2015年春季短文改错

2015年春季短文改错练习（一）I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.（二）My cousin Li Ming is a Senior 3 student, who devoted himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class. In the evening, he continued to study at home until deeply into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn't work effectively. In Sunday morning, he was about to do his lessons while his father came up and advised him to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Li Ming enjoyed himself, competing and chatting with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic but active in class. He spent a whole day in the country－side, and Li Ming said what he had done was wo rth.（三）Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate playing table tennis.Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our techniques. Then I kept practicing while I became confidently enough to challenge the good players. At the end in the term I became one of the best players of my class.I really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb—practice makes perfect.（四）My uncle was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, when I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My uncle also influenced me through nature walks. He often takes me for a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs and snake, and find fireflies in the sky. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my uncle and her influence on my life, I feel very lucky. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.（五）Today I'd like to tell you something that I experience in the City Park. In the afternoon of last Sunday, my friend and I were taking a walk along a river in the City Park, when suddenly we heard a boy call for help in the river. We jumped into the river or pulled the boy out. Then we made him to breathe using the mouth－to－mouth way.Before the boy came to himself, we sent her to hospital at once and telephoned his parents.The boy was saved. His parents were very thankful us and the doctors thought high of our first aid. We realized that knowing first aid is very help and important because it can help you to save lives.（六）A woman was at a cinema and she was enjoying the movie very much. But there was a man sit beside her in a next seat. He was looking for something. The woman was angry and said the man, “What are you doing, sir? What are you looking at for? Could you please keep quiet？” “I was looking for a piece of chocolate.” the man said, “I dropped them on the floor.” “A piece of chocolate？” the woman said angry. “It is dirty now. Taking this and be quiet.” She gave the man a big piece of chocolate. “And，” the man said, “my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on the floor.”（七）One morning, though the clock rang aloud, Mary didn't woke up until eight. She hurried got dressed, snatched over her schoolbag, rushed towards her school. She ran as fast as he could, so that she might miss the first lesson. But to her disappointing, she found the school was quiet. After she entered into the schoolyard, it seemed that there was nobody in the school besides the guard. Mary was wondering what had happened while she saw the word on the bulletin board. It was Sunday.（八）Dear Jeremy and Alice，Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbours, we're hoping to s ettle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We're called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she b arks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely，Jack and Rose（九）Dear Alice，I was delighted to receive your letter. Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me. I received it this morning. There is no doubt which it is of great help to me. I'm deep grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English. I've made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class. Next month I'll take trip to Australia, which is organizing by my school. I hope I can practise my spoken English there as many as possible. By the way, I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter, but I'll send you more if I got any. I do hope you will have a good holiday.Yours，Li Hua（十）Dear Brad，I'm very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don't think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.Yours，（十一）。