英语作文写作指导课件

2. I am not support to parents’ behaviors. 3. I think anybody have themselves their own behaviors. 4. We should often communication communicate with our parents. 5. Remember: parents are good at us.
Homework
(2011’课标)假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期 课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心 （Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需 书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1 本人简介；2 求助内容；3 约定时间； 4 你的联系方式 （Email:lihua@;Phone:12345678 ）。 注意： 1 词数100左右 2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3结束语已为你写好。
大错： 搭配错误，词语用错， （介词，名词，动词，形容词 副词，主谓一致，非谓语动词， 句式结构）
Enjoy a good composition and think it carefully about what a good composition is.
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around-----they
范文
• Dear Sue, • I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us. • We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood? • How is everything with you lately？We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch. • All the best！ • Li Hua
一篇优秀的作文：பைடு நூலகம்
1 要点全面，尽量避免大小错误 2 多使用高级词汇和一些复合句式 3. 要有恰当的过渡词
作文评分标准
一、优秀（26-29） 要点全面紧扣主题， 观点表 达充分，能有效使用连接成 分，具备较强的书面表达能 力。语言小错（拼写，标点） 不超过四个，不能有一处大 错。
二、良好（22-25） 要点全面紧扣主题， 观点 表达较充分，语言有少量错 误，（大错不能超过三个。） 但基本不影响意思表达。
How to get a high grade in writing
高分作文
Learning Objectives : 1) To write correct sentences in writing 2) To know the basic rules and grade criteria of composition 3) To improve your grades in composition Moral objectives:
To get more grades in writing
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6.Have Having a healthy way of life to our study is very important. 7. You can tell them they something happened, that you happened to you happy or unhappy. Even though 8.In spite of parents often look into our school bags or read our diaries, they love us.
三、一般（18-21） 要点全面，紧扣主题。语言表达基 本充分，语言错误影响部分意思表 达，但多数句子基本正确。作文要 达到19分以上，必须要点全。对于 语言表达特别好的作文可以突破这 个限制，划入良好档，但最多不得 超过22分。
(2010’陕西) 假定你是李华。你们学校和一所 美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的 一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学 的Sue Wood. 不久前她返回美国任教。请 你根据写作要点要求给Sue 写封电子邮件。 写作要点： 1 对她表达感谢之意； 2 介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情； 3 希望了解她的近况。 要求： 1 短文字数不少于100（不含已写好的 部分）。 2内容充实，结构完整，语义连贯。 3书写须清晰、工整。 4邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
be 9. We should grateful for why them. 10. The reason parents look into your school bags is that they care about your life.
关于大错小错问题：
小错： 单词拼写，冠词，大 小写，标点符号错误。