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天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿 佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。 （黎明到来的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （2） Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean,
bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.
The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last
beam of sunligwk.baidu.comt.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。
（雨水来临的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（9）The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground. 我在街上漫 步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边 掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画 面）
not a suffering to live.”
三、主题升华
(1) Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a_famous_dancer. Someday, when_I_am_older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母爱的深远影响）
如： The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...”Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除， 就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（5）The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.
黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条 从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。 （黎明到来的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （3） The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded
through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.
(3) Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for. I was told, ‘If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if he was being paid. ’I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.”
(2) What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Nina’s family had moved to a bigger apartment.“I’ve heard amazing stories about dogs’ loyalty, but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me. Even now, I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again. I never grow tired of repeating this— animals are the most devoted and loving creatures. They need our love and care.”
如：His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （8）Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold
under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走 起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的 香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨 后清新的画面）
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀 和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的 画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（6）Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud.
1.画面定格 2.对话收尾 3.主题升华 4.结尾留白 5.首尾呼应
一、画面定格
1.人物动作的画面定格 如：（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考） They stood there
for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.
抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看 见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意 识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回 到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（7） Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色， 给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画 面）
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上 的橙色颜料。 （美好日落时的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（4） The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly
falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over
二、对话收尾
（1） Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother, but both brothers had changed their last names.“He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that he’s been looking for us ever since we lost contact，” he said. Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well. When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life, Chester said， “I got family everywhere, so it might lead to many more trips now.”
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（1）The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.
(4) …They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuffon them satisfactorily, saying，“Yes! For me，it is
2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （2） Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean,
bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.
The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last
beam of sunligwk.baidu.comt.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。
（雨水来临的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（9）The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground. 我在街上漫 步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边 掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画 面）
not a suffering to live.”
三、主题升华
(1) Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a_famous_dancer. Someday, when_I_am_older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母爱的深远影响）
如： The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...”Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除， 就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（5）The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.
黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条 从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。 （黎明到来的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （3） The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded
through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.
(3) Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for. I was told, ‘If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if he was being paid. ’I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.”
(2) What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Nina’s family had moved to a bigger apartment.“I’ve heard amazing stories about dogs’ loyalty, but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me. Even now, I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again. I never grow tired of repeating this— animals are the most devoted and loving creatures. They need our love and care.”
如：His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （8）Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold
under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走 起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的 香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨 后清新的画面）
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀 和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的 画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（6）Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud.
1.画面定格 2.对话收尾 3.主题升华 4.结尾留白 5.首尾呼应
一、画面定格
1.人物动作的画面定格 如：（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考） They stood there
for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.
抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看 见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意 识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回 到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（7） Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色， 给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画 面）
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上 的橙色颜料。 （美好日落时的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（4） The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly
falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over
二、对话收尾
（1） Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother, but both brothers had changed their last names.“He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that he’s been looking for us ever since we lost contact，” he said. Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well. When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life, Chester said， “I got family everywhere, so it might lead to many more trips now.”
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（1）The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.
(4) …They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuffon them satisfactorily, saying，“Yes! For me，it is