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教育类话题1、学生层面①要不要多学一门课，要不要多干别的事情反对：(1)不要上，学生压力大a: grades 的压力b: competition 的压力c: 需要时间来complement what they lack(2) 可以通过其他方式field trip: a interest 学生更有兴趣b 锻炼学生的品质：合作精神、克服困难、interpersonal skills②其他方式上课：online course：time-consuming，efficiency, more study materialField-trip ：interest, interpersonal skills, cooperativeMake friends with strangers, art persuasive in group setting, and the ability of giving a presentation in the front of the audience.对学生的四大好处①skills a: interpersonal skillsb: time management skills---prioritize tasks/manage time /combat stress②quality a: independence--- reduce reliance on othersb: perseverance: overcome difficulties--optimistic③knowledge a: understand thoroughlyb: access to more knowledgec: interest④future career development a: locate workb: promotion 更有竞争力2、其他干扰的东西对学生的坏处1 对学习的坏处：academic performance ①understand thoroughly②intersect 没有兴趣学习2 对skill的坏处①没法培养时间管理能力time management②没法培养interpersonal skill 能力; addicted to/ feel reluctant to interact with others2、教师和学校层面School: a: reputation/increase enrollment rateb:donation (alumnus, company)对老师的好可以：对学生好对学校好3 教师的教学方法好教学方法的多样化：diversify ①apply advance technology in teaching②group discussion学生很忙：（忙课内，忙课外，学生要不要做，不做，很忙，即使有时间也会做课外活动和参加实习，然后写它们的好处。

Since most student are busy with their studies, sth is not a practical way to do sth. Students today have a very tight schedules. In class, they are always occupied by their assignments, exams and papers. After class, they also participate in extracurricular activities and take field trips or internships, which is why they simply do not have the time for doing sth. In addition, when they do have some treasured time, they are more likely to spend it in doing extracurricular activities and taking internships, for they can benefit a lot from them. Attending extracurricular activities can help them know to prioritize tasks and learn the importance of multitasking as well as discover effective time management skills. Taking field trips and internship motivates us to put our own theoretic knowledge into practical use. Not only can taking such internship and field trips contribute to perfect and consolidate our knowledge and skills, but also they are conducive to cultivate and foster character building such as cooperative and interpersonal skills. Without being equipped with these skills and qualities, we can never become well-rounded and a contributor workers in our company after graduated from schools. From this perspective, doing sth is an impractical approach and it can hardly play an important role in this highly competitive and ruthless arena.参加课外活动的好处①遇到跟多的人②相同兴趣的人可以增加关系Attending community activities is a very effective way to widen students social circles, for it allows them more opportunities to get to know people of different backgrounds. When attending community activities, students can meet not only peers but also people who are older or younger, and most importantly, they can do the things that they enjoy doing the most with others. Pursuing common interests with one another will definitely strength the relationships they have with others.大学教育的好处：①专业知识和实习对职业的发展好②课外活动会锻炼品质University education also serves as an irreplaceable part in the course of many people’s lives and it provides things that are not available in the earlier education. Students in college can prepare for their careers by attending specialized courses and taking internships. They are equipped with skills to use professional software and operate the certain instruments and machines. They also graduate know their the path of their career development and have their plan for the future. Besides having classes and internships, students in college and university also attend social activities which improve their skills of making friends with strangers, art of persuasion in the group setting as well as the ability of giving a presentation in the front of audience. Such skills are quite essential not only at work but also in lives. Accordingly, we can say that college education prepares students for their lives in the real jungle of the competitive world.基础教育的好处①是高等教育的基础②可以更好的认识到自己的优缺点Young children’s education lays the foundation/groundwork for the higher education by teaching them how to learn and what they are supposed to learn. In primary schools, children are taught how to read, how to work, how to ask relevant questions, as well as how to use tools like dictionaries and the Internet to look up information. They are also instructed and trained by teachers about how to memorize efficiently in order to get good scores on the tests. These arebasic learning skills which are necessary for their college education. Plus young children’s education increase their self-knowledge, making them realize their weaknesses and strengths, so they can make more informed choices in deciding what they want to study in the future. Many people would avoid subjects that they were not good at even in primary schools when deciding which major to study and which job to take. From this perspective, young children’s education is the cornerstone of their higher education.教育类的句子：①the world has become a highly competitive and ruthless arena where academic degrees, certifications and qualifications can enhance the prospect of success.②从所周知it is a well-known and well-accepted fact that...Although, college education is costly, time-consuming and demanding, education makes it easier to stay competitive in cut-throat job market and secure a well-paid job.③one reason why sb should do sth is that......./sb prefer to / be more likely to/do sth for the primary reason that.....one reason why students should participate in extracurricular activities is thatStudents prefer to participate in extracurricular activities for the primary reason that they can help them learn how to prioritize tasks and learn the importance of multitasking as well as discover effective time management skills④it allows sb more opportunities to do sthIt allows students more opportunities to get to know people of different background.⑤传授知识impart knowledge/ the sense of self-discipline⑥承认错误Undoubtedly, some teachers think that their authority in the classroom can be undermined by mistakes, however, teachers who acknowledge their mistakes and apologize for them when they affect the students set a model for their students.学生太忙，是压力太大，需要时间放松Students need sufficient time to release stress, students in a society pressured by grades and competition. Grades and competition are two blades of a sward which are always stabbing students’necks. Nowadays, in these growing competitive and ruthless society, increasing competition between the students have become highly intense and it may cause students into extreme frustration and even pose a threat to students’ health. In a word, students are saturated with enormous stress, and they should definitely allocate time to do some physical activities for the sake of relieving themselves.大人也忙，忙家庭（上有老，下有小）忙工作（大量的mission，maintain relationship）Similarly, adults are clouded with numerous pressure as well, they have to assume responsibility for the family. Not only should they take care of their children and enable them to access to better education, but also they have to provide their parents with good medical care so as to ensure that they will lead a healthy life. Therefore, they have to try everything to improving themselves in order to earn money. From this perspective, adults have enormous stress and they should have time to relax, for otherwise, they may suffer from depression and even illness.这样做可以提高学生的interest (良性循环)Students usually enjoy studying easy subjects. In other word, when you take an easy course, you easily get interested in that class. Since you are interested in the subject, you are more likely to do additional research about the topic and get more knowledge from it. As the process is repeated, you will naturally become good at the subject. This virtuous cycle provides students with more knowledge than taking too difficult course in class.分数和academic performance 对学生的好处Getting a good grades and a prefect academic performance is crucial for a college student. Later when students seek a job after graduation, it is their grades and academic performance that provide the general standard by which employers evaluate their ability. When students apply for jobs after they graduate, competition will be inevitable. Thus, people with better grades are more likely to get better jobs.If you get a good grades in your subjects, you will be more likely to be interested in it. Since you are interested in the subject, you are supposed to do additional research about the topic and get more knowledge from it. As the process is repeated, you will naturally become confident and be good at the subject. This virtuous cycle encourage students to make more friends and strengthen the relationship with their teachers. On the contrary, if the students get a bad grades, they probably become diffident and even suffer from depression. Worse still, bad scores exert adverse impact on the students, they can even hardly access to higher education due to their bad scores.a: in the class, they have to accomplish numerous tasks, like take piles of assignments, various exams and enormous huge challenged papers.b: after class, they are also occupied with various of extracurricular activities. They have to participate in social activities like community services and academic clubs。