浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式
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浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练10
But psychologists found it interesting that even when people are aware of these little "white lies", they still continue to push fake buttons because as long as the doors eventually close, it is considered to be worth the effort.
Fake Buttons
假按钮
(概写原文)Whenever we see a button, we desire to press it because we know that something will happen. This is true in most cases, for example on a doorbell and on the "on/off"' button on the TV. But some buttons are actually fake, like the "close" button on an elevator in the US-the doors will not close any faster no matter how hard you press.
It started in the 1990s when the Americans with Disabilities Act was passed in the US, making sure that all elevators stayed open long enough so that people with disabilities could enter. Only US firefighters and repair workers can use the buttons to speed up the door-closing process if they have a code(密码)or special keys.
Fake Buttons
假按钮
(概写原文)Whenever we see a button, we desire to press it because we know that something will happen. This is true in most cases, for example on a doorbell and on the "on/off"' button on the TV. But some buttons are actually fake, like the "close" button on an elevator in the US-the doors will not close any faster no matter how hard you press.
It started in the 1990s when the Americans with Disabilities Act was passed in the US, making sure that all elevators stayed open long enough so that people with disabilities could enter. Only US firefighters and repair workers can use the buttons to speed up the door-closing process if they have a code(密码)or special keys.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练5
Step 2：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动 词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部句内逻辑关系，然后转述 或合成句子。
Step 4：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、 句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等
Step 5：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
句法训练(中译英)
1. 如今，屋顶花园和绿色墙壁已被世界各地用于城市绿化。 Nowadays, rooftop gardens and green walls have been used worldwide to fill cities with greenery. 2. 一个优点是可以美化城市环境和装饰办公楼。 One advantage is that they can beautify the city environment and decorate office buildings.
4. 此外，它们对学校有教育上的价值，因为孩子们很高兴探索周围的 绿色世界。 Additionally, they are of educational value to schools because kids are excited to explore the green world around them.
3. 另一个优点是它们甚至可以通过为我们提供荫蔽来帮助降低能 源成本。 Another is that they can even help cut energy costs by providing shade for us.
In New York City, public schools plant rooftop gardens that can reduce heating and cooling costs. In addition to saving the school money, teachers and parents love the gardens because of their educational value —it's a fun and healthy way for their kids to investigate the world around them. "For the children, it's exciting when you grow something edible (可食用的)," said Lauren Fontana, principal of a New York public school.
Step 4：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、 句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等
Step 5：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
句法训练(中译英)
1. 如今，屋顶花园和绿色墙壁已被世界各地用于城市绿化。 Nowadays, rooftop gardens and green walls have been used worldwide to fill cities with greenery. 2. 一个优点是可以美化城市环境和装饰办公楼。 One advantage is that they can beautify the city environment and decorate office buildings.
4. 此外，它们对学校有教育上的价值，因为孩子们很高兴探索周围的 绿色世界。 Additionally, they are of educational value to schools because kids are excited to explore the green world around them.
3. 另一个优点是它们甚至可以通过为我们提供荫蔽来帮助降低能 源成本。 Another is that they can even help cut energy costs by providing shade for us.
In New York City, public schools plant rooftop gardens that can reduce heating and cooling costs. In addition to saving the school money, teachers and parents love the gardens because of their educational value —it's a fun and healthy way for their kids to investigate the world around them. "For the children, it's exciting when you grow something edible (可食用的)," said Lauren Fontana, principal of a New York public school.
浙江新高考英语写作---概要写作
浙江新高考英语写作
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写作基本步骤：
一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题 第二节：概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public batng had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when th e rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a n obleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, whic h might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encour ages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
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写作基本步骤：
一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题 第二节：概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public batng had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when th e rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a n obleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, whic h might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encour ages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
新高考英语概要写作示例与写作训练 (4)
概要写作示例与写作训练4【写作示例】【原文呈现】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Trina Lucido creates coloring books and inspirations are all around her.“One day I saw a beautiful leaf and bloom.I did a whole page with leaves.So,some came from sketchbooks.Some were just one-word inspiration,and some I just saw something on the ground and that was my inspiration that day.”Her latest just called Color,Write and Create,a coloring journal.It contains40pages of hand-sketched drawings and lines to write on.“The idea behind this book is a big idea which to encourage people to be creative.Something else that I heard from people:They are buying these for people who are either ill or going through a rough time.And they feel that this is something that kind of helps them,almost therapeutic(治疗的).”Adults coloring books is a big business.In December,five of the top10best-selling books in the US were coloring books.Color,Write and Create is the latest addition to Lucido’s product line that started twenty years ago with handmade greeting cards.“It’s a diary and a sketchbook only once called art journal.”Over the years,she’s created a variety of collectables made of paper, fabric and antique materials.“Everything you do is sort of vantage flare to it.”Business and marketing expert Hillary Tattersall says adults coloring books are an important way for Lucido to grow her online business,Jubilee Flea,and hopefully move toward mass productions.So many of her products that I personally have sold and represented with Trina over the years have been one of kind.To have a commercial success,you need hundreds and hundreds and hopefully thousands and thousands and tens of thousands.”Lucido’s adults coloring books are also available in local stores where grown-ups are more than happy to sit down and go to work.“It’s very relaxing.Any stress just sort of falls away.It frees your mind.I love her little birds.There is just something about them.They make me smile.So I’m saving the bird pictures to the very end I think.”For now,there is strong demand for adult coloring books and that keeps Lucido happy and busy.【思维路径】[核心内容]本文是一篇记叙文，全文共分四段。
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So, don’t worry; be happy. Laugh a little and live longer.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，明确各段落之间的逻辑关 系，提取全文中心词(尤其是名词与动词)。
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与 名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点与次要点。
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
These laughter clubs are very popular in hospitals and nursing homes nowadays in India, where participants can forget about their aches and pains while laughing. It seems that laughing may be just as important as eating right and exercising.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
According to a study at the University of Marland Medical Center in Baltimore, researchers found that people who had a good sense of humor and laughed a lot, not only at home but also at work, had fewer heart problems than people who laughed less, and laughing people tend to live a longer life than the ones who are not.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，明确各段落之间的逻辑关 系，提取全文中心词(尤其是名词与动词)。
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与 名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点与次要点。
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
These laughter clubs are very popular in hospitals and nursing homes nowadays in India, where participants can forget about their aches and pains while laughing. It seems that laughing may be just as important as eating right and exercising.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
According to a study at the University of Marland Medical Center in Baltimore, researchers found that people who had a good sense of humor and laughed a lot, not only at home but also at work, had fewer heart problems than people who laughed less, and laughing people tend to live a longer life than the ones who are not.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练9
School reform efforts during the nineteenth century, which resulted in age-segregated schools and grades, have reduced the amount of time adolescents spend with younger children.
Research supports the view that adolescents spend a great deal of time with their peers. Reed Larson and his colleagues examined adolescents' daily activities and found that they spend more time talking to their friends than engaging in any other activity. In a typical week, high school students will spend twice as much time with their peers as with adults. This gradual withdrawal from adults begins in early adolescence. In sixth grade, adults (excluding parents) account for only 25 percent of adolescent social networks. Another important characteristic of adolescent peer culture is its increasingly autonomous (自治的) function. While childhood peer groups are conducted under the close supervision of parents, adolescent peer groups typically make an effort to escape adult supervision and usually succeed in doing so.
Research supports the view that adolescents spend a great deal of time with their peers. Reed Larson and his colleagues examined adolescents' daily activities and found that they spend more time talking to their friends than engaging in any other activity. In a typical week, high school students will spend twice as much time with their peers as with adults. This gradual withdrawal from adults begins in early adolescence. In sixth grade, adults (excluding parents) account for only 25 percent of adolescent social networks. Another important characteristic of adolescent peer culture is its increasingly autonomous (自治的) function. While childhood peer groups are conducted under the close supervision of parents, adolescent peer groups typically make an effort to escape adult supervision and usually succeed in doing so.
浙江新高考作文概要写作summarywriting
Argumentation Exposition Narration
Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.
2. Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were
beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff. Chen’s complaint
immediately spread on China’s social media.
received 3. The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government
departments would also be investigated and punished.
tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.
Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.
Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.
2. Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were
beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff. Chen’s complaint
immediately spread on China’s social media.
received 3. The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government
departments would also be investigated and punished.
tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.
Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.
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3. 因此，你最好调整呼吸，放松自己，以免分心。 Therefore, you'd better adjust your breath and relax yourself to avoid distraction.
Take more control of what you are doing. "Setting the phone alarm to go off(响起来) every hour is my way of creating awareness of my behavior," Mr. Bregman says. "You have to inform yourself that you've lost focus in order to do something about it." Starting the day with a to-do list is important, such as when to eat, when to go to the gym or take a walk. But if it's overly ambitious(雄心勃勃的) you will put yourself in a state of anxiety, which makes it hard for the brain to concentrate. "Choosing three or four things as your priority(优先事项) for the day allows your brain to settle down and focus," he says.
4. 此外，适当地管理你的时间，优先考虑你需要做的事情，也会帮助 你保持专注。 In addition, managing your time properly and giving priority to things you need to do will also help you keep focused.
Take more control of what you are doing. "Setting the phone alarm to go off(响起来) every hour is my way of creating awareness of my behavior," Mr. Bregman says. "You have to inform yourself that you've lost focus in order to do something about it." Starting the day with a to-do list is important, such as when to eat, when to go to the gym or take a walk. But if it's overly ambitious(雄心勃勃的) you will put yourself in a state of anxiety, which makes it hard for the brain to concentrate. "Choosing three or four things as your priority(优先事项) for the day allows your brain to settle down and focus," he says.
4. 此外，适当地管理你的时间，优先考虑你需要做的事情，也会帮助 你保持专注。 In addition, managing your time properly and giving priority to things you need to do will also help you keep focused.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练12
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
In fact, being a high schooler nowadays is more stressful than ever. Students are burdened with extra hours of homework. They stay up every night till 1:00 a.m. finishing homework on their third Red Bull. Anxiety is increasing at a faster rate than depression (抑郁) as the leading mentalhealth issue affecting teenagers, a recent study in the Journal of Developmental and Behavioral Pediatrics found.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
For many high school students, giving an in-class presentation is an approach to their growth. Teachers will call up students, one by one, to present their work in front of the class, and, though it is often tense, many people say it has helped turn them into more confident public speakers. Some educators also credit it with building leadership skills and increasing students' confidence and understanding of materials.
In fact, being a high schooler nowadays is more stressful than ever. Students are burdened with extra hours of homework. They stay up every night till 1:00 a.m. finishing homework on their third Red Bull. Anxiety is increasing at a faster rate than depression (抑郁) as the leading mentalhealth issue affecting teenagers, a recent study in the Journal of Developmental and Behavioral Pediatrics found.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
For many high school students, giving an in-class presentation is an approach to their growth. Teachers will call up students, one by one, to present their work in front of the class, and, though it is often tense, many people say it has helped turn them into more confident public speakers. Some educators also credit it with building leadership skills and increasing students' confidence and understanding of materials.
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③此外，明白最糟糕的事情有助于把握机会。 Additionally, knowing what is the worst helps seize opportunities.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Finally, take small steps toward conquering your fears. If you fear public speaking, start by giving a small talk to a few people. If your talk doesn't go well, try again. Each small success will increase your confidence and persistence is one of the keys to success.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然 后转述或合成句子。
第四步：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的 替换、句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等。
第五步：用自信衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
A psychologist once said, "If you've conquered every one of your fears, congratulations-you're dead." This humorous quote points to a simple truth-no one can escape fear completely.
④最后，从小事做起，你也可以起到很大的作用。 Lastly, by doing small things, you can also make a considerable difference.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Finally, take small steps toward conquering your fears. If you fear public speaking, start by giving a small talk to a few people. If your talk doesn't go well, try again. Each small success will increase your confidence and persistence is one of the keys to success.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然 后转述或合成句子。
第四步：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的 替换、句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等。
第五步：用自信衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
A psychologist once said, "If you've conquered every one of your fears, congratulations-you're dead." This humorous quote points to a simple truth-no one can escape fear completely.
④最后，从小事做起，你也可以起到很大的作用。 Lastly, by doing small things, you can also make a considerable difference.
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The Lazy Economy
懒人经济
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Nowadays, an increasing number of young Chinese spend money because they are "lazy". According to a report issued in December by China's ecommerce platform Taobao on China's" lazy economy", Chinese people spent 16 billion yuan on products and services online in 2018.The post-1995 generation was the "laziest" as its consumption increased by 82 percent, compared with that in 2017.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Young people are willing to spend money on such products because they want to enjoy hard-earned leisure time after a busy and stressful day at work or school, reported Global Times. Because they need to focus on their studies or jobs, these so-called lazy people tend to use their leisure time more efficiently. For example, Wei Duo, a 21-year-old college student, is a frequent user of take-out food delivery services. "I once had a birthday cake delivered to my friend who lives far from my home. It cost me 50 yuan but it saved me almost half a day that would have been needed to deliver it myself. My friend was also happy because she got to eat the cake instantly," Wei told the Global Times.
懒人经济
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Nowadays, an increasing number of young Chinese spend money because they are "lazy". According to a report issued in December by China's ecommerce platform Taobao on China's" lazy economy", Chinese people spent 16 billion yuan on products and services online in 2018.The post-1995 generation was the "laziest" as its consumption increased by 82 percent, compared with that in 2017.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Young people are willing to spend money on such products because they want to enjoy hard-earned leisure time after a busy and stressful day at work or school, reported Global Times. Because they need to focus on their studies or jobs, these so-called lazy people tend to use their leisure time more efficiently. For example, Wei Duo, a 21-year-old college student, is a frequent user of take-out food delivery services. "I once had a birthday cake delivered to my friend who lives far from my home. It cost me 50 yuan but it saved me almost half a day that would have been needed to deliver it myself. My friend was also happy because she got to eat the cake instantly," Wei told the Global Times.
高中英语 浙江高考概要写作技巧指导-改写(二)
Though Jack failed to pass theto.
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2. 词性转换法
Patience is very important. Patience is of great importance. The pollution makes people very anxious about their living environment. People show great _a_n_x_ie_t_y_ about their living environment.
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7. 细节省略法
Recordings of angry bees are enough to send big, tough African elephants running away!
Recordings of angry bees can send African elephants running away!
概要写作技巧指导
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What is a summary?
A summary is a shortened passage which keeps the important information of the original in your own words but without your opinion.
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8. 句意理解法
Because he played carelessly we lost the game. _B_u_t__fo_r__h_is__ca_r_e_l_e_ss_n_e_s_s, we wouldn’t have lost the match. Shopping on the internet is becoming increasingly popular. More and more people prefer Internet shopping.
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Step 3：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转述 或合成句子。
Step 4：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、 句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等
Step 5：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
If you're anything like us, it seems that your stomach starts to grumble(隆隆响)as soon as McDonald's golden arches come into view. The reason behind that isn't the mouthwatering taste of their delicious fries-this is how they get them to taste so good by the way-it's actually psychological, and it has to do with the colors of their logo.
So, next time you pass a McDonald's, don't be surprised if you find it really hard to resist going in and getting a burger and coke.
1. 从心理上来看，人们禁不住走进麦当劳的原因与麦当劳的徽标颜 色有关。 Why people can't help going into a McDonald's is psychologically related to the colors of the logo.
The colors red and yellow were chosen for a specific reason-and no, it wasn't because they looked nice with Ronald McDonald's clownlike face. It actually has to do with science. The color red is stimulating and is associated with being active. It also increases heart rate, which helps to jumpstart your appetite. The color yellow is associated with happiness and is the most visible color in daylight, so that's why a McDonald's sign is so easy to spot on a crowded road.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式
_a_n_d__c_o_n_s_t_ru__ct_i_n_g_r_o_a_d_s_ constructing roads, can partly
lead to water shortage.
7、..., which... 非限制性定语从句或定语从句 (整合句 子，体现句式多样)
因此，北京发起了一项规范自行车停放的运动，这有望为 其它城市树立榜样。 Therefore, Beijing has launched a campaign to regulate
3、doing/done作名词的后置定语 (整合句子，减少谓语动 词的使用)
英语被称为一Biblioteka 国际性语言在世界上广泛使用。English, ____K_n_o_w__n__ (know) as an international
language, is widely used in the world.
bike-parking, __w__h_ic_h_____ will hopefully set a good
example to other cities.
8、what引导的名词性从句 …的东西、事、物 (整合句子， 体现句式多样)
然而，人们常常忽视的是素食也会影响环境。
However, __W__h_a_t_p_e_o__p_le__te_n_d__t_o_i_g_n_o_r_e__ is that
12、形容词或介词短语作后置定语 (整合句子，减少谓语 动词的使用）
那些具有高情商的人能够积极地面对生活中的失败，这些 失败对每个人来说，都是不可避免的
___T_h_o_s_e_w__it_h__high EQ can face failures positively in life,
lead to water shortage.
7、..., which... 非限制性定语从句或定语从句 (整合句 子，体现句式多样)
因此，北京发起了一项规范自行车停放的运动，这有望为 其它城市树立榜样。 Therefore, Beijing has launched a campaign to regulate
3、doing/done作名词的后置定语 (整合句子，减少谓语动 词的使用)
英语被称为一Biblioteka 国际性语言在世界上广泛使用。English, ____K_n_o_w__n__ (know) as an international
language, is widely used in the world.
bike-parking, __w__h_ic_h_____ will hopefully set a good
example to other cities.
8、what引导的名词性从句 …的东西、事、物 (整合句子， 体现句式多样)
然而，人们常常忽视的是素食也会影响环境。
However, __W__h_a_t_p_e_o__p_le__te_n_d__t_o_i_g_n_o_r_e__ is that
12、形容词或介词短语作后置定语 (整合句子，减少谓语 动词的使用）
那些具有高情商的人能够积极地面对生活中的失败，这些 失败对每个人来说，都是不可避免的
___T_h_o_s_e_w__it_h__high EQ can face failures positively in life,
2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(十六)写作指导(含范文)
2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习（十六）写作指导一、试题分析阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
(主题句与关键词已在原文中标出)Look inside any family home in the evening, and you might see a typical enough scene: Mom and Dad, each on their own laptop or tablet, streaming movies, catching up on work or maybe answering emails on their smart phones.Meanwhile, one child is chatting online with one school friend while texting another. The other is playing a video game with a friend on the other side of the city at the same time. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology.According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships. It appears to be the case that many people would much rather spend time with their electronic gadgets（电子产品）than with one another. Young people say it isdifficult to get their parents' attention and they have to compete with smart phones, tablets and other technology.However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships. Just over half of the 2,253 people surveyed agreed that technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members and 47 percent said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their own interests. Family members who might otherwise have sat in separate rooms can now be in the same one while still occupying a different mental space.Look back at our typical family scene above. Is it any different from four people reading their own books? Or is it driving families apart? Where technology will lead us remains to be seen. Yet there is no need to worry. As a matter of fact, how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.二、下水体会把写作比作游泳，要教会别人游泳，教者自己必须会游泳；教者会游泳，也不能只站在岸上指挥，要教运动员游泳，教练必先下水示范，"下水作文"也由此引申过来。
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Step 3：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转述 或合成句子。
Step 4：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、 句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等
Step 5：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
Almost all Americans are involved with sports in some way. They may play baseball or volleyball or go swimming or skiing. They may watch football or basketball at high school or college. Sports may seem like an innocent pleasure, but it is important to look under the surface. In reality, sports have reached a point where they play too large arole in daily life. They take up too much media time, play too large a role in the raising of children, and give too much power and prestige(声望)to athletes．
Sports Craziness
体育热
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Step 1：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻 辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。
Americans are crazy sports in several aspects.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练3
Advertising
广告
Step 1：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻 辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。
Advertising plays a major role in the competitive
business world.
Step 2：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动 词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点。
1. 广告对许多行业至关重要，其目的是赢得更多的客户。 Advertising is vital to many industries and its purpose is to gain more customers.
Advertising encourages people to buy things they don't want through misleading ideas. Advertising is proven to be a successful tool to stress the features of their product to the public even though it's regarded undesirable such as cigarettes, drugs, alcohols and so on. For example, Dunhill, a cigarette company which sponsors many football teams, seems to be promoting cigarettes to the public. Without the sponsorship(资助), the company will be less known to the public, resulting in fewer sales of cigare理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转 述或合成句子。
广告
Step 1：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻 辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。
Advertising plays a major role in the competitive
business world.
Step 2：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动 词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点。
1. 广告对许多行业至关重要，其目的是赢得更多的客户。 Advertising is vital to many industries and its purpose is to gain more customers.
Advertising encourages people to buy things they don't want through misleading ideas. Advertising is proven to be a successful tool to stress the features of their product to the public even though it's regarded undesirable such as cigarettes, drugs, alcohols and so on. For example, Dunhill, a cigarette company which sponsors many football teams, seems to be promoting cigarettes to the public. Without the sponsorship(资助), the company will be less known to the public, resulting in fewer sales of cigare理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转 述或合成句子。
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练19
One of the presenters even promised to "work tirelessly" to keep people
informed. Some machine learning experts said the system showed off China's
latest progress in voice recognition, text-to-speech technology and data analysis.
The news readers, supported by machine learning technology, are based on two real-life Chinese newsmen. One is able to present newscasts in English; the other, in Mandarin Chinese. Report said machine learning was used to examine video images and sounds of the two newsmen. Similar technology has been used to create video products known as "deepfake videos." A deepfake is a video that looks real, but was electronically changed. Such videos can make people appear to say things they never said.
AI news presenters
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概写高频替换词与短语
用替换词与短语对例句不断进行替换与转述，具体要求：
1.记住并掌握替换词及短语的词义与用法； 2.理解句意，用替换词对例句进行替换或改写； 3.只看例句中文，再做中译英练习，巩固所学词汇与短语；
4.背诵并默写例句，每次10句左右； 5.在此基础上做相关的摘记，不断补充你想要的替换词。
1. Nowadays, online shopping has become increasingly popular as.... 2. At present, shopping online has grown/gained in popularity .... 3. At present, online shopping has won favor with people... 4. Currently, with the increasing popularity of online shopping, we can purchase cheaper products. 5. Nowadays, online shopping has become a trend as we can buy cheaper products. 6. Nowadays, shopping online is increasingly popular with people in China...
受到...青睐 find/win/gain favor(with sb)
疯狂传播；十分流行 go viral
如今，网购越来越流行，因为我们能买到比较便宜的产品。 Nowadays, shopping online has gained increasing popularity as we can get cheaper products.
现代语言教学理论认为，学习语言的首要条件是保证足够的 可理解的语言信息输入。
1.…受到…的欢迎
be/become popular with sb
…开始流行起来，越来越流行 …gain/grow in popularity
…受到欢迎 gain/enjoy
The End
According to present language teaching theory, the most important thing of learning a foreign language is to make sure to input enough understandable language information.
用替换词与短语对例句不断进行替换与转述，具体要求：
1.记住并掌握替换词及短语的词义与用法； 2.理解句意，用替换词对例句进行替换或改写； 3.只看例句中文，再做中译英练习，巩固所学词汇与短语；
4.背诵并默写例句，每次10句左右； 5.在此基础上做相关的摘记，不断补充你想要的替换词。
1. Nowadays, online shopping has become increasingly popular as.... 2. At present, shopping online has grown/gained in popularity .... 3. At present, online shopping has won favor with people... 4. Currently, with the increasing popularity of online shopping, we can purchase cheaper products. 5. Nowadays, online shopping has become a trend as we can buy cheaper products. 6. Nowadays, shopping online is increasingly popular with people in China...
受到...青睐 find/win/gain favor(with sb)
疯狂传播；十分流行 go viral
如今，网购越来越流行，因为我们能买到比较便宜的产品。 Nowadays, shopping online has gained increasing popularity as we can get cheaper products.
现代语言教学理论认为，学习语言的首要条件是保证足够的 可理解的语言信息输入。
1.…受到…的欢迎
be/become popular with sb
…开始流行起来，越来越流行 …gain/grow in popularity
…受到欢迎 gain/enjoy
The End
According to present language teaching theory, the most important thing of learning a foreign language is to make sure to input enough understandable language information.