短文改错学案

How to do Proof-reading短文改错

Today is Mid-Autumn Day. Though I had to work, I could have rest after my classes was over. So her family and I decided to visit my grandma. There were so many car on the road. In arriving at my grandma's house, I could smelt the tasty food that she had cooked. We had the meal happy. At night, we enjoyed the full moon what was round and bright, eat mooncakes. At 8 p.m., we drove home because I have to work tomorrow. This is the most happiest festival I had!

一．命题考点：

词法冠词; 名词; 形容词，副词; 动词的时态，语态，主谓一致; 非谓语动词; 代词句法

行文逻辑

A poem口诀

动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副。代词格，细领悟，介词短语须关注。习惯用法要记住，冠词连词常光顾。

二．具体考查方面

(一)动词形

1.动词的_______和________错误.

I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. (2011全国）

Our school surrounded by many trees.

2.________________的错误.

There are an apple and two bananas.

The boy, along with his parents, go to the museum.

谓语动词就近原则：there be, not only...but also...neither...nor...either...or...等

谓语动词就远原则：with, together with, as well as, along with, rather than等

3._____________的错误

I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）

Many houses have bathrooms designing for older owners.

(二)名词数

指名词___________形式的用法错误。

My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.（2015浙江卷）

I need some more informations.

常见不可数名词有：

progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information, advice, homework, knowledge, money等

(三)还要注意形和副

1.形容词和副词的误用.

2.原级和比较级，最高级的混用或误用.

3.单音节形容词比较级前用多余的more.

At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.(2016新课标)

His father looks much more happier today.

方法：

1.__________修饰名词; __________作表语

2._______修饰动词，形容词，副词和句子。

(四)代词格，细领悟

1. 人称代词，物主代词,反身代词,不定代词

2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致

3. it作形式主语、形式宾语或指代时有缺漏

I was learning to express me in simple English.

I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.

He found difficult to learn math well.

(五)介词短语须关注,习惯用法要记住．

1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。

2.介词的多用，漏用和误用

3.时间状语前有指示代词this, that或one, next, last等修饰时不用介词.

Luckily I had all my money on my pocket. (2011 新课标)

He had only a small cold room to live.

He will pay a visit to his grandfather on this Friday.

(六)冠词连词常光顾

1.冠词a, an和the的用法错误

注意1.单数可数名词前要加冠词

2.不定冠词与定冠词的区别--特指/泛指

3.固定短语中冠词的使用

He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷）

My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the period of time.

2.连词but, and, or, so和although等的逻辑性用法错误．

(1)关系代词，关系副词及从属连词在复合句中的使用是否正确

(2)表并列关系有and, both...and, not only...but also..., as well as...;

转折关系有however, but...;

递进关系有what's more, moreover, besides...

But before long they began to see which was happening .

I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor.

实战练习

I was a high school student then, from the low-income family. So I have to support his family. My first job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of losing the job. At the night, I was sometimes very tired to fall asleep. And I came to understand that was not easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard way, was much more important as what I learned from school.