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改错与作文授课流程：改错（自主学习、合作）-----背诵万人迷-----写作（自主写作、改错、范文比较）-----德育渗透方法：1）改错1818原则 2）仿写+创写目的：1)提高速读及改错能力 2）借鉴阅读提高写作 3）背诵、迁移运用能力Step 1短文改错（10个错误，注意标准改法）How time flies! However, I will not forget that embarrassed moment of my life, which impressed me most.When I was in the second grades, I was asked to take one part in a speech competition in behalf of our class. It was not my first time to perform on the stage, so I think it was a piece of cake for me. As a result, I didn’t get prepared for i t. Finally, the day came. The first four students gave excellent speeches, which made my heart beat fast. Then it was my turn. I went on stage with my leg trembling, blank in mind, complete forgetting I was going to talk about. All that they could do was stare at the audience. The whole crowd burst into laughter, or suddenly I felt my face turned red. I can’t remember how I got off the stage. I was not surprised to come last in the competition.What an embarrassing moment it is, from which I benefit a lot. Not only does it broaden my horizons, but also it teaches me an useful lesson---“Attitude is altitude.”Step 2 阅读探宝找经典句子（万人迷)------利用疯狂英语方法：反反复复背诵“万人迷”◆1、I will not forget that embarrassing moment of my life, which impressed me most.◆2、What an embarrassing moment it is, from which I benefit a lot .◆3、Not only does it broaden my horizons, but also it teaches me a useful lesson---“Attitude is altitude.”Step 3 Practise writingPractise:选作题：(二选一）争取运用“万人迷”1）以what is happiness为题写100词左右的文章。

要点：1、说明幸福的原因2、事例证明3、给你什么启示2) 安乡一中英语角将举行英语作文比赛，要求如下：人生经历多多，有失败的，有学习的，有成功的.....，你选择其一话题，写100词左右的文章参加比赛。

Step 4 Thoughts（德育渗透）1)Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.2)Sharing happiness is double happiness!改错答案：embarrassed---embarrssing grades--grade one划去in--onthink--thought complete--completely +what they---I or---and an-a1818原则：181”指加一词、错八词、去一词。

“8”指8个高频改错点：1)books,book 2)slow,slowly 3)do,did,does 4)done,doing,to do 5)and,but,or 6)a,an,the 7)my,your,me,mine 8)what,which,that参考范文1）以what is happiness为题写100词左右的文章。

要点：1、说明幸福的原因2、事例证明3、给你什么启示What is happiness? There is no standard answer. To me, happiness is to share with others.It was a cold afternoon, raining heavily. Without an umbrella to shelter me from rain, I had to stand still under the roof, waiting for my father. After some time, my father arrived. I was about to rush home when I found my English teacher waiting for the rain to stop. Without hesitation, I went towards her and gave my umbrella to her happily. “Thanks. But you need it , too.” “ I can share an umbrella with my father.” said I. Seeing her walking home with my umbrella, I smiled happily.What a meaningful and instructive experience it is! Not only does it make me feel the close relationship between teachers and students, but also it teaches me a valuable saying----Sharing happiness is double happiness!2) 安乡一中英语角将举行英语作文比赛，要求如下：人生经历多多，有失败的，有学习的，有成功的.....，你选择其一话题，写100词左右的文章参加比赛。

How time flies! However, I will not forget the experience of learning swimming, which impressed me most.I really envied other kids who swam freely in the cool water. However, no matter how hard I struggled in the water, I could hardly keep my body floating in the river. Too many failures made me convinced that it was impossible for me to swim. Seeing that, Li hua, a good swimmer, tried his best to remove my discouragement and taught me how to breathe and move my arms and legs. I swam and swam, as the saying goes “Practice makes perfect.” Finally, it paid off.What an instructive experience it is, from which I benefit a lot. Not only does it improve my skills, but also it teaches me a valuable lesson--- Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.牛津教材单元复习M1U1I．重点句型练习：1. Going to a British high school was really a very enjoyable and exciting experience for me. (1)饭后散步是个好习惯。

__________________ is a good habit.(2)把英语学好对于他来说很具有挑战性，因为他只是一个成绩平平的学生。

________________________ is challenging for him because he is an average student.2. It was a struggle for me to remember all the faces and names.(1)每天早晨读英语是一个好习惯。

______________________ read English every morning.(2)跟上其他同学对Tony来说是件难事。

________________________ keep up with other students.(3)你放弃这么好的一个机会真是太愚蠢了。

___________________ give up such a good chance.3. Whether students want to exercise or just want some fun, they can use our gym.(1) 不管孩子们想看电视还是只想玩, 他们都可以做他们想做的事情。

___________________________________________________，they can do what they like .(2)________________________(不管你喜不喜欢)，I’ll still do it anyway.(3)_____________________(不管你年老还是年幼)，you all have the chance to receive education.4. Upon finishing his studies, he started travelling in China.==______________________________, he started travelling in China.(1)_______________(他一看到我)，he walked up to me.==__________________, he walked up to me.(2)_________________(他们一听到这个消息)，they jumped with joy.==_____________________, they jumped with joy.5. 我坐在一个叫丹妮的女孩旁边。