高中英语概要写作教研资源的开发(共113张PPT)

[C]onsider the recent study at the University of Arizona investigating the attitudes of white and black teen-age girls toward body image. The attitudes of the white girls were a nightmare. Ninety percent expressed dissatisfaction with their own bodies and many said they saw dieting as a kind of allpurpose panacea (万应灵药). "I think the reason I would diet would be to gain selfconfidence," said one. "I'd feel like it was a way of getting control," said another. And they were curiously united in their description of the perfect girl. She's 5 feet 7 inches, weighs just over 100 pounds, has long legs and flowing hair. The researchers concluded, "The ideal girl was a living manifestation of the Barbie doll." While the white girls described an impossible ideal, black teen-agers talked about appearance in terms of style, attitude, pride and personality. White respondents talked “thin,” black ones “shapely.” Seventy percent of the black teen-agers said they were satisfied with their weight, and there was little emphasis on dieting. “We‘re all brought up and taught to be realistic about life,” said one, “and we don’t look at things the way you want them to be. You look at them the way they are.” （文体知识的学习 https://copywritinginaction.com.au/six-genres-of-writing-part-1/)
In the excerpt from a 1994 New York Times article, “Public & Private; Barbie at 35,” author Anna Quindlen references a University of Arizona study about female body image1. The study found that African-American and white teenage girls have very different attitudes about their body images2. Almost all white girls said they were dissatisfied with their appearance3; AfricanAmerican girls in the study, however, had a more positive attitude toward their weight and personal appearance, choosing to focus on reality instead of an “impossible ideal.”4 1. Provides original publication information: year, source, type of text, title and author; states focus of excerpt 2. Gives generalized statement about the study findings 3. Describes how the white teenagers in the study viewed their bodies 4. Explains how African American teenagers in the study viewed their
高中英语读写教研资源的开发： 以概要写作为例
概要写作题型
• 概要写作题型的基本要求为： • 提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词 左右的内容概要。（所选材料体裁没ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu限制，以说明文、议论文 和记叙文为主）
概要写作体验1
• Excerpt from “Public & Private; Barbie at 35” by Anna Quindlen, published in The New York Times, September 10, 1994.
知乎观点
• 概写评分有问题。我们知道续写是可以根据学生英语客观实力进 行评分的，但是概写呢?很难体现。仅仅考察了学生提炼的能力 和优化句子、变换句型的水平。何况，到底怎么评判你是否达到 了全部要点?或者如何判断你答对了多少，有多少要点又是正确 无误的呢？这有很大难度。