高中英语写作公开课(共61张)
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I admired her. In the future I want become as her a person . From now, I intend to good good study and day day up.
The woman I admire most
Mother Teresa is my favorite women. She is of middle height and she is beautiful . She comes from Macedonia. She lived from 1910.8.26 to 1997.9.5. she learned religion long before. She’s warm- hearted.
I admired her. In the future I want become as her a person . From now, I intend to good good study and day day up.
Main problems leading to low scores
宾语
主语
及物 动词
间宾+直宾宾语
宾语+宾补
系
动词
表语
第一种句型：S+V
The sun rises. He runs in the park. 第二种句型：S+V+O He plays the piano every morning. I know him very well. They want to go. He stopped writing. 第三种句型：S+V+IO+DO
Guide in Writing
Teaching Objectives(教学目标）
By the end of this lesson you’ll be able to ■ find out the mistakes of the compositions given. ■ find out what problems cause you not to get higher marks in your writing. ■know some practical ways to improve a composition. ■feel less scared in writing.
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
Problem1: Chaotic sentence structure(句型结构混乱）
Problem2: Chinglish(汉式英语）
Problem3: Simple sentence，lack of advanced vocabularies(句 式单一，缺乏高级词汇)
英语句子结构 句子的灵魂
He often reads English in ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baiduhe morning.
Tom and Mike are American boys.
She likes drawing and often draws pictures for the wall newspapers.
简单句的五种基本句型
不及物 动词
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
My father bought me a car.
第四种句型：S+V+O+C(补充说明宾语的状态）
I will make you happy. I want her to come. We should keep the classroom clean. She heard him singing.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
I
简单句
III
复合句
II
并列句
Ex：努力学习，你会成功。
1 If you study hard, you will succeed.
2 Study hard, and you will succeed.
连
接
3 Studying hard, you will succeed.
词
连接词
简单句： 只有一个主语（或并列主语）和 一个谓语（或并列谓语）
The woman I admire most
Mother Teresa is my favorite women. She is of middle height and she is beautiful . She comes from Macedonia. She lived from 1910.8.26 to 1997.9.5. when she was young,she learned religion. She’s warm- hearted.
The woman I admire most
Mother Teresa is my favorite women. She is of middle height and she is beautiful . She comes from Macedonia. She lived from 1910.8.26 to 1997.9.5. she learned religion long before. She’s warm- hearted.
I admired her. In the future I want become as her a person . From now, I intend to good good study and day day up.
Main problems leading to low scores
宾语
主语
及物 动词
间宾+直宾宾语
宾语+宾补
系
动词
表语
第一种句型：S+V
The sun rises. He runs in the park. 第二种句型：S+V+O He plays the piano every morning. I know him very well. They want to go. He stopped writing. 第三种句型：S+V+IO+DO
Guide in Writing
Teaching Objectives(教学目标）
By the end of this lesson you’ll be able to ■ find out the mistakes of the compositions given. ■ find out what problems cause you not to get higher marks in your writing. ■know some practical ways to improve a composition. ■feel less scared in writing.
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
Problem1: Chaotic sentence structure(句型结构混乱）
Problem2: Chinglish(汉式英语）
Problem3: Simple sentence，lack of advanced vocabularies(句 式单一，缺乏高级词汇)
英语句子结构 句子的灵魂
He often reads English in ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baiduhe morning.
Tom and Mike are American boys.
She likes drawing and often draws pictures for the wall newspapers.
简单句的五种基本句型
不及物 动词
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
My father bought me a car.
第四种句型：S+V+O+C(补充说明宾语的状态）
I will make you happy. I want her to come. We should keep the classroom clean. She heard him singing.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
I
简单句
III
复合句
II
并列句
Ex：努力学习，你会成功。
1 If you study hard, you will succeed.
2 Study hard, and you will succeed.
连
接
3 Studying hard, you will succeed.
词
连接词
简单句： 只有一个主语（或并列主语）和 一个谓语（或并列谓语）
The woman I admire most
Mother Teresa is my favorite women. She is of middle height and she is beautiful . She comes from Macedonia. She lived from 1910.8.26 to 1997.9.5. when she was young,she learned religion. She’s warm- hearted.