高三英语读写任务之记叙文专题

Task-writing
How to develop a narrative
April 19th,2007
Please read the following passage first:
Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didn’t catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldn’t believe my ears. “Yes. It’s very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Don’t consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”
The writing templet of a narrative (叙述类文章写作模板)： 1. Title (1分)
2. Summary [About the original passage ( About 30words)] (5分) 3. A transitional sentence 4. A narrative (About the same topic) 5. An ending paragraph (Point out the main idea) (19分)
Say It Isn't So
• Skies are dark It's time for rain Final call, you board the train Heading for tomorrow I wave goodbye to yesterday (1) Blinded by the sorrow How can I be smiling like before When baby you don't love me an y more [Chorus] Say it isn't so Tell me you're not leaving (2) That I am only dreaming this is not goodbye This is starting over If you wanna know I don't wanna let go So say it isn't so
What style of writing is this passage ?
A narrative(记叙文).
Writing content and requirements
• ［写作内容］ • 1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点； • 2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写 你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历，并包 括以下要点： • a) 叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实 或虚构的经历； • b)你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的； • c) 耐心对你的生活、学习有什么影响。 • ［写作要求］ • (1) 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故 事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； • (2) 标题自定。
•3. How to write a transitional sentence
We may write like these:
Gareth Gates
Tempt to find but at least we've tried
(3) As they closed the door behind you We're so alone and time stands still Shake the ground beneath the wheels as I wish I'd never found you Wohoh How can I be smiling when you go Will I be strong enough to carry on Miles, miles to go Before I can sail Before I can nail my love for you to sleep Oh darling I get miles, miles to go Before anyone will ever hear me laugh again
What style of a story does it ask us to write ?
A narrative, too.
评分标准(assessing criteria) 1. 概括的准确性。 语言简洁明了，能客观、准确、全面地转述所给文 字材料。 2. 语言的规范性。 语言合乎语法，地道自然。（无中国式英语） 3. 内容的合适性。 选材必需切题；内容符合写作要求；论据能证明论 点 4. 篇章的连贯性。 文章的主题（一个）要明确且贯穿全文； 层次分明有条理；衔接过渡自然。
Suggestions:
What should we pay attention to when writing a title?
1.We should use a noun phrase or a sentence as a title.
2.The first letter of every word in a title should be written in a capital(大写) letter except articles(冠词), prepositions(介词) and conjunctions(连词).
My version for the summary
In this passage, the writer mainly tells us his experience of fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man. He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words）
3. The number of a title had better not be more than 10 words.
2. How to summarize a story:
Skill: Combination of five elements要素串联法 What Who When × Where × was taught a lesson by an old man the writer and an old man when going fishing last Sunday on the bank of the lake
Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didn’t move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼 线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.
2.The writer tells us about his unforgettable lesson from an old man. 3.The story is about the writer who was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man. 4.The author tells us that he was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.
What to Patience is important. learn Patience is the secret of success.
We may begin like these:
1.The passage is about the writer’s unforgettable lesson from an old man.
1. Title
What’s the title that we should use?
1. Patience Is the Secret of Success 2. Patience Is Important 3. The Importance of Patience 4. The Key to Success ─ Patience 5. How Important Patience Is! 6. Patience Leads to/ Results in Success 7. Our Life Needs Patience 8. Patience Is Necessary
读写任务评分原则(assessing principles) 1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 ① 短文概 括5分 ② 主题写作 20分。 2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清 晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用 原文中的句子。 3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适 及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以 该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给 分。 4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个 方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以 考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个 档次。
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Suggestions:
What should we pay attention to when writing a summary? 1.Mainly use the key words and phrases in the original passage. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use our own words. 2. Write it in the third person .（第三 人称） 3.Control the number of words between 28 and 35.