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例28
汉语原句 其他类型的电动机也广泛用在工业上。
英语错句Other types of the electric motor also are widely use in industry.
问题诊断：语序问题
改正后的句子Other types of electric motor are also widely used in industry.
英语错句Our method is different from previous articles discussed the same problem.
问题诊断：方法不是与文章比，文章与讨论之间的逻辑关系的问题）
改正:Our method is different from those presented（described）in the papers available（published before）on（discussing）the same problem.
进一步改进：This paper begins with the discussion on the features of this signal, followed by the description of its generation.
例4
汉语原句 我们的方法与以前讨论同一问题的文章中所述的不同。
例31
汉语原句 电压是用伏特来度量的。（或：电压的度量单位是伏特。）
英语错句Voltage is measured with volt.
问题诊断：with用具体的工具，
改正后的句子Voltage is measured in volts.
例32
汉语原句 这两位工程师正忙于设计一种新型软件。
英语错句This two engineers are busy to design a type of new software.
问题诊断：比较对象要排除自身
改正后的句子In this laboratory, this instrument is more sensitive than any other one（或any one else）.
例26
汉语原句 这本书的序言写得很好。
英语错句The preface of this book was well written.
例14
汉语原句 已知常数K，就能算出C来。
英语错句Giving the constant K, C can be calculated.
问题诊断：Give的逻辑主语
改正后的句子Given（或knowing）the constant K, one（或we）can calculate C.（或~, it is possible to calculate C.）
问题诊断：be busy的搭配用法
改正后的句子These two engineers are busy with the design of〔或busy（in）designing〕a new type of software.
英语错句This running machine will stop of itself after one minute or two.
问题诊断：after不用在将来时中表时间
例18
原句：In this case , the input does not fall, the output does not fall, too.
例22
汉语原句x的所有值均不能满足这一方程。
英语错句All values of x can’t satisfy this equation.
问题诊断：全部否定与部分否定
改正后的句子No values of x（或None of the values of x）can satisfy this equation.
例21
汉语原句 现有的教科书没有提到这一点。
英语错句The now existed textbooks do not make mention of this point.
改正后的句子The existing textbooks（或The textbooks available）have made no mention of this point.
问题诊断：介词的搭配
改正后的句子The preface to this book is well written.
例27.
原句：Sending out radio waves, high -frequency oscillations must be generated.
改正后的句子：To send out radio waves, high -frequency oscillations must be generated.
例6
汉语原句 本文对提高打印速度和印字质量提供了一种计算机辅助设计手段。
英语错句This paper provided a kind of means of computer aid design for progressing the printing speed and the printing quality.
例16原句：Tin does not have a melting point as high as lead does.
改正后句子：Tin does not have as high a melting point as lead does.
例17
汉语原句 这台转动的机器将在一二分钟后自动停下来。
汉语原句 由于缺陷的存在，构件的疲劳寿命将大大降低。
英语错句Because of the existing of the defect, the fatigue life of the components will decrease very much.
问题诊断：能用名词时就不要用动名词
改正后的句子Because of（或Due to）the existence of the defect, the fatigue life of the components will be decreased（或shortened）greatly.
例30
原句：It is necessary to know if this material can strand a so large force or not.
改正后的句子：It is necessary to know whether this material can strand a so large force or not.
例5
汉语原句 只有通过对该系统性能的研究，我们才能了解它的优点。
英语错句Only through studied the performance of the system, its advantages can be understood.
改正后的句子Only through the study of the performance of the system can one（we）understand（appreciate）its advantages.
问题诊断：1.模糊语言kind of ,
2. progress不及物动词，其后不能接宾语
改正: This paper presents a CAD method for increasing the printing speed and improving the printing quality.
例1
汉语原句 这种新方法具有效率高、容易调整的优点。
英语错句This kind of new method have the advantage of high efficiency, easy adjustment.
改正后的句子This new method has the advantages of high efficiency and easy adjustment.
例9
汉语原句 这个方法需要精确的定位，这就使得它的实现具有一定的难度。
英语错句This method requires accurate location and this makes its realization have a little difficulty.
问题诊断：make sb. Do; ake sth. Done; make sb./sth. adj.
问题诊断：problem与provide搭配不当，could语气含糊
改正后的句子Finally, some problems that deserve to be noted in implementing this method and their solution are present正后的句子The conductivity of copper is higher than that of iron.
例25
汉语原句 在这个实验室中，这台仪器比其他的灵敏。
英语错句In this laboratory, this instrument is more sensitive than any one.
改写：In this case，the input does not fall, neither does the output.
例19
汉语原句 这个问题有待解决。
英语错句This problem waits to solve.
改正后的句子This problem remains to solve.
例23
汉语原句 这个电压几乎是测不出的。
英语错句This voltage almost can not be measured.
问题诊断：almost…not,部分否定
改正后的句子This voltage can hardly be measured.
例24
汉语原句 铜的导电率比铁高。
英语错句The conductivity of copper is higher than iron.
例13
汉语原句 并讨论了这一方法与扫描法相比的优点。
英语错句Compared with the scanning method, the advantages of this method has discussed also.
问题诊断：compared的逻辑主语不是the advantaged
改正后的句子The advantages of this method over the scanning method have also been discussed.
改正后的句子This method requires accurate location, thus making（或which makes）its realization somewhat difficult.
例11
汉语原句 最后提出了实现这种方法应注意的一些问题和解决方法。
英语错句At last, we provided some problems that could be noted in implementing this method and solving ways.
例15
汉语原句 这台新设计的仪器质量很好。
英语错句This new designed instrument is in good quality.
问题诊断：没有be in good quality的说法
改正后的句子This newly designed instrument is good in quality.或：This newly designed instrument is of good quality.
例2
汉语原句 本文首先讨论了这种信号的特点，然后讨论了它的产生。
需改进：This paper first discusses the features of this signal, and then its generation is described.
（主动被动混用，两句主语不一致）
改进：This paper first discusses the features of this signal, and then describes its generation.不过本句最好
汉语原句 其他类型的电动机也广泛用在工业上。
英语错句Other types of the electric motor also are widely use in industry.
问题诊断：语序问题
改正后的句子Other types of electric motor are also widely used in industry.
英语错句Our method is different from previous articles discussed the same problem.
问题诊断：方法不是与文章比，文章与讨论之间的逻辑关系的问题）
改正:Our method is different from those presented（described）in the papers available（published before）on（discussing）the same problem.
进一步改进：This paper begins with the discussion on the features of this signal, followed by the description of its generation.
例4
汉语原句 我们的方法与以前讨论同一问题的文章中所述的不同。
例31
汉语原句 电压是用伏特来度量的。（或：电压的度量单位是伏特。）
英语错句Voltage is measured with volt.
问题诊断：with用具体的工具，
改正后的句子Voltage is measured in volts.
例32
汉语原句 这两位工程师正忙于设计一种新型软件。
英语错句This two engineers are busy to design a type of new software.
问题诊断：比较对象要排除自身
改正后的句子In this laboratory, this instrument is more sensitive than any other one（或any one else）.
例26
汉语原句 这本书的序言写得很好。
英语错句The preface of this book was well written.
例14
汉语原句 已知常数K，就能算出C来。
英语错句Giving the constant K, C can be calculated.
问题诊断：Give的逻辑主语
改正后的句子Given（或knowing）the constant K, one（或we）can calculate C.（或~, it is possible to calculate C.）
问题诊断：be busy的搭配用法
改正后的句子These two engineers are busy with the design of〔或busy（in）designing〕a new type of software.
英语错句This running machine will stop of itself after one minute or two.
问题诊断：after不用在将来时中表时间
例18
原句：In this case , the input does not fall, the output does not fall, too.
例22
汉语原句x的所有值均不能满足这一方程。
英语错句All values of x can’t satisfy this equation.
问题诊断：全部否定与部分否定
改正后的句子No values of x（或None of the values of x）can satisfy this equation.
例21
汉语原句 现有的教科书没有提到这一点。
英语错句The now existed textbooks do not make mention of this point.
改正后的句子The existing textbooks（或The textbooks available）have made no mention of this point.
问题诊断：介词的搭配
改正后的句子The preface to this book is well written.
例27.
原句：Sending out radio waves, high -frequency oscillations must be generated.
改正后的句子：To send out radio waves, high -frequency oscillations must be generated.
例6
汉语原句 本文对提高打印速度和印字质量提供了一种计算机辅助设计手段。
英语错句This paper provided a kind of means of computer aid design for progressing the printing speed and the printing quality.
例16原句：Tin does not have a melting point as high as lead does.
改正后句子：Tin does not have as high a melting point as lead does.
例17
汉语原句 这台转动的机器将在一二分钟后自动停下来。
汉语原句 由于缺陷的存在，构件的疲劳寿命将大大降低。
英语错句Because of the existing of the defect, the fatigue life of the components will decrease very much.
问题诊断：能用名词时就不要用动名词
改正后的句子Because of（或Due to）the existence of the defect, the fatigue life of the components will be decreased（或shortened）greatly.
例30
原句：It is necessary to know if this material can strand a so large force or not.
改正后的句子：It is necessary to know whether this material can strand a so large force or not.
例5
汉语原句 只有通过对该系统性能的研究，我们才能了解它的优点。
英语错句Only through studied the performance of the system, its advantages can be understood.
改正后的句子Only through the study of the performance of the system can one（we）understand（appreciate）its advantages.
问题诊断：1.模糊语言kind of ,
2. progress不及物动词，其后不能接宾语
改正: This paper presents a CAD method for increasing the printing speed and improving the printing quality.
例1
汉语原句 这种新方法具有效率高、容易调整的优点。
英语错句This kind of new method have the advantage of high efficiency, easy adjustment.
改正后的句子This new method has the advantages of high efficiency and easy adjustment.
例9
汉语原句 这个方法需要精确的定位，这就使得它的实现具有一定的难度。
英语错句This method requires accurate location and this makes its realization have a little difficulty.
问题诊断：make sb. Do; ake sth. Done; make sb./sth. adj.
问题诊断：problem与provide搭配不当，could语气含糊
改正后的句子Finally, some problems that deserve to be noted in implementing this method and their solution are present正后的句子The conductivity of copper is higher than that of iron.
例25
汉语原句 在这个实验室中，这台仪器比其他的灵敏。
英语错句In this laboratory, this instrument is more sensitive than any one.
改写：In this case，the input does not fall, neither does the output.
例19
汉语原句 这个问题有待解决。
英语错句This problem waits to solve.
改正后的句子This problem remains to solve.
例23
汉语原句 这个电压几乎是测不出的。
英语错句This voltage almost can not be measured.
问题诊断：almost…not,部分否定
改正后的句子This voltage can hardly be measured.
例24
汉语原句 铜的导电率比铁高。
英语错句The conductivity of copper is higher than iron.
例13
汉语原句 并讨论了这一方法与扫描法相比的优点。
英语错句Compared with the scanning method, the advantages of this method has discussed also.
问题诊断：compared的逻辑主语不是the advantaged
改正后的句子The advantages of this method over the scanning method have also been discussed.
改正后的句子This method requires accurate location, thus making（或which makes）its realization somewhat difficult.
例11
汉语原句 最后提出了实现这种方法应注意的一些问题和解决方法。
英语错句At last, we provided some problems that could be noted in implementing this method and solving ways.
例15
汉语原句 这台新设计的仪器质量很好。
英语错句This new designed instrument is in good quality.
问题诊断：没有be in good quality的说法
改正后的句子This newly designed instrument is good in quality.或：This newly designed instrument is of good quality.
例2
汉语原句 本文首先讨论了这种信号的特点，然后讨论了它的产生。
需改进：This paper first discusses the features of this signal, and then its generation is described.
（主动被动混用，两句主语不一致）
改进：This paper first discusses the features of this signal, and then describes its generation.不过本句最好