短文改错学案

How to do Proof-reading短文改错Today is Mid-Autumn Day. Though I had to work, I could have rest after my classes was over. So her family and I decided to visit my grandma. There were so many car on the road. In arriving at my grandma's house, I could smelt the tasty food that she had cooked. We had the meal happy. At night, we enjoyed the full moon what was round and bright, eat mooncakes. At 8 p.m., we drove home because I have to work tomorrow. This is the most happiest festival I had!一．命题考点：词法冠词; 名词; 形容词，副词; 动词的时态，语态，主谓一致; 非谓语动词; 代词句法行文逻辑A poem口诀动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副。

代词格，细领悟，介词短语须关注。

习惯用法要记住，冠词连词常光顾。

二．具体考查方面(一)动词形1.动词的_______和________错误.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. (2011全国）Our school surrounded by many trees.2.________________的错误.There are an apple and two bananas.The boy, along with his parents, go to the museum.谓语动词就近原则：there be, not only...but also...neither...nor...either...or...等谓语动词就远原则：with, together with, as well as, along with, rather than等3._____________的错误I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）Many houses have bathrooms designing for older owners.(二)名词数指名词___________形式的用法错误。

My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.（2015浙江卷）I need some more informations.常见不可数名词有：progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information, advice, homework, knowledge, money等(三)还要注意形和副1.形容词和副词的误用.2.原级和比较级，最高级的混用或误用.3.单音节形容词比较级前用多余的more.At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.(2016新课标)His father looks much more happier today.方法：1.__________修饰名词; __________作表语2._______修饰动词，形容词，副词和句子。

(四)代词格，细领悟1. 人称代词，物主代词,反身代词,不定代词2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致3. it作形式主语、形式宾语或指代时有缺漏I was learning to express me in simple English.I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.He found difficult to learn math well.(五)介词短语须关注,习惯用法要记住．1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。

2.介词的多用，漏用和误用3.时间状语前有指示代词this, that或one, next, last等修饰时不用介词.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket. (2011 新课标)He had only a small cold room to live.He will pay a visit to his grandfather on this Friday.(六)冠词连词常光顾1.冠词a, an和the的用法错误注意1.单数可数名词前要加冠词2.不定冠词与定冠词的区别--特指/泛指3.固定短语中冠词的使用He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷）My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the period of time.2.连词but, and, or, so和although等的逻辑性用法错误．(1)关系代词，关系副词及从属连词在复合句中的使用是否正确(2)表并列关系有and, both...and, not only...but also..., as well as...;转折关系有however, but...;递进关系有what's more, moreover, besides...But before long they began to see which was happening .I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor.实战练习I was a high school student then, from the low-income family. So I have to support his family. My first job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of losing the job. At the night, I was sometimes very tired to fall asleep. And I came to understand that was not easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard way, was much more important as what I learned from school.课后巩固练习2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he is the gentlest man I have never known.2013年新课标2The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain．It is said to have started in the early 1800’s．Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night．This custom soon becomes another meal of day．Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles．When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits．This made for the grow in the porcelain industry．2013年(全国I卷）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2013年(全国II卷）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that theywill be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2014年(全国I卷）Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost! 2014年(全国II卷）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（2015全国I卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.。