think there are also some disadvantages. Too much work may reduce students’ study time when they should get the best of their school life. Thus it will have a bad effect on gaining knowledge. Another disadvantage is that money earned, if not proper used, may lead to some bad habits, or even greed.即:There are many advantages in students’ doing part-time jobs.步骤2.在文中找出各论据,改写。

论点:There are two different opinions about whether students should take a part-time job in holidays.论据一: Earning some money can support them.论据二: They will apply themselves to society more easily.论据三: It will have a bad effect on gaining knowledge.论据四:Money earned, if not proper used, may lead to some bad habits, or even greed.现在,练习用英文对上面的句子进行paraphrase (用英文解释英文),完成对原文的概括。

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