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Although this practice does bring about some benefits in terms of the development, the drawbacks it exerts on the educational level, the employment of the college leavers and the society are more obvious.

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Admittedly, accepting more students offers some advantages, because the more educated people there are, the faster the development of a nation’s economy will be. It is especially the case in many developed countries, such as Japan and Germany.

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However, reaching the above-mentioned conclusion does not mean the same as assuming that we should turn a blind eye to its drawbacks. Indeed, with more students being accepted, a nation’s educational quality will be negatively affected for there will be the insufficiency in teachers and teaching facilities. It has already happened in many developing countries.

In addition, it is this practice that results in the high unemployment of the college graduates. A recent survey conducted in china convincingly shows that about 40 percent college graduates remain unemployed. Nobody ,I am sure, would like to see this. What is the most serious lies in the fact that some universities accept more students just for the sake of money. Not only is it detrimental to the individuals but is disastrous to the well-being of the society as a whole.

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In conclusion, despite the importance of enrolling an increasing number of the students, the disadvantages are absolutely more apparent. How to reverse the trend should be an urgent task for the government and the people concerned

In conclusion, despite the importance of practical subjects, traditional ones such as history and geography are still irreplaceable because of their intrinsic value. There are high hopes that government and the people concerned should exercise their wisdom to alleviate the pressure of the joblessness of the college graduates.

Considering the seriousness of the negative effects, I think certain ,measures should be taken. The most effective of it is an environment should be created where young people can feel less stressful. In a word, hard work should be highly, but not excessively valued.

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Nowadays ,there was indeed a popular wisdom that college teachers should focus on practical subjects such as computer science and business instead of some traditional ones like history and geography. This view, however, sounds more questionable.

Although this tendency brings about some benefits, the drawbacks in terms of student’s physical and psychological development are more obvious.

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Admittedly, practica l subjects play a vital role in today’s world, because we are living in the so-called technology and commerce-based society ,which means those who are excellent in practical studies are more likely to have an edge in job-hunting. For example, if a person has a good command of computer skills, it is relatively easy for him to find a job.

Some people might argue on the grounds that hard work can benefit people, especially young people, by molding them into the strong-willed. It is especially valuable in such times when more and more young people are spoiled.