雅思基础写作教学课件
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Problem + Reasons + Solution
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分数构成
Overall=40%×task1 + 60% × task2
That is to say… Task1: 8 Task2: 3 Overall=3.2+1.8=5
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The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
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The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. .
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Nuclear 1% Hydro 16% Natural Gas 24% Coal 47% Oil 12%
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The line chart illustrates the data about people at a London subway station from 6 am to 10pm.
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IELTS_WRITING(新东方课件)
3 结构组织
有一个明确的引言、主体 段落和结论，使整篇文章 结构清晰有力。
任务2：样本题目
国际旅游的利与弊
讨论国际旅游对个人和社会 带来的利益与影响，并提供 例子和证据。
社交媒体的影响
分析社交媒体在现代社会中 的影响力和影响，以及其对 个人和社会的积极和消极影 响。
城市交通方式
分析人们在城市中使用各种交通方式的情况，并预测未来的趋势。
资源利用
描述和比较不同国家或地区在资源利用上的差异和趋势。
任务1：技巧和策略
1 观察关键数据
在开始写作之前，仔细观察图表、图形或图像中的关键数据和趋势。
2 选择重点
选择最重要的数据和信息，并以逻辑清晰和有条理的方式进行描述和分析。
为什么雅思写作很重要？
雅思写作成绩是评估考生语言能力的重要指标之一。高分的写作能力不仅可 以帮助考生在雅思考试中获得好成绩，还可以为他们的学术和职业发展打下 坚实的基础。
任务1：概述
任务1主要要求考生根据提供的图表、图形或图像，描述和解释相关数据的变化、趋势和关系，以及提取出关 键信息并进行比较。
雅思写作（新东方课件）
本课程旨在帮助学在本课程中，我们将介绍雅思写作的重要性以及Task 1和Task 2的基本要素。
什么是雅思写作？
雅思写作是雅思考试中的一部分，用于评估考生的英语写作能力。它涉及到 从提纲、图表、图表和图像中提取信息，并进行描述、解释和比较。
任务1和任务2 的区别
1 结构
任务1通常需要描述和解释数据的变化和趋势，而任务2主要是发表观点和论述问题。
2 时间
任务1需要在较短的时间内完成，通常为20分钟左右，而任务2需要在较长的时间内完成， 通常为40分钟左右。
雅思写作步骤PPT课件
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• 题目5： More and more people travel by car today, instead of using public transport. Why has this happened? How does it affect individuals and society ?
• Step4：转化成英文。
Private car use can cause air pollution. It involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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• Step5：使用并列句、3大从句（名词性从句、 定语从句、状语从句）进行拓展。 Private car use is a major environmental issue around the world, because it can cause air pollution. It is a habit that involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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Task2 作文第2步 思考观点
• 雅思作文大致可分为两种题材： 非教育类和教育类
非教育类：经济（效率；收益和成本） 科技（进步；缺陷） 社会（价值和传统观念；环境；社会关系） 个人（生活方式；基本权利；健康快乐； 行为）
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教育类： 身体健康 学习能力 社会能力和实践经验（与人相处、调节情绪等） 工作能力（动手能力、价值观和道德观、 遵守法律等）
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• e.g. Today, children appear to spend most of their free time watching TV and playing computer games. The focus of this essay is on the causes of and solutions to this problem.
《基础雅思写作》课件
加强实际应用和实践
学生可以在实际生活和学习中多加运用英语写作 ，提高实际应用能力。
THANKS
感谢观看
结尾段
简明扼要地提出主题，引起读者兴趣 。
总结全文，回应开头，给出结论或建 议。
主体段
详细阐述观点，提供证据或例子支持 。
句
长句与短句
表达简洁，避免冗长复 杂句。
使用从句、并列句等结 构丰富句子层次。
用逗号或并列连词连接 两个或多个简单句。
根据需要交替使用，增 强文章节奏感。
语言丰富性
考生使用词汇和语法的多样性
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雅思写作技巧
写作流程
构思
在脑中形成文章的大致框架和 要点。
撰写
根据草拟的提纲，展开段落， 完成全文。
审题
仔细阅读题目，明确写作要求 和主题。
草拟
在纸上写出文章的提纲和主要 观点。
检查与修改
通读全文，检查语法、拼写错 误，调整句子结构和用词。
段落组织
开头段
《基础雅思写作》ppt课件
contents
目录
• 雅思写作简介 • 雅思写作技巧 • 雅思写作题型解析 • 雅思写作常见问题及解决方案 • 雅思写作练习与模拟题 • 总结与展望
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雅思写作简介
雅思写作考试目的
评估考生在学术英语 环境下的写作能力
为考生进入更高层次 的学习提供证明
检测考生是否具备在 英语国家攻读本科及 以上学位所需的写作 技能
雅思写作考试形式
考试时长：1小时 考试题型：图表说明、议论文、书信等
写作任务：考生需完成两篇作文，第一篇为图表说明，第二篇为议论文或书信
雅思小作文写作教学(全能版)ppt课件
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共有5种图形
1. The bar chart 柱状图 2. The line graph 折线图 3. The pie chart 扇形图/饼图 4. The table 表格 5. The flow chart 流程图 * The map 地图/地形图
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• Slightly more Nissan cars are sold in America than Hyundai/Kia. • Twice as many Honda vehicles are sold in the US as GM.
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流程型(procedure)图表
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In addition
Further more
Meanwhile
while
At the same time
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First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.
基础雅思写作.(课堂PPT)
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➢回应写作任务过程 中始终呈现一个清晰
晰的行文推进发 展贯穿全文
的观点
➢恰当地使用一
➢呈现、发展主要论 点并就其进行论证， 但有时出现过于一概
系列衔接手段， 尽管有时使用不 足或过多
及准确性
➢多数句子准确无误
➢对一使语定用体认不及识常搭见配词有汇，➢握少对较许语好错法，误及但标有点时符出号现掌
➢在选择用词、拼
1. 雅思写作Task 2 评分标准（7,6,5）
Band Task Response
Coherence and Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
➢addresses all
➢logically organises ➢uses a sufficient ➢uses a variety of
写及/或构词方面
而论的倾向及/或论 ➢每个段落均有 可能偶尔出现错
点缺乏重点的倾向 一个清晰的中心 误
主题
Band Task Response
Coherence and Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
➢addresses all parts ➢arranges
作任务，但某些部 点，总体来说，能清 词汇开展写作 与复杂句式
分的论证可能比其 他部分更为充分
晰地推进行文发展 任务 ➢有效地使用衔接手段，➢试图使用不
➢在语法及标点符号 方面有一些错误，但
➢提出了一个切题 但句内及/或句间的衔 常用词汇，但 这些错误很少影响交
的观点，尽管各种 接有时有误或过于机 有时使用不准 流
雅思写作公开课-写作ppt课件
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2. to what extent do you agree or disagree 3. do you think the advantage outweigh the
disadvantage
最理想的结构是： 开头段 +让步段 + 支持段（论点1） + 支持段（论点2） + 结尾段（表明你自己的观点）
6.雅思写作的误区
7.鸭友们通常会犯哪些语法错误，能有效避免吗？什么样的语 法错误是致命的？
8.小作文重要吗？容易写吗？应该怎么复习
9. 怎么安排大作文和小作文的写作顺序和时间
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考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文（including task 1 and task2），那就是说平均5分钟改一篇。
disadvantage
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1. discuss both views and give your own opinion
开头段（回应题目+表达自己的观点） + 支持观点1（n个论点） + 支持观点2（n个论点） + 结尾段（表明自己的观点）。
请注意，这个题型是不能用一面倒！
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认真阅读题目，划出关键字，紧紧围绕题目问题和所隐 含的内容去思考
2m到3m写作框架
大作文应该控制在35m写完，小作文应该在18m之内 剩下5m通读小作文和大作文各一遍，看有没有语法错
误
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目标分数为8分，特别是要考到4个8的你， 你不要泄气，终究会成为强者。
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雅思 写作课 课件
Lecture 7Objectives:1.get to know what an outline for an argumentation is .2.learn how to write an outline for an argumentation.3.learn to analyze an essay to figure out the outline.I. A sample outline to show the students what an outline is .A SAMPLE OUTLINEI.Introductory paragraph1.ABC English Language Academy should start acooperative day – care center.2.It would benefit both the community and the school.II. Argument 11.It would benefit the community:a.Mothers of young children cannot attend Englishclasses because they cannot afford to hirebabysitter.b.Many women have no chance to learn English andfeel uncomfortable living in the united states.c.Their children do not learn English until they go toschool.d.Mothers cannot help children with theirschoolwork because of the language barrier.III.Argument 21.It would benefit the school:a.People would feel that the school was really interestedin helping the community (public relations).b.It would help attract a better staff.c.It would increase efficiency because staff memberswould work harder if they weren’t worried about theirchildren.d.School enrollment would increase.IV. Counter argumentsTo the objection that it would be difficult for the school to organize.a student-staff organizing committee could be created.Several interested students and staff members have experience working in day-care center.The committee would take complete responsibility for obtaining licenses and other such tasks.to the objection that it would cost the school too much money because it would be a cooperative, students and staff would volunteer their time.Participating students and staff members could bring in used toys, books , and so on .A small enrollment fee could be used to cover the cost offurniture and other necessary items.There is a possibility that the government would help fund the center.IV.concluding paragraphAnother sample outline:Introductory paragraph:Thesis statement: Roosevelt was a great president because he brought the nation out of the Depression, introduced the Social Security system, and strengthened America’s position abroad. Body paragraph 1:He brought the nation out of the Depression.Body paragraph 2:He introduced the Social Security system.Body paragraph 3:He strengthened America’s position abr oad.Concluding paragraph:Roosevelt was a great president.II. read the following essay and figure out the outline for it.Question: Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think?As science and technology accelerates, television, as a powerful invention in the 20th century is becoming unbelievably popular in people’s life. People can be acquainted with the current affairs and appreciate the affluent programs right at home. As to my opinion on it, television will not whittle children’s creativity as exaggerated.To begin with, television is the most effective means to inform children of the latest news and scientific improvement all over the world. Television reveals the recent development of some researches, such as the new computing technology, clone technology, genetic breakthroughs and so on, which can inspire the imagination of children and motivate them to conduct relevant experiments, making new findings and breakthroughs in their study.Moreover, some programs like adventures and geography can enlarge children’s capacity of knowledge. With the emergence of information technology, the knowledge presented in textbooks cannot cater for children’s curiosit y any more. Children need to learn wider knowledge and know more about our world. Programs like adventures can cultivate children’s creativity and the ability to tackle difficulty; programs like geography can teach children knowledge about different countries in the world and initiate their aspiration to know about the nature; programs about science can inspire children’s interest in science and technology.Admittedly, the inappropriate programs on television somehow play negative role in the shape of children. The films containing violence, crimes and pornography contents tempt children to go astray.In a word, it is my strong belief that television will not impair children’s creativity as is asserted. Nevertheless, the government and the whole society should eliminate the unhealthy contents on TV and ensure the children with a favorable growing environment.III.write an outline for the following topicTopic: Should the government control the commercial advertisements on TV and other media? Regulate ban1.understand the question.2.brainstorm3.classify4.write an outline.sample answer:Faced with a flood of commercial advertisements, some people complain that advertisements exaggerate the usage or function of the products and tempt people to buy things they do not really need. So the government should take measures to control them. But I cannot agree with this point of view for many reasons.Advertisements are omnipresent and it has already manifested its important role in our life. An advertisement is informative so it provides us almost everything we want to know about a product. For example, if a customer wants to make a purchase, commercial advertisements help him to find out where the product is available and what is the special function of this product. Thus, advertisements give customers a chance to compare the products and get the best one. Therefore, it is no doubt that the lack of commercial advertisements will bring us a lot of inconvenience.What is more, commercial advertising is indispensable to our economic field. On one hand, advertising itself is a booming industry and it largely influences other relevant industries. For instance, the development of radio, newspaper and other media depends a lot on advertising. On the other hand, advertisements encourage the consumption and promote the economic growth. At the same time, advertising provides a lot of opportunities of employment.For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that advertisements can bring us numerous benefits. However, it must be stressed that the bans on the false and deceptive advertisements should be severely imposed by the government. But it is foolish to empty the baby out with the bath water.。
雅思写作语法-定语从句(基础版)精品PPT课件
are those that are only spoken by the elderly.
• 4Qs: 主干；先行词；引导词；在从句中成分
• 【练2/2】 怀疑电脑将会带来的好处很重要。（ 剑1,G,W）
• Q1: 主干
• It is important to doubt/suspect the benefits. • Q2：先行词 -------benefits • Q3: 引导词 ------that • Q4: 在从句中成分： --------宾语
• 定语从句
两大基本概念：
• Many companies employ p_e_o_p_l_e w__h_o has red hair.
• 先行词：??
• 被定语从句修饰的词叫先行词。
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一般由: 名词,代词,短语,句子 充当
• 引导词/关系词：??
• 引导定语从句的词叫引导词。
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引导词是区分主句和从句的重要标准。
• 4Qs:主干；先行词；引导词；在从句中成分
• 【练2/2】 1994到1995年期间出现了很大的增 长，这种情况在未来的几年里很可能还会持续下 去。（剑3，T2，W）
• Q1: 主干
• There emerged a great increase.
• Q2: 先行词 ----- 整句话 • Q3: 引导词 -----which • Q4: 在从句中作成分： 主语
• 2. If you’re unsure about things, each floor has an elected “floor senior” who is usually a student in their third or fourth year of study who’s been at Smith House for a while. (剑2,T2,L)
雅思基础写作第一讲解析【优质PPT】
❖ 2. Some people believe that those who are not talented in language learning should not be required to learn a foreign language. What is your opinion?
TA: Task Achievement(任务完成)--1
2021/10/10 TR: Task Response(任务回应)--2
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Task 2议论文评分标准：
Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论 点和论据)；
Communicative Quality(交流质量)；
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❖ Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas. Why is this the case and do you think it is a positive or a negative situation? 2009年3月5日
❖ Some people think music plays an important role in society. Others think it is it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion. 2009年3月7日
❖ More and more children are putting on more
weight than ever before. What are the causes of
《雅思写作》课件
如何备考雅思写作
熟悉考试形式和评分标准
了解考试的具体要求和评分标准，有助于考 生更有针对性地进行备考。
练习写作
多写多练，培养写作手感，提高写作速度和 准确性。
积累词汇和句型
扩大词汇量，掌握更多的高级词汇和句型， 提高表达的准确性和丰富性。
请教老师或专业人士
向老师或专业人士请教，获取有针对性的指 导和建议，帮助自己更好地备考。
培养批判性思维，提高文章深度
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对不同观点保持开放的态度， 不轻易接受或拒绝某种观点， 而是进行深入分析和思考。
学会提问和质疑，针对某种观 点提出合理的问题和质疑，进
一步推动思考和讨论。
掌握逻辑推理和辩证分析的方 法，能够从多个角度审视问题 ，提出全面、客观的观点。
通过阅读、讨论和写作等方式 不断提高自己的批判性思维能 力，使文章更具深度和说服力
例如，使用“significant”代替“important”，使用“varied”代替
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避免重复使用同一词汇
通过同义词、近义词或上义词进行替换，增加文章词汇的丰富性。
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注意词汇的准确性和正式程度
确保所选词汇符合雅思写作的要求，避免过于口语化或过于生僻的词汇
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复杂句式构造和变换技巧
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模拟试题与范文欣赏
模拟试题示例及解析
模拟试题一
讨论现代科技对人们社交方式的影响。
模拟试题二
分析国际旅游业的利与弊。
解析
该题目要求考生就现代科技对社交方式的影响进行讨论。 可以从社交媒体的普及、在线交流的便捷性、虚拟社交的 利弊等方面展开讨论。
解析
雅思写作小作文上课课件
The number of full-time teachers was on the increase form 2008 to 2010.
雅思写作小作文上课课件
开始动笔写图表作文：变化趋势常用结构
2) 表示下降
动词+副词结构 e.g. 当地学校的失学人数在去年略有下降。 The number of drop-outs in the local
开始动笔写图表作文：基本内容
文章内容
与任务2写作一样，图表写作也要紧紧围绕任 务去完成。也要依据题目提供的已知信息 进行写作。与任务2不同的是图表作文的信 息载体不是文字而是图表，考生将图表承 载的信息用文字表达出来。在转化的过程 中很容易遗漏信息。所以写完后的审查就 显得更加重要。
雅思写作小作文上课课件
that ...
The figures /statistics show that
more other verbs: describe, illustrate, display, exhibit,
indicate, reflect, represent, reveal, unfold, summarize etc.
IELTS WRITING
雅思写作小作文上课课件
开始动笔写图表作文：基本情况
任务1：图表写作 要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的短文。
以考核图表为主。主要有: 曲线图 line chart, graph 柱状图 bar chart 饼状图 pie chart 表格等 table 偶尔也会有流程图flow chart、地图geography和示 意图diagram/figure
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It is sometimes argued that high school students should be made to do some work in their local communities. In my opinion, it would be wrong to force teenagers to do any kind of unsalaried work.
Opinion
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Plan: Topic-community service for all teenagers
Opinion
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Plan: Topic-community service for all teenagers
Discussion
Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
2） Break the task into parts
250 words→4 paragraphs→about 13 sentences Introduction→2 sentences Two main paragraphs→5 sentences each Conclusion→1 sentence
1） Understand the task
◎Minimum 250 words ◎40 minutes ◎Universal topics ◎4 question types
1） Understand the task
Four scoring criteria ◎Task response ◎Coherence and cohesion ◎Vocabulary ◎Grammar
Answer- several reasons, a variety of measures (governments, communities)
It is true that punishments do not always deter criminals from committing more crimes. There are various reasons why offenders repeatedly break the law, but governments could certainly take steps to address this issue.
Opinion
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Plan: Topic-community service for all teenagers
Plan: Topic-study in groups or alone Answer-sometimes better alone, usually better In a group
People have different views about the effectiveness of group study as opposed to studying alone. While there are some benefits to studying independently, I believe that group work is usually more productive.
Answer-3 choices: agree, disagree, or balanced opinion (when possible) It is sometimes argued that high school students should be made to do some work in their local communities. While I disagree with the idea of making such programmes compulsory, I do believe that voluntary community service could benefit young people.
2） Break the task into parts
Timing (40 minutes) Planning: 10 minutes Introduction: 5 minutes Main body: 20 minutes Conclusion: 5 minutes
Introductions
Problem and solution
Many criminals reoffend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Plan: Topic-criminals reoffend2 Rachel
Contents The tasks Introductions Main body paragraph Conclusions
The Tasks
1.The tasks
1） Understand the task 2） Break the task into parts 3） Methods, techniques 4）Lots of practice 5） Feedback, measure progress
Method: 2 sentences; ---introduce the topic ---give a general answer
Four types of question: 1. Discussion 2. Opinion 3. Problem and solution 4. Two-part question
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Two-part question
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Plan: Topic-job satisfaction Answer-several factors, unrealistic/ impossible Work plays a central role in our lives, and we would all like to feel fulfilled professionally. While a variety of factors may lead to job satisfaction, it would be unrealistic to expect everyone to be happy at work.
Answer-3 choices: agree, disagree, or balanced opinion (when possible)
It is sometimes argued that high school students should be made to do some work in their local communities. I completely agree that this kind of scheme would be a good idea.