2015年春季短文改错

2015年春季短文改错练习

（一）

I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.

（二）

My cousin Li Ming is a Senior 3 student, who devoted himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class. In the evening, he continued to study at home until deeply into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn't work effectively. In Sunday morning, he was about to do his lessons while his father came up and advised him to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Li Ming enjoyed himself, competing and chatting with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic but active in class. He spent a whole day in the country－side, and Li Ming said what he had done was wo rth.

（三）Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.

The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate playing table tennis.

Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our techniques. Then I kept practicing while I became confidently enough to challenge the good players. At the end in the term I became one of the best players of my class.

I really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb—practice makes perfect.

（四）My uncle was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, when I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My uncle also influenced me through nature walks. He often takes me for a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs and snake, and find fireflies in the sky. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my uncle and her influence on my life, I feel very lucky. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.