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人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit3 Writing(共23张PPT)
Experience 1.Once, I worked as a manager assistant in Able Company. 2.I was a tour guide in Kunming last summer vacation.
Showing your interest in jobs
Yours sincerely, Liu Xue
Brainstorming
Ability
I am good at…/I do well in… I am skilled in… I have a good knowledge of…
Hobbies I like/love/enjoy… I am interested in… I am fond of…
MAJOR CATERING COMPANY has temporary jobs as chefs, waiters, and kitchen staff. For more information write to Ms Kate Rees, 17 Park End St.
SALES STAFF required in well-known clothes shop. Good pay, short-term renewable contracts. Cheerful, outgoing personality essential, and a knowledge of languages useful. Please write to Mr Lampeter at Trendwear, 18 Commercial St.
Practice
1.我是李华,2010年毕业于刘田庄中学。 My name is Li Hua and I graduated from Liu Tianzhuang High School in 2010. 2.我掌握电脑技能,英语和法语说的很流 利。 I have a good knowledge of computer skills, and am fluent in English and French.
Showing your interest in jobs
Yours sincerely, Liu Xue
Brainstorming
Ability
I am good at…/I do well in… I am skilled in… I have a good knowledge of…
Hobbies I like/love/enjoy… I am interested in… I am fond of…
MAJOR CATERING COMPANY has temporary jobs as chefs, waiters, and kitchen staff. For more information write to Ms Kate Rees, 17 Park End St.
SALES STAFF required in well-known clothes shop. Good pay, short-term renewable contracts. Cheerful, outgoing personality essential, and a knowledge of languages useful. Please write to Mr Lampeter at Trendwear, 18 Commercial St.
Practice
1.我是李华,2010年毕业于刘田庄中学。 My name is Li Hua and I graduated from Liu Tianzhuang High School in 2010. 2.我掌握电脑技能,英语和法语说的很流 利。 I have a good knowledge of computer skills, and am fluent in English and French.
人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit3 Writing 公共课课件(共20张PPT)
advantages in job hunting
1. Reading for Writing
How
to write
1. Could you summarize the structure of this letter?
an
2. In each part, could you list some useful
2. Writing task
假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一 则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封 应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June15-17, 2017, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@.
Revise your writings and hand in them tomorrow.
individually
3
form a positive attitude towards their future job-hunting through a survey
1. Reading for Writing
How
to write
1. Could you summarize the structure of this letter?
1. Reading for Writing
How
to write
1. Could you summarize the structure of this letter?
an
2. In each part, could you list some useful
2. Writing task
假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一 则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封 应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June15-17, 2017, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@.
Revise your writings and hand in them tomorrow.
individually
3
form a positive attitude towards their future job-hunting through a survey
1. Reading for Writing
How
to write
1. Could you summarize the structure of this letter?
人教课标版高中英语选修8 Unit3 Writing (共15张PPT)
I like/love/enjoy ...
I am interested in ... I am fond of ...
character easygoing, outgoing, cheerful,
cooperative(有合作精神的),
humorous(幽默的), hardworking …
education
4. useful expressions 有用的表达
5. right tense
正确的时态
侨中现场招聘会
How to write an application letter formality layout useful expressions learn to write an application letter
1. I wish to apply for the job as a manager that
you are offering in Hainan Daily.
2. I am writing this letter in the hopes that you will be able to offer me a job/postion as a sales person.
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a temporary （暂时的）position as a waiter.
I am a 20-year-old student and would be able to work during June and July. I do not have any experience but I enjoy working with people and am interested in a career in the catering（餐饮） industry when I leave university.
人教版高中英语选修8 Unit 3 Writing课件
一、写作分析
在本文的写作过程中，我们应注意如下几点： 1、本文具有信息量大的特点，因此，除了 要注意运用所学的写作技能外，还要注意恰 当地、合理地使用复合句及并列句；2、将 逻辑关联紧密的信息放在同一个句子中表达； 3、由于所陈述的内容都与过去的事情以及 对现在造成巨大影响的事情有关，因此，本 文的时态应以过去时和现在完成时为主。
Mobile phones have made it convenient for people to communicate with each other at any time and any place. All these inventions have greatly improved the quality of people’s life and made our life colorful.
(5)所有的这些发明极大地提高了人们的生活质 量，使得人们的生活丰富多彩。
All these inventions have greatly improved the quality of people’s life and made our life colorful.
三、下笔成文
Personal computers have been widely used since the early 1990s, which have greatly promoted our work efficiency. The Internet has made it convenient for people to download any information from the websites and got the individuals to be connected with the whole world. Besides, people have got a lot of enjoyment from the TV since TV stations were established in the 1960s.
在本文的写作过程中，我们应注意如下几点： 1、本文具有信息量大的特点，因此，除了 要注意运用所学的写作技能外，还要注意恰 当地、合理地使用复合句及并列句；2、将 逻辑关联紧密的信息放在同一个句子中表达； 3、由于所陈述的内容都与过去的事情以及 对现在造成巨大影响的事情有关，因此，本 文的时态应以过去时和现在完成时为主。
Mobile phones have made it convenient for people to communicate with each other at any time and any place. All these inventions have greatly improved the quality of people’s life and made our life colorful.
(5)所有的这些发明极大地提高了人们的生活质 量，使得人们的生活丰富多彩。
All these inventions have greatly improved the quality of people’s life and made our life colorful.
三、下笔成文
Personal computers have been widely used since the early 1990s, which have greatly promoted our work efficiency. The Internet has made it convenient for people to download any information from the websites and got the individuals to be connected with the whole world. Besides, people have got a lot of enjoyment from the TV since TV stations were established in the 1960s.
人教新课标版英语高中作文-English-Writing应用文 课件 (共25张PPT)
4.书信正文 书信正文就是一篇文章，可运用描述，议论，
抒情，说明等各种方法写。怎么写取决于内容。 写回信，常应先提到收到对方的信，并表示
谢意。常用的用语：
Thank you for your letter of August 7, 199— I was glad to receive your letter of April 4. I was most pleased to hear from you. I have just received your letter. I am glad to tell you that…
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通知
书面通知即告示，是主事人或主事部门以书面形式向相关
对象，以布告的形式张贴或写在布告牌栏上的常见实用文体。
书面通知一般篇幅短小，言简意骇。
需要写明事件、地点、时间和告之对象。 书面通知的一般格式如下: 1.书面通知正文上面正中，往往用NOTICE一词。 2.正文表述可采用叙述形式。也可以用广告形式突出某个部分 (如主题、人物、时间、地点)。文字力求简明扼要，一个句子 可分为几行书写，分行书写时，尽量居中，各行的第一个字母 须大写。 3.通知发布日期一般写在正文的左下角（在落款的下一行）或 右上角（在notice的下一行）。 4.发布通知的主事部门或主事人。一般写在正文后的右下角， 也可写在NOTICE的正上方。
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2018-2019学年人教版高中英语选修8PPT课件3.3 Writing
Section Ⅲ— Writing
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Section Ⅲ— Writing
写作指导 常用句型 针对训练
如何写求职信 求职信属于公务信函,格式和用词比较正规。信的内容大体上分 为三部分:写信的目的,自我介绍,要求。 1.求职信的具体写作步骤: 1)介绍消息来源; 2)表明求职意愿; 3)介绍个人简历; 4)摆出求职优势; 5)提出获职打算; 6)请求答复联系; 7)表明感激之情。
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Section Ⅲ— Writing
写作指导 常用句型 针对训练
假如你是高健,请阅读下面一则广告并根据表中所提供的信息写 一封求职信。
Wanted Capital Car Company A Secretary of English Language
出生时间 籍贯 阅历 技能 爱好
1984.12.6
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Section Ⅲ— Writing 写作指导 常用句型 针对训练
3.结束语 I would be very thankful if you would give me an early reply. Thank you for an early reply. Could you please let me know if...? Thank you very much.
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Section Ⅲ— Writing
写作指导 常用句型 针对训练
2.写求职信时还应注意以下问题: 1)写信的目的要直截了当地在信的开头提出。 2)自我介绍部分主要介绍自己的学历、工作经历、解决问题的 能力等。在行文、用词上要表现出自信、恳切的态度。语言要简 明扼要,突出介绍自己的优点、特长或有利条件。还要紧扣用人单 位的需求,巧用词语,有利地说服对方此职非你莫属。 3)求职信主要用第一人称以及一般现在时。
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Section Ⅲ— Writing
写作指导 常用句型 针对训练
如何写求职信 求职信属于公务信函,格式和用词比较正规。信的内容大体上分 为三部分:写信的目的,自我介绍,要求。 1.求职信的具体写作步骤: 1)介绍消息来源; 2)表明求职意愿; 3)介绍个人简历; 4)摆出求职优势; 5)提出获职打算; 6)请求答复联系; 7)表明感激之情。
-5-
Section Ⅲ— Writing
写作指导 常用句型 针对训练
假如你是高健,请阅读下面一则广告并根据表中所提供的信息写 一封求职信。
Wanted Capital Car Company A Secretary of English Language
出生时间 籍贯 阅历 技能 爱好
1984.12.6
-4-
Section Ⅲ— Writing 写作指导 常用句型 针对训练
3.结束语 I would be very thankful if you would give me an early reply. Thank you for an early reply. Could you please let me know if...? Thank you very much.
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Section Ⅲ— Writing
写作指导 常用句型 针对训练
2.写求职信时还应注意以下问题: 1)写信的目的要直截了当地在信的开头提出。 2)自我介绍部分主要介绍自己的学历、工作经历、解决问题的 能力等。在行文、用词上要表现出自信、恳切的态度。语言要简 明扼要,突出介绍自己的优点、特长或有利条件。还要紧扣用人单 位的需求,巧用词语,有利地说服对方此职非你莫属。 3)求职信主要用第一人称以及一般现在时。
人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit3Writing(共18张PPT)
Beginning Write high-leveled sentences
从某英文报上得知报社正招聘一名兼职摄影师，我很 感兴趣。
I learned from the newspaper that you want a part-time photographer. And I am quite interested in the position.
Have a try!
• 假设你是李华，你从某英文报上得知该报 社正招聘一名兼职摄影师，你很感兴趣。 请用英语给该报社写一封求职信，内容主 要包括：
1.说明写信目的； 2.介绍个人情况； 3. 表达希望及感谢。
人称：第一人称 时态：一般现在时
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
As a hard-working student, not only do I have a good command of spoken English, but also I’ve read a lot, especially English poems. I should point out that so far I have been chosen as the host for our school’s English speech contest three times, so I am familiar with all aspects of the work. As a handsome boy of about 178cm in height, I have confidence in myself.
与人相处的好
get on well with;
useful phrases
人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit3writing (共19张PPT)
outgoing and friendly. I friendly. Therefore, it will
can get along well with not be a problem to get
the British students. I am along well with the British
written by Student A in another class
covering all the key points without getting a good mark
Para 1: background + writing purpose
Para 2: self-introduction
Step 2: Enrich拓展
self-introduction
who
strengths
personalities
language competence
adj.
语言能力
cultural awareness
文化意识
Step 2: Enrich拓展
reasons for application
global perspective 全球视野 cultural confidence 文化自信
五步法写作
——以申请信为例
Presenter: Cindy Zhu 珠海市实验中学 朱玉清
1. 提升英语语言 运用能力，掌握 书信的关键步骤， 解决实际问题。
2. 基于自主学习 和小组合作探究， 辨析范例的优劣 处，学会归纳知 识点，取其精华。
cultural awareness
Objectives
good at both English and students. Besides, as a
人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit3Writing guiding (共39张PPT)
优秀
Good (22--25)
良好
Competent (18--21)
一般
Modest (15--17)
较差
Limited (11--14)
差
Extremely Limited (6-10)
极差
Intermittent (0-5)
Writing skills---five steps
审清 题意
抄写 规范 5
活方式。作为当代青少年，我们应如何行动
起来，积极倡导低碳生活、保护地球呢？请 你写一篇议论文，包括以下几点：
1.最好步行或骑车上学，能节省能源，净化 空气。
2.节约纸张。例如，利用纸的正反面，将用 过的课本留给下届学生。
3.尽量早起早睡，充分利用日光（sunlight） 4.你有哪些好的建议呢？幻灯片 12
moon is much smaller.
Compared with the earth, the moon is much smaller.
六步：
第六步：
规范，整洁
Mrs Chu’ s tips:
Rome was not built in a day!
(罗马不是一天建成的)
Practice makes perfect.
如何行动起来，积极倡导
problems 低碳生活、保护地球
1. 步行或骑车上学..
Main body suggestions 2.节约纸张..
3. 早起早睡..
opinions 我认为…
Conclusion
随着社会的发展与进步，人们追求的不仅仅 是物质的满足，更重要的是生活的质量。
低碳生活是一种更加健康、自然和安全的生
人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit3Reading and Writing (共16张PPT)
Task3 Detailed reading
True or False
1. Alexander Graham Bell was born in 1847
in Boston, USA. F
2. It was Bell’s interest and curiosity that led
to the invention of the telephone. T
以下是举世闻名的科学家、发明家爱迪生 (Thomas Edison)的简介。
• 生卒时间：1847~1931
• 成就和探索精神：
1. 拥有约两千项发明，如电灯、留声机、电影放 映机
2. 永无止境地探索科学并用来服务人类
•ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ影响：
1. 他和他的发明对当代生活产生了深远影响
2. 他逝世几天后全美国都停电一分钟，以纪念这 个以他的发明大大改变并改善了各地人民生活 的人。
Birth: (when) _1__8_4__7___ (where) _S_c__o_t_la__n_d_ Character: _c_u_r_i_o_u_s___ __d__y_n_a_m__i_c___
___W__i_ll_i_n_g__t_o__e__x_p_l_o_r_e___
Interest: helping deaf people communicate
3. Bell invented the telephone by chance
because he had meant to improve the
telegraph. T
4. He invented the helicopter and other flying
machines. F
人教课标版高中英语选修8 Unit3 Writing (共15张PPT)
formal
D.Thank you if you could give me an interview. informal
Learn the layout of an application letter 了解应聘信的格式
May 8, 2014
date
Dear Sir or Madam,
beginning
a career
character
I would be very grateful if you could send me morheobbies
information
about the post(s)
3.asking for
amvaoilraeblien. formatio..n.
I look forward to hearing from you.
2. I was a tour guide in Haikou last summer vacation.
1. 我是陈佳, 2019年毕业于文昌华侨中学. My name is Chen Jia and I _g_r_a_d_u_a_te_d__f_r_o_m__ Wenchang Overseas Middle School in 2019.
Learn about the formality了解正式程度
Formal or Informal？
A. I am writing this letter in the hopes that you
will be able to offer me a position as a sales
person.
3. Does he have any working experience? No, he doesn't.
人教版高中英语选修八 Unit3 Writing(共14张PPT)
二、词句储备
1. 写作中可能使用的词语有： (1)个人电脑_p_e_r_s_o_n_a_l _c_o_m__p_u_te_r_s___ (2)提高_p_r_o_m__o_te_/_im__p_r_o_v_e___ (3)工作效率_w__o_r_k_e_f_fi_c_ie_n_c_y_____ (4)下载_d_o_w__n_lo_a_d_________ (5)个人_i_n_d_i_v_id_u_a_l___________ (6)电视台_T_V__s_t_a_ti_o_n_s________ (7)手机_m__o_b_il_e_p_h_o_n__es_/_c_e_ll_p_h_o_n_e_s_ (8)交流_c_o_m__m_u_n__ic_a_t_e_________ (9)生活质量_t_h_e__q_u_a_li_t_y_o_f_l_if_e__ (10)方便的_c_o_n_v_e_n_i_e_n_t______
2. 写作中可能使用的句子有： (1)个人电脑从二十世纪九十年代初开始被广 泛使用，极大地提高了人们的工作效率。
Personal computers have been widely used since the early 1990s, which have greatly promoted our work efficiency. (2) 因特网使人们能够方便地下载任何信息， 将个人与世界联系在了一起。
Finally, an American farmer named Philo Farnsworth made a breakthrough in the history of TV at the age of 13, when he discovered a way to transmit images to a screen by the use of 60 horizontal (水平的) lines, which made the picture clearer. Farnsworth also invented over 165 devices, including the dissector tube (图像分析器), which became the groundwork for televisions we use today.
2020-2021学年人教新课标英语选修八Unit3 课件writing 3
Unit 3
Inventors and inventions
Writing
• 如何写求职信(Letter of application)
• 技法指导
• 求职信属于应用文中的书信类。写作时，要注意书信的一 些基本格式。
• 首先，要注意开篇交代句、末尾总结句和常识性语句，提 高文章的呼应性。开篇句往往交代得知消息的渠道，并表 明求职心愿。如：I've learned from the newspaper that you are employing a．..and I'm very interested in it.末尾句往往 表达希望能很快收到答复的迫切愿望并表明感激之情。如 ：I would be very thankful if you would give me an early
• 此外，要防止遗漏要点。如果是针对广告招聘的求职信， 应认真阅读广告，明确招聘要求，并对照自己的条件，逐 一加以介绍，同时还要注上自己的通讯地址和联系方式。
• 注意：1.篇幅不宜太长，要简明扼要； • 2．态度要诚恳，实事求是； • 3．所展示的信息要精炼且有针对性； • 4．语气要客气、礼貌； • 5．可用各种时态，通常用一般现在时和一般过去时。
Apart from courses in my major, I learned English hard and passed the CET6 in 2017.
3．至于我的性格，我热情乐观，这使得我和同学相处融洽。 As for my character, I'm enthusiastic and optimistic, which makes me get on well with my classmates 4．您能给我打电话安排一次面试吗？ Would you please call me to set an interview？
Inventors and inventions
Writing
• 如何写求职信(Letter of application)
• 技法指导
• 求职信属于应用文中的书信类。写作时，要注意书信的一 些基本格式。
• 首先，要注意开篇交代句、末尾总结句和常识性语句，提 高文章的呼应性。开篇句往往交代得知消息的渠道，并表 明求职心愿。如：I've learned from the newspaper that you are employing a．..and I'm very interested in it.末尾句往往 表达希望能很快收到答复的迫切愿望并表明感激之情。如 ：I would be very thankful if you would give me an early
• 此外，要防止遗漏要点。如果是针对广告招聘的求职信， 应认真阅读广告，明确招聘要求，并对照自己的条件，逐 一加以介绍，同时还要注上自己的通讯地址和联系方式。
• 注意：1.篇幅不宜太长，要简明扼要； • 2．态度要诚恳，实事求是； • 3．所展示的信息要精炼且有针对性； • 4．语气要客气、礼貌； • 5．可用各种时态，通常用一般现在时和一般过去时。
Apart from courses in my major, I learned English hard and passed the CET6 in 2017.
3．至于我的性格，我热情乐观，这使得我和同学相处融洽。 As for my character, I'm enthusiastic and optimistic, which makes me get on well with my classmates 4．您能给我打电话安排一次面试吗？ Would you please call me to set an interview？
人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit3Using language课件(17页ppt)
ashamed.
人 教 课 标 版 高中英 语选修 8Unit3 Using l a ngua ge课件 (17页p pt)
人 教 课 标 版 高中英 语选修 8Unit3 Using l a ngua ge课件 (17页p pt)
4) 一些游客在参观一些世界名胜时，到处乱 扔垃圾。
When they travel some world famous places of interest, some tourists litter here and there. 5) 一些游客把他们的名字刻在树上或雕像上。 Some tourists carve their names on the trees or statues.
importance of obeying the traffic rules. Nowadays, with the number of vehicles
increasing on the road, traffic problems have
become p阐art述of提ou出r li倡fe.议So的me理pe由ople run the
red light at the crossing and others ride their bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drive too
人 教 课 标 版 高中英 语选修 8Unit3 Using l a ngua ge课件 (17页p pt)
fast in the street. All the behaviour presents potential danger. If we don't obey the traffic rules, there might be more traffic jams and accidents.
人 教 课 标 版 高中英 语选修 8Unit3 Using l a ngua ge课件 (17页p pt)
人 教 课 标 版 高中英 语选修 8Unit3 Using l a ngua ge课件 (17页p pt)
4) 一些游客在参观一些世界名胜时，到处乱 扔垃圾。
When they travel some world famous places of interest, some tourists litter here and there. 5) 一些游客把他们的名字刻在树上或雕像上。 Some tourists carve their names on the trees or statues.
importance of obeying the traffic rules. Nowadays, with the number of vehicles
increasing on the road, traffic problems have
become p阐art述of提ou出r li倡fe.议So的me理pe由ople run the
red light at the crossing and others ride their bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drive too
人 教 课 标 版 高中英 语选修 8Unit3 Using l a ngua ge课件 (17页p pt)
fast in the street. All the behaviour presents potential danger. If we don't obey the traffic rules, there might be more traffic jams and accidents.
人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit3 Writing (共16张PPT)
➢Work with your partner. ➢Student A: write the paragraph about your skills ➢Student B: write the one about work experience
Post-writing Exchange & revise your writing.
Pre-writing Makers in our school
Writing task: ➢Write an application letter to Mr. Wu and apply to be a maker in the Maker Club（创客社团）. ➢State your skills and experience to show your strength.
➢ Grade your writing according to the writing assessment criteria.
Summary
The format（格式） of an application letter
Greetings（Dear Mr./ Mrs.) Introductory paragraph (the reasons for
writing the application letter)
Skills + work experience for the position
A:Hello, Mr. Wu speaking. How can I help you? B: Hello, Mr. Wu, My name is Jack. I’d like to join your club as a maker. I really want to know what skills I need in order to join the club. A: Well, you need to work in a team to solve problems. Besides, creativity is important for that. B: Oh, that’s great. I have those skills. And I hope that my confidence also helps. A: OK, you can ring again to get information if you want. B: Thank you so much. Goodbye. A: Goodbye.
Post-writing Exchange & revise your writing.
Pre-writing Makers in our school
Writing task: ➢Write an application letter to Mr. Wu and apply to be a maker in the Maker Club（创客社团）. ➢State your skills and experience to show your strength.
➢ Grade your writing according to the writing assessment criteria.
Summary
The format（格式） of an application letter
Greetings（Dear Mr./ Mrs.) Introductory paragraph (the reasons for
writing the application letter)
Skills + work experience for the position
A:Hello, Mr. Wu speaking. How can I help you? B: Hello, Mr. Wu, My name is Jack. I’d like to join your club as a maker. I really want to know what skills I need in order to join the club. A: Well, you need to work in a team to solve problems. Besides, creativity is important for that. B: Oh, that’s great. I have those skills. And I hope that my confidence also helps. A: OK, you can ring again to get information if you want. B: Thank you so much. Goodbye. A: Goodbye.
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让句子瘦下来—— 高级简单句
*用单词简化句子
As he was tired and hungry ,the boy was unwilling to move on.
Tired and hungry ,the boy was unwilling to move on. *用介词短语简化句子
We will not finish the task if you do not help us.
Some skills of English writing 写好书面表达的一些技巧
1、扬长避短
写句子时努力克服“缺胳膊 少腿”、“画蛇添足”、 “张冠李戴”、“乱点鸳鸯”、
“生搬硬套”和类
But there are 60% of the students are against the idea of playing too much computer games.
*强调句：It is/was +别强调部分+who/that+其他部 分
It was not until 11 o’clock that her husband came back last night.
*倒装句：“not only …but also…”引导并列成分，not only 位于句首时用倒装
（去掉there are, 或在第二个 are前加关系代词who。）
“乱点鸳鸯”类
1. Playing computer games for a long time makes a bad effect on our study and health.
(动宾不当, 把makes改为has。)
2、显出文采
Without your help , we will not finish the task. *用动名词简化句子
Mary came late ,which made her teacher angry.
Mary’s coming late made her teacher angry.
提分句型
• 写作要点： • 1．活动的策划2.教室的布置； • 3．活动的内容4.你的感想 • 注意： • 1．短文词数不少于100； • 2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数； • 3．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当； • 4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
• Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers’ Day; she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. As Teachers’ Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon of September 10，some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers’ Day!” Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers’ Day!” Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys showed their Gongfu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li. Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.
ENGLISH WRITING (一)
Cool sentences make perfect writings
好句子扮靓作文
Experience the exam 体验高考
• (2012) 假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节 那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作要点并 参考图画内容，为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短 文。
Not only does the little boy speaks English well ,but also he speaks fluently.
①、有效使用复合句。 ②、多种句型交替使用。 ③、准确使用句与句之间的连接成分。
Make your sentences cool
让句子靓起来
精彩呈现，亮点仿写
• 让句子靓起来——扩写简单句 He is sleeping. He is sleeping in class. He is sleeping in the English class. He is sleeping soundly in the English class. He is sleeping soundly in the English class when the teacher calls his name.