中考英语作文指导--科技生活

(2016 四川南充)
【真题分析】 该书面表达任务是命题写作，题目中 给出了作文的标题并在首段描述了要讨 论的现象。从首段最后一句中的different opinions 以及表格中的提示信息可知接下 来要先列举正反方的观点，最后再表明 自己的观点及理由。 文章是议论文，应以一般现在时态为 主。写作时要列举清楚理由，并注意各 个理由之间的衔接。
【真题回放】 对于“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”, 不同学生有不同的看法, 请你根据下面表格 中的提示写一篇短文, 向某英语报社投稿。 观点 理由 1. 浪费时间： …… 1. 浪费时间： ……
2. 危害身心健康: 2. 危害身心健康: …… …… 你的观点及理由
要求： ①包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要 点适当发挥； ②书写规范、工整，条理清晰； ③文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名 等； ④词数: 80—100词，短文开头已给出， 不计入总词数。
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it. ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________
【标准范文】
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it. Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or
【话题解读】 随着科学技术的发展，每个人在生活 中都会与各种科技产品打交道。这 些高科技产物一方面给我们带来了便利， 另一方面也给我们造成了一些困扰。有 关科技的话题，尤其是手机、网络等， 成了时下热点，也成了中考的焦点。
针对此类话题的写作通常需要考生 分析当前的现象，然后阐明自己的观 点。写作结构一般为：描述现象—— 正面观点——反面观点——最后表明 作者的观点。写这类议论文时，要注 意观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可，而 且要有严密的逻辑性。
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friends. Second, they can search what they need on their mobile phones. For example, they can look up new words and look through news. On the other hand, other students disagree. They think using mobile phones wastes time. Many students spend too much time in playing games and chatting on QQ. Besides, it's unhealthy for students' mind and body. In my opinion, students can't use mobile phones at school. It's bad for their health and studies.
available. However, other students disagree. They think using mobile phones is a waste of time. Besides, it's harmful to the mind and the body, because students can get unhealthy information or damage their eyesight. In my opinion, students should be allowed to use mobile phones at school. Every coin has two sides. Though mobile phones bring us problems, they also have many advantages. So I suggest students use mobile phones only when necessary at school.
【高分突破】 Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it. Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. Above all, mobile phones can help them keep in touch with others. Secondly, information is immediately