公开课_高中英语写作课件

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2.语言表达规范 It makes me study/learn more knowledge. It makes me get/gain more knowledge. What if he is short of one leg? What if he has only one leg?
趣味英语写作
Fun English Writing
高考英语评分原则：
1. 总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确 定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去 2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，
• 汉语：从外到里、由大到小、慢慢进入实 质。 • 英语：从里到外，由小到大，以我及他。 对比以下两篇文章： Hello! Is that Mrs White? This morning,we went out for a walk.All of a sudden,a boy fell into the river.Congratulations!Your son saved him.
2010年新课标全国卷—书面表达
Dear Ms.Smith,
I'm Li Hua,Chair of the student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to
育才中学学生会主席 1
your university. I’m writing to invite you to
be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. 2
要举行 我写信是要邀请你作为
2010年新课标全国卷—书面表达 It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about 3 three hours. Ten students will deliver their 发表他们的演说 4 speeches on the given topic “Man and 5. We hope that you will accept our Nature” invitation if it is convenient for you.
如果你方便的话 Please call me at 448876655 if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes Li Hua
Language
• 1.语法结构标准Grammar • The price of milk is expensive than grain. • The price of milk is higher than the price of grain. • The price of milk is higher than that of grain.
应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性 及上下文的连贯性。
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5. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。 7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
A good composition
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structure
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content
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华 (1)，你校将 举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）, 希 望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委(2) 。 请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。(2010年 新课标全国卷） 演讲主题：人与自然 (5) 时间：6月15日下午2:00-5:00 (3) 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 (4) 联系人：李华（电话：44876655）(6) 欢迎大家光临 注意：词数100左右
structure
• 1.用英语思维定义的能力，比较： • 面包：是一种用面、鸡蛋、黄油、水等烘 烤出来的甜食。 • Bread is a kind of sweet food that is baked using water,eggs,milk,flour(面粉） and butter（黄油）.
Last Saturday,I helped my mother clean house. Then I ran on some errands(跑 腿）.When Father came home at noon,he gave me ten yuan.In the afternoon,I went to a movie.The movie was terrible.I didn't enjoy it so much as the one I saw last Saturday.Next Saturday,I'm going again. (描述乏味，事件太多，句子没能扣紧主题， 结尾无趣）
• Hello! Is that Mrs White? Congratulations! Your son saved another boy who fell into the river when we went out for a walk this morning.
• 2.重细节，不要泛泛而谈;一句话中尽量写全 各个要素。 She is a beautiful girl.Her eyes are bright,and her hair is blonde(金色的）. We are going to hold an English party.The place is at the school hall,and the time is at 3:00 pm tomorrow. • We are going to hold an English party at the school hall at 3:00 pm tomorrow. • 3.结构紧凑，中心集中。
• One night when I was about to go to bed,my dog Bud got into the kitchen.He saw a box of flour on the shelf.He jumped up and knocked it all over himself.In the morning when I saw Bud,he was as white as a ghost(鬼）. • (只围绕一件事情描述，题材有趣，结尾 出人意料）
注意
• 适当运用好的词汇句式，少用过难甚至超 纲的词汇。