高中英语五句话作文培训：建议信的写作优秀公开课课件

Model Essay A
• We are writing to share with you the preparation for the college entrance examination in senior three. First, we think that it is necessary to reduce the amount of periods and leave us time to think by ourselves. Besides, it would be better to give us more practice on those important and confusing points to cultivate our ability to deal with problems. Furthermore, I would like to suggest that teachers should reduce our homework to assure the quality and give us less criticism but more encouragement, which we think will be beneficial to us all. We do hope that you can take our opinions into consideration.
从读到写，体验模仿 -----五句话作文的训练方法
-----以“建议信”的写作为例
经典考题A（2012深圳五校联考基础写作） 在紧张的高三备考阶段，你代表学生会给校长写封信， 表达你们对于高三复习迎考的建议。 1)适当减少课时，留出思考时间 2)反复训练重要、易错的知识点，培养能力 3)减少作业量以保证质量 4)少些批评，多些鼓励
Appropriateness
• Which of the following is a more appropriate way to give others a suggestion? • 祈使语气：Give us less criticism but more encouragement. • 虚拟语气：I would like to suggest that teachers
经典考题B（2011深圳六校联考基础写作）
你是高三（10）班的Jack。在学校食堂用餐一段时间后，你 觉得有必要给学校食堂提一些建议，于是决定给管理处的黄 先生写封信，信中包括如下内容： 1．降低菜的价格，增加菜的样式。 2．想办法缩短Βιβλιοθήκη Baidu候时间，学生常常得等候20分钟才能买到饭 菜。 3．希望及时加热饭菜，特别是在冬天时，这样才能确保学生 健康。 4．真诚地希望对方考虑您的建议和解决这些问题。
学生讨论总结
• • • • • • • What do the above two passages share in common? Both pieces are advice letters. Both pieces use connection words, such as…. The first sentence states the writing purpose. The next three sentences state specific advice. The last sentence states the writer’s wish. In both pieces subjective mood (虚拟语气) is adopted when giving advice.
should give us less criticism but more encouragement.
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1. 表写作目的的句型 I am writing to share some advice with you about… I am writing to express my views concerning… 2. 提建议的句式 It is helpful/necessary/important for you to do… It should be a good idea for you to do… In my opinion, it would be better if you could… I would like to suggest/recommend that you should do… I feel that it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. 建议信结尾常用句式 I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. I hope you will find these proposals /suggestions /recommendations practical/useful/helpful. • 4. 表建议并列的连词 • First, second, third, finally；Firstly, secondly；To begin with, at last; furthermore; moreover; besides, in addition, meanwhile
Discussion Questions
• 1. 两篇文章都是什么体裁(genre)的文章？ • 2.文章在表达并列建议时，都使用了连词吗？ 有哪些连词(connection words)？ • 3.文章的第一句话起到了什么作用(function)？ • 4.文章第二至第四句话起到了什么作用？ • 5.文章的第五句话起到了什么作用？ • 6. 文章中提建议时的句型(sentence pattern) 有什么特点(feature)？
Model Essay B
• I am writing to express my views concerning the canteen service at our school. Firstly, I think you should cut down the price of the food and increase the dish variety. Besides, it would be better if you could shorten the waiting time for students sometimes have to wait for about 20 minutes to buy the food. Last but not least, it is necessary for you to heat the food in time, especially in winter, to ensure students’ health. I hope you would these suggestions useful and be ready to solve these problems.