托福写作教育类总结

教育类话题

1、学生层面

①要不要多学一门课，要不要多干别的事情

反对：(1)不要上，学生压力大

a: grades 的压力

b: competition 的压力

c: 需要时间来complement what they lack

(2) 可以通过其他方式

field trip: a interest 学生更有兴趣

b 锻炼学生的品质：合作精神、克服困难、interpersonal skills

②其他方式上课：online course：time-consuming，efficiency, more study material

Field-trip ：interest, interpersonal skills, cooperative

Make friends with strangers, art persuasive in group setting, and the ability of giving a presentation in the front of the audience.

对学生的四大好处

①skills a: interpersonal skills

b: time management skills---prioritize tasks/manage time /combat stress

②quality a: independence--- reduce reliance on others

b: perseverance: overcome difficulties--optimistic

③knowledge a: understand thoroughly

b: access to more knowledge

c: interest

④future career development a: locate work

b: promotion 更有竞争力

2、其他干扰的东西对学生的坏处

1 对学习的坏处：academic performance ①understand thoroughly

②intersect 没有兴趣学习

2 对skill的坏处①没法培养时间管理能力time management

②没法培养interpersonal skill 能力; addicted to/ feel reluctant to interact with others

2、教师和学校层面

School: a: reputation/increase enrollment rate

b:donation (alumnus, company)

对老师的好可以：对学生好

对学校好

3 教师的教学方法好

教学方法的多样化：diversify ①apply advance technology in teaching

②group discussion

学生很忙：（忙课内，忙课外，学生要不要做，不做，很忙，即使有时间也会做课外活动和参加实习，然后写它们的好处。

Since most student are busy with their studies, sth is not a practical way to do sth. Students today have a very tight schedules. In class, they are always occupied by their assignments, exams and papers. After class, they also participate in extracurricular activities and take field trips or internships, which is why they simply do not have the time for doing sth. In addition, when they do have some treasured time, they are more likely to spend it in doing extracurricular activities and taking internships, for they can benefit a lot from them. Attending extracurricular activities can help them know to prioritize tasks and learn the importance of multitasking as well as discover effective time management skills. Taking field trips and internship motivates us to put our own theoretic knowledge into practical use. Not only can taking such internship and field trips contribute to perfect and consolidate our knowledge and skills, but also they are conducive to cultivate and foster character building such as cooperative and interpersonal skills. Without being equipped with these skills and qualities, we can never become well-rounded and a contributor workers in our company after graduated from schools. From this perspective, doing sth is an impractical approach and it can hardly play an important role in this highly competitive and ruthless arena.

参加课外活动的好处①遇到跟多的人②相同兴趣的人可以增加关系

Attending community activities is a very effective way to widen students social circles, for it allows them more opportunities to get to know people of different backgrounds. When attending community activities, students can meet not only peers but also people who are older or younger, and most importantly, they can do the things that they enjoy doing the most with others. Pursuing common interests with one another will definitely strength the relationships they have with others.

大学教育的好处：①专业知识和实习对职业的发展好②课外活动会锻炼品质

University education also serves as an irreplaceable part in the course of many people’s lives and it provides things that are not available in the earlier education. Students in college can prepare for their careers by attending specialized courses and taking internships. They are equipped with skills to use professional software and operate the certain instruments and machines. They also graduate know their the path of their career development and have their plan for the future. Besides having classes and internships, students in college and university also attend social activities which improve their skills of making friends with strangers, art of persuasion in the group setting as well as the ability of giving a presentation in the front of audience. Such skills are quite essential not only at work but also in lives. Accordingly, we can say that college education prepares students for their lives in the real jungle of the competitive world.

基础教育的好处①是高等教育的基础②可以更好的认识到自己的优缺点

Young children’s education lays the foundation/groundwork for the higher education by teaching them how to learn and what they are supposed to learn. In primary schools, children are taught how to read, how to work, how to ask relevant questions, as well as how to use tools like dictionaries and the Internet to look up information. They are also instructed and trained by teachers about how to memorize efficiently in order to get good scores on the tests. These are