师生关系提纲作文

某英文报正在就建立良好的师生关系进行讨论。你作为一名中学生，请参与讨论。请你围绕“A good relationship benefits us all” 这个话题，根据以下要点，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文。

你的文章必须包括下列要点：

1. 建立良好的师生关系的必要性；

2. 你认为良好的师生关系应该怎样的；

3. 如何才能建立这种关系。

注意: 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

A good relationship benefits us all

As a middle school student，I think it necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life．We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we benefit and learn a great deal.

In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion，this relationship should be one filled with love，care，understanding, and respect, so we can exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become our friends while we students ought to trust teachers and express our feelings frankly. Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students, and live a happy and harmonious life.

本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。

1.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次。判断文章档次时，要注意

要点，更要注意按照词汇及语法结构运用及表达方法总体评价文章。

2.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以

考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

4. 语法结构和词汇方面的错误主要指以下几种：主谓不一致，动词形式（句子时态和

语态）不对，词组搭配不当、句子结构错误、词序不当、关键词用错。

5. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

1.词数少于120和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。