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新课标要求
• 1.能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材； • 2.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师德指 导下进行修改； • 3.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系； • 4.能简单描述人物或事件； • 5.能根据所给的图是活表格写出简单的段落 或操作说明
中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
4 不同观点型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾问题. Different people hold different ideas. Some believe …正方观点. First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2… While others don’t agree. They think…反方 观点. On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2… As for me,个人观点 …
上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨 论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。 注意：1．短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容； 2．时态运用正确，书写工整规范;3．词数80-100个左右。 讨论结果:25人表示同意 理由:1.这样很方便2.能节约上学途 中的时间 35人表示不同意1.年龄太小，骑电动自行车不安全2. 早上交通拥挤，骑电动自行车也快不起来 生词提示： electric adj. 电动的 whether conj 能否
来自百度文库
叙事文常用的句子间连接词：
At first/at last/in the end… then/next/after that… when/while/as soon as/not… until… To one’s surprise/joy in a word/in all at the same time/at times/once in a while/so that… luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…
Summer vacation is coming. We have different plans for it. While some of my classmates are going to visit some places of interest,some are not going out, instead, they are going to do more reading and prepare for the future studies.At the same time,some want to do more sports to keep fit. I plan to go to Beijing to see the Olympic Games. Because it’s a good chance to make more friends and know more about the Olympic Games. I am sure we’ll have a meaningful holiday.
a 书信开头常用语
• I am very glad to receive your letter (hear from you). • Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)? • I’m writing to you for some advice on how to… /I’m writing to ask if you can ... • How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. • Thank you for inviting me to ….
随着经济（economy）的发展，越来越多的人购买 了手机，现在不少初中生也开始使用手机。手机在 带来便利的同时，也带来很多的问题。请写一篇英 语文章，阐述一下初中生使用手机的优缺点，并谈 谈自己的看法。
参考作文： Cell phones have become more and more popular in china these days. Wherever you go you can see people using cell phones, even manyschool students, have cell phones. Cell phones have brought people a lot of benefits, the most important is that they are convenient. With cell phones, they can keep in touch with anybody they want. Furthermore, they can use it to take photos and other things. However, cell phones can also bring people problems. The most serious is the electric wave radiation(辐射). It's harmful to users' brains. Another problem is that when people are having a class , the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others. So I think students should use cell phones as little as possible and turn them off when they are having classes.
常见的作文类型模板：
1 书信 (经常和其他类型一起使用)
Dear ..., I’m glad to receive your letter… ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Best wishes! Yours, Lucy
3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday. /I’m looking forward to the coming holiday./I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vacation.
暑假将至，同学们就自己暑假生活安排进行了交流。 请你用英语介绍有关情况以及自己的暑期计划。 内容应包括以下要点： 1.有的同学打算外出旅游，放松一下。 2.有的同学计划在家中多读书，为将来的学习做准备。 3.有的同学准备参加体育锻炼，保持身体健康。 4.谈谈自己的暑期安排。
b 书信结尾常用语
• Best wishes (to/for you). • Wish you good luck.
• (I am) looking forward to hearing
from you.
2 图表、数字比例型
class had a class meeting on (how to)… Here are the results. think … While … 20% of them choose to…. Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…
影响作文分数的因素：
1 题目要求、内容要点；
2 句子准确、通顺；
3 层次结构清晰；
4 拼写、语法等错误；
5 卷面整洁度；
作文话题
• • • • • 计划安排型作文（记叙文类） 图表、数字比例型 说明利弊型 不同观点型 解决问题型
几种文体的结合，是近几年来的一种趋势， 要特别注意
做题步骤：
1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节； 2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 串连： 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔 接自然。 4 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；
5 复查：2遍--1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读 查，检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；
6 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。
计划安排型作文——谈假期安排 1: （综述）（graduate from…, ）holiday is coming, plan for this holiday...
2: （正文）Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first senior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.
（表达个人看法） As a student, I agree to…
（提出讨论或调查的事实）Last week, our
（表达出不同看法或观点）Most students
Our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class. The result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to their class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson.30% think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom. The other part of the student consider lack of sleep and tiredness as the major reasons. Therefore, we advise that the classroom should be bright and the air inside should keep fresh.t As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others. During the breaks, they can take some exercise or have a little rest in the classroom.
3 说明利弊型
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages . First, 优点 1… Besides, 优点2… However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺点1… On the other hand, 缺点2… In my opinion,个人观点 …
• 1.能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材； • 2.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师德指 导下进行修改； • 3.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系； • 4.能简单描述人物或事件； • 5.能根据所给的图是活表格写出简单的段落 或操作说明
中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
4 不同观点型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾问题. Different people hold different ideas. Some believe …正方观点. First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2… While others don’t agree. They think…反方 观点. On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2… As for me,个人观点 …
上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨 论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。 注意：1．短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容； 2．时态运用正确，书写工整规范;3．词数80-100个左右。 讨论结果:25人表示同意 理由:1.这样很方便2.能节约上学途 中的时间 35人表示不同意1.年龄太小，骑电动自行车不安全2. 早上交通拥挤，骑电动自行车也快不起来 生词提示： electric adj. 电动的 whether conj 能否
来自百度文库
叙事文常用的句子间连接词：
At first/at last/in the end… then/next/after that… when/while/as soon as/not… until… To one’s surprise/joy in a word/in all at the same time/at times/once in a while/so that… luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…
Summer vacation is coming. We have different plans for it. While some of my classmates are going to visit some places of interest,some are not going out, instead, they are going to do more reading and prepare for the future studies.At the same time,some want to do more sports to keep fit. I plan to go to Beijing to see the Olympic Games. Because it’s a good chance to make more friends and know more about the Olympic Games. I am sure we’ll have a meaningful holiday.
a 书信开头常用语
• I am very glad to receive your letter (hear from you). • Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)? • I’m writing to you for some advice on how to… /I’m writing to ask if you can ... • How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. • Thank you for inviting me to ….
随着经济（economy）的发展，越来越多的人购买 了手机，现在不少初中生也开始使用手机。手机在 带来便利的同时，也带来很多的问题。请写一篇英 语文章，阐述一下初中生使用手机的优缺点，并谈 谈自己的看法。
参考作文： Cell phones have become more and more popular in china these days. Wherever you go you can see people using cell phones, even manyschool students, have cell phones. Cell phones have brought people a lot of benefits, the most important is that they are convenient. With cell phones, they can keep in touch with anybody they want. Furthermore, they can use it to take photos and other things. However, cell phones can also bring people problems. The most serious is the electric wave radiation(辐射). It's harmful to users' brains. Another problem is that when people are having a class , the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others. So I think students should use cell phones as little as possible and turn them off when they are having classes.
常见的作文类型模板：
1 书信 (经常和其他类型一起使用)
Dear ..., I’m glad to receive your letter… ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Best wishes! Yours, Lucy
3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday. /I’m looking forward to the coming holiday./I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vacation.
暑假将至，同学们就自己暑假生活安排进行了交流。 请你用英语介绍有关情况以及自己的暑期计划。 内容应包括以下要点： 1.有的同学打算外出旅游，放松一下。 2.有的同学计划在家中多读书，为将来的学习做准备。 3.有的同学准备参加体育锻炼，保持身体健康。 4.谈谈自己的暑期安排。
b 书信结尾常用语
• Best wishes (to/for you). • Wish you good luck.
• (I am) looking forward to hearing
from you.
2 图表、数字比例型
class had a class meeting on (how to)… Here are the results. think … While … 20% of them choose to…. Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…
影响作文分数的因素：
1 题目要求、内容要点；
2 句子准确、通顺；
3 层次结构清晰；
4 拼写、语法等错误；
5 卷面整洁度；
作文话题
• • • • • 计划安排型作文（记叙文类） 图表、数字比例型 说明利弊型 不同观点型 解决问题型
几种文体的结合，是近几年来的一种趋势， 要特别注意
做题步骤：
1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节； 2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 串连： 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔 接自然。 4 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；
5 复查：2遍--1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读 查，检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；
6 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。
计划安排型作文——谈假期安排 1: （综述）（graduate from…, ）holiday is coming, plan for this holiday...
2: （正文）Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first senior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.
（表达个人看法） As a student, I agree to…
（提出讨论或调查的事实）Last week, our
（表达出不同看法或观点）Most students
Our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class. The result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to their class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson.30% think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom. The other part of the student consider lack of sleep and tiredness as the major reasons. Therefore, we advise that the classroom should be bright and the air inside should keep fresh.t As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others. During the breaks, they can take some exercise or have a little rest in the classroom.
3 说明利弊型
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages . First, 优点 1… Besides, 优点2… However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺点1… On the other hand, 缺点2… In my opinion,个人观点 …