2019版高考英语一轮复习课件：专题十七 概要写作
2019高考英语复习概要写作课件(共17张PPT)
women are friendly / men are competitive hormone oxytocin
Understanding of Para. 1
Women are friendly. But men are more competitive. Why? Researchers have found it’s all down to the hormone oxytocin. Although known as the love hormone, it affects the sexes differently. “Women tend to be social in their behavior. They often share with others. But men tend to be competitive. They are trying to improve their social status,” said Professor Ryan.
Whose opinion/belief/finding is mentioned?
Focus on the researcher’s findings!
Understanding of Para. 2
Generally, people believe that the hormone oxytocin is let out in our body in various social situations and our body creates a large amount of it during positive social experiment1 interactions such as falling in love or giving birth. But in a previous experiment Professor Ryan found that the hormone is also let out in our body during negative social interactions such as envy.
高三英语一轮复习作文专题----概要公开课课件(共21张)
Reason/ Benefit 1
Reason/ Benefit 2
Reason/ Benefit 3
Step 3: Extract (提取) different information in each paragraph.
• Pay attention:
• Find as much information as possible but integrate (合并) repeated pieces of information.
Criteria for a good summary
• 理解准确，涵盖全部要点。
Contents (内容)
• 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 • 完全使用自己的语言。
Language skills (语言)
• 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使 所完成的概要结构紧凑。
Structure (结构)
• Para. 3:
Besides, physical education helps to develop character and the mutual respect required to succeed in an adult environment.
• Para. 4:
Finally, the pursuit for national sporting achievement begins in schools.
• In the UK, Physical Education (PE) is compulsory in state schools until the age of 16 – that is, sports are compulsory for as long as education is compulsory. Every year, more and more parents complain to their children’s schools about PE. They believe that their children shouldn’t have to participate in physical activity if they don’t want to. Supporters of PE, however, believe that it is a crucial element of all-round schooling and our society’s well-being. They insist PE in schools remains one of the few places by which the youth can be forced to participate in aerobic (有氧的) exercise.
英语概要写作课件高考英语一轮复习
happen to be more than a car ride away．But keep in mind that you are making a
decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to
第一步 读懂原文，明确篇章结构 本文是说明文，为确保精彩的大学生活，在申请大学前应抽时间提前了解大学。 第 1 段：提出观点——在你上大学之前，要亲眼看看想申请的大学。 第 2 段：一定要去看看当地的大学。 第 3 段：如果在申请之前没去过，在申请之后或得到录取通知书之前，一定要 去大学看看。 第 4 段：如果无法亲自参观，登录网站了解相关信息。 分析各段主旨可判断，文章第 1～2 段是一个意义段，第 3 段是一个意义段， 第 4 段是一个意义段，故原文 3 个意义段可归纳为 3 个要点。
②第 3 段主题句可概括为要点 2，该要点中的 visit the schools you'd like to attend 可转换为 visit the college you decided to attend。 ③第 4 段主题句可概括为要点 3，该要点中的 time and money are making it impossible 可转换为 short of money and time。 第四步 句式多样，注意过渡衔接 句式要多样，可利用非谓语动词和状语从句，丰富概要部分的句式。
概要写作
概要写作要求考生在正确理解文意的基础上，在不改变原文中心思想 的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度概括文章的主要内容和观点。
第一讲 巧用四步法精准概要
————————————[真题引领·方法探究]—————————— (浙江卷) 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their
2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解上课讲义
2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析（一）考查内容：1、考查读懂文章内容的能力 2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力 3、考查归纳总结的能力4、 考查组织文章的能力（二）评分要点•1）字数50左右• 2）理解准确，涵盖全部要点• 3）准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇• 4）完全使用自己的语言• 5）有效使用语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑二、专题详解定义：It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。
（三）写作方法（总-分，总-分-总，分-总，并列）1) 找准体裁，提炼要点按体裁 2) 语言：同义词①同义转换：近义词、同义词和词组的替换，尽量用单词替换短语（例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important）②句式转换：简化句子结构（例如，定语从句改成分词作后置定语；状语从句改成非谓语作状语；）③句子重构：调整词类（名词、动词、形容词转换）、时态、语态（主动变被动）等3)衔接（替换；省略；增加）：表逻辑关系的连接词替换：并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition,转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand省略：并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。
增加：按逻辑关系，补充连接词firstly…, secondly…, finally…;and…, moreover…, furthermore…; but, instead, however,例（一）_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Chris, whose job is exciting and dangerous, works for MFS. Chris and other MFS’s doctors need to be ready to go almost anywhere in the world and might be sent on an emergency task. Christ thinks_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary ：People from countryside generally live longer than city people because they enjoy many advantages such as close with nature, physical work, being free from urban pressure, more free_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Keys:Windbreak, which is formed by trees and other plants, is used by farmers to protect their land from damage by farming and the forces of the nature. Windbreak can protect the crops and help improve grain production. However, windbreak should be planted properly to work its best.练习实战练习（一）One hot night last August, I tried everything I could think of—a warm bottle, songs, etc. to make him fall into sleep, but he just couldn’t do it. Since I believed that a long night was waiting for me ahead, I had no choice but to bring a TV into his room to kill off the hours until dawn. I was surprised that the moment I turned on the TV, the baby became quiet right away and fixed his little eyes brightly on the screen. Not willing to waste an opportunity for sleep, I then tiptoed(用脚失走）out of the room, leaving him to watch the boring TV programs.I hea rd no more of the baby’s crying that night and the next morning when I went into his room, I found him still watching TV by himself. I found there was a metaphor (暗喻) in my baby’s behavior for the new generation. When I gave my boy some books to go over, he only spit upon them; when I read to him, he did not feel comfortable. So is it in the schools with my students. I find that our students don’t read and they look down upon reading and make light of those of us who teach it. All they want to do is to watch TV. After this experience with the baby, however, I have drawn a conclusion: “Let them watch it!” If television is much more attractive to children than books, why should we fight against it? Let them watch what they want!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary：The writer tried everything to make her baby fall asleep but failed. Surprisingly, when she turned on the TV, the baby kept quiet himself. Then she found that her students liked watching TV as much as her baby. So the writer suggested that we should let children watch what they want.实战练习（二）More and more people like bicycling and it is no surprise. It is fun, healthy and good for the environment. Maybe that’s why there are 1.4 billion bicycles and only 400 million cars on roads worldwide today.Bikes can take you almost anywhere, and there is no oil cost! Get on a bicycle and ride around your neighbourhood. You may discover something new all around you. Stopping and getting off a bike is easier than stopping and getting out of your car. You can bike to work and benefit from the enjoyable exercise without polluting the environment. You don’t even have to ride all the way.Folding bikes work well for people who take the train. Just fold the bike and take it with you. You can do the same on an airplane. A folding bike can be packed in a suitcase. You can also take a common bike with you when you fly. But be sure to look for information by getting on airline websites. Not all airlines are bicycle-friendly to travelers.Health Benefits of Bicycling: It helps to prevent heart diseases. Bicycling helps to control your weight. A 15-minute bike ride to and from work three times a week bums off five kilos of fat in a year. Bicycling can improve your mood. Exercise like bicycling has been shown to make people feel better, more relaxed and self-confident. Bicycling is healthier than driving._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:Many people like bicycling because it’s fun, heathy and good for environment and it’s easy to stop and get off. Sometimes folding bikes can be taken with you on an airplane or a train. Most importantly, bicycling has a lot of health benefits.强化练习练习（一）Understanding body language is important to success, whether in the business world or in our personal lives. However, some of our ideas about body language are wrong, according to modern communication research.There is a belief that people with shifty(变化的) eyes are probably lying. As Paul Ekman says, “When we asked people how they could tell if someone was lying, too much blinking(眨眼) and shifty eyes were the answers.” Ekman goes on to argue against such a wrong belief. Although this kind of body language is probably an expression of nervousness, it is not always because the person is lying. Shyness can, for example, make people shift their eyes. To understand what someone’s behavior means, you have to watch them carefully.There is also a belief that when meeting someone, the more eye contact, the better. As a result people would like to make initial (开始的) contact in formal situations, like a job interview, by staring fixedly at the other human. Yet Ekman points out that most of us are comfortable with eye contact lasting a few seconds，but any eye contact that is longer than that cm make us nervous.In short, you must carefully consider the speaker and the speaking environment. Experts suggest that unless you know about someone’s basic communication style, you will have little hope in understanding their true feelings through body language. In other words, body language carries important but not always true messages._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary:The passage argues two wrong ideas about body language. One is that people believe shifty eyes means that person is lying. The other is that people believe the more eye contact, the better during communication. Finally, the writer gives us a suggestion that we should be careful when we judge somebody body language.练习（二）Linda Evans was my best friend—like the sister I never had. We did everything together: having piano lessons, going to movies, swimming, and horseback riding.When I was 13, my family moved away. Linda and I kept in touch through letters, and we saw each other on special time—like my wedding and Linda’s. Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often. One day a card that I sent came back, stamped “Address Unknown.” I had no idea how to find Linda.Over the years, I missed Linda very much. I wanted to share happiness of my children and then grandchildren. And I needed to share my sadness when my brother and then mother died. There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda could fill.One day I was reading a newspaper when I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda and whose last name was Wagman —Linda's married name. “There must be thousands of Wagmans,” I t hought, but I still wrote to her.She called as soon as she got my letter. “Mrs. Tobin!’’ she said excitedly, “Linda Evans Wagman is my mother.Minutes later I heard a voice that I knew very much, even after 40 years, laughed and cried and caught up on eac h other’s lives. Now the empty place in my heart is filled. And there’s one thing that Linda and I know for sure: We won’t lose each other again!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Summary：Linda Evans and the writer are best friends. After the writer’s family moved away, they kept in touch through letters. Then, they were all busy and wrote letters often. Finally, they lost in touch with each other and the writer felt empty. After 40 years, the writer found Linda and they won’t lose each other again.1．他利用她人好心软，三番五次向她借钱。
高考英语之概要写作(精选课件)
高考英语之概要写作概要写作(Ｓummaｒy ｗriting），被称为“小作文".概要写作分值占据１5分，考查的是考生阅读和写作的综合能力。
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高考英语一轮复习名师课件：专题十七 概要写作
for example/for instance例如 例句:(1)As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life. (2)There is one more topic to be concerned about, namely/that is(to say), the question of education. 六、强调用语 especially特别 indeed确实 at least至少 at most最多 not at all根本不
例句:(1)Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters. (2)In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted. 九、目的用语 for this purpose目的是…… so as to do为了…… in order that=in order to do为了……
二、以自然段为概括的基础。 概要写作的特点决定了自然段的重要性。各段的要点明确。大多数情 况下,一个自然段自成一个要点。以自然段为基础概括会帮助我们不遗 漏信息,判断主要信息。当然,以自然段为基础概括并不是说一个自然 段一定是一个要点。有时几个自然段说明一个要点。有时一个自然段 包含数个要点。 三、细节信息可以略过。 说明文和议论文中,为了表达观点和说明信息,文章需要提供一些具体 的支持性的细节信息,如例举数字、举例、过渡句等。这些属于补充和 辅助信息。在概要写作中不必一一列出。
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19年浙江高考英语作文概要写作
19年浙江高考英语作文概要写作**Title: The Impact of Technology on Education**In the modern age, technology plays a pivotal role in transforming education. Its influence is undeniable, revolutionizing both teaching methods and learning experiences. Firstly, technology enhances accessibility to educational resources. Through online platforms and digital libraries, students can access a vast array of information instantly, regardless of geographical constraints. This democratization of knowledge empowers learners and promotes self-directed study.Secondly, technology facilitates interactive and personalized learning environments. Adaptive learning software tailors lessons to individual student needs, catering to varying paces and learning styles. This personalized approach fosters a deeper understanding ofsubjects and boosts student engagement. Moreover, multimedia tools such as virtual reality (VR) and simulations bring abstract concepts to life, making learning more immersive and stimulating.Furthermore, technology expands educational horizons beyond traditional classrooms. Online courses and webinars connect students with experts and resources globally, fostering cross-cultural understanding and collaboration. Distance learning programs enable flexibility for non-traditional learners, including working professionals and remote communities.However, amidst these advancements, challenges arise. The digital divide persists, limiting access to technology and quality education for marginalized groups. Moreover, concerns about screen time and digital distractions necessitate balanced integration of technology into curricula.In conclusion, while technology enriches education in unprecedented ways, its effective integration requires thoughtful implementation and equitable access. By harnessing its potential responsibly, educators can cultivate a more inclusive and dynamic learning environment, preparing students for the complexities of the 21st-century global landscape.。
2019版高考英语一轮复习课件：专题十七-概要写作
ing plan and keep up your daily writing.(要点3)Besides,you'd better turn to others for help to improve your writing.(要点4)
第二页，共26页。
Writing 2(2018浙江金华十校一模) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 The familiar yellow school bus is the largest system of mass transportation in the US and every
In order to serve as a school bus driver, most applicants are required to successfully complete a training course, along with instruction in the classroom and behind the wheel.
高考英语专题复习课件：概要写作课件
(3) 上下文的连贯性; (4) 对各要点表达的独立性情况。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方 面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以 考虑。 6. 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一 个档次。
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
档次
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——理解准确,涵盖全部要点。 第五档 ——能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 (21-25) ——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完
四、熟知评分原则，明确写作方向 (一)评分原则 1. 本题总分为25分, 按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时, 先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确
定其所属档次, 然后以该档次的要求来衡量、 确定或调整档次, 最后给分。 3. 词数少于40的和多于80的, 从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时, 应主要从以下四个方面考虑: (1) 对原文要点的理解和呈现情况; (2) 应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
三、常用连接词
1. 顺序 first…second…third… 首先……第二……第三……
firstly…secondly…thirdly…finally… 首先……第二……第三……最后……
to begin with…then…furthermore…finally 首先……然后……此外……最后……
成的概要结构紧凑。 ——完全使用自己的语言。
——理解准确,涵盖绝大部分要点。 第四档 ——所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误, (16-20) 但完全不影响意义表达。
——比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使 所完成的概要结构紧凑。 ——有个别整句抄自原文。
——理解较为准确,涵盖大部分要点。 第三档 ——所使用语法结构和词汇虽有些错误,但 (11-15) 不影响意义表达。
——应用简单的语句间连接成分,使上下文 内容连贯。 ——出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
高考英语一轮复习写作专题总述课件
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小组合作讨论： 高分作文应满足？
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1.完成任务，涵盖内容要点。不能漏点！！！ 2.词汇语法高级，无错。 3.层次结构衔接。 4.格式错误扣一分。 5.字迹：过于潦草，降低一个档次。
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1基本完成了试题规定的任务。 2虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求。 4有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 5应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 6整体而言，基本达到了语气的写作目的。
第二档（较差）；（6-10分）
There are at least three reasons that can account for my resignation.-------------总说1
First of all, I find that the work is not as challenging as what I have expected.----------三点1
清晰，不掉档次。 特别美：所在档次的最高分。
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02写作的灵魂——变通
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03 各类型的写作模板
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三.各类型写作模板
1.辞职信 2.求职信 3.推荐信 4.建议信 5.感谢信 6.邀请信 7.万能模板 8.倡议信
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作文的核心：三段式+三点式
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1.辞职信(求职信) 第一段：亮身份+表目的 第二段：4句：总说1，三点3(万能模板：1.钱少 2.没挑战 3.没兴趣 4.升职机会渺茫) 第三段: 致歉+感谢 模板：
高考英语一轮复习概要写作讲义
高考概要写作知识点一概要写作题型介绍【知识梳理】概要写作是综合写作任务的一种常见形式, 被广泛应用于教学和评估活动中。
概要写作的目的不仅是要重述原文的主旨要义, 还要在不改变原文意思的前提下变换词汇和句子结构, 也就是要使用自己的语言写概要。
一、概要写作的考纲说明和题型介绍1. 考纲说明根据教育部考试中心的相关说明, 概要写作中, 提供给考生一篇350以内的短文, 要求其基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
2. 试题选材特点提供给考生阅读的短文词数在350以内；所选材料体裁虽然没有限制, 但多以说明文、议论文为主, 偶尔也会有记叙文或夹叙夹议的阅读材料。
考试说明所给的样题是一篇科普知识类的文章, 句子结构复杂, 难度较大。
3. 熟知概要写作的评分标准（一）概要写作考查要求：（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。
总之, 概要应具有独立性和自明性, 拥有与文章等量的主要信息, 即不阅读全文, 就能获得必要的信息；其次概要不容赘言, 故需逐字推敲；最后概要内容必须完整、一目了然。
4. 评分标准(1)评分原则①本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
②评分时,先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
③词数少于40的和多于80的,从总分中减去2分④评分时,应注意要从以下四个方面考虑。
◆对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;◆应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;◆上下文的连贯性;◆对各要点表达的独立性情况。
⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
⑥如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。
(2)各档次的给分范围和要求5. 概要写作特点概要写作, 即对所读过的文章简要概括, 写出文章的中心大意, 也称之为摘要。
写概要时, 要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句进行表述, 而不是抄袭文章的原句, 更不能把细节性信息作为中心, 即要对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换, 对文章的具体信息进行概括, 再用适合的语言表达。
高考英语一轮复习课件(人教版新高考新教材)写作专项 板块四 概要写作(备选)
主旨句
By giving kids a lot of praise,parents think they’re building their children’s confidence,when,in fact,it may be just the opposite.(段中)
①Parents believe that praising can help create children’s confidence
第四段:前两句提出:你儿子也许不是篮球队里面最好的运动员,但是假如 他每天都在外面努力打球,那么,不管他的球队输了还是赢了比赛,你都应 该表扬他的付出。第三句指出,表扬努力的过程而不是结果也意味着当他 们努力清扫庭院、做饭或完成读书报告时,你也要认可他们的努力。最后 一句是本段主旨句,总结作者观点:表扬应该视情况而定,你的表扬应该与 孩子们付出的努力相符合。
误,但完全不影响 完成的概要作文结构 自原文
部分要点
意义表达
紧凑
评分档次 第一条
第二条
第三条
第四条
第三档 (11—15分)
理解较为准确, 涵盖大部分要 点
所使用语法结构和 应用简单的语句 词汇虽有些错误,但 间连接成分,使上 不影响意义表达 下文内容连贯
出现两句以 上整句抄自 原文现象
第二档 (6—10分)
原文以说明文和议论文为主,偶有记叙文以及其他文体。原文结构比较明 晰,通常包含4个左右的要点。考生要客观准确归纳要点,不照搬原文句子, 要点之间要恰当衔接,全文内容要连贯,过渡要自然。 一、题型考查的能力 1.考生概括文章主旨大意和准确获取关键词的能力、对语篇的概括能力; 2.用简洁的语言表述文章重要信息的能力。词汇短语准确,句型表达精练; 3.对文章整体结构的把握能力。
2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解上课讲义
2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析（一）考查内容：1、考查读懂文章内容的能力2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力3、考查归纳总结的能力4、考查组织文章的能力（二）评分要点?1）字数50左右?2）理解准确，涵盖全部要点?3）准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇?4）完全使用自己的语言?5）有效使用语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑二、专题详解定义：It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longercomposition.读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。
（三）写作方法Step 1. 确定体裁，明确主题Step 2. 明确文章结构（总-分，总-分-总，分-总，并列）Step 3. 划主题句与关键信息Step 4. 写纲要，打草稿Step 5. 润色成文1)找准体裁，提炼要点按体裁2)语言：同义词&词组替换；句式简化；句子重构①保留关键句要点，按体裁和内容②删除细节（删除具体例子，或归纳总结例子的过程、作用和记叙文，主要信息应包括：When? Where? Who? What?Why?How(时间先后顺序/事情发展顺序)?Result议论文，作者的观点。
作者如何论证自己的观点的 (举例证明的，归纳总结①同义转换：近义词、同义词和词组的替换，尽量用单词替换短语（例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important ）②句式转换：简化句子结构（例如，定语从句改成分词作后置定语；状语从句改成非谓语作状语；）③句子重构：调整词类（名词、动词、形容词转换）、时态、语态（主动变被动）等3)衔接（替换；省略；增加）：表逻辑关系的连接词替换：并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition,转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand省略：并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。
2019版高考英语(江浙版)一轮讲义：专题十七概要写作Word版含答案 (3)
专题十七概要写作【考纲解读】分析解读概要写作也是一种全新的题型。
根据高考综合改革试验区英语科考试说明,写作的第二节是读后续写或概要写作。
两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。
近三次的考试中均没有采用概要写作,因此,今后出现概要写作的机会将大大增加。
概要写作是综合性的写作考查。
要求考生首先对原文章有准确的理解,对原文的结构和要点有准确的把握,然后再用准确、丰富的语言以及高级的语法结构,用合适的连词写出包含所有要点的短文。
所以,考生要想做好本题,就必须注意以下几点:(1)准确理解文章。
(2)把握文章的各个要点。
(3)使用准确的语法结构、丰富的词汇和合适的连词。
(4)使用自己的语言表述,不要抄原文中的句子。
【命题探究】agoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutatti tudestodirt.Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirto ntheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingo ffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsi n.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths .By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhi skingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.Thusbegana longtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithd irtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamousl ydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,t hekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,the noblemanshouldnotgoout.Thoughthebeliefinthemerit(好处)ofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregar dedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scien tificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwa tersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreve ntingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlin esshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarII.Advert isementsrepeatedlyselltheidea:clothesneedtobewh iterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine. Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?【三年模拟】模拟题组Writing1(2018宁波十校一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
高考英语一轮复习写作专题讲座课件第17讲提纲.ppt
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2．踢足球和阅读故事都是我的最爱，因为它们给我带来很 多好处。 ►Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. ►I like both playing football and reading stories very much, for they do a lot of good to me.
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参考范文： Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Li Hua and I am now in Grade Three, Class Two from Guangming Senior High School. I want to be an exchange student of your school. I would like to apply to join the program. Firstly, my listening and speaking skills on English are good. In class, our English teacher often praises
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Therefore, as what I have stated above, I'll be thankful if you accept me as an exchange student. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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Writing 2(2018浙江金华十校一模) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
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Writing 3(2017浙江衢州高三一模) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
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