公开课_高中英语写作课件
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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
2020/12/12
3
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
10
正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高中英语How to write a news report公开课精品课件
the Students Union of our school will hold a book Proposal
News comment
Байду номын сангаас
为了号召更多的人关心贫困家庭孩子的学习和生活， 你校学生会于10月15日下午举行了一次为贫困家庭孩子 捐赠书籍的活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文 报道, 发表在你校英文网站上。
1．时间、地点、活动； 2．同学们的反应； 3．简短评论。
注意：1.词数120左右(报道的标题已给出，但不计入总词数)； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
MANILA - The death toll from the 6.3-magnitude earthquake that struck North Cotabato province in southern Philippines on Wednesday has climbed to five people, local officials said on Thursday.
Do you have any book that you don't want to
read again? Please give them to poor kids who
don't have any book to read.
倡议书
In order to care about the lives of poor kids,
The National Disaster Risk Reduction and Management Council has yet to release an official count of the casualties and the damage from the tremor.
高中英语读后续写讲评课(公开课)超实用课件
( 主从复合句--非限制性定语从句 ) 5.原文没有对话，续写中也要__尽__量__少__用__对话。
2
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I'd had lunch.________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ...
所见
没有吃午餐
水果农场的生活 所闻、所说
给我(面包)装有水果的纸袋 挥手告别 我感谢了他们
所思 所做
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag._______ ...
环境描写 袋子里有水果、$20(便签)
语言描写 便签内容
9 郭俊雄 When I caught sight of this sentence, I felt so warm
and happy.
10 刘思豪
The family were so kind. They were the rays of sunshine in my life, shining at the buttom of my heart.I will follow
( 非谓语作宾语 )
3. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn't bothered to help. ( 主从复合句--状语从句)
4. He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English.
2
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I'd had lunch.________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ...
所见
没有吃午餐
水果农场的生活 所闻、所说
给我(面包)装有水果的纸袋 挥手告别 我感谢了他们
所思 所做
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag._______ ...
环境描写 袋子里有水果、$20(便签)
语言描写 便签内容
9 郭俊雄 When I caught sight of this sentence, I felt so warm
and happy.
10 刘思豪
The family were so kind. They were the rays of sunshine in my life, shining at the buttom of my heart.I will follow
( 非谓语作宾语 )
3. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn't bothered to help. ( 主从复合句--状语从句)
4. He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English.
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
Para.2
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
+
补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
+
traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
+
补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
+
traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语《概要写作专练》公开课PPT课件
People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change
Para 1
• People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change.
• People hold different views on change • People differ in their attitudes towards change • Different people hold different attitudes
towards change.
3.Locate the topic sentence
Para 2
FFrroomm oonnee ppooininttofovfievwie, wpe, oppeleopwlehowahcocepatccehpatngcehsatnhginesk tthhaint k that cchhaannggeess make ththeeirirlifelifme emaneianngifnugl.ful. Firstly, changes create new opportunities, which make us leap forward. A new job, for instance, mighOtmpitreesxeanmptlcehs allenges that push the person to adapt, acquire new knowledge, or add to their skill set. Secondly, a change can represent a break with the past and an old routine which has become boring and predictable. Finally, as well as making life more fun and interesting, new experiences can be good for our physical and mental health. We find that changes can make us experienced and valuable.
Para 1
• People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change.
• People hold different views on change • People differ in their attitudes towards change • Different people hold different attitudes
towards change.
3.Locate the topic sentence
Para 2
FFrroomm oonnee ppooininttofovfievwie, wpe, oppeleopwlehowahcocepatccehpatngcehsatnhginesk tthhaint k that cchhaannggeess make ththeeirirlifelifme emaneianngifnugl.ful. Firstly, changes create new opportunities, which make us leap forward. A new job, for instance, mighOtmpitreesxeanmptlcehs allenges that push the person to adapt, acquire new knowledge, or add to their skill set. Secondly, a change can represent a break with the past and an old routine which has become boring and predictable. Finally, as well as making life more fun and interesting, new experiences can be good for our physical and mental health. We find that changes can make us experienced and valuable.
公开课-高中英语写作课件
英语写作训练
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
The paragraph
为了丰富同学们的课外生活，你校英语协会将举办 音乐周活动，其中一项活动为征文比赛。请你根据以下 提示The benefits of listening to music为题写一篇英 语短文参加征文活动：
1.听音乐有助于减轻压力； 2.听音乐能消除烦恼，有助睡眠； 3.听音乐给人灵感，培养创造力。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：灵感inspiration
典型病例
1.单词拼写问题 2.名词的单复数问题 3. 主谓一致问题 4.时态和语态问题 5.代词(主格、宾格)问题
6.Chinglish现象
A Sample Writing(范文欣赏) The benefits of listening to music A large number of people like listening to music.Listening to music is beneficial to us in many ways. To begin with, since stress is the cause of many illnesses, we can reduce the risk of getting these diseases by listening to music that we like.Secondly, listening to music is an effective way to remove worry and it is also helpful to a good night's sleep.In addition, listening to music can provide us with inspiration and help develop our creativity, which will play an important role in our future success. In general, listening to music will make us live better.
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
The paragraph
为了丰富同学们的课外生活，你校英语协会将举办 音乐周活动，其中一项活动为征文比赛。请你根据以下 提示The benefits of listening to music为题写一篇英 语短文参加征文活动：
1.听音乐有助于减轻压力； 2.听音乐能消除烦恼，有助睡眠； 3.听音乐给人灵感，培养创造力。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：灵感inspiration
典型病例
1.单词拼写问题 2.名词的单复数问题 3. 主谓一致问题 4.时态和语态问题 5.代词(主格、宾格)问题
6.Chinglish现象
A Sample Writing(范文欣赏) The benefits of listening to music A large number of people like listening to music.Listening to music is beneficial to us in many ways. To begin with, since stress is the cause of many illnesses, we can reduce the risk of getting these diseases by listening to music that we like.Secondly, listening to music is an effective way to remove worry and it is also helpful to a good night's sleep.In addition, listening to music can provide us with inspiration and help develop our creativity, which will play an important role in our future success. In general, listening to music will make us live better.
高中英语概要写作Shyness公开课PPT课件
要点1: Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy
tohfeooppinpioosnitaenisdctrraiusuke.stIaeskrai3neglisaroeftsetnrobnlagmly esufapipluorreteodn.
This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
over one.
your
suggestion
写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
tohfeooppinpioosnitaenisdctrraiusuke.stIaeskrai3neglisaroeftsetnrobnlagmly esufapipluorreteodn.
This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
over one.
your
suggestion
写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
20
句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件
●__正__文_____________(_注__意__：____英__文__书__信__不__要__写___一__些___ (B__o__d____y__o____f __L__e__t__t__e__r__）______h②__e__l__正l__o__文,______部h__i__分之____，类____严的____格问____按候____照语______文)____章____的____提
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
•
Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.
公开课高中英语写作课件
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
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公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
公开课高中英语写作
高中英语Summary Writing概要写作公开课精品PPT课件
Para.1: Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for a college entrance English composition?
The ideal length is typically 200-300 words, depending on the specific requirements of the exam
Conclusion Writing
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Sample text analysis
An in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples
Through in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples, students will understand how to construct story plots, shape character images, and use language skills to express emotions and themes.
What are the common mistakes students make in English composition?
Common misses include poor grammar, weak vocabulary, unclear organization, and lake of origin or depth in analysis
Grammar Control
Correctly use tensions, sense structures, and punctation
Fluent Expression
Write in a smooth and coherent man with proper transitions
高中英语基础写作公开课课件——书面通知
English Department February 22, 2009
书面通知
1 格式 2 时态
3语言特点
常用结构
1 地点的表示方法 2 时间的表示方法 3 动词短语
常用句式
牢记书面语通知时态 书面通知以一般将来时为主。如： The students of Senior Grade One will go to Jingshan Park on May 4. We will climb up the hill and have a picnic on the top of it. After that we will visit the famous botanical garden nearby. On July 22, Saturday, we will visit the following places — a school or a hospital. We will be divided into four groups and each group can visit one of the places.
书面通知
常用结构 ：2 时间的表示方法(钟点\星期\年\月\日)
in June, 2009
on June 21, 2009
on Thursday, June 21, 2009
at 7:00 pm on June 21,2009
at 7:00 on the evening of June 21,2009
3. The meeting will begin at 3 oclock.
4. Mr, Smith will give a lecture in the auditorium. 5. Those who want to take part in it have to fill in the application form.
书面通知
1 格式 2 时态
3语言特点
常用结构
1 地点的表示方法 2 时间的表示方法 3 动词短语
常用句式
牢记书面语通知时态 书面通知以一般将来时为主。如： The students of Senior Grade One will go to Jingshan Park on May 4. We will climb up the hill and have a picnic on the top of it. After that we will visit the famous botanical garden nearby. On July 22, Saturday, we will visit the following places — a school or a hospital. We will be divided into four groups and each group can visit one of the places.
书面通知
常用结构 ：2 时间的表示方法(钟点\星期\年\月\日)
in June, 2009
on June 21, 2009
on Thursday, June 21, 2009
at 7:00 pm on June 21,2009
at 7:00 on the evening of June 21,2009
3. The meeting will begin at 3 oclock.
4. Mr, Smith will give a lecture in the auditorium. 5. Those who want to take part in it have to fill in the application form.
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
01
02
03
04
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
01
02
03
04
Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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注意
• 适当运用好的词汇句式，少用过难甚至超 纲的词汇。
• One night when I was about to go to bed,my dog Bud got into the kitchen.He saw a box of flour on the shelf.He jumped up and knocked it all over himself.In the morning when I saw Bud,he was as white as a ghost(鬼）. • (只围绕一件事情描述，题材有趣，结尾 出人意料）
应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性 及上下文的连贯性。
5. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。 7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
A good composition
Content
structure
language
content
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华 (1)，你校将 举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）, 希 望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委(2) 。 请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。(2010年 新课标全国卷） 演讲主题：人与自然 (5) 时间：6月15日下午2:00-5:00 (3) 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 (4) 联系人：李华（电话：44876655）(6) 欢迎大家光临 注意：词数100左右
Last Saturday,I helped my mother clean house. Then I ran on some errands(跑 腿）.When Father came home at noon,he gave me ten yu.The movie was terrible.I didn't enjoy it so much as the one I saw last Saturday.Next Saturday,I'm going again. (描述乏味，事件太多，句子没能扣紧主题， 结尾无趣）
如果你方便的话 Please call me at 448876655 if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes Li Hua
Language
• 1.语法结构标准Grammar • The price of milk is expensive than grain. • The price of milk is higher than the price of grain. • The price of milk is higher than that of grain.
• 汉语：从外到里、由大到小、慢慢进入实 质。 • 英语：从里到外，由小到大，以我及他。 对比以下两篇文章： Hello! Is that Mrs White? This morning,we went out for a walk.All of a sudden,a boy fell into the river.Congratulations!Your son saved him.
• Hello! Is that Mrs White? Congratulations! Your son saved another boy who fell into the river when we went out for a walk this morning.
• 2.重细节，不要泛泛而谈;一句话中尽量写全 各个要素。 She is a beautiful girl.Her eyes are bright,and her hair is blonde(金色的）. We are going to hold an English party.The place is at the school hall,and the time is at 3:00 pm tomorrow. • We are going to hold an English party at the school hall at 3:00 pm tomorrow. • 3.结构紧凑，中心集中。
be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. 2
要举行 我写信是要邀请你作为
2010年新课标全国卷—书面表达 It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about 3 three hours. Ten students will deliver their 发表他们的演说 4 speeches on the given topic “Man and 5. We hope that you will accept our Nature” invitation if it is convenient for you.
structure
• 1.用英语思维定义的能力，比较： • 面包：是一种用面、鸡蛋、黄油、水等烘 烤出来的甜食。 • Bread is a kind of sweet food that is baked using water,eggs,milk,flour(面粉） and butter（黄油）.
趣味英语写作
Fun English Writing
高考英语评分原则：
1. 总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确 定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去 2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，
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2.语言表达规范 It makes me study/learn more knowledge. It makes me get/gain more knowledge. What if he is short of one leg? What if he has only one leg?
2010年新课标全国卷—书面表达
Dear Ms.Smith,
I'm Li Hua,Chair of the student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to
育才中学学生会主席 1
your university. I’m writing to invite you to