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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
2020/12/12
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高中英语How to write a news report公开课精品课件
the Students Union of our school will hold a book Proposal
News comment
Байду номын сангаас
为了号召更多的人关心贫困家庭孩子的学习和生活， 你校学生会于10月15日下午举行了一次为贫困家庭孩子 捐赠书籍的活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文 报道, 发表在你校英文网站上。
1．时间、地点、活动； 2．同学们的反应； 3．简短评论。
注意：1.词数120左右(报道的标题已给出，但不计入总词数)； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
MANILA - The death toll from the 6.3-magnitude earthquake that struck North Cotabato province in southern Philippines on Wednesday has climbed to five people, local officials said on Thursday.
Do you have any book that you don't want to
read again? Please give them to poor kids who
don't have any book to read.
倡议书
In order to care about the lives of poor kids,
The National Disaster Risk Reduction and Management Council has yet to release an official count of the casualties and the damage from the tremor.
高中英语作文—求助信写作共PPTPPT优质公开课
Signature
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
高中英语概要写作Shyness公开课PPT课件
要点1: Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy
tohfeooppinpioosnitaenisdctrraiusuke.stIaeskrai3neglisaroeftsetnrobnlagmly esufapipluorreteodn.
This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
over one.
your
suggestion
写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
tohfeooppinpioosnitaenisdctrraiusuke.stIaeskrai3neglisaroeftsetnrobnlagmly esufapipluorreteodn.
This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
over one.
your
suggestion
写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件
2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高中英语Summary Writing公开课精品PPT课件
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➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
specific age groups. They often use red to attract yRouednger people Ptootwheirr products, for example, as OigtroailsdnvgaiebnrdannaCtvoaymn,dwmmhuiocnrhiecoayltodiueortnhcfuuslttohmaenrcsosleoerms ltikoe
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
specific age groups. They often use red to attract yRouednger people Ptootwheirr products, for example, as OigtroailsdnvgaiebnrdannaCtvoaymn,dwmmhuiocnrhiecoayltodiueortnhcfuuslttohmaenrcsosleoerms ltikoe
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件
●__正__文_____________(_注__意__：____英__文__书__信__不__要__写___一__些___ (B__o__d____y__o____f __L__e__t__t__e__r__）______h②__e__l__正l__o__文,______部h__i__分之____，类____严的____格问____按候____照语______文)____章____的____提
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高中英语高考英语作文之环保省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件
6/41
preserve our natural resources 保护自然资源
•It is highly important to preserve the environment. •维护自然环境至关主要。
7/41
Greenhouse effect温室效应
•This adds to the power of the greenhouse effect, making the planet even warmer.
develop a habit of form a habit of keep a habit build a habit
15/41
with the development of
•Certainly, with the development of science and technology, more and more plastics will come into use.
。
•We must take steps to control air pollution.
•我们必须采取些办法来控制空气污染。
18/41
climate change •Global warming refers to an average increase in the Earth's temperature that, in turn, leads to climate change.
35/41
water
• 1. It’s our duty to save water
• 责任节约用水是我们责任。
• 2. As we know , water is very important to man, • 我们知道，水是非常主要人， • 3. We can’t live without water. • 我们生活离不开水。
preserve our natural resources 保护自然资源
•It is highly important to preserve the environment. •维护自然环境至关主要。
7/41
Greenhouse effect温室效应
•This adds to the power of the greenhouse effect, making the planet even warmer.
develop a habit of form a habit of keep a habit build a habit
15/41
with the development of
•Certainly, with the development of science and technology, more and more plastics will come into use.
。
•We must take steps to control air pollution.
•我们必须采取些办法来控制空气污染。
18/41
climate change •Global warming refers to an average increase in the Earth's temperature that, in turn, leads to climate change.
35/41
water
• 1. It’s our duty to save water
• 责任节约用水是我们责任。
• 2. As we know , water is very important to man, • 我们知道，水是非常主要人， • 3. We can’t live without water. • 我们生活离不开水。
高中英语基础写作公开课课件——书面通知
English Department February 22, 2009
书面通知
1 格式 2 时态
3语言特点
常用结构
1 地点的表示方法 2 时间的表示方法 3 动词短语
常用句式
牢记书面语通知时态 书面通知以一般将来时为主。如： The students of Senior Grade One will go to Jingshan Park on May 4. We will climb up the hill and have a picnic on the top of it. After that we will visit the famous botanical garden nearby. On July 22, Saturday, we will visit the following places — a school or a hospital. We will be divided into four groups and each group can visit one of the places.
书面通知
常用结构 ：2 时间的表示方法(钟点\星期\年\月\日)
in June, 2009
on June 21, 2009
on Thursday, June 21, 2009
at 7:00 pm on June 21,2009
at 7:00 on the evening of June 21,2009
3. The meeting will begin at 3 oclock.
4. Mr, Smith will give a lecture in the auditorium. 5. Those who want to take part in it have to fill in the application form.
书面通知
1 格式 2 时态
3语言特点
常用结构
1 地点的表示方法 2 时间的表示方法 3 动词短语
常用句式
牢记书面语通知时态 书面通知以一般将来时为主。如： The students of Senior Grade One will go to Jingshan Park on May 4. We will climb up the hill and have a picnic on the top of it. After that we will visit the famous botanical garden nearby. On July 22, Saturday, we will visit the following places — a school or a hospital. We will be divided into four groups and each group can visit one of the places.
书面通知
常用结构 ：2 时间的表示方法(钟点\星期\年\月\日)
in June, 2009
on June 21, 2009
on Thursday, June 21, 2009
at 7:00 pm on June 21,2009
at 7:00 on the evening of June 21,2009
3. The meeting will begin at 3 oclock.
4. Mr, Smith will give a lecture in the auditorium. 5. Those who want to take part in it have to fill in the application form.
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
Voice
Language use
02
03
04
01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
Language use
02
03
04
01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
高中英语写作教学最新公开课优秀PPT
result/consequence,on account of...
４.表目的
in order that,so that,for the purpose of...
５.表归纳
in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole...
高考作文类型：
A. 数据说明类文章 B. 提示议论文类文章 C. 看图说话类文章
影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个 因素 1.语篇信息是否完整
2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。
3.是否使用高级词汇
4.是否使用复杂句
5 .卷面整洁,书写工整
写作基本步骤：
１．仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过度，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。
On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies
that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
４.表目的
in order that,so that,for the purpose of...
５.表归纳
in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole...
高考作文类型：
A. 数据说明类文章 B. 提示议论文类文章 C. 看图说话类文章
影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个 因素 1.语篇信息是否完整
2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。
3.是否使用高级词汇
4.是否使用复杂句
5 .卷面整洁,书写工整
写作基本步骤：
１．仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过度，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。
On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies
that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
01
02
03
04
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
01
02
03
04
Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice