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假如你叫白云，从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。

(1) 姓名：白云，出生于广州市越秀区，年龄27岁。

(2) 2001年毕业于中山大学，后来留学英国伦敦大学。

(3) 2005年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。

(4) 英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。

(5) 为了报效祖国，于2006年毅然回国。（6）有数学天赋。

注意：

1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。文章首位已经给出，不算字数。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。

Mr . Liu Jin, aged 37 , is working in a factory in Guangzhou as a chemical engineer . After graduating from Nanjing University in 1994 , he was sent to Tokyo University to study the chemical engineering . Through his hard work for 4 years , he achieved remarkable result in scinetific research and received a doctor’s degree in 1998 . A Japanese commany manager tried hard to invite him to work there and promised to give him a good salary but he didn’t accept that . In 1999 he returned to China without any hesitation , and he has made up his mind to devote al his life to our country .

参考答案：

Dear Sir,

How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you.

I’m Bai Yun, born in Yuexiu District, Guangzhou City, aged 27.After I graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to London University in the UK .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary achievement on maths because of my gift for maths and received a doctor’s degree. A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation in 2006..

I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Baiyun

基础写作注意事项：

1）能写几句就写几句，不留空白

●2）主要评分要素包括内容的完整性和连贯性、句子结果的正确性。

●3）每句占2.5分，每0.5分为一档

●4）连贯性共占2.5分

●5）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发挥。

●6）文不对题给0分，写出相关短语给0.5分。

●7）每个句子要含有表中的信息，否则该句不得分。

●8）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词。

注意“三写”，在规定的时间内完成

针对性练习二

A

情景说明：根据下列提示，用英语给“中国日报”写一篇简讯，要求内容连贯，语句准确，并包

含如下要点：

写作内容：

１．姓名：刘进，年龄37岁，广州一家工厂的工程师。

２．1994 年毕业于南京大学，后来留学日本东京大学，攻读化学工程。

３．1998年科研成果显著，获得博士学位。

４．日本一家公司想用高薪聘请他，但他拒绝了。

５．为了报效祖国，他于1999 年回国。

写作要求：

１．只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

２．简讯短文包括所有内容要点，但不可逐字逐句翻译。

３．可适当增加细节，使短文连贯。

Mr . Liu Jin, aged 37 , is working in a factory in Guangzhou as a chemical engineer . After graduating from Nanjing University in 1994 , he was sent to Tokyo University to study the chemical engineering . Through his hard work for 4 years , he achieved remarkable result in scinetific research and received a doctor’s degree in 1998 . A Japanese commany manager tried hard to invite him to work there and promised to give him a good salary but he didn’t accept that . In 1999 he returned to China without any hesitation , and he has made up his mind to devote al his life to our country .

B

众所周知，刘翔以世界飞人而出名，在男子110 米栏方面，他为我们树立了榜样。

写作内容：根据下列内容，向世界介绍刘翔

１．姓名：刘翔，性别：男；出生年月：1983年7月13日；身高：1。89米。

2．教练：孙海平。偶像：Jordan ; 专项：110米栏

3．成就：

2002年瑞士洛桑以13’12 破亚洲纪录

2004 年雅典奥运会以12‘91夺冠，平了世界纪录

2006 年7于12日瑞士洛桑以12‘88破世界纪录。

4．爱好：听音乐、打游戏、看书

5．自评：为人诚恳、随和、自信乐观

写作要求：

1只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

２．简讯短文包括所有内容要点，但不可逐字逐句翻译。

３．可适当增加细节，使短文连贯

As we all know , Liu Xiang , honest , easy –going , confident and optimistic , who was born on July 13, 1983 in Shanghai ,is famous as an atheletes of 110-meter hurdle He is 1.89meters in height , and he likes Jordan best , but the most important person to him is his coach ------Sun Haiping . In 20002 in Lausanne , Switzerland , he set a new Asian record in 13.12 seconds , and two years later he equaled a world record in 12.91 seconds in Athens . To our great delight ,he set a new World record again in 12.88 seconds in Lausanne , Switzerland in 2006 . His hobbies are listening to music , playing computer games and reading .

C

每年一度的高考结束了，刘婷婷是我市今年的高考状元，清华大学录取。假如你是婷婷的好朋友，请根据下面的情况对她做简单的介绍。

写作内容：

1．有良好的学习习惯，不拖拉，不开夜车。

2．学习有目标，有自信心。

3．有周密的计划

4．乐于帮助人，深受老师和同学们的喜欢